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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: teenzs

nice part... ==Thanks..

krishna is turning jai aganst bani..😡 ==She is doing her job..
so now jai is all jealous...serves him right ==Yess..
waiting for the nex part ==Keep waiting..
do continue soon

Originally posted by: amiee

wonderful parts pls cont soon.......

Thanks a lot..keep reading..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

me first... ==Congrats..

kya yaar kahaani mein twist... achcha twist hai.. ==Thanks..

this krishna... i am going to kill her... 😡 ==Please..go ahead😆

so jai is going to meet dhananjai?? ==Let's see..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: phool527

wow annaya.. i want bani to say yes to eh london wala larka.. lol.. great part yaar.. jaldi update karo next part yaar..

Hmm..Bani will say yes..let's see..kyaa hota hai..

Originally posted by: kuttu

Hi

What a twist Krishna is trying to poison Jai's mind. But looks like fate still brings tehm together. And now who is the new entry into the stroy just to make Jai jealous. Hope he doesn't do something stupid now. And why doe she have a spare key of her house.
Waiting to see what you haev planned out
Bye

Story is so far..Krishna is just doing her job..Jai..hmm..this is the time..Jai really has to do something..else Bani will be udhan chhooo..😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jeenal20

hey ananya ==Hello..

i hope jai dose not doo something wrong with bani now ==Hmm..Jai can do anything..😉
jai toh baat ka kuch aur hi meaning nikal raha hai ==Haan..yeh baat toh sach hai..
and ghosh what is this krishna upto, trying to poison jais mind ==Krishna...the TYPICAL SAAS..
achi khaasi jb ki dosti chal rahi thi- khamkha aag laga dii krishna ne ==Aag lagana..ghee daalna..sab kar rahi hai..
plzzzzzzzz cont soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: tam2

Hi ... Jai's friend are so bad .... giving him wrong advice to torture Bani and present her as a characterless woman.... not good.... anyways i don't like Jai's mom either she's evil too.... well update soon.... and I hope Jb will get married soon ...

Wait and watch..Akhil is not so bad...

Originally posted by: swatinarang

great part dear,

i am sure now jealous JW will not allow anyone to enter bani's life and will marry her soon
do continue soon

Hmm..good guessing..keep it up..👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 7

Jai pachta raha hai..usne kyon Bani se aisa keh dia k Bani shaadi se inkaar kar de..udhar Dhananjay bhi aanewala hai London se.Uday khush hain kyonki Bani apni khushi se Dhananjay se shaadi karne ko raazi hai.Krishna khush hain..kyonki Bani India chhod kar jaa rahi hai.Sab k beech Jai ki haalat kharab ho gayi hai..Ajay ko kai baar phone kia,par Ajay ne keh dia , "Mujhe pata hai k meri Bahen k lia kyaa achha hai aur kyaa bura hai.. tujhse jaanne ki zaroorat nahi hai.."

Jai ne jis aadmi ko hire kia tha..usne Bani k ghar ki chaabi ka duplicate laa kar dia hai.. Bani k absense me ek chabiwale ko pakda tha usne..aur duplicate chaabi banva li hai.. Jai k haathon me woh chaabi pahooch gayi.Jai ko ab samajh me nahi aa raha hai k woh is chaabi ka karega kyaa..Dhananjay aa raha hai October k last week me..Office me sab Bani ko congratulate kar rahe hain.Sab kuchh dekh kar Jai ka dimaag jal gaya..Bani aati hai Office..kaam kar k chali jaati hai Bani,Gupta & Gupta me jo pending cases hain ,Bani un cases ko bhi jald se jald niptaane ki koshish kar rahi hai.Bani aaj kal round the clock kaam kar rahi hai..koi bhi file Bani k table par pada nahi rehta,Bani War Time situation ki tarha kaam kar rahi hai.Advocate Juneja aaj kal wahi cases ko dekh rahi hain jinka outside court settlement hone k maximum chances hain..court k date k pachhde me padne ka koi irada nahi hai unka..


Jai ko kuchh bhi samajh me nahi aa raha hai..k woh kyaa karega.Doston se milna julna bandh kar dia hai usne.

Akhil ne jo idea dia tha usko..yeh baatein kisi bhi dost ko pasand nahi aaya.

"Saale..Bani ne tera kyaa bigada hai?Kyon Jai ko uksa raha hai?"

Akhil--Shaant ho jaao tum log..jo kar raha hoon..bhale k lia..tum log Jai ko advice dete rahte ho k Bani se shaadi karo..usse pyaar ho jaayega..par asli baat main bataoon?

