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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi...galys...sorry for the late update...i was busy...
thank you for your wonderful comments...here is the next part hope you guys like it....i'm thinking to finish this ss by next week coz i'm really busy...so many asignments i have to finish....and benish thanx for the answere...i totaly forgot...that joowari meant gambler....

Note: first of all im not an indian therefore i don't know anything about india and any states of India...i have used Patiala a state in Punjab in my ss...i have described Patiala differently...i hope you guys are ok with it...if i have said anything wrong then please do let me know....thank you...

And yes i'm having a crash on Farhan Akhter...he just looks soooooo cute....and so i thought of a question lets see if you guys can answer it...ummm...why do all those hot hunks get married quick...i mean SRK, RK, Hrithik R, Abhishek B, and now Farhan too...but yeah only Salu is single but he is not ready to mingle yet....abh kiya kare....

Part 2 please ignore my spellings

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Good morning maa...said bani huggeing her mum from behind in the kitchen...

Good morning beta...said her mum, kiran Sidhu ...is your sisters up...

Oh no maa they are still sleeping...sighed bani...

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Bani Sidhu...18 years old, kiran and arvind Sidhu's eldest daughter, very sweet, caring girl...bani has two other sisters pia and rano....who are 17 and 16 years of age younger than her...the sidhu's live in the out skirts of Patiala, in Punjab...patiala being a small town did not offer many opportunity to population there...the small town that the Sidhu's livid in didn't hardly offer anything....there are schools only until 12 standard and bani has only studied until 12th class, she has recently got her reports of finishing school...

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Pia, rano please get up girls come on time to go to school...pia groaned ohh d i don't want to go to school please, i wish i was in your place you lucky finished school...

Pia common...dont be such lazy woman...streched rano...morning di...

Bani smiled at their usual nock joke....this is how their life is...how everyday they joke around...bani goes done helps her mum always in the kitchen....

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Maa where is bauji...asked rano....in the dining table while having breakfast

Bani and her mum exchanged their usual look where as pia looked pissd off...

Hungi kaha soye hungi room mai...poor thing must have had busy night at that chandar's bloody dhahaba....playing and drinking....

Pia enough now...said bani....

Her mum looked hurt broken again...

In this past 19 years of marriage this has been there everyday business...arvind sidhu and alcoholic and gambler man...who almost soled everything in the gambling...they had few farms which helped their daily life by selling goods from the farm....every night he would turn up home late and always one of the gambling group member would drop him home....initially it was always really painful for kiran to see her husband like that but then she left that thought behind since her children arrived...it always killed the girls when they saw their father in that state and their mother crying on his state...they always prayed for one thing...and that was to see their own father in a normal state, in a way that every father behaves, in a way that ever father looks after his children showers them with his love and blessing, but this kind of father they didn't had...

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Bauji aap uthgaye....said bani to her father who woke up atlate afternoon...he looked at her...chai lawo putar....ji baji...said bani then left to get some tea and snack for her father...

Arvind looked around no one was at home...he thought...bani putar tere maa kaha hai...

Woh bauji maa farm gaye hai...screamed bani from the kitchen....

Or tu school nahi gaya aaj....

Woh bauji mere school tu khatam hogaye hai...

Matlab

Woh bauji yeh school to sirf 12 class thak hai naa...tu i finished 12 now...

Oh...was her father's quick answer...it hurt bani that her own father didn't know that she finished her school...hell he didn't know anything about them he was just a father in the name...

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That same night arvind sidhu went out again....once again to his usual place...chandar's dhahba...where he spent almost most of his time...

Balu oi...kiya huraha hai...itne sab bher kiyu hai yaha pe...asked arvind...

Os arvind chacha aap ko nahi pata yaha kiya huraha hai...

Agar pata huta tu tujsi nahi puchta....

Maaf karna chacha...aaj tu jai bhai ka din hai...aaj tu woh ahrne ki naam hai nahi leraha hai....acha chal dik thi....

