New fanfic :- kya hota hai pyaar epilog-pg10 10/12

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey every one i have read almost all the fanfic and short stories. i am not a good writer but would like to write a fanfic on jai and bani.

outline of the story.
bani is in love with pushkar but pushkar ditched her.
then circuimstances force her to marry jai and they start their relationship in a friendly manner.
until one day they realise that their relation is more than of a friendship

note:- this will be an emotional fanfic and no villain and villainous.
rest characters will be introduced as per the story.

what do you say should i continue.



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Posted: 15 years ago
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sounds interesting , will be waiting for the part 1
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sounds interesting will wait for part 1
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Bani and rano are cousin sisters .Their parents died when they were 14 leaving a good amount of money and home.

I am introducing pushkar only for 1 part or may be 2 part and then the whole attention will be on bani and jai.

Part 1

"Hey bani"! where have you been yaar I was searching for you in the whole college.pushkar said as soon as he saw bani coming on the corridor.

Hey pushkar sorry I was a bit busy . actually I was preparing for the dance. You remember our farewel party which our juniors are giving to us. Replied bani.

Pushkar and bani were in love with each other .hanging around doing masti full of life. The whole college treats them as best couple.they were in their final year and were planning to marry each other after their graduation.bani was preparing a special dance for her juniors.

"Hey you two ? come on lets go to the canteen man" . came chorus sound. They turn back and saw pia rano and sahil waving at them.

(pia is in love with pushkar and have not told him. Rano and sahil are known as the romantic couple.)

Yeah buddy lets all go to the canteen and enjoy the last day of our freedom as after tomorrow I.e. after our farewel we all ill be busy in our our life.said pushkar dramatically.

Everyone laughed and they all headed towards canteen. After spendin a good two hour treat there. They all headed to their respected home and started preparing for the party.

FAREWEL PARTY

Bani and pushkar came hand in hand followed by rano and sahil . pia still looking beautiful as ever but alone.

"May I have the pleasure of dancing wi th the beautiful lady"asked pushkar stretching hand towards bani and she happily accepted.

While dancing she kept her head on his shoulder and said ' pushkar kitna achha lagega na jab hum dono yun hi baahon me bahoon dale ek sathchalenge hamesha .

"haan meri jaan".pushkar leaned forward and gave her a quick peck on her cheeeks.then they started heading for the table for their lunch. As they were having their lunch a waitor accidently spilled water on banis dress . she said that she is going to fresheroom to clean her dress and will be back in few minutes.

As soon as she came she couldn't find pushkar. She asked rano and rano told that he is with sahil . she went to sahil and he said that he hasseen him going towards corridor.then they all started to search him in the corridor. As soon as they reach the end they heard noises from the room. When they opened the room they couldn't believe what they are looking. Pia and pushkar were kissing and pusjkar was telling pia that he cannot live without her. Bani is just a timepas and then he started abusing bani.

Bani stood shocked rano move forward and gave him a tight slap on his cheek. he saw that all three are standing there. Bani could not beliece what she heard about herself. pia stood motionless she told that pushkar and her love each other .

Rano and sahil took bani with themselves. From that day onwards bani kept herself locked in a room.

Aftre One and half year

Bani has become a teacher and has won the best teacher award. It's a great achievement as she is a new in the field. She love her children like crazy and is planning to get marry rano and sahil.

Rano is persuing mba with sahil in the same university.Sahil along with mba has joined his mama in business .

"Hi bani di aaj aapko aana hi padega aaj main kuch nahi sununga"sahil said entering their house. It was sahil's birthday today and he came for inviting bani and rano. After much persuasion bani agreed.

"di iwill be picking u both at 7:00 sharp"said sahil giving a quixk peck on hercheeks.

"Pagal kahin ka" said bani . both rano and bani laughed and started getting ready for the party.

Exactly at 7:00 he came in a red ferrari after picking them up they all headed toward his home.

"hey mom meet bani di "sahil introduced her to his mother."hi bani iam jigyasa sahil's mother"jigyasa said "jitna maine suna tha sahil se utna hi tumhe sunder paaya. Bahut khoobsurat ho" she said while patting her cheeks.Aur bani di ye hai mere mamu bani turned and saw a pair of chocolate eyes staring at her .


any guesses who the mamu is?and sorry for the spelling mistake.

