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Posted: 16 years ago

now lets see whether Jai still want to die or not, with a cute child and beautiful wife falling for him, I'm sure he will agree to undergo the operation......very very beautiful update sonam.....especially the part where you wrote about Bani's feelings towards Jai now and then....please continue.....

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Posted: 16 years ago
gr8 part
so now finally bani has forgiven jai
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
great update...i'm gald jai and bani are getting comfortable around each other..and bani has already forgiven jai..can't wait to read more
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey i just caught up with this ff its really hooking lol
aw at last jb have forgiven n started 2 unerstand each other
please update soon 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

i love ur ss...i finally caught up...continue soon...

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Posted: 16 years ago
jaani wen u gonna update?
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Posted: 16 years ago
Dear Friends....I would like to THANK all of you for the great comments. Your comment were lovly and it has encouraged me so much and boosted me to write. I'm gald that all of you liked this SS.
I'm SORRY I couldnt update early because I had some personal problem at home...i ended up breaking my latest Sony Erickson phone...and mom said no fone for you now and also some stuff at school is making me really depressed, Here i have updated the LAST chapter and EPILOGUE....Hope you all enjoy it.....and please do comment...
I really love writing so I might try to write some more SS 's soon, I have 3 more interviews from the Uni's and please pray for me so that the Uni's accepts me and also so that i can finish my corseworks soon and then start revising for my exams....Once again THANK YOU so much for your lovely comments and support
p.s Hani I'm waiting for your comment to....you know how pathan's are comment warna....hehee
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Mina/Meena/Sonam
Edited by SonamKHAN - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Here is the last chapter and epilogue....hope you all will enjoy it....
CH12-Last Part and Epilogue

Bani I'm sorry massi ki wajese....

It's ok Mr. Walia aapko kuch kehni ki zarorat nahi hai....

Because of massi jai and bani had to share a bedroom, they needed to show massi that they were real man and wife. she forgave jai but she never thought of going back to WM. This was new, she was not expecting other family members to know about but because of jigs this all happened, this woman never changes does she ...thought bani, because of massi she couldn't say anything otherwise today she would defiantly not spared jigs, but God knows what she has told massi about her...thought bani...and massi's behavior has changed too, bani knows that she is behaving coldly towards her, but then Mr. walia does he really cares about me, does he really wants me back in his life...from what he said today it showed that he wanted me back, but then may be he said it because of massi....the bathroom door opened jai came out changed into his pajama's...

Bani you sleep on the bed I will sleep on the couch...

No Mr. walia you sleep on the bed I don't want to risk anything...I hope you understand....

**********

Massi and jigs stayed in with them, they were given separate rooms. Massi felt upset on what jigs said to her, and then jai said something different, of course she believes in her munna and she knows jai can't do anything wrong....

Bani seems nice girl, today she has really proved herself, in fact beji was right about her...thought massi but then jigs....massi remembered jai's words...

Massi aapko tu patta hai na, jigs ko hamesha low society logose problem hai....you know she always cares about states and stuff, and bani is from a low social class background....

Yes munna is right, jigs has problems with low society people and bani is one of them, but it's also true that bani is a perfect bahu for walia household, until now beji used to say about her good things and today i also saw her with my own eye, she is perfect for jai...smiled massi at her thoughts, finally she got the bahu that she wanted, she couldnt wait to have her back to WM.

*************

Bani tumne esa kiyu kia....said jai facing bani

Bani turned around to face him....kiya???????

Bani you know what i am trying to say....

Bani signing yes she know what jai was asking her but she has no answer to her own question either so what is she going to say to him....

I don't know why, may be I felt sorry for you, or may be I was sacred of losing you....looking in his eyes....I mean to say may be for Rehan, I don't want my son to loss her father....now looking down....

Jai looked at her, he couldn't understand what was going through his mind and bani's, but her facial expression were totally something else, they said something else and she was saying something different.....why is it that he only see warmth in her face and may be love and desire too, she is being so nice this doesn't mean that she is feeling sorry for him, jai couldn't resist anymore, he couldn't take it anymore, his body felt so desires that he was getting out of control, bani's petite farm made her more attractive, the way she was laying made her look more seductive. That was it jai was not a saint and he was not going to back out now....

He traced her lips with his finger bani opened her eyes, a shiver run through her, jai's hand went down to her neck then to her midriff, he moved closer and took her lips in his for a long kiss........

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Jai was fast asleep bani lay wake, she couldn't believe what just happened, God why.....why did she let him make love to her, why couldn't she say no to him...she felt angry on herself...but then remembering what happened and how slow and gently jai was making love to her....she blushed

He could be so romantic bani never thought, first time when he forced himself on her, she was in so much pain and this time it was so gentle and desires that she felt at loss.

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Good morning said bani touching massi's feet.....

Jithi rahi beta....jai kaha hai...

Woh massiji...who Rehan ki saath hai...he will be down soon.....

Jigs came to bani just wished her good morning, which instead bani got a cold whish back from jigs but she could care less, she sat the table...jai came with Rehan both playing....jai tickling him....and Rehan laughing...

Mr. Walia i have just feed him do not make him laugh warna he will throw everything out back...said bani...jai looked at her, giving her a mischief look...bani blushed and she looked down...

Arre yeh kiya baath huai....bahu tum munna ko mr walia kiyu kehthi hu...said massi...hearing this jai...jai grinned looking at bani

Woh massi i'm used to it thats why...said bani shyly

Oh what used to it, change your habit now, call him jai, or sunyeji ya per Rehan ki papa kaho...its better than calling him Mr. Walia...jai mad a sad face...

