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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi all me back after long time
a month or so 1!!! well i got busy with my studies and relatives dropping in.. so got delayed ..and sorry for disappearing act

if u people still chersih this story then do leave ur valuable coments

part:6

Part:6

A week passed by, jai would just send sms .no call to her ,{ hey guys did u forget that the cellphone has battery and it needs recharge too .. so the cell energy was usurped slowly and now it went dead . its crying as bani is not taking care of it .. waiting for an angel to save it and protect it 'hahaha}

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Anu's school has already given summer holidays. She was getting bored at home watching cartoons and playing computer games all alone. The little girl started complaining to her parents.

Jigs is busy as u all know in parties.. And adi with business .. they had to think of a way to keep her busy that means summer camps . But jigs against it to let her baby girl to go there as they may not maintain the surroundings clean.

Jai came to Bali's residence, that evening when anu was throwing tantrum

"I am getting bored "

Jai "okay u can learn some new games like tennis, badminton "

" no I want to learn maddy's arts"

"What ?"

"yes, it is shown on cartoon network . they r amazing .will u teach me "

Jai looked at her making cute face . " it comes in evening "

"anu I am busy beta "

"mamu u also don't have time for me "

Anu made a sad face

Massi sat down "if u had married now it would have been very good ,her time would get passed with bani "

Jai was with a "what kind of expression?"

" massi aap bhi na , mere shaadi ke liye kya kya reasons milte hain " jai made a face.

Adithya and jigyasa were laughing seeing jai. anu also got cheered up .

"mamaji , u know , mami also makes maddy's arts" jai looked at the little one

"I want to learn from her. I have seen them in her room, they r amazing "

Jai looked at adithya . Jai had put a serious expression

Adithya spoke up "what do u think about it jai ?"

"I have no probs . if bani has free time to teach her .she can come down here "

Massi didn't like the idea of the bride entering the house before marriage and then anu has to learn so she should go ..

"no beta, our anu only will go there to learn"

"par massi " jigs tried to but in

"it is only for an hour or two .it wont be so tiring for anu too . she will enjoy her company . kyun jai " adi spoke his mind.

Jai just nodded .His brain already making plans of all the possibilities he may get to woo his bani.

"first ask bani and her parents ,what will they say ?" suggested massi

Jai fished out his cell phone to make a call at landline.. Wishing that the other side should be Bani . The phone lifted by Bani's father.

Jai talked about the matter. mr.dixit made his consent immediately saying bani has lot of free time now as her college is done ,so she wont have any problem teaching anu .

The following evening Jai , Adithya, jigyasa and anu came down to dixit residence.

Bani was at that time standing on the staircase talking to daksh who stood on the otherside of the partition wall for both houses. Bani looked at the car pulling infront of her home. She was surprised by their presence. daksh immediately went to welcome them while bani still stood at her stair case watching them alighting from the car and greeting daksh . daksh opened the gates of bani's house . Welcoming them inside..

Jai saw bani standing on the stiar case in a loose pyjama suit . he slipped towards her without getting noticed . bani seeing him casually sta down on the stair case steps. Removing the golden brown pack. jai saw a white piece in her hands . as he climbed two steps at a time. He stood in front of her greeting her. Aditya ,jigs and anu had gone inside the house .nishikant welcomed them warmly .Asking them to take seat '

"daammad babu nahin aaye?" he enquiered

"Aaya tha shayad bahar rehgaya hoga ? main bulalata hoon "replied adithya going outside in search of jai.

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Jai stood infront of bani watching her keeping the white thing inside her mouth and trying to light the lighter .adithya walked in to see this scene . he was surprised to see JB together moreso seeing bani with ciggerete in mouth and in process of lighting it '

He walked towards them . calling "bani "

Bani looked up to see his presence. She sat stubbornly . adi came near her removing the cigarette from her lips turning it upside down and again put it in her mouth. Bani reacted stunned . she thought they might put a show or class..

"kya jai , bani ko ciggerete pillana bhi nahin seekha sakte?" looking at jai who had put a solemn expression while turning to bani he said" sorry bani kya haina? Humara jai ko ciggeret peene jaise aache addate nahin hain tho usse kaise istamal karte yeh nahin pata "

Hearing it bani hiccupped while a smile carved on jai's lips .bani heard her dadi screaming from back house. Bani walkedpast them while adi and jai laughed at her antic.

"she was checking your habits . jai ? it's a nice way see "thumping jai's back.Jai nodded his head smiling away .