Are awo arvind chach awo...siad a handsome man in his late or nearly thirty's....with black jet hair gelled and combed nicely...arvind chacha smiled and set next to him...

Awo chacha chal hujaye ek table...kiya keh thi hai tum sab...everyone cheered loudly....in praises...

Arvind took the opposite chair to jai...they both smiled and start their game....

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Jai Walia one of the richest farmer in Patiala...he lived with his mother and sister who was married but livid with them...even at his late thirty' he was still single...and had no intentions of getting married....he had many farms all around Punjab importing and exporting wheat and rice....he is a rich spoilt son and well educated too...

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Arvind and jai played for hours wining and losing until destiny took jai side....arvind chacha lost everything until he was in dept and there was nothing else he could do....he paled once he realised that he has lost everything to jai walia...even his farm...his only source of living...only place that provided them everything....

Kiya hu chach...or nahi kilna kiya ha...grinned jai...

Chach aap ne tu aapne zameen bhi ko diya abh kiya huga...asked one of the guys...

Arvind chacha could not know what to do...he has lost everything what will happen now to his family his wife and daughters...om god daughter...who will marry them now...so many thoughts went around his head that he felt confused....

Wese ,mere pass ek idea hai chacha...agar app chaye tu mai appke sare zameen lota sakthi hu abhi ese waqat....looked jai straight into the eyes of the old man...

k...kiya...

appne beti ki shaadi kar mere saath...

arvind chacha's eyes groe as big as it could the entire dhahba went into a silent shell...

dik chacha app ki paas abh koi rasta nahi hai...yah tu shaadi jes ki badli mai aap ke zameen lota dunga or appne du or javan betiyo ki shaai karsak thi hai...bole manzoor hai ki nahi...

the others liked the idea and even they suggested to arvind that he should go with this proposal and jai is being kind to him that he is still returning his land back to him....and he has other two daughter who needs to get married too...beside jai is not even asking for dowry (dahej)....

having no other option arvind chacha had to agree to it...he then left that place and walked towards his...home....

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Muji maaf karde....maju maaf karde...kiran opened her eye lazly...felt shocked at the state her husband was....she jumped...

Kya hua ji...kya hua...she screamed loudly ...the state that her husband was made her scared...bani, pia....

Nahi...nahi...cried arvibd chacha holing thight onto her feet...

Kya hua bataye nah...app roh kiyu rahi hu...

Bani, pia and rano run to her parents room...looking at their fathers state they sat around him...feeling that tears were threatening to fall any minute...

Bauji kya hua...aap roh kiyu rahi hai...asked bani...

He held bani.s hand thight...

Muji maaf kardi puta...muji maaf karid..

Bauji kya hua...please tell...what happened...

Kiran kiran...he run to her kiran mane appne beti ki bej dala kiran...humari beti ko....then he laughed pout loudly...yes i did it kiran i sold our daughter...

A weave of shock hit all of them...this was a moment that kiran dreaded the most...she always feared that pone day her daughters may pay for their fathers deed and that is what happened exactly....she closed her eys..letting everything sink in...

Arvind chacha didn't get any answer he run to bani....muji maaf kardi putar i sold you today...bani last balance...she fell on the ground...pia and rano run to her screaming diiiiii....

Arvind chacha sat on the ground too....crying and cursing himself for selling his daughter...

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For the next few days the sidhus were all dead alive...they didn't wanted to live but they were forced to live...nobady talked to each other...they didn't eat...

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Maa aapne sune aapke ladli ne kya kiya...puri gao mai hula machi ki woh shaadi kar raha hai woh bhi arvind chacha ki beti se...screamed jigyasa at her mum...

Kya keh raha hai putar to...

Such kehraha hu maa...or woh bhi usi jeth kar...

Matlab...

Matlab yeh maa...ki arvind chach lost everything in the gmabling and saw jai bhai placed a proposal infront of him....jigs continued telling her mum the entire story...