"Kyaa?"

Akhil--Jai is already in love with her..

"Paagal ho gaya hai tu?"

Akhil--Nahi..Jai ..saalon se jis Devi ki aradhana karta aaya hai..woh Bani hi hai..

"Bakwas mat kar.."

Akhil--Beta ,yehi sach hai...Jai k dil me ishque ka palita bahut pahle se hi hai..Neehal k flat ki chaabi li thi Jai ne..US jaane se pahle..

"Toh?"

Akhil--Andar ki baat sun..Bani ko le gaya tha saath me..ab bhajan keertan toh nahi karne gaya tha udhar..

"Iska matlab..Jai naatak karta hai..?Bani se nafrat ka dikhava karta hai?"

Akhil--Haan..aur maine dia hai reverse psychology ..Bani k khilaaf usko uksaya hai..asal baat yeh hai..Jai Bani se pyaar karta hai..aur Bani..woh Jai se pyaar karti hai..Jai apni mohabbat ko apni nafrat se chhupane ki koshish karta hai..aur Bani..Jai ko ignore karne ka naatak karti hai..Bani jitna ignore karti hai..Jai utna uske peechhe paagal hota hai..Jai sochta hai k Bani bardasht karti hai sab kuchh..jis din Bani ne palat kar Jai par vaar karna shuru kar dia..us din Jai toh gaya kaam se..issi lia..jitni jaldi ho sake,Jai aur Bani ki shaadi ho jaani chahie..

"Aur tune Jai ko yeh idea dia ..k Bani ko ..ghalat saabit kar de.."

Akhil--Abe..tu hai gadha..ek baar Bani se shaadi ho jaaye..toh..sab fit..nafrat .. mohabbat.. tension..beta..aurat aur mard..aag aur mom hai..Bani Jai ki saari garmi utaar degi..aur Bani..Jai kuchh nahi karega uske khilaaf..saari akad nikal jaayegi uski..

"Aisa kuchh nahi hoga...Bani kisi aur se shaadi kar rahi hai..pakki khabar hai..koi London ka Doctor hai..lagta hai Bani jab London gayi thi..tabhi se chakkar hai..ab jaa kar shaadi kar rahi hai..shaadi k baad Bani London chali jaayegi..teri saari planning gayi khadde me.."

Akhil yeh sun kar khamosh ho gaya..Bani is getting married to somebody else?!!Isse bura aur kuchh nahi ho sakta..naa Bani k lia ..naa Jai k lia.Jai zinda nahi reh paayega.Nahi..do zindagian aise barbad nahi honi chahie..sirf ego problem ki wajah se itna bada anarth nahi hona chahie..Jai apna mobile bhi bandh rakh raha hai aaj kal..

October 14th,2005.

Jai apne kamre me tha..zameen par baitha tha..haathon me Bani ki tasveer thi..thodi der pahle Jai ne apne haath se glass toda hai..khoon se lat pat hai uska haath..Bani ki tasveer me khoon k nishaan hai..Jai k haath se khoon tapak raha hai..us tasveer par..

"Maine kaha tha tumse Bani..k mere siva kisi aur k baare me mat sochna..naa main tumhe zinda chhodoonga..naa khud zinda rahoonga..mujhse chhootkara paana chaahti ho..mere dil ko jala kar kisi aur k ghar aur zindagi ko roshan karna chaahti ho..aisa main hone nahi doonga..kyaa lagta hai tumko Bani?Itna aasaan hai sab kuchh?Humari zindagi me zaher ghol kar..tum apni zindagi..nahi..Bani..aisa kabhi nahi hoga..jis aag me main jala hoon.. tumko bhi us aag ki lapet me aana hai..tumko aana hi hoga."

Agle din Jai Office aaya..haath me bandage bandha hua thi..Bani Office se baahar jaa rahi thi..usko court jaana tha.Dono ka aamna saamna ho gaya..Bani ne Jai ko dekha..Jai k haath ko dekha..kuchh nahi kaha usne..chali gayi..

Jai apne cabin me baith kar files check karne laga..Bani was so careless about his injury.. how can she be so indifferent?!

Waqt nahi guzar raha hai..10 baje the jab Jai aaya tha..ab 12 baje hain..Jai ne apni PA ko bulaya..

"Yes Sir.."

Jai--Advocate Juneja ..send her in my cabin..

"Let me check Sir..woh toh court gayi hain.."

Jai--Jab laute..toh mere cabin me bhejna..samjhi?

"Sure Sir.."