Bani was gritting her teeth seeing anu and adithya. She viewed this move of Jai as one to get in touch with her easily. Making anu as a pawn in chess. Arghhhhhhhhh

Soon the evening time passed and dinner was also served with a request from nishikanji to walias to join.the dinner served on dining table was like a a feast with around half a dozen varieties of dishes and papads vadiyams, rice rotis and everything ..

Walias we ere taken a back so much prepared in so little time. Jigss preferred not to eat some items thinking they migt have been ordered from market ,bani understanding her predicament

Gave an elaborate description telling the who made which dish ..

Jigs was little embarrassed. adithya interfered her elaborate explanation "ismein tumne kya banaya bani?"

Pat came reply from other end "yeh jo ande(egg) jaise kale(black) jalle(burnt) hue mote (huge) se pekhe (not sweet) gulab jamun dekh rahe hain yeh bani ne banaya hain"

And he showed the black jamuns dipped in sweet syrup bowl. All laughed over it . bani didn't say anything .

"fir tho yeh jai ko serve karna hoga" saying so adi requested bani to serve them to jai walia

Bani thought it as a nice punishment and served half a dozen pieces. Jai was staring at bani's face as she served them with a plastic smile plastered on face. jai took each piece and ate them staring at her directly forgetting the presence of their inlaws. Bani watched him in awe as he finsished of the entire bowl..

"Yeh admi hain ki rakshas ??"she thought

Adithya was laughing seeing jai and whipered in his ears "jai tumhare burre din shuru hogaya " jai was just smiling in reply . As they got up to wash their hands . bani was told to supply napkins. Bani handed the napkins to them one after other .it was jai and bani near washbasin

"tum itna meetha khate ho?"bani asked unable to digest what she had just seen

"nahin , main meetha bilkul nahin khata , par tumne banaya isliye khaa ya tha purra " bani was left gaping at him 😛. but in this process she already dropped a packet in jai's pocket .😉

All were assembled in hall and jai's cell buzzed he put his hand in pocket to take it out and then when he did it. It was not his cell but the golden cover cigarette packet . Jai too busy in search of his cell put his hand in other pocket and fished out his cell . he went to talk. Nishikanji 's eyes had fallen on the cigarette packet . Bani smiled triumphantly as she had achieved the task of maligning his character. later on the walia's had gone away '.

Anu was delighted .meeting Bani , bani' s mum and dadi .They showered lot of love and affection over her . Bani also pretended to be happy and nice in front of the elders .

Anu would drop in at 3pm and she stayed till 5 or 6 with bani .Bani was like my noon siesta is gone..Daily anu would come, all the family members sweet talk her . She was pampered the most . Initially bani didn't like the attention showered over anu, but slowly anu with her innocence won bani's heart aswell .

Bani was good in glass painting so she also started teaching it allotting the time. The week passed with out a show of Jai. Bani was thinking how come he still didn't appear?

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It was Sunday, jai had come to drop anu

Bani welcomed them grandly. making him sit on the sofa seete. Bani 's parents were inside.

"padhariye padhariye ,aap hi kaa intezzar tha " she was sarcastic yet smiling

jai was just smiling understanding her statement .

Anu giggled seeing both of them. Dadi came in the living room. Jai went and took her blessings

"dramebaaz no.1" bani muttered from behind. Jai left anu and had gone back telling he would return to pick her up. she would just call his cell .

"Mami aapko mamaji pasand nahin kya?" anu asked later

Bani evaded the question. But anu looked adamant. She was playing with bani's cell.

"mami, aapka yeh cell old model hain "

"tho kya hua? It's my cell. I love it "

Dadi hearing their talk spoke " tumhare mamaji ne tumhare mami ko cell diya hain naya wala lekin voh istamaal nahin karte . bahut nakhre hain isse"

Anu giggled while bani threw daggers towards dadi , making a face .

Dadi took the new cell from the cupboard, handed it to anu.Anu charged the cell then .she gave missed call to jai

Jai was surprised seeing the number and called back instantly only to be received by anu

"hello bani "he spoke with childish enthusiasm

"hello mamaji " spoke anu giggling

Jai was like a "oh anu ? what happened to ur class?"

"Haan hogaya aap aajayeye ." she answered looking at dadi who had told her to speak.

Bani came .anu had packed her things , bani was like "kya?"

But before that bell rang, bani went to open the main door only to see jai standing there

Bani was just staring at him. Jai was smiling, he cleared his throat. dadi came out into the room. Welcoming jai to sit inside

"Anu called saying class is over." jai answered about his presence

Bani looked at anu . With her bag neatly packed she was ready to go. bani was called inside by her mum . kiran had made some snacks and tea for jai .