Edited by gulupada - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Mr. Walia!!!!
Nice start, looking forward for more 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear
nice start
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing start
hope u will update soon
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Bani turned and saw a pair of chocolate eyes staring at her.

"hi I am jai walia"said jai extending his hand towards bani."hi I am bani "said bani.

Aur bani di yeh hai billo mausi. Bani touched the feet of the elderly lady"khush raho beta sada sukhi raho"masi gave her ashirwad.

Come bani di lets dance."tu mere sath dance karega ya rano k saath". Main to yun hi puch raha tha mujhe pata tha k aap mujhe ussi k saath dance karne kahengi."badmaash kahin k"said bani while pulling his ears . sorry di said sahil and took rano towards the dance floor.

While dancing rano watched bani as she was talking happily with the members of the walia family."saahil kya bani di ko kabhi khushi mil paayegi jiski wo hakdaar hain". "kyun nahi rano jo log achhe hote hain unke saath hamesha achha hota hai. Achha hua k hume pushkar ki sachhai pehle hi pata chal gayi warna.."

Are saahil chalo bahut dance ho gaya chalo ab khana kha lo.called aditya."are rano tumne mujhe bataya nahi ki tumhaari ek bahen bhi hai"asked aditya . "uncle kabhi aisa mauka hi nahi mila . aur phir di hamesha apne school me itni busy rehti hai k unhe bahar jaane ka time hi nahi milta.wo to aaj saahil ne manay unhe bahar aane k liye".

Jigyasa watched the group where saahil rano bani jai and aditya were having their dinner and asked mausi "mausi kitna achha hoga na k agar bani bhi hamari ghar ki bahu bane . bahut sanskari ladki hai. Agar jai is shadi k liye maan jaaye to ?".

"are jigyasa tu to jaanti hi hai k wo shadi k baare me sunte hi mooh bana leta hai phir kaise hum usse baat karen" . said mausi while watching them

"mausi mere paas ek idea hai jisse hamari ye uljhan sulajh sakti hai lekin aapko isme mera saath dena hoga"

"theek hai jaisa tu bol main to taiyaar hoon."mausi said.

While here at the dinner table rano and bani were serving to all while having their dinner.and aal of them were chatting and having fun.the order of sitting was rano ,saahil, aditya,bani and jai.while eating suddenly spoon dropped from banis hand and jai and bani both bent down at the same time to pick p the spoon.while picking both their hands touched and they look into each other eyes.both were staring and havent realised that two pairs if eyes were watching them and their hands were still entangled.suddenly aditya asked jai that what happened and he left banis hand replied"wo chammach gir gaya tha".

Bani and rano bid their good byes to every one and saahil and jai went with them to drop them home.jai was thinking "she is so etheral and elegant and beautiful."

While bani was thinking "there is something in his eyes that I kept looking at him".both unknowingly were thinking of each other and were admiring each other.

After dropping bani and rano when they reached home they saw that the whole family was out .niticing the tension in the air jai approached them and asked what happened.jigyasa told him that suddenly massi is not feeling well and is in the room with doctor.jai hurried towards the room where mausi was lying on the bed with doctors and nurses all around.jai asked them what happened and doctors told him that mausi has got a mild heart attack and is now stable.jai sat down beside mausi and hold her hands.

Mausi opened her eyes and saw jai and told him that she is fine now.jai weeped and told mausi that he don't want to loose her as she is the one for him after his mother. Mausi patted her hand and asked "kya tu mere liye kuch karega. Wada kar inkaar to nahi karega"? nahi mausi aap jo bhi bolengi main wo hi karoonga. Aap boliye to main kya karoon."

" main chahti hoon tu bani se shadi kar le. Bahut achhi aur sanskaari ladki hai. Phir dubara aisi ladki nahi milegi. Main marne se pehle teri shadi hote hue dekhna chahti hoon. Meri ye khwahish puri kar de"


what will be jais reaction will he agree to the marriage?

preview:- jai's thought and his decission

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear
good part
massi and jigs really are something
kya plan banaya hai jai ko shaadi k liye raazi karne ka
plzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice! hmm so jb are already thinking about each other
hope jai will agree (i know he will :-) )
cont soon
SA

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