[FF:An Office Affair] PART 27 , pg 40,updt 29 OCT - Page 28

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_pavi

gr88888 di luved it our shivv huhhhh just concentrate on workkk yaar gauri tou ghar mein bhi hai lol

saba

hehehe .... shiv is always cute ....😳 haina ....😆
thanxx a lot saba for writting down ur lovely comments .... i will update the next part soon😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: soniayk6

again a wonderful cute part sneha.keep up the great work.i love ur shiv a lottttttttt yaar.but make him confess his love to gauri😳.well di he will confess his love to gauri ...but u have to wait for more parts

n coming to gauri i hope she is also in love with gauri😳 but not yet realized it righttttttt.hope iam right😆 yess di u r absolutely right .... m sure she will also fall in love with shiv soon
i just loved the whole part yaar.its simply rocking.i loved the way ur showing shiv's love towrds gauri n gauri's friendship(ahemmmmmmmmm better if i say love...........😳 hehe that's true😳) towards shiv is soooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeee.i just loved it. thanxx a lot di for such lovely comments
i really apprecaite ur work.again iam thanx 4r writing this ff even after being soooooooo hectic with ur studies.thanx a lotttttttttttt n keep up the great work👏
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well i can't say so many thanku's😆 but thanxx for soooo many applauds😳

thanxx again for writting ur complemets n taking out time to read ff ...also requires quite a lot of energy .... so again thanxx for that😳
i will surely update the next part soon😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

ohh snehaa!!!!!!!!! amazingg updt!!! yaar thanxx for that ....m soo sorry im late....i really m really bzy these days...soo...... its okay dear ....i know ...studies ....uff... 😡bt......ur updt was really nyc thnx ....thanxx again nd updt asap!! i will surely do that huney ... 😃 luv u snehuu] same to u dear .....love u too 😊 x muah x reenoo

thanxx for wrtting your comments ..... n really thanxx for reading .... even when u r too busy😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
thank u all for replying ....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pals_sneh

thanxx for wrtting your comments ..... n really thanxx for reading .... even when u r too busy😳

nythingg fr u hun!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
PART 25
SHIV WORRIES FOR GAURI

In the car ….shiv got seated n saw the seat next to him …where gauri used to sit …. He started imagining …how her hair used to bounce with the wind …. N she used to close her eyes n feel the cool breeze ….. he smiled to himself

After this thought, he finally started his car …wore his seat belt and again glanced at the seat next to him …. Then began to drive at a normal speed …he then remembered the situation …when gauri scolded him when he was not paying attention to his driving …he again smiled to himself

He got distracted with all these thoughts when suddenly a call came ….

Shiv stopped the car aside n picked out the phone from his pocket ….he saw gauri calling …he instantly picked up the phone

"kya hua??"

"achaa I am in spice mall right now …. N u know whatt ….yahan sale lagi hai (she yelled with such an excitement)"

He smiled to the way gauri said "achaa toh??"

"tohh kya ????? I m going to empty my wallet today …. Tumhe kuch chahiye??" she asked with such excitement

"ahh ..no yaar .. I don't want anything ….alarm clock hi kaafi hai" he said kiddingly

"arey now its enough haan …. Baar-baar har baat us alarm clock pe le aate ho … seriously …do u want anything or not?" she answered coldly

"no .. I don't want anything …. U carry on" "hey …kab tak aaogi??"

"ohh god … I have just entered yaar ….aajaungi…byee"

The call got disconnected … and shiv said "bye" in a slow tone

He then drove straight to home

He entered the hall … humming a song … he hurriedly climbs up the stairs

"arey beta kahan jaa raha hai?" asked nikhila

"mom …to fresh up" he replied n ran to his room

"aaj shiv ko ho kya gaya hai ….pehle subhah jaldi utha aur ab seedha apne room mein chala gaya …woh bhi to fresh-up!! Kya chakkar hai??" she mutters to nisha

"exactly mummy ….. shiv roz ki tarah tv dekhne nahi baitha balki room mein fresh hone chala gaya ….wonder what's happening to him??" nisha said

"hmm I know what's happening with him" she thought "acha tu shiv se jaakar puch ki kya baat hai" nikhila asked

"acha mummy kaam khatam karke jaati hoon" she adds

At shiv's room …shiv changed his clothes to a casual wear n neatly puts his office clothes to their appropriate place ….. he again starts humming ….He then watches the clock that gauri gave him and smiles to it and switches on the music system

Down at the kitchen

Samar was there romancing with nisha n got scared when shiv switched on the music

"yeh shiv hai kya??" he muttered to nisha

"haan awaz toh usi ke room se aa rahi hai" she replied

"shiv bada badla-badla lagta hai …aaj office mein bhi gunguna raha tha …. his gait at the office today was never before …. I mean itna jhoom jhoom ke … never seen him like this"

"hmm ..bas tum mujhe kaam karne doge toh mein jaldi se jaakar shiv se puchu"

Samar hugged nisha around her waist "achaa tumhe shiv ki itni chinta aur apne pati ki bilkul nahi" he asked her so lovingly

"ahem!! yeh kya ho raha hai!!!" nikhila who was standing the the entrance

Samar quickly corrected his position and moved back "achaa jaldi se kaam khatam karke shiv se puchna" he ran from there

Up at shiv's room

Shiv was doing his own steps on the beat of a romantic tune …. He moved his leg here and there …….like somebody in love would do

he saw gauri sitting beside him …. He looked at her … she smiled …he began his smiling again and exchanged a look with her ….he kept looking at her

after the music …..these beautiful lyrics came…which complemented shiv's relationship with gauri….

"mere khwabon mein rehti hain, meri neendon mein jagti hai

Mein tera naam jab bhi loon, saansein mehak jaati hain…….

