Davia's FF: Krishna part 52 + note Pg 70 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
nice part
I really feel sorry for bani
and move this roshni right now
promo was sweet and the preview was really interesting
pls cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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note: thanks for liking this ff hope u people continue to like it if no pls let me know ... ideas and both good and bad comments are welcomed to continue this ff.i don't know where it is going as when i started it long back i thought many thing but now jammed in my head due to lots of things happening in my life .. my days are going really bad... no one is talking to me.. and me getting upset day by day isliye ur comments will cheer me up to write and continue it

.......Part .....5.......


Rano enters the bathroom saying kya didi and on seeing bathroom she shouts diddi.. and bani comes to see all the dress were immersed in water and one was trying to wash the clothes and one was trying to soap it and other was dropping the paste over it saying bhaiya ye bhi daloo taaki hamrii white dress aur bhi white hosake like our teeth and bani was like yee tum log kya kar rahe hooo ..mamma hum sab hamri kapde doo rahe hain.. and bani sayss pehle tum logg waha se uthoo and pours cup of water on three of them and ask rano to wipe them .. and sends them outs.. and starts to clean up the whole mess and sayss pata nahii mein karroon in theen too .. and some how cleans it and comes to see all were fighting with ranoo and one was tickling er and one pulled her hair and other was trying too pull her spec and she was protesting it' and bani says tum teen ooo stop it I said .. dekhiye diddi ye 3 kids of urs is soo .. she goes and bring one one down and says tum logon koo aaj mein and lifts her hands and three looks down and tears to fall and rano says dii jane doo bacche hii to hai.. and all three goes and says sorry mamma holding their ears.. and turns to rano and says sorry mausi.. and she says jaaane doo dii .. and says bacchoon no more shararathi.. and comeone let get reayd comeone krishna I will make u ready as ur a girll and says too wo donon showing towards her brother.. woo their boys and mamma will get them ready.. and bani says haan and says chaloo then Krishna ask too mamma boy hain?she replies nahii she is a women..

few min later bani feeds them all and rano says didi muje nahii and she feeds her too' and all smile at her.. bahut badii bacchii and all smile rano sayss haan.. too mein hamesha merii did kelie baby hi hoon haina dii haan ranoo .and after it.. rano says chaloo bachoon bahar jakar kelna.. and noo shararat.. and they goo and bani was cleaning the things.. rano ask dii aap kyun ek aya nahi raklethi as ..nahi ranoo tum too jaanthi hoo hum kud kii aur eshaan non mein jee rahe hain.. yaad hain aditya uncle hii hamein paise de rahe the hain' aur is ghar tak koo wahi chalethe hain' aur tumhari padeyii bhii.. . to aya koo rakthi hoon too muje aur paise aur chahiye hoonge aur' mein aise nahi karsakthi.. woo akele hamri aur meri 3 bachoon kii booj utharahe hain woo kafi nahii hai kya????? Aur mein is halat mein nahi hoon kii kisi kaam karroon as u know my kids how r they.. agar koyi unse ye kehde thii ki.. its ok dii aap fikar math kijiye.. meri padayii katam hote hii ' every problem of urs will be solved .. aur tab tak ye logg school bhi chali jayenge.. aur tumein un logon kii fikar karne kii koii jarrorat nahi padega.. as unke mausi haina.. bani has tears of joy and sayss aaj muje aise hogaya kii meri bahen kitni badii hogayii haii . and both hug..

outside thre were playing busily.. one was throwing the ball other was hitting it with the bat and other was watching it sitting in the swing.. and when he hits the ball it goes and fell in to the back house and goes and hit the person whose back was seen by them and he was busy in talking in phone when the balls hits he turns to see three kidss standing otherside of the wall and he remembers the girl as it was not that far and goes taking the ball all three shouts uncle pls ball dijiye naaa he just smile and sayss going towards them and stands there and sayss agar sab koo ball chahiye too sab apne naam batayiye .. woo and sees each other and he says agar chahiye to naam batiye too I wont do anything varna mummy se complain karoongii agar namm ka too chocolate bhi milege' and with lots of thing she says Krishna and other says ketan and he asks aapka woo mera naam hai kesan.he was like theeono have sweet name and give them ball and sayss aap log yahi rehte hoo they says nahii ye hamarii uncle ka ghar hai we come for playing our house is and says someother house and all three climbing down smiles as they made fool of him and goes and smiles .