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Bani apni client se baat kar rahi thi.Divorce ka case hai.Bani puri tarha se cheedh gayi thi.. saal bhar pahle shaadi..love at first sight ka maamla tha..jab pehli baar mile..toh dono bane Heer Ranjha..ab..BJP-Congress ki tarha ek doosre ko dho rahe hain..Bani k sar pahle se garam hai..upar se inke nakhre aur chonchle sun kar Bani ko aur bhi gussa aa gaya.. pyaar nibha nahi sakte,rishta nahi nibhta inse,kyon jodte hain rishta?Sab ki ek hi pareshaani..communication gap..theek se baat naa karna..divorce inko kyon chahie..yeh khud nahi jaante..

Bani irritated ho gayi..usne finally keh dia,"Jaldi faisla kijiye..k actually kyon talak chahie.. aur pahle sure hoiye..k talak chahie bhi yaa nahi..khamokha mera waqt barbad mat kijiye.. main pahle se pareshaan hoon.."

Tab Mian Biwi khud confused ho gaye..k woh kyon jhagda kia karte the actually..actually unko ek doosre k kis baat se problem thi..Bani ne kaha.."Abhi case file nahi kia gaya hai.. aap log sochiye..aur soch kar faisla kijiye..uske baad bhi agar aisa lagta hai k divorce hi chahie..toh Gupta & Gupta Law Chamber me aa jaaiyega..abhi main chalti hoon.."

Bani ka mobile baja..Jai ki PA ka phone tha..Jai usse milna chaahta hai..zaroori hai..Bani Walias k office gayi..tab dopaher k ek baj chuke the..

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Akhil Jai k cabin me baitha tha..cold drink pee raha tha..Jai se baat kar raha tha..idhar udhar ki baatein thi..achanak Bani ka zikar hua..

Akhil--Rehti kaha hai aaj kal?Office me nahi dikhi..

Jai--Court gayi hai..aur fir usko Law Chamber bhi jaana hai..

Akhil--What about her marriage?

Jai--Mujhse kyon poochhta hai?

Akhil--Teri aankho k saamne se koi aur usko le jaayega..aur tu dekhta rahega..chup chaap?

Jai--Aur kar bhi kyaa sakta hoon?

Akhil--Tu usse shaadi nahi karna chaahta?

Jai--Nahi..

Akhil--Toh fir theek hai..main toh soch raha tha..k tujhe bada dukh hai..k Bani kisi aur se shaadi kar rahi hai..

Jai--Akhil ..please..

Akhil--Kasoor tera hai..tu usse pyaar karta hai..tu yeh baat jaanta hai..par maanne ko taiyyar nahi..Jai..pyaar karta hai toh seedhi tarha se bol..dhamki de kar agar tu pyaar jataayega..humesha usko humiliate karega..toh woh toh tujhse door bhaagegi hi..aur tune toh khud usse kaha tha k shaadi se inkaar kar de..ab kis baat pe afsos kar raha hai?

Jai--Uski wajah se meri family me..

Akhil--Uncle ne usko sahara dia tha..isme Bani ka koi dosh nahi..aur jis back ground ki baat karta aaya hai tu..Jai ..paidaish koi maaine nahi rakhti agar insaan achha naa ho toh.. zaroori nahi k jiske peechhe oonche khandan ka naam ho..woh achha ho,aur..Jai.. zindagi tujhe beetani hai uske saath..uske saath..uske pyaar k saath,she is nice,educated, successful..aur kyaa chahie tujhe?

Jai--Mom..

Akhil--Yaar..Aunty ko samjhaane k lia Uncle hain..agar tu Aunty ki wajah se Bani ko...yeh koi wajah nahi...dekh yaar..at the end of the day..Aunty ko teri khushi chahie..Bani k saath tu jitna khush rahega..kisi aur k saath nahi reh paayega..

Jai--Aisa tujhe kyon lagta hai?

Akhil--Achha?Ek baat bata..teri umar 32 saal hai..toh jawaan hue..aaj tujhe kareeb 12 yaa 13 saal toh ho gaye..I mean..woh umar jab koi ladka kisi ladki k baare me soch sake..pyaar mohabbat k nazariye se..10 saal pahle tu gaya USA..3 saal pahle tu India waapas aaya.. bahut logon se mila..bahut ladkian bhi dekh li tune..ek ladki ka naam bata..

Jai--Matlab?