Bani "what is the need of all this? They would go now na?"

"chup, voh tumhare pati aur iss ghar ka daammad hain samjhe"

Bani twisted her lips making a face and served the snacks.

Jai couldn't refuse and took a piece "bani will you come for an evening stroll on beach ?" he asked eying her directly

"no I am busy " bani was yet to complete the sentence when dadi interfered saying

"haan haan aajayege , ghar beti bte bore hojathi haina. " "Jaa beta tayyaar ho jaa"(this was said eying bani)

Bani went looking upwards throwing hands in air . After 15minutes she was present ready to go out in a plain pink colour saree (thanks to her maa) filled with sequins along the border. It fitted the evening very much.

Jai was mighty impressed looking at her . anu, jb were out to the beach..anu was playing in the sand while jb sat there on the sand . she was completely silent

"bani , u looking beautiful in this saree" jai whispered

"thanks " bani replied with a detachment "next time I wont wear "she muttered loud enough for him .

Jai neglected it as he looked at her fiddling with her cell phone

" why aren't u using the cell phone that I gifted "

Bani didn't answer. They sat quietly as jai tried to open a topic but the response was nil. After sometime , anu wanted to play in water so pulled jb near the shore. Bani 's hand gripped the cell tightly and the other hand with anu. As they stood cooling their legs in the water . but the evening waves grew stronger and one such wave took away the balance of bani and anu falling on jai .all of them got wet . bani's grip on her cell had loosened and the cell was washed away in the sea water . jai stood up giving hand to bani to help her up on her feet . bani was embarresed on her wet state . jai pulled his coat and draped her with it . bani watched as her cell phone pulled into seawater.

Anu was giggling seeing their state . jai also joined her soon bani also joined in laughing ..

Then the trio sat in the nearby dhaba where hot food was being served , they ordered pavbhaji . and enjoyed eating the spicy food. The humidity in the air was less so the wet clothes soon got dried. Anu wanted to have the ice gola made of mixture of icecube and the coloured flavours '

Bani denied her strongly saying they r not good for health . atlast anu obeyed bani's order cum request only when she had promised for a home-made ice gola. Jai watched the two getting in terms so well.

Bani and jai had not started any argument neither a discussion through out the evening but they didenjoy eachother's presence.

At last when bani was dropped to her home back in evening jai teased her

"dekha bani , bhagwan bhi yehi chhaitha hain kit um aapne naya cell phone hi istamal karo "

"to hell with the cell" bani muttered inside and left while bidding bye to anu .

Back to bani's room .

Bani sat down with the new cell and looked ta it . isse istamaal hi karna ahina . I will do it .

Saying so she opened the internet options and then started smsing for various television competitions.

A week passed

Jai's cell buzzed from call centre telling that his cell phone has surpassed the limit of the post payment bill. Jai was surprised over it . he called for the cell phone bill. Jai screened through the papers looking at it how bani had wasted the amount by sending those smses and internet bills per minute. A smile left on his face as he knew now bani was struck with him.

"bani tum bhi itne aasani se kaise phas gaye?"

Jai picked up his cell calling her. bani avoided it but after three successive calls she lifted

"bani tumhara cell phone bill mere haath main hain" jai spoke without any preamble

"mazza aaya hoga na mr.walia usse padte . boliye aur bhi zyada isthamal karoon kya?"

Bani asked innocently

"haan bani maaza tho aaya ,lekin agar ek baar bhi din main mujhe call kiya hota ya mere calls attend kiya hota tho acha hota na?" he asked

"just dream about it mr.walia .aisa kuch nahin karte mein "

"hmm bani main soch raha hoon iska ek copy agar tumhare papa ke paas gaya tho "

"noooooooooooo . you wont do that ."

"naaa I am going to do that "

"u..u are so mean .. why will you do that?"

"who is mean ? u or me? u had so much time for god knows all rubbish in world and not single minute for me?" jai complained

"okay now what shall I do ?"asked bani droping her armours

Jai smiled "good , now u need to answer my calls . call me time to time and chat with me "

"huh impossible"

"bills" said jai

"okay okay done" bani gave up

Jai literally loved winning over bani. He loved the way her temper would rise on small small things when he teased.