Ani di usi khaire nahi uska...samaj kya raka hai appne appko...said his mum in an angry tone...

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Arre tu kya hua maa...shaadi tu kar rahar hu naa...wese bhi ek na ek din shaadi tu karna he hai...tu abh kiyu nahi...said jai to his mum and sister...

Ha beta liken us joowari ke beti ke saath...koi or nahi mila tuji kiya...

Bas maa abh...said angry jai...and left....wese ha mere shaadi kal hai...gurdwara mai....

Dika maa...patha nahi kya jado kargaye woh jai bahi par...bahi abhi se ese behave kar rahi hai....jab woh ayegi tab kya huga pthat nahi....

Oy tu fikar na kar putar mai hu na...smiled jai's mum wickedly....

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do comment...any thing is welcomed...
k12345 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Interesting Meena... really like to see Jai being a man and love Bani.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh I see all the people in this ff are sick minded, I mean Arvind, JAI,his sis, his mom and so on and on. It's so disgusting seeing such kind of situation, they're treating a human being as an object and they also think to do what rt out of their mind, as for a heart which they don't have any.
I feel for Bani but why they're putting up with this bull sht of marriage?? don't they have their own honor and dignity???
please don't mind my words but this is what I think of situation created now...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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okay so that was good sonam will be waiting 4 the next part to see what happens 2 bani...
byebye
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Posted: 16 years ago
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o noo.. meena.. bechari bani.. pehle baap juwari phir pati.. i wish an angel comes to her and helps her.. anywayz great part yaar. conitnue sooon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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God.....bani is going into Hell.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey mina gr88 part
plz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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jai as a grey man... thats interesting... wonder what is going in jai's mum's mind...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello gals....
sorry for updating late....will from now on...my dear friend dhani is writing up the story for me and i'm just gonna post it here...hope you guys will comment and apreciate dhani's writing...honestly readding this part made me so emotional...Dhani you know your a great writer...
Lastly i want to thank all of you for commenting and especially i would like to thank dhani for writing this up for me.....like i said i hope to see you guys commenting and enjoy reading it....
PART-3

Arvind heard whispers and murmurs of the villagers as he walked past the stony, gravel path, women were hissing euphemistic words into each others ears while the men boisterously passed snide and lewd remarks…

"Yeh namard jaa raha hain dekho…" he heard a voice…

"Chi..chi…apni hi beti ko bech diya, kaisa papi hain…besharam…" another voice boomed…

Since bani was forcefully married to Jai Walia, the whole village had made their life a living hell, kiran and his other daughters were subjected to harassing comments whenever they went out, they were not invited to any neighborhood functions, or fests, some of them had even tried to banish them form the village, they were not allowed to enter the temple, none talked to them properly, they were almost secluded and lived in isolation for the past two months, but how could he complain??? This was all his brutal doing??? He hung his head and walked past all…

Arvind clutched the sweet box tightly as he made way to her daughter's new house, kiran was pestering him to go and visit bani, after marriage there had been no news of bani…arvind stood at the entrance tentatively…

Jigyasa looked at the man standing at the entrance, he quickly summoned Krishna who was having her afternoon siesta…bani was in the backyard…

"Namaste…" arvind greeted them…

"Bhaisahab, kaise aana hua…" Krishna said fakely…arvind tried to smile…he gulped down…

"Woh…ek baar bani se milne aaya tha…"

"Bani se kyun, kya dekhne aaye ho…" suddenly her voice sounded harsh…

"Bas, beti…ke haal chaal poochne aaya tha…"

"Itni bade ghar main shaadi karke bhej diya, aur kaisi hogi beti, besharam, mere bete ko ache se phasaya tune…"

"Aap…"

"Chup kariye…jaayiye, aapki beti theek hain…agli baar yahaan beti beti karte hue aaye na…tumhari beti ko woh haal karoongi ki uski shakal tak pehchaan nahin paoge…jao…" Krishna shouted, jigyasa closed the door on his face…bani stood far behind, tears flowing out of her sorrowful eyes…