Akhil--Ab tak ki zindagi me ek bhi ladki ka naam tujhe yaad nahi..ek hi naam ..ek hi ladki.. Bani..sharaab pee kar Bani ko bhala bura kehna..hosh me Bani ko criticise karna..matlab .. ek hi naam..aur tu kehta hai Bani ka kisi aur se shaadi karna..tujhe kuchh fark nahi padta? Yeh main kaise maan loon?

Jai--Main kyaa karoon?

Akhil--Dil me jo ehsaas hai..usko honthon par laa..

Jai--Tu toh keh raha tha..k usse shaadi kar k..Dad k saamne usko..

Akhil--Tujhe unksaane k lia bola tha..taa k tu Bani se shaadi karne k lia maan jaaye..Jai.. Bani ki aankhon me dekh..woh tujhse pyaar karti hai..aur tune kaha usse k tu usse shaadi karna nahi chaahta..issi lia...woh shaadi kar rahi hai..kisi aur se,aur jaa rahi hai humesha k lia.. kar kyaa raha hai tu?Yaar..tum dono ek doosre se pyaar karte ho..toh kyon nahi ho saath?Bani k kal me kyon apna sar khapa raha hai...uske saath apna aanewala kal kyon nahi dekhta?

Jai is baat ka jawab dene hi jaa raha tha..aise me darwaze par knock.. "May I come in?"

Jai--Yes,please..

Bani andar aai..Akhil ko dekha..

Akhil--Hii..Bani..

Bani--Hello..Ohh..Jai..tum mujhse milna chaahte the..bolo..kyaa baat hai?

Jai--Ek minute..zara woh file..

Bani--Tumhare haath me chot lagi hai..main dekhti hoon..kaun se shelf par hai..bata do.. main dekhti hoon..

Jai--Haan..us drawer me hai..Mehta & Mehta..

Bani--Haan...yehi hai..mil gayi..

Jai--Usko dekh lo..I think kuchh legal loop holes hain..

Bani--Okay..

Bani Akhil k paas waale chair par hi baith gayi..file dekhne lagi...

Akhil--Court gayi thi?Case kyaa tha?

Bani file dekhte dekhte hi jawab dene lagi, "Kuchh nahi..talak ka maamla tha..dono ghanchakkaron ne shaadi ki thi..jab shaadi ki kuchh soche bina hi shaadi ki..ab jab talak lena chaahte hain..uske lia bhi koi wajah nahi..mujhe samajh me yeh nahi aata..rishta jab jod hi lia hai..toh todne k baare me kyon sochte hain..aur jab rishta nibha nahi sakte toh rishta kyon jodte hain?Shaayad jis waqt shaadi ki thi..us waqt aur koi kaam nahi tha..time pass karna tha..issi lia shaadi kar li..all bunch of fools..Jai..kuchh clauses toh..missing hain..main aur zara dekh loon..batati hoon.."

Bani jab jawab de rahi thi,tab Jai Bani ki taraf dekh raha tha..aur Akhil Jai ko dekh raha tha..aur Bani sar jhoonka k file ko dekh rahi thi..

Akhil ne Jai ko bahut meaningful look dia..aur Bani se poochha, "Toh Bani..shaadi karne k lia kyaa wajah honi chahie?Aur waqt kaun sa hona chahie?"

Bani file dekh rahi hai aur jawab de rahi hai.. "Waqt ki baat nahi hai..baat hai wajah ki.. shaadi kare toh issi wajah se kare k..pyaar hai dono me..rishta achha hai..aage chal k yeh rishta aur bhi gehra ho sakta hai..ek doosre k bina jee nahi sakte..etc. etc. ,by the way.. aapke cousin ne bhi Bar Council join kia hai..naam kyaa hai..haan..Yogesh Bhimani.. Advocate Yogesh Bhimani..Court me mulakat hui hai kai baar..bahut aage jaayega..such a promising lawyer.."

Akhil--Bani..bahut tired lag rahi ho..

Bani ne file padh li hai..usne Akhil ki taraf dekha, kaha,"Haan..raat ko soyi nahi..nahi saare pending files complete karne hain..cases ko niptane hai...din me teen yaa chaar ghante k lia soti hoon..tough time.."

Akhil--Haan..maine suna..shaadi ho rahi hai tumhari..date fixed hua?

Bani--Abhi tak kuchh tai nahi hua..actually..Bhaiyya aa jaaye..fir tai hoga..Bhaiyya toh aa rahe hain..agar yeh ladka nahi..toh kisi aur se..matlab Bhaiyya meri shaadi kara k hi dum lenge..

Akhil--Ajay kaisa hai?

Bani--Theek hain..

Akhil--Shaadi ki baat fixed nahi hai..?

