Kribir os : Be mine forever

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I know I m not a good writer but meri tamater ne Eidi me os chahiye to uske liye kuchh bhi chalega apni writing k liye ande tamater sab chalenge members😆 so pls bear me n my kribir os - be mine forever
So
A bride is sitting on the bed n crying 😭
Girl - kyon nahi kaha Maine tumse k Mai tumse kitna pyar kar hoo , kyon nahi roka tumhe
Kyon kaha k mujhse dur chale jao 😭
FB shows :
A beautifully decorated hall 😳
A boy sitting on his knees n propose a girl
Boy : jab pahli Baar Mile the us waqt PTA nahi tha k tum
Itni khas ho jao give k tumhare Bina ek pal ek saal jaise lagega
Ab hamara collage khatam ho rha hai PTA nahi uske Baad Mai kaha tum kaha n I can't imagine a day without u so pls Kittu be mine , pls be mine forever
I know k tum bhi mujhse pyar Karti ho dekha hai wo pyar tumhari aankhon me
Kittu - dekho RB tumhe koi misunderstanding Hui hai mere Dil me tumhare liye koi feeling nahi hai
RB - kya matlb😭Aisa nahi ho Sakta tumhari aankhon me wo pyar wo jhut nahi ho Sakta 😭
Kittu - Mai tumse koi pyar nahi Karti RB , kya kabhi Maine tu.se kaha k Mai tumse pyar Karti hoo nahi na , phir tum Aisa soch bhi kaise sakte ho
RB is heartbroken his eyes is full of tears
Kittu - waise bhi RB Mai yaha se ja Rahi hoo meri shadi ho Rahi hai achh hoga tum mujhe bhul jao
RB - 😭😭thik hai kittu jaise tum kaho Maine tumse pyar Kiya hai ye jaruri nahi k tum bhi mujhse pyar karo , agar tum chahti ho ki Mai tumse dur chla jao to Mai chla jaunga ...but Mai tumhe bhul nahi Sakta I m sorry ,Lekin kabhi dobara tumhe apni shakal nahi dikhaunga wada hai mera tumse😭😭
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Kittu - bahut pyar Karti hoo😭 tumse RB par ye shadi karna meri choice nahi majburi hai.
Mai kya karti Mai Apne papa Ko aur dukhi nahi kar Sakti
Mai inhe kaise unke samne insult kar Sakti thi iss shadi k liye na kah k ...is pariwar k bahut Ehsaan hai ham par or ye shadi karke wo Ehsaan. Loutana hi tha mujhe ...I love u 😭😭RB aaj or shayad hamesha Karti rahungi😭
She cries hard😭😭
Her groom enters
Both r unknown for each other 😳
Even both didn't see photos of other one
Lights gone
Groom - hii dro may light aa jayegi PTA nahi iss light Ko kya hua
Waise hii I m Ranbir Kapoor
Kittu - hii I m Kritika Kohli
Both bump to each other n falls on bed
Light comes 😳
Both r socked to see each other😲😛
Tummm
N both r soo happy😳
Kittu - Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho
Bola tha na mujhe bhul jao meri shadi ho gayi hai
RB - ha to Mai tumhare piche nahi aaya meri bhi shadi Hui hai
Omg both r look at each other😳
So kittu is bride n RB is groom 😆
Kittu - tum Ranbir Kapoor ho
RB - or tum Kritika Kohli ho 😕kittu nahi
Kittu - nahi Mai kritika Kohli hoo kittu Tao meri frnds pyar se bolti hai😊
Matlb hamari shadi ek dusre se Hui hai
RB - matlb tumne mere liye mujhe reject kar diya
Achha hai tumhe toujhse shadi karni hi nahi thi na😡
Mera pyar to maybe hi nahi rakhta tha tumhare liye
Kittu - nahi RB aise baat nahi hai Mai samjhati hoo pls mujhe ek chance do😭
RB 😡 - kaisa chance ha tum mujhse dur rahna chahti ho na thik hai Mai chla jata hoo yaha se
RB walk out of room 😭
Kittu goes behind him😆
Kittu - RB ruko baat to suno meri pls😭
RB - nahi Sunna kuch bhi😡
Kittu block his way 😳
RB - kittu😡 I mean Kritika Kohli 😡
Kittu hold his hand n drag him to room
RB - kya hai ha tum chahti kya ho
RB goes on talking
Kittu kiss him 😳 rb is super socked
He tries to go but kittu doesn't allow😳
Both moove apart lacking of breath
Rb - kya Kiya tumne 😳
Kittu - kiss kiya😳😛
RB - kyon Kiya
Kittu - kyon tumhe achha nahi lga 😉
RB - bahut achha lga 😳 I mean bilkul achha nahi lga
Tum to mujhse pyar nahi Karti na phir kyon
Kittu - kisne kaha k Mai tumse pyar nahi Karti Karti hoo na bahut pyar Karti hoo😭 itna pyar Karti hoo k tumhe kho diya ye soch k Mai to mar hi gayi thi😭
RB - shut up tum marne ki baat may karo😭
Kittu - thik hai nahi karungi pahle kaho k ab tum mujhse naraj nahi ho mr husband😳
RB - mr husband😕
Kittu - Ha mr husband😳
RB -wifey ab Mai tumse naraj nahi
RB star kittu mischievously kittu shys
RB - ab to mere purposal ka jawab ye de do😳
Kittu - 😳 a big yes I m urs 😳 forever
RB lifts her up n place her on bed
Both have some romantic moments n sleep in each others embrace n they live happy life forever'😳
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paru000 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Vidhu super os . Who told u are not a good writer.super writing.kittu and rb getting married with some suspense and grief but at the end both got together happily. Nice work dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice os vinushi.u r a good writer plz write something like that.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aww really"Awesome" OS hai Gilehri 👏. Who told u that u r not a good writer. U rocked it na 😳. Complete 'Suspense' wali kahani...😛. Ranbir's dialogue: Mere liye mujhe reject kar diya 😛.Kittu's love confession style!!! Yeh sirf Vidu's trailer hai full movie is coming soon 😉... N I'm waiting for it... 😛.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Its superb gilehri...amazing os...😳
And the way kittu leaves RBK for him was awesome...
Waiting for more and more stories baby...😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wah tussi Cha gaye 😆
Mazza aa Gaya 😆
Kya twist tha 😃
Loved it
Vaise jiske liye likha voh Kahan h 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wha ji wha tujhe likhne nhi aata . Biggest joke of year. Kya likha hai rantika ki wedding wo bhi bina ek dusare ko dekhe .Prefect combo of romance+ suspense . Waiting for next ff
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari454

Wah tussi Cha gaye 😆

Mazza aa Gaya 😆
Kya twist tha 😃
Loved it
Vaise jiske liye likha voh Kahan h 😆

ha vidu kon hai ye Tamara😉 tera ff insaan to insaan sabji aur fruits bhi pharne aayege
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: arya1210

ha vidu kon hai ye Tamara😉 tera ff insaan to insaan sabji aur fruits bhi pharne aayege

🤣 batao sabko ki kaun h tamatar 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wo word for all of u guys😳

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