jai on other hands smiles soo three have planned to fool me .. teek haii mein bhi jw hoon.. but hai smart.. cute kids .. and smart too he thinks.. and that girll and remembers her name as Krishna and remembers something and his face goes pale but gets call from roshini and on seeing her number he says hey baghwan ise muje bachane keliye kisi koo bechdoo (don't worry jaii three are in action')and switch off of his cell.. roshini gets upset on it.. and jig says don't worry roshini.. why don't u go there and roshini smiles u r right jig I shd go there.. and smiles' the kids comes back into the house shouting mamma bani we need pani which makes he smile.. as she was busy cleaning the floor.. and she says rano massi se mangna.. and all goes shouting rano masii paniiii sh esayss wey baghwann pata nahii did tum logon kaise samalthii ?jaise aapko smalthii thii ..and all smiles she says tum theenoo bhi na.. and fills the water in the small their glass and gives to them..they drink it..

.....in Mumbai roshini was coming down and sees massi sitting there and she makes her plan so that she can get married to jai as soon as possible and goes and touches massi feet saying massi kaise hai aap(all natak) she replies teek hoon (massi did not accept roshini but when she came to know bani left she had no choice as she sees roshini was the only one whoo loved him by jig creations and says pia left in the shaadi mandap and bani was married to him and filled so many odd things against them as massi doesn't know bani.. and massi on seeing jai state started to feel but yet daadi and adi said it was not fully true.. and massi felt the same and was totally confused and decided to leave it on the faith.. but yet thought something was wrong as jai was becoming tough day by day and soo after she learnt he was divorced and when few days when roshini returned and some how made massi believed with the help of jig..and got managed to convince massi that she can keep jai happy and soo and soo so massi somehow convinced jai to accept roshini and by massi force he got engaged to roshini but was not interested at all as he decided no one will enter or any place for any women..)



....jig starts saying massi kitni kyaal rakthi hai roshini hum sab kii I think we shd get married them as soon as possible haina massi haan beta.. jab jai lautigii tab mein baat karoongii . waise bhii I don't want him alone anymore ..roshini and jig smiles and daadi thinks ye hey baghwan is ghar ko bachana ' bani comes to phone booth and calls aditya and he attend the call and says hello ..she says uncle mein bolrahi hoon.. haan beta bolo kaise wo? Achanak aaj kaise phone kiya u don't call me haan uncle par call karma jarrori tha woo kall meine unkoo deka kise bani.. unkoo mr walai koo and both faces goes black and white.. he was like jai haan woo project ki sislsiley mein my god banii kya wo tuje deka kahan dekha.. woo actually kya hua kii and explained all and he says don't worry he wont able to find u.. and he doesn't know the truth too so don't worry but uncle after seeing him I am feeling tensed . as u know he doesn't know that.. bani relax and don't worry I will come there and or I will make him come back to Mumbai..


....preview:aditya reaches nainital..jai gets surprised on seeing Roshini there....

.....promo: Krishna comments on jai's dress and his hair being wet....

Davs ...😃😃😃 ....

Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
hai mest
that was cool
all three trying to make fool of jai
the bacchas helping in washing clothes and tooth paste.😊
gr8 part cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
wonderful part cant wait for next update pls cont soon......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
Davs read ur ffs all parts finally

Gr8 parts yaar phir bhi i m ready with belans becoz roshni aagaee jis ke aane se andhera cha gaya ne way cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56

kids are too much naughty.i pity on bani and her present state.

continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
i will be back for comment...
hey i'm back...just finished readding all three updates...they are fabules...Davs...
man these three kids are very noughty...but i guess jai is much noughtier then them...
after all he is their daddy....
jb's meeting was very nice...roshani...che...jai and roshani are engaged...bachu now you need to do something about roshani....i'm waiting for roshani to come to ninital so that the kids show her their jalwa...
glad to know that aditya helped bani, rano and the kids...he i9s turly a dear frined...grt part Davs...do continue...
sonam
Edited by SonamKHAN - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
Lovely update. 👏 Three kids are a way to naughty. Loved how they were teasing Rano. Rano is very supporative and thinking ahead for them all.

So Adi knows about Bani ..i was right. He's been suporting her all this time. He must have exppected Jai to bump into his family at some point.