Bani--Nahi..Dhananjay se mulakat hui thi..bas itna ..I mean..he is nice..successful..London me ghar hai uska..parivar bhi achha hai..I mean..it's okay..

Akhil--Tum khush ho?

Bani--Khush naa hone ki koi wajah hi nahi hai..

Jai--Bani..tumko bhi toh chot lagi thi..ab kaisa hai?

Bani--Theek hai..par tumko yeh chot kaise lagi?Ek minute..khoon nikal raha hai..

Bani toilet k cabinet se first aid kit le kar aai..Jai k haathon me fir se bandage baandhne lagi..Jai Bani ki taraf dekhne laga..Bani Jai k haath ko dekhne lagi..aur Akhil dono ko dekhne laga..ajeeb nautanki hai..

Bani--Ek pain killer le lo..yeh lo..paani lo..

Bani ka mobile baja..Akhil ne mobile screen par dekha..Dr. Arora calling.Bani ne phone uthaya..kaha , "Haan..kahiye..yes..haan..main thodi der me aapko is number me phone karoon?Actually zaroori meeting me hoon..haan..theek hai.."

Bani fir se baithi aur file ko dekha..aur kaha ,"Jai..main yeh file do ghante baad tumko deti hoon..aur baaki k reports bhi..theek hai?"

Jai--Haan...

Bani--Abhi mujhe kaam hai..main chalti hoon...

Bani chali gayi..

Akhil--Jai...yeh Dr. Arora kaun hai?

Jai--Wahi..Dhananjay Arora..London ka rahnewala..

Akhil--Ussika phone tha..

Jai--Ohh..

Akhil--Aur zaaheer si baat hai..tune apne haath ko khud hi zakhmi kia hai...gusse me..kyaa karna chaahta hai?Hero banna chaahta hai?Tragic Hero?Koi poochhega tak nahi tujhko..

Jai--Kyaa karoon?
Akhil--Aurat jaa rahi hai..waqt haath se finsal raha hai..aur tu khoon baha raha hai..apna.. khoon jala raha hai apna..thodi der baad auraton ki tarha ansoon bhi bahayega..kyon?Kisi aurat ka pyaar haasil karna hai..agar woh aurat tujhe apni zindagi me chahie..TOH MARD BAN..BE A MAN..yeh is tarha haath kaat lene se kuchh nahi hoga..jab tak Doctor tere haath ko green signal dega k ab theek hai..tab tak woh Dr. Arora..le udega ..teri Bani ko..jo karna hai jaldi kar..
Jai--Kyaa karoon..wahi toh samajh me nahi aa raha hai..
Akhil--Abe tu Hindustani hai..Hindustanion k naam par kalank hai tu..isi sarzameen ki paidaish the Prithvi Raaj Chauhan..bhool gaya?Samajh le teri Sanyogita kisi aur ki hone jaa rahi hai..aur tujhe usko nahi khona hai..kisi bhi haal me..yaad rakh..ladki ussiko pyaar karti hai..jo usse apne mohabbat aur himmat k dum par jeet le..tujhe jeetna hai..samjha.. BE A MAN..Bani ko yeh pata hona chahie..k tu hi hai..uska ek aur ek lauta sachcha aashik.. uski sachchi mohabbat..theek hai..ab main chaloon?Bye..
Akhil chala gaya..

Jai sochne laga,k aisa kyaa karega,k Bani us Dhananjay se shaadi naa kare,aisa koi raasta dhoondhna hai..Jai Bani k cabin k paas se guzra..dekha..Bani hans hans kar baatein kar rahi hai..zaroor us Dhananjay se..Jai ka dimaag jal gaya.Itni hans kar toh kabhi usne Jai se baat nahi ki..sara pyaar ..saari muskurahat us langoor k lia..Jai kuchh nahi..Jai koi maaine nahi rakhta Bani k lia?

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
HEY anaynya
that was a gr88 part
akhil is a good freind
jai ko thik raste pe laa raha hai
samjha raha hai usko ki he should marry bani as he loves her
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont sooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
akhil was giving brains to jai the whole time... but at last back to square one... jealousy...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
i thought dat akhils bhashan wud infuse some brains into jai...but hes againg feeling jealous...
poor chap...khud hi bani ko jaane de raha hai
do continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
Hi
So finally some one is talking sense to Jai. And Bani is moving on or she is trying to get away from Jai. Why cannot Jai for once acknlodege his feelings then things would be easier for him. Or at least take a stand he keeps wavering between love and hate. Waiting to know how this love and hate relationship will progress.
Bye

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