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Edited by lovelyreddyrose - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
hey rose
that was a gr88 part
loved it
wow jai ne bani ko kya phasaya
loved the way jai, bani and anu spent their evening on the beach
plz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
nice part
when is the nexr part coming
cant wait

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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
heyyy...
atlast maharani jii ka update karne ka maan kar hi liya huh??...jk
chalo atleast it wasnt a short update....
it was great...
hmm jb went to beach....
when r they going to get married now yaar??
cant wait...plzz cont.soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
Hi
So now Jai is winning and Bani is getting frustrated or is she really. Because she had no problems on the beach along with Anu and Jai. And the incident with the cigratte was fun to read. Her plans are starting to back fire. So when is the wedding going to be. She sure can make Jais life hell if she wants to so just wondering how long Jai has got to patoo his fiancee.
bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
hi all thanks for coments


this is short part done for time pass .. and moreover for jeeny hani and swathi dii .. aaplogokeliye

iss part ka continuation will be done soon



Part:7

Jai had called after an hour bani didn't pick it .it was first missed call then after next call she picked up

Jai "hi bani "

"hi mr.walia" bani sweetly cooned

"kya kar rahe hoon ?"

"tv dekh rahe hoon

"kya dekh rahe hoon tv mein"

"aapko dekh rahe hoon tv main" (bani had lied)

"ohh kaunse channel"

"star plus"

"star news naa"

"kyun itna yakken hain ki news channel hi hoga"

"ab hum important persons haina isliye "

"haan sahi kaha , most wanted list of( criminals ) ho na isliye"

"bani iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii"

"jiiiiiiiiiiii mrwalia aaaaaaaaaaaaa"

"chalo bye"

"bye"

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An hour later again jai called this time bani happened to lift after two rings only

"hi "

"hi "

"abhi hi baat kiya na itne jaldi call kiya? " bani complained

"was just checking whether u would respond to my calls or not ?"

"hahahah (she mimicked the laugter ) main aapke call centre main kaam nahin karte to receive your calls every now and then "

Jai laughed over her irritation

"tho kaam yun nahin karthi "

"what u want me to work in call centre(BPO) ? " bani exclaimed "are you serious?"

Jai had now turned serious

" yeah you can work who would deny you from it. BPO has good oppurtunities. Your voice is melodious to hear so what is the prob?"

"are u serious .??? I mean my parents were not agreeing to it " jai understood that may be they didn't like the timing of the job and the work culture …

"well bani if u wish , u can join my office and work under me?" he offered her

"no thanks , I don't want to work "

"why u lazy bone? "

"what lazy bone ? I had just completed my graduation few weeks back. u know if to be said correctly this is my summer vacation too like anu " bani desperately reasoned

Jai felt bad, feeling guilty he said "okay okay I apologise "

"that's good " she smiled winning over him

Jai was like "okay bani , but if you wish to work . u can . I am inviting you seriously "

Bani was just hearing while jai talked further

"Based on your qualification, my HR will put you in suitable department. First you will get trained and then you can start working "

" I am going to think it over "

Jai hit his head " u know Bani , in this recession where all r running for jobs and here I am offering u good job and pay scale and you are denying the opportunity "

Bani was like "I don't want to work in your company so better to opt out … " she smiled warmly

"as you wish " jai resigned and put the call off.

Bani sat down thinking was he really serious about job ? mean is he going to allow me work after our marriage ? my parents are against it saying "kya zarrorat hain we have all things .. for a good life . u stay at home" (conservative family opinion over girl member working …)

Bani walked away into another work.. The night passed away with few sms from jai which bani viewed and replied suitably

"like have a good night "

"sweet dreams "

Blablablablabala…………..

In the morning bani's family decided for a trip to titwala (lord ganesh with diamond in his stomach)

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To be contd in the evening .. as I have class for now … I hope u people enjoy this short tit bit

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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
chalo jaa ke class attend karo dadijaan
kya dadi yeh kya tum ne bani ko bhi cc bhejna ka soch liya hai, aacchey se cc mei join karana and then JW can also join there and in morning he can work in Walia industry wink
loved the part dear, do continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
HEY ROSE
THANX DEAR FOR A SMALL PART
it was good
poor bani has no choice but to answer jais calls and reply to his SMS
that was sweet
plzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
ROSEE ff ka kachra kar dia not fair haan
Bani must plan something for Jai na
Kia yaar he offered her a job when she was enjoying her holidays aise ko tou goli maar deni chahiye hahaaha
Chalo cont soon
And WONT leave u
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50

rose, yaar aaj kaal hani baadi famous ho gayi hai and everyone seems to be writing her story, i really pity jai now like i pity ullu ha ha ha ha ha

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