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Posted: 18 years ago

Last man standing!

Gauri sat at the coffee show wearing her shades as her eyes were red and puff from crying ….all weekend Shivs face hunted her and she could not sleep.

"Here's your money Maya !" Gauri turned to see Ipshita and Maya sitting behind her in the other booth.

"No one turns Ipshita down! Especially for a poor chipmonk like Gauri Chaterjee…Now Shiv Kapoor will have no choice but to accept my marriage proposal" Shocked and hurt she closed her eyes.

"Shanhank idea was brill!"

"Yeah I found out she liked him…so got him to help out for a price too!"

"So what now!"

"Simple after the basketball game today …Shiv Kapoor will be all mine…I will bend his broken heart" Gauri got up and walked out of the restaurant in shock……



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"Gauri" she turned to see Baba at the door"

"Ji baba!"

"Is everything ok as Mahen ji called saying Shiv wants to break of the engagement…you two had a misunderstanding or something?" Awee Baba I don't want to marry him and I should have just told him the truth properly….

"I have told him that we don't want to break the rista and should give Shiv sometime to think about it…that is right beta!" OH man baba?…

"Uh"

"Good!"



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"Welcome to the championship final at King College…the atmosphere here is electrifying!"

"Well Manny …who do you think will take this trophy home with them today?… Will it be the wildcats or the huskies?"

"Tony will both teams have played extremely will but I have to say the Wildcats may just walk away with the trophy…simply because of the way Shiv Kapoor has been playing in this games he has made the mort baskets so far… he's jump shots and three pointed are unstoppable."

"Manny I don't know the Huskies have played a good game so far and Shanshank Bose has lead his team well to get here…either way ladies and gentleman this is going to be one hell of a match!"

"Why am I here Shilpa?" Gauri turned to see Shilpa staring at Ram on the basketball court.
"To keep me company!…Ram is taking pictures and Palak is covering the story for the college paper…I was not going to sit here alone?"
"Yeah but …"
"Shiv right what do you care? I mean he dumped ya as you planned so sit back and watch the game….Now where is Anupam and Aasta?"

"Ok here they come …a big hand for the Huskies and Wildcats!" Gauri stared at Shiv as he lead his team on the basket ball court followed by Shanshank…..

Gauri stared at Shiv has he stood facing Shanshank on the court…..

"Well the ball is up and there goes Shiv Kapoor as he hands it to his Machan…I have to say to you Manny this duo has created some great magic in these games let just see what happens today…. Machan approaching the ring and is unable to score …passes to Shiv and Scores!!"

"Well that's a great start for the Wildcats….i just want to see what the huskies will do in the defence to stop this pair"

"Ok Shanshank looks like he can take a shot and scores!"

"Ok Machan with the ball making it up the court passes to Shiv and ….Oh what a fall!….Ouch I felt that from here!" Gauri's heart raced as she looked at Shiv on the floor….as the teams carried on

"Well was that a foul by Shanshank? empire is a little slow to react and that's another 2 points for the huskies!"

"Ok Shiv on his feet now…Oh well they do say it's a contact sport but still the unsure by the empires decision…the wildcat coach not looking very happy?"

"OK that the end of the first period and we have the huskies in the lead by 9 points…I think the huskies may actually win this game…"

"No Tony, I think it not over until the bell goes!"

Gauri stared at Shiv as he walked toward the wildcats bench…

"Wow that was a nasty fall!" She turned to see Anupam by herside.

"Yeah I hope he is ok?" Shilpa replied staring on the court.

"Gauri you want anything me and Aasta going to get a drink?" Gauri shook her head and looked over at Shiv as he place the water bottle to his mother.

"Wow Shiv Kapoor is HOT!" Gauri look down at the girls staring at him.

"You know I hear Ipshita is after him and paid off his fianc to dump him!"

"Yeah I hear that too…Machan told me he loved her a lot and was crazy about her total…even cared her pic in the locker room!"

"Awee that sweet…That girl must have been such a loser! He's better off without her?"

"Yeah! But we all know What a two face monster Ipshita is and is only after revenge as Shiv does even look at her or acknowledge her…Why is it these good looking guys have psyco sick woman after them? We all know how silent and Shiv is around girls! Hehe… Yeah I remember you asked him out and he said my girl friend in Kolkatta would mind!"

"Yeah and he found her and she dumped him…what a joke?"

"Poor guy learnt the hardway!"

Shilpa looked at Gauri as the tears ran down her face and placed her arm around her.

"Ok now tell me what the hell was this flippin plan?"

"Shilpa …Ipshita introduced me to 3 girls all said how he used them and….then she told me that he did the same thing to her…Lying cow she paid them off and Maya and Shanshank!"

"But Gauri you wanted Shiv to dump ya ….and I can't believe you her and did not ask Shiv…."

"He always looked guilty when she was around and…"

"OK Folks they are back on the court…." Gauri looked at Shiv as he turned to look at her in the benches.

"He hates me!…I should have been honesty with him!"