Hope JB meet soon. Don't make us wait too long. Keep that roshni well and truelly out of the picture!😡

Tazoo
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
nice part
but this kids are kabbab mein haddi 😆
how does bani handle them?
and why on earth is roshni coming to meet Jai
pls cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
note:this updates is delicated to my new reader whom i came to know today. this is also for that person mom who enjoy my ff. this ff udpate is also to tam who udpates my ff. and for also for toher readers and pls comment and encourage me to continue the ff. taziie wazzzie apkeliye bhi. samjii aap to hamein bhool hi gaye . par hum nahi. ok
.... Part 6 ....
Adi was lost in thoughts and decides to call jai .. he calls jaii but he was busy in other call .. so he received a engaged tone..then he wanted to do something so called to the agencies or the tickets'.bani was coming back thinking what if he comes to know that I got pregnant with his kidss and.. what if he sees them.. what if he tries to snatch away them..mein kya karroon.. I don't want this to happen' agar aise hua.. I wont live' mere bache kea lava .. and suddenly a car stops in front of her when she was crossing the door she shouts in scadness and shock.. the car hits her and she falls down lieing unconsciously' blood starts to flow from her hand and head...
...one person from the car gets downs and picks her up and goes to the hospitalll .few min later bani wakes up and see she was in the hospital.. he hand was tied and was feeling pain in her hand and her head and little in her leg too and she sees her hand was been tight up up with that brown one to her neck. She sees the nurse and ask her what happen to her she replies u met with an accident and u were hospitalized by ur husband.. husband.. she was shocked ..she says mein doc to inform karke athi hoon.. and goes bani was sitting in confusion and the person enters .it was none other the great jw.she was shocked when she saw him he ask tum kaise ho bani? She says mein teek hoon.. she starts to fear what if he comes to know.. .he was like woo sorry merii waje she says nahii woo meri hii galtii thii I was lost in thought soo it happen.. ..
he was like bani us din mandir mein ,doctors comes before he could ask saying aab aap kaise hain? She replies mein teek hoon.. doctor kya mein ghar ja sakthi hoon.. haan par be carefull as u hand has been fractured an and u have stitches in ur head .. u need to rest and as ur weak too u need to have healthy food ' and he says mr walia pls take care of ur wife' he was like haan sure.. and doctor leaves.. and ask bani to rest and she will be discharged now and he says mr walia come with me I will give u the discharge papaers and he goes .. she was like thank god' abm mein kya karron should I run away now? Kyunki agar unhein koi aur information mil gayi too and she goes away soon ,,nurse calling made him to come out of the thoughts as he was just dreamings things..
he says nurse can u do me a favour haan boliye.. unhein mat batuye kii I admitted her in the hospital and when she get conscious say that I left.. sir par. Plss kuch personal matter hai ye.. she says ok' par agar unhone aapka naam poocha too../?????? he says says he dint say his name.. and she nodes yes .as jw saw ms and sindoor which she was wearing and things sh must have moved with her life and I don't want to disturb it' and if she sees me it may lead to misunderstanding too and waits .. soon he leaves saying he wil return soon.and decides to know where she was.. he checked her purse but nothing was there except her name with address .he feels that address is unsual and things it must be far away and not near by ..(he doent know it was back house oh his..)
he goes to doctor and request him the same and ask him to send the bill to him and if she asks tell her I paid it away .and he goes and wait in the car .few min later she gains her conscious and says nurse mein woo mam aapka accident hogaya tha aur kisi ne aapko yahan admit kiya tha' woo and tries to get up but feels pain and nurse ask her to take rest and she will call the doctor and come. Bani manages to rest back and doctor comes and checks her and say she is fine .....
....bani ask when she will get discharged ..doc informs she can be discharged but need to take rest' and she will be fine.. doc ask her not to work or take strees '. And be happy.. and says I will write u some medicines u need to take it regurlarly . and goes and says that u need to come alternate day for changing the dressing.. and ask her to not to use her hand' and goes..
few min later bani comes out and calls for auto but suddenly a taxi comes and she waves and get in and ask him to goo and she instruct the direction.. when she came out jai was seeing otherside talking in the phone' soo she goes away.roshini comes that way and sees jai and says what he was doing there and pulls him away with her'
preview: the kids come to jai's house and make roshini get irritated..
promo: Adi comes..
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago

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