SS : 'falak tak chal saath mere'-SG

Hi guys I m here with a new thing, this story will b finished in one post , no parts or chapters , this story is really close to my heart hope u also like this one

Shiv – a simple software engineer ,works in a multinational company (MNC) , from a higher middle class family

Gauri – a simple n shy girl with a simple degree, from a simple middle class family

A newly wedded couple , shiv n gauri , not known to each other, not have talked before , four days after marriage,they finally got time to know each other , so they went to Mumbai beach in the evening , it was calm, only the sound of waves could be heard, cool winds were blowing, gauri's hair blowing with the wind , dancing in air, she was wearing a red saree , looking very pretty ,wearing jewels as she was newly married n shiv wearing a white shirt ,tucked in his blue jeans , looking really cool , both were walking along the sea side n making their footprints all the way, both in a embarrassed situation n thinking what to speak ,

shiv started first "kya tum is shaadi se khush ho"

gauri nodded her her saying yes , her eyes were on the ground

then shiv said "ok, n family mein sab kaise lage?"

gauri again nodded her head saying ok , eyes still on the gorund

shiv- "damn kuch to bolo"

gauri raised her eyes , but after a second again on ground

shiv – "acha,job karna chahti ho"

gauri- "nahi"

shiv was pleased that atleast she said "nahi"

hold it , sorry guys for interrupting ,before proceeding further. I want to tell that after about 20 minutes,shiv jumps into sea , swims for about 2 minutes n come back , shiv again tells gauri '' I m going again' to which gauri says "no, please mat jaaiye , raat hone waali hai ,plz aap mat jaaiye" but shiv dosen't listen to her n jumps again , he swims n suddenly his leg got stuck in a sea swirl n he couldn't swim , his leg was being pulled into the sea n then he yelled for help , gauri seeing shiv in trouble, also jumps in sea to save him

after two days , their bodies were found on the other bank of the sea with............................................. gauri's hand in shiv's hand

now lets read what they talked in those 20 minutes

shiv- "no problem agar tumhe job nahi karma to mat karo, I will not force u"

then there was a pause

shiv started thinking "ab kya baat karoon"

shiv then spoke –"acha, tumhe to pata hi hoga , that I m an engineer , to meri job ek jagah permanent nahi hai, hamein kisi bhi sheher mein shift karna pad sakta hai , aur isliye tumhe English baat karma aana chahiye"

gauri said "I know"

shiv thinks –"hmmmmm…..english to bol hi leti hai"

shiv -"tum bhi kuch bolo,saari baatein main hi thodi naa karoonga"

gauri raised her eyes n looked at him

shiv-"acha , tumhe meri kaunsi baat achi lagti hai?"

gauri-smiled n said "abhi to bas char din huye hain , to mein kaise bata doon"

shiv-"acha thik hai , to kaunsi baat achi nahi lagti?"

gauri said "emmmm sochti hoon"

shiv- "acha socho"

gauri-"emmm"

shiv in excitement says "damn jaldi bolo"

gauri – "yeh jo aap baar- baar 'damn' bolte ho naa, yeh mujhe acha nahi lagta"

shiv said "very good , aur bolo"

gauri smiled n said "yeh jo aap baar- baar apne baal thik karte hai naa , yeh bhi mujhe pasand nahi"

shiv smiled n again tried to correct his hair

shiv- "acha aur kuch poocho"

gauri -"aapki salary kitni hai"

shiv-"one lack per month , mein tumhe us mein se, 80,000 per month de doonga , kaafi hai"

gauri smiled n said "maine aj tak 80,000 ek saath nahi dekhe"

shiv- "acha tum mujhe kya kehkar bulaogi?"

gauri was silent for a moment then said "suniye"

shiv laughed n said "to matlab tum mere saath , bilkul purane zamaane ki ladki ki tarah behave karogi, nahi mein to tumhara pati hoon isliye mera naam lekar bulana"

gauri said "naam lekar bulana meri dictionary mein nahi hai"

shiv "arey try to karo"

gauri tried "sh…….ii…….v."

shiv smiled n said "good"

then they both laughed

shiv "tumhe bache pasand hain"

gauri "hmmm , aur aapko"

shiv "of course yes, mujhe ek ladki to zaroor chahiye"

gauri "who kyun"

shiv "taaki , uski smile bikul tumhari tarah ho"

gauri smiled n shiv looking at her also smiled

shiv-"abhi to humare paas puri zindagi hai , ek doosre ko samajhne ke liye "

gauri looked at shiv

shiv "plzz, tum bhi to kuch bolo , kuch poocho"

gauri "aapko tairna aata hai"

shiv-"u mean swimming, haan bahut ache se, n tumhe?"

gauri- "thodi si aati hai"

shiv-"mujhe to bahut ache se aati hai, mein tumhe tairke dikhata hoon"

gauri said "nahi thik hai , shaam ho gayi hai , mat jaayie"

shiv didn't listened to gauri n jumped into the sea

thank u all for taking out ur precious time n reading my post

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heyyy di i dunn knowww whtt to commenttt yaarrrr butt there iz sumthingg in thizz storyyyy 😊 seriouslyyyy veryyy niceeee storyyyy 👏

hey that was really good..can picture it in an episode 👏

dam goood yaar
it was really emotional i was literally crying
plzzzzzzz
continue u r good work
write another one for we SG fans plzz 😳

tht was awesome!!! and the best part was the warning u gave in between regarding they both going to die, and what they talked for tht 20 minutes.... that made the conversation even more touching. awesome job!👏

wowwww!!! sooo trueee....from the moment u said "hold it, sorry guys for interrupting" u had me hooked...aaahhh...such a short lived kahani.....but good job...it was brilliant :]

Oh i love that story, espeacially the part where he says that he wants a daughter who has her smile. 😊

Great job!

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!tht ws fabulous!!!!!!!!!!I RLLY ENJYD IT n da best thing id tht it is totlly difrnt 4rm ny oder ff iv red so far.!!!!!!!!!!! 😃 😃 😃 u SHOULD ON NO MATR WOT N FINISH DIS HOLE FF.CON SON I CANT WAIT. 👏

wooooooooooooooooooooow sneha.fantastic n superb 👏 .it was so gud.i loved it.but is it the ending.long back i have read a news very similar to it.i think in mumbai 2 lovers were sitting in the beach n one big tide came n these lovers were drowned in the sea.i was so shoked to read that news n felt like crying on that day.u once again remainded me that incident.its a just a coincident that u got somewhat similar to that incident.but to be frank ur gifted with this writing skill.keep it up sneha.i loved ur ff a lot.

yeah sonia di that was the ending , long back when i said "hold it, sorry for interrupting" , i thought i should breake the story in one side a normal married couple n in one side a couple who had only 20 minutes to talk , so this was the best method