SS: Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh:Lastpart+epi pg27 27/11

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello guys...I'm here with another SHORT STORY...will i had really funny day today...firstly cuz i have received an interview from a university and i'm really nervous....please pray for me so that i can pass the interview and get a place in the university...secondly this idea popped in my head long time ago but out of nowhere this idea came to me again when i was going to school this morning...and so i was thinking about this all they way to school and then back to home...ok now ummmm i dunno if this (Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh) name is right for this SS...But if you guys have any names that you think suits this SS then you're welcome to PM me....and also i'm going to finish this SS very soon...hope you enjoy reading it...

Please mr walia, please mere baat ek baar sunlijaye...please...bani laterally begged jai but jai didn't even bother to listen to her once...he continued dragging her to the their bedroom...once he reached there he pushed her with so much force that bani fell on the bed...jai was ragging with so much anger that nothing in this world would have stopped him...his eyes full of anger and hatred...he was sweating profusely...he locked the door and looked towards bani...enough is enough bani...aaj tumne saari hadi paar kardi...aaj tumne mere hai kilaf jaki tumne pia or pushkar ki shaadi mere hai ghar mai kardi...abh paani sarse bahar achuka hai...you did what you wanted... now its my turn...you and your dear sister destroyed my life...tum duno ne muji woh ZAKHAM diye hai ki jiska koi ilaj nahi abh tumhari baari hai bani...as he took a step towards her and throw his blazer and starting unbuttoning his shirt.... aaj tumhe mai woh ZAKHAM dongi jiski koi bhi ilaj nahu...

Bani pleaded him to spare her but jai didn't listen to any of it...please mr walia...don't do this to me...don't do something that you might regret later...please...please was the last thing that she said before he entered her with anger and hatred.....

So should i continue...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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😲 I is shocked!!!! (really shocked) WHat is he doing!!!!!! Mat karo!!! You cant do that!!! I'll......I'll.........I'll send someone with a jharu!!!! Sonam, please continue soon!!! And best of luck with your interview, go aur sab ki band bajaakar aana! They will have to accept you!! byebye ranjana

P.s.. couldnt pass this opportunty to say. ME FIRST!!
Edited by RANJANA_RRJ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good Luck with the interview... how short is this story going to be..LOL

Do continue..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ranju yaar im soo nervous pata nahi kisi hugi...im what type of question...yaar why did i chose to become teacher now...nahi bana muji teacher...
sangeeta...i dunno how short yaar...i think io just said short i didnt mean it😆
Edited by SonamKHAN - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Sonam, Good luck for your interview! 😊 Great start! 👏 Liked it! Waiting for the next part....... Ammu.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey sonam first of all best of luck for ur interview....😊
And dont worrie im studying the same course maybe one day i wil be in ur shoe 2 inshallah....😉
well as for cont you better warna mein hi jharu le ke tere peech par yajogi what say ranjana
huh😆
byebye
Love Perveen
Edited by Heartbreak - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG!!!😲....starting main hii yeh chiz😲😆...
pooor bani😔....
best of luck for the interview mino😉
plzz cont.soon....
Edited by koolgal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

😲 I is shocked!!!! (really shocked) WHat is he doing!!!!!! Mat karo!!! You cant do that!!! I'll......I'll.........I'll send someone with a jharu!!!! Sonam, please continue soon!!! And best of luck with your interview, go aur sab ki band bajaakar aana! They will have to accept you!! byebye ranjana


P.s.. couldnt pass this opportunty to say. ME FIRST!!

sonam dear basically everything ranju said is wat i wanted to say.. lol. continue sooon hun.. and best of luck on ur interview..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sonam Dear,
Firstly Good Luck with the interview.And plz cont. soon

Best Wishes & Good Luck Dear.

Love
Tina

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Sonam,
Firstly All the best for ur interview, let us know h it went, secondly after reading ur ss i am very shocked, can't wait for ur contiu, thirdly i really liked ur title a lot 😊
Edited by j&b84 - 16 years ago

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