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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nihita

just awesome ,just dont have words 2explain
cont soon

Cheers... i have hightlight gauri in pink for u!!😊

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

awesome honey!!!!!
she cracks me up!!!!!!
and tell dat bengali shernee of urs our punjabi munda will Knock her out!!!!! 😆 😆 😆

Bengali Shernee will not now what hit her!!😆

Originally posted by: Raihena

nice part kat, im sure its gonna be just as funny as fanaa, i think this gauri needs glasses callin our shiv
"stinky Punjabi munda" 😕
continue soon
xxxx

Rai don't tell me u have not come across guys who go nuts using the body spray?😆...don't be to upset!!😳

Originally posted by: shivgauri

😆 tht was so funny!!!! Shiv is all set to kiss her 😳 !!!! seriosuly I wanna see how she describes Shanks now!!!the way she described Shiv just got me curious!!!
and yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay Sexy Sam is there in it☺️!!!

Im sure she will describe Shanky😍...for everyone!!😳...yes Sam jiju is there!!😆

Originally posted by: ixi-shaj

Brilliant love this concept!!! 😆 👏

I was wondering where u were very quite!! keep posting cheers!!😳

Originally posted by: gujibabe

hey kat,this sounds as funny as fanna for u
great part!!!
continue soon plz!!!
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Cheers....I hope so..but Fanna and this will be slightly different!😳

Originally posted by: sum2005

kat nice start.

gauri was so funny and shiv a sex manic 😳 😳 😳 .so what was the plan of bengali sharne to kick punjabi puttar out of her life....

poor shiv kapoor punjab ki puttar....tu gaya kaam se.....tu panga liya bengal ki sharni gauri chateerjee ke saath 😆

I have a feeling Gauri is in for the shock of her life with the punjabi munda!!😆

Originally posted by: mansi1219

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aweseome kat! i m def sure this is gonna be as funny as fanaa.. great start!

me cant imagine shiv stinkin here... so gotta do something about that.. as for shashank.. him and hot? hmm.. lets wait till gauri's description..

i like this gauri! catn wait to see the plan in action and then have it backfire! is shiv gonna come lookin hot as hell in the club? that wud be awesome!

luv mansi

Well the the operation dont' touch da honey is all planned so lets see!!😆

Originally posted by: crystalclear

🤣 kat where do you come up with those things. i am looking forward to see her mission in action. it was awesome cont soon 👏

Awweeeeee Maria cheers!!...concept came to me writing fanna as that Gauri loved Shiv at first sight and this one does not!!...well not yet anyway!!😆

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

gauri needs to get her eyes checked shiv and stinky???...and since when did shanky became hottt? 😕...punjabi munda shiv is going to win her heart one day and miss bengali sherani won't be able do anything😳....hai his whisper in her ear😳😳...amazing part...can't wait to read the next part

Gauri has eyes only for Shank pie!! athe the moment!! her eyes will open slowly!!.... shernee will be tames!!😉

btw... u see the man in Iffa awards...hritik looks dame hot!!😍

Originally posted by: pooks

KAT a brilliant start and a very cute concept. I simply can't imagine Shiv being the stinky sort 🤣and Gauri thinking of him as an over-sexed maniac..
good God, can't wait to see what happens in the next installment

I missed u girl!!😭....glad u back!!...shiv not stinky but wants to taste the jelbie!!😆

Originally posted by: paki_angel

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wow dat was good n da garam jalebi is soo funy 😆

cheers Angel honey!!😳

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

😆 luv the decription of Shiv by Gauri
Kat, luved the first part and impatiently waiting till Friday, man the week just started.

thanks JD!!...yet count down to dont touch the honey has begin!!😆

Well u slient folk..i know u will not comment!! so hey i don't mind at all.!! love u all the same for taking the time to read my creations.....

