Ts ' When Daughter Father Souls Met ' Add Part 3 pg 7 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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What a mindblowing update. I had tears in my eyes while reading ur story, Rishi's pain portrayed inu story really made me cry. Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
Loved it
Continue soon
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow awesome rishi need such a shocked love natasha here thx dear for such a lovely story
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HI GUYS ME AGAIN WITH ANOTHER UPDT
GOOD NEWS I WONT END IT IN THIS PART BUT MAKE IT SS NOW THAN TS OK

AS I DECIDE TO SHOW YOU SOME
INTERESTING PART OK 😃😉 WHICH YOU MAY LIKE


HERE WE GO


PART 3


In car rishi was sitting in front seat beside driver in back seat we saw tanuja natasha n Ak ... rishi was having very hard to control his emotion n broken heart n most while he heard how tanuja looks so happy in her life with some one else ... he felt so lonely all of a sudden like all his dream his hope has been end n wonder how can tanuja forget him so easily n move on with over one ... how he can forget his love for her there kasam for whom she claim to be with him for ever ... he wipe his tears from corner of his eyes just to not let notice it ... in other way he was also glad to be at tanuja place then he can get time to talk with her n to know why she leave him .


Tanuja can feel rishi pain on seeing her with other one man but for her now she dont want to be weak as she still not forget rishi betrayal done to her .


Natasha talk to Ak n tanuja " Mama papa you know handsome uncle has a daughter same age of mine but he came here all alone , that why i ask to take him home , uncle what is your daughter names ? " she ask to rishi .


R " Tanya my daughter " .

On hearing this tanuja recall rishi n netra being on bed n think he got a daughter due of that night n she was heart broken but try to look normal ... Ak can seen n feel her awkward feeling n wonder why she looks so disturb n her rudely behavior toward rishi was making him clueless but decide to find out once they reach home ... he try to distract her thought .


Ak " Natasha you know who's going to come home guess ? " with his naughty look .


N " Dadi who else papa , mama already told me right mama " with her cute voice .


Tanuja just say yes dadi will coming .


Ak " Oye i thought mom did not told you tanuja but see like always she inform you first then her son how meant yaar , now my mom is more attach to you n love you than me not fair yaar but im somehow happy to see how you both are sharing a strong n good bonding thx tanuja for loving my mom n accept her , im a happy man to get such a good family " in his antics style .


Now tanuja try to make rishi heard her taunts which she will do other his mother by her talk " Abhishek your mother is like mine , i always been wanted to get a mother love which i dont have , n truely said i should grateful to you as due to you i got a mother love n affection which i wanting to have , im like her daughter not DIL , but you know now a days its rarely where we got such a MIL who love or accept there DIL " she make rishi heard it with her taunts n ask rishi " Im sure your mother may love n like your wife mr rishi , she's not a vampe who try to broke your marriage ? " with so much attitude n taunting .


Rishi recall how his mother used to treat n always not like tanuja how she never appreciate her what ever she did she always wanted to throw her out of his life " Yes she love her DIL " with moist eyes n feel sorry for tanuja to not been stand with her when ever his mother talk badly to her .


T " Yes may be she will love if its her choice why she wont accept her im right mr rishi its her choice im sure or your choice " .


Rishi well know why she talk like this n just said its his mother choice .


Ak laugh on saying he cant believe a man like rishi could not did love marriage but arrange marriage ... he even said he's mother must be like a old MIL if her DIL its not from her choice .


Rishi just said he's first mariage was love marriage but could not work so he maried second times .


Tanuja joke over his talk on saying who know's fault come from him but said its not work .. ak try to divert the talk on doing some funny talk ...which make tanshi stop there talk .


Once they reach home natasha hold rishi hand inside there house ... Ak found how natasha was being so good toward rishi he felt strange n jealousy ... he ask natasha to go n change which she did ... rishi look around the hall n saw pics of Ak tanuja with natasha so happily ... Ak ask him to be sit n ask servant to bring water for rishi ... Ak wonder why he was not being happy on seeing rishi there he felt so insecure over tanuja n natasha .



