Originally posted by: Saregama_fan
Okay so now you have ended this as well 😕 ... okay got to add it to my list 😃 ... along with Pillowtalk 😳 ... if I didn't have to entertain my cousins this weekend it would be first thing on my list... 😳
*Idea* ... how about some bed-time stories about Shiv and Gauri ....to keep them and me happy... 😉
Princess you make me laugh....Mask still in your head then..hehe!
Ok do your royal duties and entertain your cousins.... HRH William also requires attention dont forget!!😳😳
Originally posted by: pritig
wow!! 😉 that last part is gr8!!! i luv that last part! i'm really sad that this ff is finished!! 😭 anyways gr8 ff!! 👏
Pritig thank you so much yes this was a short story.... im starting a new ff if your interested....😳
Originally posted by: prab_rockinn
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Katji tussi chaa gaye.......
hai that kiss,wat an energy booster 😳 😉 ...
Shiv got his Gauri jus the way he wanted her 😉
jus keep more comin hunny!!!!!!
Prab energy bootser.... 😆😳... Well i had a feeling his heart was not 100% in the game...😉
Hey Kaira u been busy not seen your comment for ages..😳
Thank you so much!
Originally posted by: Raihena
another to add to ur list of finished ff's
just as good as the others
keep it up kat n cant w8 for insomnia 😉
xxxx
Cheers Rai... now when u going to pm me when u read i love u and hate u ff!!😆😆...have fun in london today...
Next one 1st part posting soon😳
Originally posted by: desi chic
Whoooooooooooooooooooooosh!! Billo, you ended it?😭!! But the ending was... what shall I say... cute. You're fantastic as an announcer by the way, consider the option when the files start digging too deep. See... It's not Shiv, its Gauri!! She's the maniac... sex maniac... *coughs* 😳 mere mirzey teh kinne vade vade ilzaam... I for one, shall cherish this ff deeply... of course, mera Sheeev...😳 He really blazed... Damn, kuch puraani yaadien agayi... Anyways, Di you're a charmer and the works are so entertaining yet moving at the same time. You're skills have really developed over time. Can't wait for the next!!
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Will really reelly miss one!! The "stinky" Punjabi munda is MINE!
Cheers,
dc
Announcer hey watch hunky men is sport!! *sigh*😆😆...nah one jobs enough...😳
My skills awee cheers😳 i did say im experimenting...and it's never to at to learn and improve in anything you love doing!
Yep this Shiv was complete yours... Gauri was influenzed by Shiv's horney ways wouldn't u say...bad girl....😳😳
Originally posted by: Himu
mannn....it jus ended gona miss dis reallyyyyy....dis was actually da 1st ff i started to read in da KAA forum 😳
wildcats 🤣 🤣 69erz wud ve dun betta init 😉 🤣
sheeeev finally turned gauri in2 a SEX MANIAC too 😆 gud 4 da both of em 😆
AWESOME FF!!!!!!
now u gona start INSOMNIA 😃 yesss....cnt wait 😃 😃 😃
Well Himu when i saw your first comment say this is your first ff your read as the title draw you to it!! i was speechless ...not many of my readers comment by post some comment via pm service...
Happy your know read ,many ff here... and joining in on the fun on the Kaa forum!😉
btw...69zer do not have the moves!!😆😆😆
Originally posted by: sum2005
👏 billu ji,nice update.
uuufff ippi and maya these two r good for nothing 😡 .
wow gauri kiss made shiv win championship,great 👏 ,so atlast shiv turned gauri into sexmanic 😆 .
nice ff kat. waiting for anather ff.
Cheers Sumi... yeah that kiss was jakaass... as you put it the other day!!😆😆
Originally posted by: JCluvs srk
yey! i got my one-on-one basketball match!... 😃 😃 😃 it was sooo adorable....i luvd the whole thing with gauri kissing shiv n him playin like he owned the court....hehehe so hot! it was a perfect ending...luved every bit of it.
JC was unsure if u liked it!😕...glad you did 😳....
Thank you
Originally posted by: Anisha7
OMGGGG sex maniacs lurkin everywhere 😆 😕 Gotta beware 😳😆
but again dis FF was awesomeeeeee😃! i knew it was meant to be shiv gauri in da end 😉
well done for writin dis wonderfully! my words dnt justify this FF 😳 But oh well..this is for u 👏 did u hear my claps??? 😆 or shud i send the sound by Royal Mail 😳
BTW serious post 😳😆
Royal mail would not get here on time!!😆😆...they would have a strike!
Ok serious reply....cheers not sure about sex manics every where...😳
Cheers love to Zac in the US of A!!😳
Originally posted by: Rock_Star
see who is the manic now 😆 😆
can't blame the girl anyone would be when they have shiv
gauri's confession was really cute how she kissed him and like magic shiv tuned over the match...imagine shiv playing basketball 😍
it was amazing fanfic 👏 👏
Yeah Gauri is ...hehe... well they been making out everywheresince the match...girl cant get enough of Shiv!😳😆
Cheer Star😳
Originally posted by: shivgauri
ha ha ha nice ending!!!!great story kat!!! 👏
Cheers kuku... 😳
Originally posted by: heartbreakkid
Hi i am one from silent readers...just wanted to tell you that your superb writer....and this ff was brilliant, excellent and amazing.
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First of thank you for breaking your silence!!🤗...thank you so much for you lovely comments *blush*... hope to see more of your comments in the future😳
Originally posted by: ash9
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she is the sex manic nw???
tht was crazy part
she went n kissed him in public 😆
well nw go n wrk of tht other ff
we pla to read tht soon 😉
hey kissing in public is a must ...keep that in mind with boyfriend number 2😆...(jk) joking yaar.
Yes maam working on other ff!😳
Originally posted by: crystalclear
i loved the ending. at least now she knows that she is a sex manic not shiv. the way you shown the way she tells him she loves him was wonderful. kat you outdone your self. excellent 👏
Cheers *blushing*... maria this many claps!!..😳
Well folks and silent reader... thanks for the support as always..
looks like DC's Sher Shiv got his Honey or did Gauri get her Honey...either way this a sticky mess which they enjoyin!!😆😳😳
Kat
Edited by Catwoman - 18 years ago