Love Kat😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#52

Gauri diyan aakhan nu ki hoya? Like honestly... "stinky Punjabi munda"?! *shocked* Oye kudiye, you may be a Bengali tigress, but that's my Punjabi munda, and I'm the sherni here!😳 Hold your tongue and refocus girl... You've taken in all the details to the man and now you're trying to shake him off? Haha, wake up "honey"... This one is more garam than wasabe, and sweeter the honey any yellow bug can give ya... Khand mishri baby, Punjabi style!😉

Billo ji... this one sounds like one helluva rollercoaster ride... Jumpin on... Can't afford to miss it!

👏👏

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: desi chic

Gauri diyan aakhan nu ki hoya? Like honestly... "stinky Punjabi munda"?! *shocked* Oye kudiye, you may be a Bengali tigress, but that's my Punjabi munda, and I'm the sherni here!😳 Hold your tongue and refocus girl... You've taken in all the details to the man and now you're trying to shake him off? Haha, wake up "honey"... This one is more garam than wasabe, and sweeter the honey any yellow bug can give ya... Khand mishri baby, Punjabi style!😉

Billo ji... this one sounds like one helluva rollercoaster ride... Jumpin on... Can't afford to miss it!

👏👏

Cheers,

dc

Cheers DC..... u ready for the next part.... rollcoster as no height restrictions!!😆😆.... All aboard!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Recap: "Ok so I have made a plan to come over to the Club were we hang out and you guys help me so you tell Anupam and the rest……..

As for me I am going to make sure that stinky Punjabi munda never messed with this Bengali shearnee……I have the game plan all ready!!!!….she smiled wicked as she informed Shilpa of the details. Operation don't touch da honey as now officially begins………

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Part 2 Sting Operation




Gauri sang to the song playing on the CD player as she got ready for their official date with her husband to be……..



Baar Baar Haan, Bolo Yaar Haan
Gauri Jeet Ho, Shiv Haar Haan
Baar Baar Haan, Bolo Yaar Haan
Gauri Jeet Ho, Shiv Haar Haan

Koi Humse Jeet Na Paave
Chale Chalo, Chale Chalo…
Mit Jaave Jo Takraave, Chale Chalo
Bhale Ghor Andheraa Chhaave
Chale Chalo, Chale Chalo….
Koi Raah Mein Na Thaam Jaawe, Chale Chalo
Toot Gayi Jo Ungli Utthi
Paanchon Mili To Ban Gaye Mutthi
Eka Badhta Hi Jaawe
Chale Chalo, Chale Chalo
Koi Kitna Bhi Bahekaave, Chale Chalo
Koi Humse Jeet Na Paave
Chale Chalo, Chale Chalo
Mit Jaave Jo Takraave, Chale Chalo


Koi Na Ab Roke Tujhe, Toke Tujhe
Tod De Bandhan Saare
Mila Hai Kya Hoke Tujhe Nirbal, Tu Hi Bataa



She stared at the photo of them exchanging rings, which Bhabhi placed in her room and pulled a face….
"Makhana you will not know what hit ya tonight!" she laugh evil as she picked her watch……

She looked at him dress in a white blazer and jeans and he actually looked quite good and shock of the feeling as he turned to look at her…..as everyone left the room as Bhabhi hinted to everyone to leave.

"Flowers for my future wife!" As if buddy! Wow their orchids the ones you like! Shut up!

"Thank you!" You perv

"So…Shall we!" Yep! Lets go and get me dumped…….

Wow Gauri car is impressive Audi TT convertible…..she thought listening to shaka boom in the car.

"I though we could go to a restaurant and…." OK 1 2 3 Start!

"Actually I thought we could get to now one another properly ….So I was going to ask wither you could drive us to the Atlantic Club as I wanted you to meet my friends and ….."

"NO! I don't want to share you with anyone tonight!"….WHAT??? LOOK HERE I PLANNED….OK Gauri evasive manovers……

"Well I was hoping we could get to now everything about each other ….so I was going to introduce you to my friends and…."

"Hmmm…..Interesting?" Hook line and sinker!

"OK let go to Club first meet everyone ….and then we go to the restaurant and really get to know one another.." In your dreams buckoo!! As If!

"Sure!" when hell freezes over……….

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As they walked into the noise club she looked around and smiled…. I'm so glad I text everyone when we left the house. She waved as she spotted them and led the way towards them….

