FF: A Shining Star, Ch 21& Epi pg 30

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baran

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Posted: 16 years ago

#201

hiii..

again very nice ff...

good job tin...

plz do write again👏🤗

sh.

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johnangad

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Posted: 16 years ago

#202

it was the perfect end, very touching

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nema123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#203

Hey Tin.... What a wonderful ending....!!!

You did it again dear...!! Can't wait for your next story....!

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suwas

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Posted: 16 years ago

#204

One more great story from you.

Was expecting little more convo between Jai Bani clearing heir feelings. Some how i thought Bani loved jai. But she came back for nishu & jai had o convince her to accept the proposal for about a year. i found the end little rushed. But it may be from some disapointment about not getting update today.

But loved overall story & how everythiing worked out well for JB & they got over their inhibitions.

Now what's next?

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JAN_SA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#205

Absolutely fabulous, truly fantastic story line, loved the way your portra emotions 👍🏼

Waiting for the next story😉😃

lots of love

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Zaara91

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Posted: 16 years ago

#206

great story tin....

loved the ending...especially the last paragraph...it was reallly nicely written...do write more

sonam

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Ramya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#207

It's definitely a different story but nevertheless a great story from ur other FF's, Tin. I admit I have not not read all of them - just a few of them but this one was different. It certainly is an eye-opener to the special children and the difficulty faced by parents in accepting that their children are different and 'special' than the others.

Good that Jai rebuilt his relationship with his parents, sister and specially with Bani. It was nice of Bani to come back specially for Nishu & help him.

The epilog was wonderful. Hats off to u Tin. Great story.

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Meghna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#208

Absolutely beautiful story. Loved the character of Nishant. You dealth with autism very sensitively. Great jon tin, this is one of your best FF's. Loved it.

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