Bani feeling really shy....I will try massi...

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The breakfast was great affair, massi and jigs left. Massi made sure that bani did come back with jai....

Deko beta mai janthi hu tumhari or jai ki bich jo hua so hua...abh bete baathi buljao or ghar awo....woh tumhari ghar hai, tumhari pati ka ghar or abh tu tum akili bhi nahi hu rehan bhi hai, wose bhi to ek sahe ghar parewaar chaye nah...said massi

Ji massi...said bani...

Jai and bani took blessing from massi and promised that they will come soon...most probably within a month...

Bani your coming home nah after my operation...jai asked holding bani's hand...please bani don't say no, you know i really need you, my life is nothing without you and rehan, i know what i did was not worth doing and your not even worth forgiving me, bani with you now i feel alive, i want to do the operation because i want to live with you with rehan with our other kids, i want to grow old with you and die.....

Bani placing her hand on his mouth...don't say this...please i dont want you to die i want to live with you and grow old and have loads of babies....said bani smiling, jai hugged her

Thank you bani....I'm soo happy today and i mean it and as for loads of babies, i think we should start practicing from now, what to say....teased jai

Bani punched him on the chest...Mr Walia...

What...remember what massi said no mr walia...please bani dont make feel like 60 year old chap...

Bani giggled....ok then i will call you sunyeji...how is that...

Much better but if you call me a babe, hotty, sexy, sweetheart etc then i wouldnt mind...grinned jai

Nahi....bani hide her face in his chest...your soo mean...

They hugged each other, finally thing got better with them two, the two lost souls finally found each other and took kasam to be with each other no matter what....

***********Epilogue**********

Four years later

Jai, jai get up said bani shaking him...jai get up you sleep soo much....

What bani...let me sleep your soo mean....

What mean and me, how dare you....arghhhh it's all your fault, i need to go to hospital NOWWWWW....said bani screaming

Oh shit...why didnt you said it before....woke up jai...

I tried but did you listen to me....said bani....now hurry up....my water has broken and soon my contraction would begin....

Ok bani please calm remember how everything went smoothly with ridhan, everything would be fine i'm going to call adi and massi ok....said jai leaving the room...bani nodded

She lied backward, breathing deeply....bani went back to the day when jai was tooken to the OT, she was crying and prying all day, and before going to OT jai was trying to calm her...

Bani kuch nahi huga, you love me nah....bani nodded...your love will bring me back and bani if you cry like this then what will happen to me to rehaan....please bani...

Bani calmed down and kissed him on the lips before leaving the OT room....she waited impatiently and was prying all the time for jai and until after long hours the doc came and gave then the good news....she was crying again but this time it was tears of joy....

Then coming to WM was scary...bani felt really nervous, but then it was great coming home, rano stayed in mount Abu since it was her last year and then she promised that she will move back soon...after Rehan's first birthday bani found out that she was pregnant and the entire family felt over the moon specially jai, he had tears in his eyes and soon after 8 months give birth to a beautiful baby boy whom they named Ridhan Jai Walia...after graduating rano came back and soon she and ranveer fell in love which surprised everyone specially jigs, but then she couldnt say no because no one asked her if she liked it or not...and then rano and ranveer had a baby boy whom they named Varun and pia and pushkar had also a boy whom they named veer, now it was all boy's and the family and no girl and now after three years bani was pregnant again and tonight her water broke she is still 2 days before her due date and her water broke...

*******

Bani beta massi hurriedly asked bani tek hu na beta....bani nodded....massi and rano sat ther holding her hands jai quickly got dressed and ranveer went to get the car, massi, bani, jai and ranveer left for hospital and rano and jigs, adi stayed with kids...

Bani hold jai hard when the wave of contraction came again to her, she pushed hard and that was it she give birth to a beautiful baby girl....jai and bani couldn't be happy anymore they thanked God for thousands time...for blessing them with three beautiful kids and a happy life.

With the boy's it was bani who named them and then jai named his daughter Krishna Jai Walia, it was great time for the walia's, rehan and ridhan was happy but ridhan was jealous because krishna took his place and he hated that, but ridhan made sure that his daddy was his, his mummy was the baby's and his daddy was his, rehan was all himself, very caring, loving responsible boy, he was a duplicate of his dad.

Jai and Bani had a great life with the kids nothing could be more great then this, massi never found out about what jai did to bani, bani totally forgot that it was a bad dream that happened. Bani and jigs relationship never changed, they were always on a cold war, but the rest were great totally great.

This was the best, this was a life that bani ever dreamt for and now after so much struggling she finally had it, this life is amazing, it was a beginning for them, their life just started and it was a beautiful start.

*******THE END*******
Once again THANK YOU so much for all the love and support...Do commnet whether good or bad...
I still cant figure out whats my reall name Mina/Meena/Sonam
Edited by SonamKHAN - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Mina,

So you ended it! A happy ending!! 👏Liked their reunion n epilogue too…Thanks!

Ammu.

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Posted: 16 years ago
mina/meena/sonam.. i dont care wat ur ral name is anymore.. lol.. there all beutiful names hun.. but i love ur ending.. it was beutiful hun.. wow.. and seriously couldnt u hhave had jigz kidnapped or married to someone else like Aprajhit Deb.. lol.. anywayz great SS.. hope to c another SS from u..

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