"Guys meet Shiv!….Shiv this is Shilpa, Palak, Ram and Anupam!" OK now why are Shilpa and Palak got their mouths open??… See you believe me now he's all THAT!"

"HI SHIV!" everyone said.

"I know you but I can't think where?" Ok Palak stop staring It's rude! We all know you work for the college paper and know everyone???

"May be? But I would not have forgotten a beautiful face!" OMG check her giggling????

"Gauri what you have to drink! Your usual right vodka and orange!" ….Yep this is how we rehearsed!! Look at his reaction!…What reaction he's just chilling??

"Yeah! Sweetie!"

"Shiv?"

"I will have a cold beer please!" Ok Anupam make sure it's orange juice this is just an act!!!!

"Shilpa it's hot in here!" Ok off comes my Jacket to reveal my TARY top! He is going to wish he never came here!

"You're right Gauri it's hot here!" WHAT? Ok you want to take of you're jacket….OMG cheek the bicep's and muscles!!…JEZ MAN COVER YOURSELF UP!!! Oh look at Shilpa she drooling??

"Gauri I swap you Ram for Shiv?" Shilpa seriously he not all that??

"Shilpa? Remember the plan!!" Gosh! Get you're game head on!

"Here you go Jaan!" OK Anupam sit next to me and act like my boyfriend…..

"Thanks honey!" OK not what is he doing putting his arm around me??…Hey back off buddy!! don't touch the honey! GUYS HELP!! SEX MANIC IS TOUCHING ME!…. Ok why are you blushing!! It's embarrassing no one has ever put an arm around me and pulled me so close to them I have feel his muscular chest…..UFF!!…at least he smells Ok today?? What it smells to musky yuck?

"After this drink were going Ok!…Then it's just me and you…Your looking very tempting in that low cut top!" ….WHAT?? you should be embarrassed and….Ok I have a back up plan for the sex freak!!

"Anupam you got a light?" Ok rummage thought the bag… Ok look at his face! He he!! Your saying this is not wife material

"Here!" WHAT YOU HAVE A LIGHTER???…OK Give Anupam a look so he will ask you to dance.

"Gauri listen it's our song!" Few!! Quick take me away Anupam…..

She turned to look at him as she sat chatting to Shilpa and did not like the way he was looking at her as they laugh…

"Gauri that tops over the top? Everyone is staring at you?? I swear if Shiv had not took off his jacket…."

"What Anupam that the idea he discovers I drink, smoke and look like a tar and dumps me…." OK now where is he going???…..

"Just tell him the truth! I don't think he will be…."

"I Can't…"

"Can't what?" they turned to see Shiv standing behind them smiling as he took hold of her hand and pulled her close to him.

"Can't…uh…Stay!" Dame your sharp?? But I am quicker

"Correct but we can have one dance and go….." What Dance?

He took hold of her and pulled her really close to him as the music…. She could feel his strong hands on her waist pulling her close to him and felt her heart racing as she looked into his eyes….



Aaaaahhhhh
Yeh Tera Mera Milna, Yuun Dilo Ka Khilna
Yeh Hai Khuda Ki Marzi, Yuhi Nahi Hain Yaar
Yeh Tera Paas Aana, Yuun Nazarein Milana
Yeh Hai Khuda Ki Marzi, Yuhi Nahi Hai Yaar
tere Bin Tere Bin Dil Naiyo Lagta
O Tere Bin Tere Bin Dil Naiyo Lagta

Aaaaahhhhh

Yeh Tera Mera Milna, Yuh Dilo Ka Khilna
Yeh Hai Khuda Ki Marzi, Yuhi Nahi Hai Yaar
Yeh Tera Paas Aana, Yuun Nazarien Milana
Yeh Hai Khuda Ki Marzi, Yuhi Nahi Hai Yaar
tere Bin Tere Bin Tere Dil Naiyo Lagta
O Tere Bin Tere Bin Tere Dil Naiyo Lagta
Aaaaahhhhhh

