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lovelyyrose

@lovelyyrose

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#211

that was a grt ending

enjoyed it

thanks for wonedrful ff

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Pachu.P

@Pachu.P

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Posted: 17 years ago

#212

Awesome Epilogue yaar!! Loved it!! 👏

Bani finally got what she deserved, LOVE!! And glad Rano/Pia accepted her! Something wise they did !! 😆

Loved it yaar!!

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#213

So finally Bani got her acceptance and now she has a family to call her own. Loved the interaction between sisters. So the risk she took was worth it.

Lovely epilogue with Bani's thoughts . Hope you would write some more short stories. Especially your character of Bani has got depth and very sentimental characters.

Bye

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mujer

@mujer

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#214

Renu,

nice part and a wonderful co-incidence. I was listening to songs of Hanste Zakhm, it really has some good songs. Thank you for not killing Bani and a wonderful epilogue to a brilliantly scripted story. Hoping to read some more from you in the near future

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amisha

@amiee

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#215

a very heart warming story loved it

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Hrishali Sule-Talathi

@allaboutears

Beginner

Posted: 17 years ago

#216

I have been a silent reader of this FF but i have to thank you for a very very heartwarming and touching story!

Everything was wonderful from start to a wonderful finish (thank god you didnt kill her!!) 😃

Your writing is so real that it literally takes the reader right into the world of JB. (Not that we need much pushing here at IF-KS) I got so involved with the end/epi that after reading about Bani's painful pregnancy i started to feel lower back pain myself (i happen to be preggers right now too)!!! Of course my dear Jai wasnt quite as accomodating as apna JW. I had to walk off my so-called pain and get back to reality quickly!

Thank you again, and hope to read some more of your wonderful writing!

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nema123

@nema123

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#217

Hi Ranjana...

I was wonderful Ending to the wonderful story..... Can't describe in words... it was awosome...

Kaash every girl get someone like this JW...

Nema...

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divan

@divan

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#218

Renu great ending...very realistic, very sensible and great Bani is finally married and accepted whatever relations her father offered. Jai is right to hate his FIL because he could have lost her because of him.

So ready to write another one???? I wil be waiting.

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hearme21

@hearme21

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#219

Thank you so much😊 for the happy ending! Very realistically portrayed. I loved how you showed the gradual recovery, the pain Bani underwent during pregnancy, esp the bathtub scene. Very nice touch and makes you characters so utterly human. I think thats what I like best about your stories, romantic but realistically so.
Liked how you kept the relationship between Bani's father and her too, cordial. Atleast Rano is close to her now. Well her inlaws and hubbie more than make up for it. Lovely story dear.
Waiting for your next😉

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ask

@xxainy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#220

AwWw... man it ended i loved this short ff of ur
u did u really nice job writing this story
At least u didn' kill bani at the end that's what matters lol
happy ending for all
hope to see u a new FF from u soon

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