Rishi felt odd being at his exwife house ... Ak as him if he will refresh himself n ask servant to show rishi guest room ... rishi thx him n follow servant ... Ak go in tanuja room ... rishi saw him enter in room n get jealousy .


Ak " Tanuja may i ask you something ? " .


Tanuja know what he may ask n decide to shared her past life to him ... she said yes .


Ak " I feel that you have a connection with rishi the way you talk n behave toward him i felt something is he " he stop .


She told him every thing after she said what ever he felt is true ... she even told him she want to see bedi's suffer now n most rano for all her mistreat toward her ... Ak ask her if she still felt something for rishi ... she said no now she has only hate she's not anymore that old tanuja who used to felt pain for others ... Ak said he will now make sure to take every things from bedi's ... she even said she has been rebirth for rishi but he's not aware she's his tanu who die on saving his life n reborn for complete there incomplete love story .


Ak ask her to rest if she want n make her feel comfort in his talk he said he will arrange tikkets for india as now he will take over every things which is for bedi's .


Natasha come there n ask about rishi ... tanuja get furious n ask where she found him ... which she told them Ak ask her to keep herself far from rishi now ... natasha said she wont as he's all alone ... tanuja told her they cant trust outsider ... she said he's not for her but feel strange closeness toward him n she love him .


Ak was not happy but with natasha sweet kiss n talk make his tension vanish both did there antics acts with laughing ... Ak ask tanuja to join there hugs ... which she did same time rishi pass by n saw Ak hug tanuja n natasha ... he get insecure feelling on seeing trio happily .


He get an imagination of him with tanuja n natasha doing some funny things like throw pillows to over one then he run after natasha ... tanuja ask both stop to there masti ... how he hug both n they smile ... he smile but realize its was his imagination n get sad again .


Later while having lunch ... Ak try to make rishi more jealousy on praising her food ... rishi was enjoying food as after so long later he could taste food by tanuja ... tanuja stares rishi n natasha how both was having same similarities n pray its not be notice by rishi over wise he will find out that natasha is his daughter .



Ak got call from office n he will have to go after lunch ... natasha got angry as he said he will do boxing with her ... Ak said sorry but he will play after he return from work ... rishi told her if she wont mind natasha agree but tanuja refused ... natasha shout at tanuja which make Ak angry n was about to slap natasha but rishi hold his hand on saying she's just a kid ... Ak glare at rishi n said since he came natasha being stubborn n ask him to not come between them she's his daughter .


Natasha know she did wrong n decide to say sorry to tanuja on holding her ears with puppy face ... which she melt n accept it ... Ak say sorry to natasha too on doing same act to her ... natasha hug him n said she' s at fault n said she wont repeat it again both smile .


Tanuja giggle on seeing both bonding same time felt sad on seeing rishi sadness ... she agree to let natasha play boxing with rishi ... natasha get happy due this she hug rishi n kiss him on his cheek on saying he's hot without his bread ... rishi got call from mumbay its was netra ... tanuja was fuming in rage but dont show it .


Tanuja did sign Ak to relax n Ak leave with a smile on face ... natshi play boxing while playing both was enjoying playing natasha hit rishi n he fall ... tanuja get tense n shout rishi loudly n run to check on him ... natasha recall heard her calling rishi when Ak was doing boxing ... tanuja ask rishi if he's ok .


Rishi felt happy at least she still have some soft corner for him n concern too ... he was please on her gesture n thx her for showing her concern ... tanuja jerk n glaring him n was about to go when natasha talk stop her .


N " Mama this is the same name which you shout during papa boxing time rishi , that's meant you know him mama ? " with her question look .


Rishi get another surprise on hearing natasha question n happy too ... he decide now to know why she is behaving as she hate him when she isn't .



Tanuja try to divert natasha on saying " Its not only him who's name is rishi natasha , in fact there was a rishi whom i know but he die during doing boxing n i was his friend that it but yes i dont know this rishi who is right here , now go for your home work ok " .



Natasha leave tanshi alone but she feel something is fishing some where but did not argue more ... tanuja was about to go when stop by rishi voice .