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Bani sat in the corner of the dark room…her supple body ached; her hands trembled as she tried to cover herself with the torn sari which was lying at a distance, puddle on the floor…if her marriage was a disaster then her married life was a curse…the days were torturous, with her mother-in-law and sister-in-law hovering around her, making her do all the house work even if they had servants for the job…

The day started with cleaning the huge palatial, ancestral house, then making breakfast for everyone, and everyone had their own different choice, then washing the clothes, tending to the garden, looking after the feed of the cows in the backyard stable, washing utensils, making evening tea and snacks, then preparing dinner…if the days were terrible, the nights were horrendous, her husband forced himself on her every possible day, from whom the gambled marriage started and ended at the same epicenter, it was flagellating and over-bearing… …

Warm tears oozed out of her puffy eyes…she so badly wanted to run away and hide in her mother's lap, but she didn't have the energy to even get up…her entire body was bruised, she felt a piercing pain in her lower abdomen as she tried to get up… she closed her eyes huddled in the same position…but soon she heard her mother-in-law's sonorous voice…

"Arre…baniiii…jaldi neeche, duniya bhar ka kaam pada hain aur tu maharani abhi tak so rahin hainnnn…" Krishna's screechy voice reached her ears…she cried out loud out of helplessness… amassing all her hidden strength she gets up and goes to the bathroom…
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"Itni der kahaan lagadi…jaa ab jaldi jaa aur ma aur mere liye nashta laga…" jigyasa sneered at her, bani wlked towards the old-fashioned kitchen slightly limping …

Serving them breakfast bani set about to do the household chores while Krishna and jigyasa sat comfortably tugging in the buttered parathas, smirking at her…
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"Kahaan jaa rahin hain…" Krishna shouted as she saw bani walking towards the entrance…

"Woh…bas aise hi, sabzi…" bani…mumbled…

"Jhooti kahin ki, apne maa, baap se milne jaa rahin hain na…andar jaa chup chaap, agar phir kabhi ghar ke bahar pair rakha toh tnage tod doongi…" Krishna warned her…bani went inside, crying…

"Sahi kiya maa aapne…aisi jaat ka koi bharosa nahin, pata nahin bahar jaake kya kya bolegi…" jigyasa said…

Jigyasa was jai's elder sister, married to Aditya Bali, who lived in the village next to Patiala, in the starting everything was fine, but then his parents started cribbing, specially her mother-in-law, she was a bit lethargic and her mother-in-law asked her to do all the house work…but she put up due to aditya's sake, she had children, and years passed by but her in-laws behavior only got worsened, they were fights, and a lot of tension, she couldn't take it anymore and left and came to her house to stay with her brother and widow mother…but she missed her children, aditya never ever enquired about her, neither did he let her meet her children…torturing bani somewhere gave a sadistic pleasure to her…as if she was avenging what she went through… …
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Jai came back home…it was late in the night…he entered his bedroom to see bani cuddled up in the extreme side of the bed…he went near her…she was trembling due to the blowing wind…he took the comforter and covered her properly…his hands reached to caress her head…it was just an impulsive decision to marry Arvind chacha's daughter, in fact he had never seen her before, but on their wedding night, the first time he lifted her veil, he was mesmerized by her innocent beauty…initially it was just a physical relation between them, but he realized he was falling in love with his young bride…he vowed to talk to her, and establish an emotional boning, he knew the marriage was nothing but a gambled deal, but deep down he wanted it to work…jai sighed…
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dhani
that was a buetifully wiiten part
so jai is falling for bani
and daam jigs and krishna
bani se kitna kaam karvate hai
kya bahu ke roop mein they have bought naukrani i think
and jai is no less than a rapist, how can he force himself on his wife
i hope with time jai recognises his mistakes and give ban i a healthy life
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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