"Gauri we have all been trying to tell you for the last couples of months that you should tell him how you felt … In any relationship…be honest about how you feel..only then can you really understand each other…

"Machan passes to Shiv ….Ouch another foul ….Oh Shiv looks like he is in a bad way! In fact he is out COLD!"

"SHIV!" Running down she found herself on the floor next to him on the stretcher as she took hold of his hand.

"Shiv open your eyes…I m sorry I should have told you…but I was scared to say that I love you and can't live without you….I was stupid and should have trusted you instead of Ipshita and…"

"Gauri!" As the tears ran down her face she took hold of him.

"Gauri! Let go of me everyone is staring at us…remember you hate being affectionate in public and…"

"Shut up!" She looked at him and took hold of his face and kissed him….

"Well that's one method of coming round!…Tony that ever happened to you!"

"No Manny! I wish! young love and awe now they both blushing…."

"Well what a championship match! Both team neck and neck…Must say that kiss received by Shiv Kapoor turned the whole match around….Ok Machan with the ball looking for Shiv who is stuck ….Machan has to take the shot ..as we have 25 sec on the clock…. He takes the shot!… OH no…does not look as if…Wow what a move my Shiv Kapoor….He up and BUZZZZ!"

"It's all over and the Wildcats are the new state champions!…What a blazing move by Shiv Kapoor never seen such a jump!"

Shiv took hold of Gauri's hand as he held the trophy in his hand!

"This means nothing to me Gauri!" she looked at him as he looked at the trophy what I want is here by my side…….

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Gauri sat still and looked over at the bed covered in flowers….and thought about how crazy she had been these past few months…infact since the basketball game they where in separately and she learnt so much about him..in fact he was the one who taught her about love and….she blushed as she remember how many times they had made out in the craziest places… But tonight was going to be completely different as they both were waiting for this moment… Mr and Mrs.

"Gauri?" She closed her eyes as her heart raced.

"Im shattered …why don't you get changed and lets just get some sleep!" WHAT YOU KIDDING RIGHT! ON OUR WEDDING NIGHT YOU WANT TO SLEEP!

"Ok if your tired Shiv…I will get into something more comfortable!" As she got up and walked towards the bathroom….

"Hey!" Feeling him grab hold of her from behind she closed her eyes.

"You're tired Gauri I can tell in fact…" She turned around and kissed him….

"Ok!" he whispered and she kissed him again and again on the bed….

"Gauri you're a.....

"Sex Manic! just for Shiv!"…………

The end! 😉

Edited by Catwoman - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
JC i hope i did not disappoint ya!

PPL Please comment

Kat 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Okay so now you have ended this as well 😕 ... okay got to add it to my list 😃 ... along with Pillowtalk 😳 ... if I didn't have to entertain my cousins this weekend it would be first thing on my list... 😳

*Idea* ... how about some bed-time stories about Shiv and Gauri ....to keep them and me happy... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow!! 😉 that last part is gr8!!! i luv that last part! i'm really sad that this ff is finished!! 😭 anyways gr8 ff!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏
Katji tussi chaa gaye.......

hai that kiss,wat an energy booster 😳 😉 ...
Shiv got his Gauri jus the way he wanted her 😉

jus keep more comin hunny!!!!!!




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Posted: 18 years ago
another to add to ur list of finished ff's

just as good as the others

keep it up kat n cant w8 for insomnia 😉

xxxx
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Posted: 18 years ago

Whoooooooooooooooooooooosh!! Billo, you ended it?😭!! But the ending was... what shall I say... cute. You're fantastic as an announcer by the way, consider the option when the files start digging too deep. See... It's not Shiv, its Gauri!! She's the maniac... sex maniac... *coughs* 😳 mere mirzey teh kinne vade vade ilzaam... I for one, shall cherish this ff deeply... of course, mera Sheeev...😳 He really blazed... Damn, kuch puraani yaadien agayi... Anyways, Di you're a charmer and the works are so entertaining yet moving at the same time. You're skills have really developed over time. Can't wait for the next!!

👏

Will really reelly miss one!! The "stinky" Punjabi munda is MINE!

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
mannn....it jus ended gona miss dis reallyyyyy....dis was actually da 1st ff i started to read in da KAA forum 😳
wildcats 🤣 🤣 69erz wud ve dun betta init 😉 🤣
sheeeev finally turned gauri in2 a SEX MANIAC too 😆 gud 4 da both of em 😆
AWESOME FF!!!!!!

now u gona start INSOMNIA 😃 yesss....cnt wait 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 billu ji,nice update.

uuufff ippi and maya these two r good for nothing 😡 .

wow gauri kiss made shiv win championship,great 👏 ,so atlast shiv turned gauri into sexmanic 😆 .

nice ff kat. waiting for anather ff.
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Posted: 18 years ago
yey! i got my one-on-one basketball match!... 😃 😃 😃 it was sooo adorable....i luvd the whole thing with gauri kissing shiv n him playin like he owned the court....hehehe so hot! it was a perfect ending...luved every bit of it.

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