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Posted: 18 years ago

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Part 33

Shiv was still thinking about gauri. Knowing what he did was wrong. But he could not help it. He did not have the guts to face her. But he will have to someday. Shiv picked up his cell and dialled gauri's number. But she did not picked it up. She had been crying ever since. And was now sleeping due to sleeping pills. Provided by Natasha who had seen her state. He had been trying to phone her for 20 minutes now. And still she did not picked up the phone. Shiv could not take it anymore. It was getting to his nerve. What was wrong with her? Why wasn't she picking up the phone? Shiv saw varni sleeping it was late night. He rang vivan. And told him to come and take care of varni. Vivan came to his room. "bhai dada ji ko shak ho gaya hai. App ko iss waqt.." "nahi vivan mujeh abhi jana hai hum baad me baat karien ge" vivan kept quiet he sensed that shiv was upset. He left for machan's house. The thing about gauri not picking up her phone was worrying her.

On the way he calls machan. "haan machan me shiv bol raha hon. Tum jaag rahe ho." "han shiv" "ok mujhe gauri se milna hai . Or me yeh bhi janta hon ke Natasha mujhe milne nahi de gi. Please mera gauri se milna bohot zaroori hai. Natasha bohot naraz hai mujhe se." "its ok shiv tum a jao wo ghar pe nahi hai . Use hospital se call ayi thi is liye wo ja chuki hai" "thanks machan" shiv relaxed and with in a few minutes he was standing at machan's door. Machan opened and let him in. shiv was about to go to gauri's room when stopped by machan "tum gauri ko milne ke liye itne bechain kyun ho rahe ho shiv." shiv was shocked then he smiled and said. "machan yeh waqt mazak ka nahi hai. Me gauri se mil lon phir tum mujhe se jitna marzi mazak kar lena." "me mazak nahi kar raha shiv. Kyun tum gauri se milna chahte ho. Mazak to tum kar rahe ho gauri ke saath apne rishte ke saath." shiv got serious and confused. What was machan getting at. "tum kya kehna chahte ho machan. Me kyun gauri ko mazak banao ga. Me aisa kyun karon ga. Look mujeh pehle gauri se mil lene do. Phir baad me hum baat karien ge. I need to see her" "exactly shiv. Exactly why are you so desperate to see her. Batao shiv kyun. Jab use zarrorat thi jab to nahi aye toabb kyun" "I know machan me nahi a saka mujhe us se apologize karna hai. Me jab wo discharge ho rahi thi us ke saath nahi tha. Pata nahi kitna pareshan ho rahi hogi. Me usse phone karne ki koshish kar raha hon lakin wo baat nahi kar rahi. Pata nahi kyun. Mujeh mallom karna hai. Meri jaan ja rahi hai us se baat na kar ke.." shiv stopped. "yehi to pooch raha hon shiv aisa kyun. Kyun tum us se baat karna chahte ho. Kya lagti hai wo tumhari. Jab tumhe ussse milne ki fursat nahi to phir kyun. Jab yeh baat tumhare deemagh se nikal sakti hai ke gauri ko ajj discharge karana hai to phir tumhe us ki itni chinta kyun ho rahi hai. Kyun shiv" "kyun ka kya matlab wo meri biwi hai aur kya" "haan shiv par wo tum kafi arse se tumhari biwi hai to phir ajj hi kyun. Kahin yeh to nahi ke tumhe sirf varni ke liye" "stop it dammit. I love her. Pyar karta hon me usse." shiv stopped. He was shocked. That was new to even him. He confessed. What he did not even confess to himself. He loved her. The thought scared him. He looks at machan who was smiling. "yehi to sunena chahta tha me tum se shiv. Ke tumhe uski parwa hai. Tumhe usse pyar hai. Jis ko wo haqdar hai."shiv hugs him and thinks to himself. How could he love gauri when he loves ipshita. He gave ipshita's place to gauri. " shiv. Me janta tha ke tum gauri se pyar karte ho. Wo hai hi itni achi. Koi bhi idiot dekh sakta hai ke tumhe usse pyar hai par tum khud manene ko tayar nahi thi."