Rishi " Why you are trying to hide your feeling n love for me which is still in your heart han " walk toward her n touch her cheeks with all emotions n feeling .



T : showing her attitude n firm on her talk broke his touch she confront him " Love feeling for you rishi , you are being fool or should i said blind to see how im happy with my small family , i got every thing here which i never get from yours a MIL love respect , which i never got from yours " she was pointing her finger toward him .


Rishi know she was all right at her place but he was not interesting on hearing about others than their's personal lives " Yes i could see how happy you are but why i can still sense your feeling from my heart , i agree my mother did not accept you nor love you but what about me han ? where i went wrong tanuja ? why you give me such a punishment ans me ? for only wealth han ? what about my love for you ? " he was losing his hyper .


T " You are the main cause i felt every thing behind me rishi , what you said your love for me han ? what love rishi ? that is love what you did to me for you that was love , you know what i think you never deserve to get some one love that why tanu dead , you dont deserve any one love rishi singh bedi " she glare at him .


R ; lose his temper n drag her in other room ... he pin her on wall n press hard her arms " What you mean han i never love tanu han ? what you know on my tanu n my love han , im a temper man i agree tanuja but to insult my love you dont have that right got it , i ask you to leave n you leave without looking at behind what you were leaving that was your love ? , do you know how much i search for you ? my love was not fake for you nor is got it , i still love you tanuja n im waiting for you but you how easily you forget me han " he realize how he was giving her pain with his grip n jerk his grip from her .


T ; push him away n slap him " How dare you to touch me han ? im not any longer your wife whom you should treat as you want , dont you dare try to touch me again ,im not like you who cant be for only one person , i did not forget your cheap act rishi , n you said you still love me wow but what about netra han n your daughter tanya where she come from han ? that's your love for me being some one else husband rishi , im sorry but if you think i leave only for your wealth than you are wrong rishi singh bedi , dont try to hide your ugly act from me ok " .


R ; try to touch her hand but stop on seeing her glaring look " Tanuja you really have been change , tell me you dont love me any more i will leave from here i promise n even from your life , but dont hurt me like this your thought torture me being alive im living like a lifeless ,what cheap act i dont know what you are saying , yes tanya is my daughter but " .


Tanuja cut him " Dont act as you dont know rishi , i know girls are your weakness but so much that you did not even think what will i go through nor you bother to apologise for on your act but see finally your truth came out n now listen to me i dont care nor love you i dont have any feeling for you , im not that old tanuja got it now just leave from here i dont want to see you again just leave rishi " she open door room n shout for him to leave with all attitude n rage look .


Rishi with more broken n shaken body leave the room with tears in eyes ... she close the door behind him n sat down let her tears fall from eyes to drain all her pain which was inside her heart ... both in separate frame with tears in eyes n shattered heart .

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BACKGROUND SONG PLAY

paas aaye..
dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa huin
ek adhoori si hamaari kahaani rahi
aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
jaa mile.. jaa mile..
ishq sachcha wahi
jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..

paas aaye.. dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa huin ek adhoori si hamaari kahaani rahi aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi jaa mile.. jaa mile.. ishq sachcha wahi jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..

we came close,
yet the distances never reduced.
our story remained incomplete..
it is not necessary that the earth always
goes to meet sky..
the true love is the one that
does not get a destination..
we came close, yet the distances never reduced. our story remained incomplete.. it is not necessary that the earth always goes to meet sky.. the true love is the one that does not get a destination..


rang thay, noor tha
jab kareeb tu tha
ek jannat sa tha, ye jahaan
waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
likh ke chhoD gaya tu kahaan
rang thay, noor tha jab kareeb tu tha ek jannat sa tha, ye jahaan waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa likh ke chhoD gaya tu kahaan

there were colors, there was light, when you were near me. this world was like heaven.. on the sand of time, you left something like my name written..


hamari adhoori kahani..
hamari adhoori kahani..
hamari adhoori kahani.. hamari adhoori kahani..

our incomplete story, our incomplete story..