Dhadkan Ki Madhoshiyaa
Badhati Hai Nazdikiyaan Ek Bahaane Se
Ek Tu Hai Bekhabar, Baaki Sab Ko Khabar Hai Jahano Mein
Sari Umeede Meri
Hongi Mukamal Tere, Ek Nibhane Se
Jodi Sab Ki Milasye, Rab Jodiyan Banaye Aasamanon Mein,
Aasamanon Mein.....
Yeh Tere Mera Milna, Yuun Dilo Ka Khilna
Yeh Hai Khuda Ki Marzi, Yuhi Nahin Hai Yaar



As he turned her and pulled her back she felt his hand pull up her zip ensuring she was not exposed and looked at him surprised.
"Your zip was undone when you were dancing with your brother Anupam?" Oh how embras….Brother?

"So are you going to thank me?" Oh…

"Thank you!" Ok now what is he doing rubbing his stubbly cheek against mine?…Oh someone save me! I'm Losing this fight??….Ok get off me you sex manic.


She looked over at him as she placed her jacket on her shoulder and smiled.

"Shiv give me a second please!" Ok batter them eyelashes and smile…I need Shilpa in the headquarters now …..

She looked at Shilpa in the mirror of the ladies toilets…..

"Gauri he is so gorgeous….and the way you two danced on the dance floor everyone was looking! man he crazy about you and told me that he was so happy….."

"SHILPA!" OK stop! ….wow he talked about me and ….OK know Gauri you stop!

"Gauri I'm so happy for you!" OK Stop hugging me….Get off me!

"Shilpa this is not how this evening should have been I want him to dump me!!!" God I look like a total TAR in this top Anupam was right…she though looking in the mirror.

"Dump ya??? you should be thankful you got a guy like Shiv!" What happened to friendship?? You have changed side????….Man trust no one!!

"OK I just want to end this night and go home!" I need to regroup!!


As they walked out the ladies they saw Shiv looking angrily at Shankshank…..as they walked over.

"I remember Shiv Kapoor basketball Captain of the wildcats for Kings College!" What Palak?? he is?…That means darling Shankshank is his rival

"SHIV I WILL SEE YOU ON THE COURT!" OMG!! Look at Shankshank he looks of hot in the black leather my blue eyes hunky bad boy mmmmmmmmm…..

"HEY IF YOU WANT ONE ON ONE ANYTIME ANYWHERE!!" SHIV???

"Shiv are we ready to leave?" I'm not liking this….

"Sure!….You're lucky I'm with my fiance and on my best behaviour ……" OK now everyone in the club and college know's cheers?


"I am sorry about earlier and….." OK now the front door is just 10 no 13 steps away….

"It's OK!" This will work in my favour…..he he Ok now what are you doing?

"I uh want to give you something?" OK Look! OMG NO!

"Close your eyes….." NO I Can't? I mean oh god?

"Shh….Close your eyes!" Ok now don't pull me so close to you??? OK I will just because I want to get this over and done with quick??


She looked at herself in the mirror as and saw the diamond rock around her neck he had gifted her as the tears ran down her face… "He kissed me!!!……."

Love Kat 😳

Edited by Catwoman - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
Please comment guys....your friday update as promised!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
😆 😆 😆 Great part Kat!!!Shiv is so chilled out!!!I am loving it👏👏👏!!!!Love the way she keeps calling him Sex Maniac!!!😆😆😆 waiting for ur next update!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
AAAWWWW how sweet!!!

The zip part- that from 'na tum jaana na hum', love that film!

he obviously is head over heels in love with her- woman what is wrong with you?! 😡

And he kissed her, she was propa dreading it, i take it she liked it then... 😳
And a diamond necklace- he's won me over then...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
lolz me liked evry bit!!!!
how can gauri nt fall head over heels for shiv??
cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i loved it. looks like gauri is turning out to be exactly what shiv wanted. i am really beginning to like the characters. poor gauri. kat meri ff me shashank gauri ke peeche hain or tumhari ff me gauri shashank ke peeche. it was awesome. cont soon plz 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! that part was just soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!! gr8 job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 plz cont soon!! 😊

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