"machan me aisa kaise kar sakta hon . Me to ipshita se pyar karta hon. Phir gauri se kaise." "shiv pyar khabhi bhi kisi se bhi ho sakta hai. Pyar pe app ka bas nahi chalta. Tumhe gauri se pyar hai, yeh such hai ke tum ipshita se bohot pyar karte ho. Lakin wo tumhara kal thi. Or gauri tumhara ajj hai or anay wala kal hai. Tumhe gauri se pyar hai. Is baat ko tum jhutla nahi sakte. Or agar tumhe gauri se pyar hai to is ka matlab yeh nahi yeh ipshita ke liye tumhara pyar kam hai. Nahi shiv hum jab pyar karte hain to yeh nahi dekhte ke kis se kitna pyar hai. Pyar ko khabhi tola nahi ja sakta." shiv smiled. Machan was right. He thinks to himself that he loves her and his face lits up. "ok abb ijazat do mujhe meri biwi se milna hai" she rushed towards gauri's room. While machan prepared a drink as he wanted to celebrate this day. Shiv finally confessed.

He enetered gauri's room. She was sleeping. He eyes all puffy. He knew she had been crying. She loved him so much. And he wasn't there for her. How much a fool he had been. He knew he cant resist it. Was it worth making her cry. But then he smiled. This whole thing made him realise how much he loved gauri. He sits near gauri and kisses her forehead. Gauri opened her eyes. While shiv was sitting with her hand on her forehead. Shiv was surprised to see her awake. Gauri too was surprised. "array app. App kab aye. Sorry meri ankh lag gayi thi medicine ka asar tha Is liye." she was still sleepy and felt dizzy she put her hand on his shoulders. Shiv supports her to sit in a proper position. Now seating himself beside her. His arms were around her. "sorry gauri me tumhe pehle lene nahi asaka. Tum discharge hoke idher ana para." gauri thinks to herself. " I know siv app yeh sab majori ke teheat kar rahe hain. Sirf varni ke liye." she pushed shivs hands. She felt alright now. While shiv sensed she was angry with him. A smile spread on his face shiv holds her tightly in his arms. Gauri tries to push him away. But he was too strong and right now she was too weak. She started hitting him on the chest. But very lightly as she did not have any energy and she was very weak. Shiv smiled and gauri cried. She was angry with him. She could not carry on any longer she rested her head against his chest. She dozed off due to medicine. And shiv held her. He did not want to let her. He kissed her on her cheek and drifted off to sleep while holding her leaving machan outside with a drnk waiting for him…….

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Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago

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Amnu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#695

me first maria di

i m back and i have caught up with your this ff...shahbaash to me
fantastic update...finaaly shiv confessed...i hope there are no more problems...mere aane se pehle hi usse akal aa gayi... di shiv darr gaya mujhse

dare u complain about less comments ...i always do

i loved last update di...can't wait and rite now have no words to explain

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Asever 😉

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Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago

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maria

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: amneet89
me first maria di yep u first congrats

i m back finally and i have caught up with your this ff acha kiya nahi to me ajati ...shabaash to me yeah sure
fantastic...mere aane se pehle hi usse akal aa gayi i know tum kab se dhamka rahi thi akal to ani thi na... di shiv daar gaya mujhse i know. kya kare rob hi bara hai

dare u complain about less comments ...i always doi never said that u dont. i know u always do and i appreciate that

i loved last update di thank you...can't wait and rite know have no words to explain omg thanks

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Asever 😉

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suni

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Posted: 18 years ago

#697

🥳 at last duffer confessed he loves gauri.i think we have to give credit to machan for making duffer realise that he loves gauri.

loved the way he confessed to machan with out his knowledge,,,,relly duffer still in ippi illusion but loves gauri.

😍 will shiv confess to gauri waiting for that.

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mintfresh

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Posted: 18 years ago

#698

awesum update....... loved it
finally he confessed.would love to see gauri giving him a hard time now .looking forward for some cute and naughty shiv-gauri scenes.missed varni..hope he confesses to gauri soon .
eagerly waiting for next part

Edited by mintfresh - 18 years ago

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sonia

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Posted: 18 years ago

#699

wow friend finally u made shiv to confess his love n now waiting 4r him to confess his love before gauri .
really a very good update friend 👏
waiting for next update 😛