FF Chahat - CH 3 page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Guys,
This is my first FF.....I have read so many of yours in these past few months ...that I have fallen in love with it. I had a few ideas and wanted to put them on paper. I still dont know what name I could give this FF ut hopefuly with some of your help and suggestions I might be able to and try to write something decent. I am not a great writter(so please excuse my grammer and spellings..will try and improve iwth time) ...but would like to try and see how it goes. ...Here is a short beginning...if you guys like it and think it has potential ....then i shall continue.
Please feel free to drop in a word or 2 of encourangemnet/suggestions.
Thanks again!!
Megs
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He stood there next to the window, watching the party going on in his house. His eyes looking at only one person'..'.his life, his reason of existence, his love '..his Bani'only if he could have had the courage to tell her how much he loved her., what she meant to him'then it would have been him next to her celebrating his engagement with bani and not his brother.

Jai Walia, the biggest business tycoon in Mumbai, 30 years old, single and was never ready to mingle'his life was his business and reason to live was his family which was his sister Jigyasa and his brother Ranveer'..this was his world till Bani came into his life 4 years back.

Bani Dixit, the sweetest girl he had come across 24 then had just finished grad school and was looking for a managerial position with WGH. Just looking at her Jai knew this girl was different '.as time went by Bani become a part of Jai's life 'company meeting, project assignments, family duties'.she helped Jai with everything 'with years she gave a name to their little relationship '.. 'Jai, You r my best friend'. she told him and gave him a peck on his cheek'.that's the day Jai can never forget, that was the day he realized 2 yrs back, that Bani Dixit was not his best friend but was much more'he loved her.

Part 1

Roshani Copra. looked at where Jai Walia was standing and observed his eyes were only on Bani'she picked a drink from the bar and walked up to him and handed him the drink

'Thanks Roshani'..said jai and looked at her asked 'where is your drink?'

'Its you needs one jai not me''said Roshani and continued.. 'why dint you tell her jai'

'Tell who what roshani?''..'Don't be a fool jai, its all visible in your eyes'it always was. You love Bani'why dint you tell her?'

'You are mistaken Roshani'she is a very good friend'its Ranveer who loves her, who she will marry and always be happy with.'

'And what abt her Jai?...whom does she love?' Roshani asked him' and continued' 'whom are her eyes looking for?' Jai did not answer and both of them just looked in Bani's direction.

Bani looked beautiful in her pink Ghagra Choli and was smiling at everyone who greeted them. Her eyes were wondering everywhere as if looking for someone.

She still remembered the time when she first stared to work at WGH'Jai Walia 'The Devil' who he often was referred as was shouting at one of his assistance for some work that was not done correctly'.Bani was looking at this from a distance and was surprised. He was really nice and sweet with her the day of her interview and offered her the position immediately and even asked her to join as soon as possible and she agreed from the day after. She saw Mr. Walia (as she could call her boss) walk back to his office and then she walked towards it. People out there asked her to be careful as the 'The Devil' might eat her alive. She was a little scared when she knocked on the door and heard a harsh voice asking her to come in'..Jai thought it was his assistance and without looking in a strong angry voice said 'Have you completed it ?....It better be right this time or else you will have to say good buy to your job, nah jane kaha se aajate hai '''saying so he looked up and saw the angel face that immediately got a smile on his face'.'Bani tum? (suddenly he was nerves and stated to speak )'.Oh sorry, woh I thought it was someone else'.come please sit. Can I offer u something?...did u find ur office fine? Is there something else you would need?''.He went on rambling without giving Bani a chance to say a word'she looked at him and stated to laugh '. 'Mr. Walia I am fine'please relax'' She quintet her eyebrows and was surprise to see the sudden change in the man's personality'The Devil was as scared as a lamb'.Nor Bani or Jai knew the reason of this change. He sat down and stated to give a brief of what was Bani's job responsibilities and within a few minutes both of them were comfortable with each other and started to discuss different projects'.in a little while Jai's assistant reminded him about his meeting and Jai asked Bani to accompany him to it .They went to the conference room where all the managers were already waiting for him. He introduced Bani to her new colleagues . Bani took a seat and saw the Jai Walia taking over the meeting. He looked composed, firm and in charge'.A very authoritative persona. In no time Bani understood why was WGH what it was...only cause of this one man who knew what had to be done, how it will be done and who will do it. A natural respect for this man came to her which was second to nature. Very different than the man who was fumbling with words while talking to her a couple of hours back.

Back to the Engagement

Bani smiled with the thought of her first day at WGH. She was still looking out for Jai'Where was he? Why has he still not come and said hi? Ranveer introduced her to more guest and she smiled but still felt a void and the smile still dint reach her eye. With only one question in her mind'''..JAI where r u ??

P.S: Hi guys...I had written a little more so thought of posting it. Firstly thank you for the replies...I saw many have viewd the post but have not commented....actully I will not say anything to the slient readers as I was one of them. I was always scared to post dont know y ! But it took a lot of courage to write a few lines about someone's work....well so I will not mind if you dont post anything....but do read it and if you feel like do write up a line or even PM me.

For those who wrote : Thank you so much ...all your encouragement helps. ....Nazneen I am going to take your suggestion and call my FF Chahat...Thank you for the name.

Everyone, Thank you once again and hope you like this part as well....its short and still beginning but it will all change. Just to tell you all a little about me....I am a huge Ram Kapoor Fan....and I love love love Jai Walia...and what ever happens I am nevr going to seprate Jai and Bani...I have left that for Kasamh se.

Please read and do comment. Love, Megs
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice start...but please Bani should not be with Ranveer...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was a nice start - as for a name for your FF how about Chahat or Intezar???
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start!!!! very interesting.................but pls no bani and ranveer......only bani and jai........loll😆😆😆

but pls continue sooon w/a nice loooong first part!😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice beginning.. but seriously i agree.. bus ban iki shaadi ranveer se naa ho.. ranveer finds out about jais feelings and he gets them together that would be hott.. anyway zgreat start.. continue sooon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice interesting beggining . hope Bani doesn't marry Ranveer.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very.. good..

start..

i cant wait to read waht happens next
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I like it so far, and I think it has potential. so jai loves bani, and bani engaged to Ranveer. so does bani think jai as a friend or more then a friend?
pls cont soon
want to read more.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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weel chap one is already posted!! are you sure, your a beginner because it seemed like your writting FF's for years. what I understood from this part is, bani has feelings for jai then why the heck is she getting married to ranveer( is ranveer a good guy?)
well great part
update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice start........I trust you, so I'm hoping to see Jai and Bani getting engaged......but why in the first place Bani agreed to marry ranveer?? please continue soon.........

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