khushbuon se teri yoon hi Takra gaye chalte chalte dekho na hum kahaan aa gaye



jannatein agar yaheen
tu dikhe kyon nahi
chaand suraj sabhi hai yahaan
intezaar tera sadiyon se kar raha
pyaasi baiThi hai kab se yahaan
hamari adhoori kahaani
jannatein agar yaheen tu dikhe kyon nahi chaand suraj sabhi hai yahaan intezaar tera sadiyon se kar raha pyaasi baiThi hai kab se yahaan hamari adhoori kahaani



if there are heavens here only,
why can't I see you here..
the moon and the sun, everything is here only..
I have been waiting for you for centuries..
why is our incomplete story sitting here, thirsty..
if there are heavens here only, why can't I see you here.. the moon and the sun, everything is here only.. I have been waiting for you for centuries.. why is our incomplete story sitting here, thirsty..

Both cries on there faith for being separate from other one ... they get there flashback how they part away ... n there nice moments too ... both at there side why ? why this separation

pyaas ka ye safar khatam ho jaayega
kuch adhoora sa jo tha poora ho jaayega
pyaas ka ye safar khatam ho jaayega kuch adhoora sa jo tha poora ho jaayega


jhuk gaya aasmaan
mil gaye do jahaan
har taraf hai milan ka samaa
Doliyaan hain saji, khushbuein har kaheen
paDhne aaya khuda khud yahaan..
jhuk gaya aasmaan mil gaye do jahaan har taraf hai milan ka samaa Doliyaan hain saji, khushbuein har kaheen paDhne aaya khuda khud yahaan..

this journey of thirst will get over, that which seemed incomplete will be completed, the sky has bowed, and the two worlds have met.. everywhere there is season of meeting.. there are palanquins ready, there are fragrances everywhere, even God himself came here to read..


hamari adhuri kahaani
hamari adhuri kahaani..


Rishi said " Tanuja what wrong i did to get such a punishment from you why you are continue saying i cheat on you ? I only take your signature like you did n you are you hurt for this n why should i apologise for what reason " .


Tanuja in her side said " Rishi i has been give you everythings i shower all my love on you but what i got in return your cheating over me n you claim to love me how can you be like this rishi you never care of my feeling you always do what your mother want , how im being right now only i know it rishi , being so close to you i have to be far from you , you got married n have a daughter n me im still alone with your daughter , abhishek is only fake husband only to give natasha a name we are acting as a couple when im his house care taker , now i hate you more rishi after knowing you have been move so far in your life " .


Rishi went in natasha room he saw her sleep ... he went toward her sat on bed edge caress her face n admire her sleeping how she look more cute like angel " Cuti pie im going im sorry without meeting you im leaving here , i dont know why but i felt an attachment n closeness with you , you so cute n naughty too i wont forget you as you are my tanuja daughter she may hate me but i cant , if we were together may be you would be my our daughter i would say , on seeing you i recall my childhood times , i will miss you i wont fight for any thing from your papa im all lost from him from long times n he won from me by taking care n love tanuja bye cutie pie love you " he kiss her forehead n tey to leave .


Natasha hold his hand in her sleep " I love you papa dont go " saying so melt rishi more which he cries n leave from there .



THAT ALL GUYS HOPE YOU WILL ENJOY THIS PART N YES AS I SAID ITS TURN INTO SS NOW .


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NEXT : TANUJA NATASHA N AK IN MUMBAI

LOVE HANISA





Edited by --HANISA-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Omg hanisa what u did yrr. Its just totally fantabulous. I was literally in tears while reading n i m really happy that u r not ending this ts on this shot. Thnq so much for extending it. Really enjoy reading all ur works. U r such an exceptional writer
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Awesome update dear
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Tanuja Part was So Interesting.😊
Ak was so Nice.😊
Tanshi Conversation was so Interesting.😊
The Whole Part was so Nicely explained.😊
The Pics were so Nice.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update dear...just loved it...waiting for next...
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Lovely update dear
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
Tanuja part interesting though
Thanks for the pm

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