You get me rocking n reeling….you are so wonderful feeling….

Ishq mein tere dil rab se juda hain ..maine duniya bhulai hai…

Husn pe tere dil itna fida hain maine hasti mitayi hain….."

Gauri walks towards the room table and sits on the sofa … shiv follows her and she starts ….her non-stop talking with all the sweet cute expressions and shiv sings with the music …looking at gauri …who was talking continuously ….expressing everything with her hands …her eyes and her eyebrows ………

"main agar chup rahoon …. Tujhko hi toh suno…

Main agar kuch kahoon ….. woh teri ho sadaa….

She then walks towards the window and folds her arms … she watches at the moon …..full moon looking so beautiful … shiv follows her again….and again he sings …..

"main jahan ab jaaun ……… Tujhko hi sang paaun,

Chaahon ke naa chahoon…….. dikhe tu har jagaah…..

Meri saason mein ghulti hain .....meri lamhon mein palti hai

Kabhi uljhi ….kabhi suljhi….yaadon mein tu milti hai…..

You get me rocking n reeling …..you are so wonderful feeling,

Ishq mein tere dil rab se juda hain ..maine duniya bhulai hai…

Husn pe tere dil itna fida hain maine hasti mitayi hai….."

Now shiv walks nearer to gauri …he's so close that ….he could feel gauri's warm breathe

He holds her left cheek and watches her passionately

He hugs her tight …even gauri does the same…. they both shut their eyes tight…..

Mujhe jab tu jahan milti hai …. Baahon mein meri khilti hai

I wanna hold u tight and never gonna let go…ohh..

Dil tere hi sadke jaaye …mit jaaye fanna ho jaaye ….

I never given upon u much to you …ohh

Then gauri left shiv's arms … and began to leave him….. but shiv stops her …he held her hand ….

Leher jaisi machalti hai…kinare se samhalti hai

Lage shabnam ke katron si….phoolon pe tu chalti hai

She gets me me rocking n reeling …..she is so wonderful feeling,

Ishq mein tere dil rab se juda hain ..maine duniya bhulai hai…

Husn pe tere dil itna fida hain maine hasti mitayi hain…..

Khudaya khair…"

"yeh kya ho raha hai" nisha asked …who just came in shiv's room

Shiv turned around and saw there was no gauri …. He realised that all that was a dream …. He got dissapointed

"kya hua shiv? ?" she asked

He scratched his head "ahh nothing bhabhi …just.."

He quickly turned the music system off

"kahiye bhabhi kuch kaam tha?" he asked

"nahi shiv main toh bas ….." she stared at shiv's room and it was soo clean …like never before "yeh room itna saaf??!!!!" she asked in a shock

"nahi bhabhi bas socha ki room thoda saaf rakhne ki koshish karoon" he replied

"hmm … very good …par kiski baaton ka itna asar ho raha hai …. kuch toh hua hai …..itna badlaav kaise …woh bhi itni jaldi??!!"

"nahi bhabhi …aisa toh kuch nahi hai …aap ..toh…." he replied in a shy way

"acha gauri….kab tak aayegi??"

"gauri toh bhabhi ..aajayegi …. But aapko kaise pata??"

"what …ya ..gauri ko apni tarah samajh rakha hai …usne hume yeh baat subah hi bata di thi…. She's such a responsible girl"

"hmm woh toh hai" he thought

"shiv jaldi se niche aajao …. Coffee thandi ho rahi hai"

He went down … grabbed his fav. Seat …..and enjoyed his hot coffee … he again started smiling to himself …. He remembered the time with gauri when they first went out for a coffee in a mall and how gauri used to felt so shy to him but now she's so frank to him on that he again smiled to him

Mahen and samar were noticing his time 2 time smile hehe

Soon time went out n it was dinner time …. But shiv got tensed about gauri …. It was 9 pm by then …and he was getting more worried

"shiv dinner ready" nikhila shouted

Shiv digested that and evidently did not considered it important

He picked up his mobile n called gauri …. "the number is either switched off or out of coverage area" …. He ended the call

He got more tensed now …. Many negative thoughts were coming to his mind

"shiv khane aaja" called samar

"gauri ko aane do" he replied in a nervous way

"arey …woh aajayegi tum aajao khane" said nisha

Shiv stood up and went out

"arey ise kya hua?" nisha muttered

"mein uska khana room mein de doongi … tum kha lo" said nikhila

In the lawn

Shiv was looking here and there for gauri …..but no one was there except the guard's

He again tried to call but still the phone was not reachable

He got more worried

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Posted: 16 years ago
sorry guys for updating soo late ...but i was really busy ... i just got time to connect my wi-fi n thought to update ...nowdayz m in hostel so its quite difficult ..... but still i managed to update the next part as soon as possible just for u guys ..... really sorry again ....if m late
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh no probz snehu da updt's amazingg i luvd it....
aaww poor shiv.....cant find gauri............even m wried lollzz
updt asap!!
thnx sneha...it was wonderful!!!!
it was sweeeet!!
shiv gauri were goood!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

oh no probz snehu da updt's amazingg i luvd it....

aaww poor shiv.....cant find gauri............even m wried lollzz ....aww don't worry yaar nothing will happen😉
updt asap!! yeah i will dear ....pakka
thnx sneha...it was wonderful!!!! thanxx a lot dear😳
it was sweeeet!! thanxx again😃
shiv gauri were goood!! they r alwayz good ...rite naa😛

thanxx for the reply n writing in ur views .... i will update the next part ....as soon as possible ....
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh sorry di 4r not reading yaar when u updatedd dunno well still av'nt readt yet will read n comment so sorrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
saba

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