Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91

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Posted: 18 years ago

#641

awesum update
dadaji is a real hero, plz do something about this stupid niki.loved the way shiv's concerned about his gauri. keep it up
plz cont soon

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Posted: 18 years ago

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part 30

Vivan takes varni to shiv's room, he tried making varni sleep with great effort he exceeded. He was to tried so slept in shiv's room as he knew there will be no one to attend to varni. When he enetered the house. He senses there was something wrong. Like something happened but could not make out what. He did not want to question anyone and have himself questioned as well. So he decided he should stay quirt for now and ask about it tomorrow morning. He could not be bothered going out of the room and have to listen o everybody for half an hour.

Maya nikhila and palak were together in one room. They were all furious. "bhabhi abb me papa se baat karon gi. Unhe warn karna hoga ke humare mamle me mat bolein. Ajj un ki waja s humari kitni insult hoi or jo gauri ko nikalne ka eik mooka tha wo bhi hath se gaya." she goes upto dada ji and dadi ji. Who were now seated in the living room along with shyla chachi, chachoo and mahen. Dada ji was busy hearing his songs on the ipod. Every else were busy chatting. Maya frustrated pulled the earphone from dada ji ear. "papa" she shouted. "yeh app ne kya kiya ajj party me hum log kitna khush the par app se to humari khushyan bardashth hi nahi hoti na. kya zaroorat thi sab ko batane ki ke shiv or gauri ki abhi tak talaq nahi hoi. Get one thin very clear in your head we don't want that whore in this house……" her sentence unfinished, her world spun. She could not believe that dadaji slapped her. She looked at him in shock holding her face. Dada ji had slapped her really hard. Every one was shocked and moved towards dada ji.

Mahen was shocked and asked dadaji. "papa yeh sab kya hai…" dada ji cut him off. "kaan kohl ke sun lo sab log. Me iss ghar ka barha abhi zinda hon. Me janta hon is ghar ke liye kya sahi hai or kya galat. Tum logon ko batane ki zaroorat nahi hai ke mujhe kya karna chaiye or kya nahi. Agar ajj tak me chup raha kuch nahi bola to is ko tum log meri majbori samujh bhethe. Mujh me ab bhi itni himat hai ke mere faisle ke khilaf jane wale ko is ghar se nikal don. Or han is bar agar shiv or gauri ke darmiyan koi aya. To us ka me bohot bura haal karon ga. To pehle se hi tayar raho. Maya tum apne baron ki izzat karna bhi bhol gayi. Larki shadi ke bvaad apne ghar me rahe to acha hai. Shadi se pehle or shadi ke baad dono tarhan hum ne tumhe pala hai. To mujhe nahi lagta. Tumhe kissi ko kuch kehne ka haq hai. Ghar me agg lagane me mahir ho tum." every one was shocked. No one new what to say. "yeh ghar gauri ka hai. Wo bahu hai is ghar ki. Or us ke khilaf agar kissi ne itni gandi zuban boli to us ki chamri udher don ga me. Agar us ki shadi na bhi hoi hoti to bhi wo issi ghar me rehti meri beti hai wo. Or agar is ghar se koi jaye ga to maya tum hogi gauri nahi" maya had tears in her eyes. She was dumbstruck. She could not believe her eyes or ears. Palak dragged hmaya to her room.

While in the living room mahen was nervous. He knew that was a hint to all who were thinking of separating shiv and gauri. He knew he could never get gauri married. He still wanted hsiv and gauri to sty together. What could hedo now. He was not going to go against his decision. He never did. While nikhila stood there blank. She did not know how to respond to it. It could have been her standing at maya's place. He brain stopped working. This was not suppose to happen. Dada ji had never raised his hand on anyone. She was just thankful it was not her.

Shiv satyed with gauri all night , taking care of her. Sitting by her bed side holding her hand. He dozed off holding her hand. It was early morning when he woke up. He saw gauri looking at him. "sorry I dozed off." "app aisa kyun keh rahe hain app kitni dair se yahan hain. Me ne kaha tha na ghar jaye. Ab me theek hon abb to ghar jaiye. Varni bhi sab ko tang kar rahi ho gi. Plz ap jaiye. App fresh ho jaiye." "theek hai me chalta hon gauri kuch ghante me atta hon." he kissed her hand and left for them mansion.

Shiv enters the hall only to see chachi papa dada dadi busy with varni. He was a bit tensed. He moves forward and holds varni. "aray app sab log itni subha yahan kya kar rahe hain." "shiv tum kitne laparwa ho gaye ho kahan to tum varni ko apni ankhon se door nahi hone dete the. Or kahahn tum ne pora din se is ki khabar nahi li. Tum jante ho na wo sirf tumhare yaan gauri ke pass hi khush rehti hai. Tum log nahi hotay to ghar sir pe utha leti hai. Tumhare jiss dost ka accident hoa hai. Us ke pass us ki family bhi to hogi dekh bhal ke liye. Par varni ko tumharei zaroorat hai. Lakin tumhe to dost ka dhyaan rakhne me ziyada interest hai." shiv did not know what to say. He could not tell her the truth so he only managed to say "I am sorry dadi" "its ok but be careful the next time" he smiled "shiv tumhara dost kaisa hai abb" asked mahen "he is better papa. He is recovering." "oh good" said mahen. Shiv took varni to his room. He later came to know that varni had given all of them a hard time all night.

Shiv called gauri "han hi gauri. Kaisi ho abb. Meri zarorat to nahi" "me theek hon shiv nahi yahan doctors and nurses hain app apne time le. Ghar me sab kaise hain. Varni thek hai na. ziyada tang to nahi kiya na" "haan sab theek hai varni bhi theek hai although she gave every one a tough time. I guess that serves them right" a smile appeared on both their faces. "acha gauri me chalat hon tum se baad me milta hon" "ok shiv bye" he cut the line and went down stairs. Sitting at breakfast table. When nikhila asked. "oh shiv how is your friend." "he is doing better now mom" she smiled. He started eating the breakfast that was served by dadi ji

Maya who cried a lot last night was now back in her form. She was sitting nest o nikhila and palak. "bhabhi kal ramu kaka ne party ka mess sahi tarhan saaf nahi kiya. Gauri hoti ho achi tarhan saaf hota." "haan tum sahi keh rahi hon it would have been cleaned perfectly if she was he…." Nikhil was interrupted by shiv hitting the table with his fost while standing up. "that is enough. I will not tolereate anything like this ever again. don't you bad mouth her. What do you think of yourself." he was shouting at nikhila and maya. "don't cross you limits. App klogon ne gauri ko samujh kya rakha hai.wo nokar lagi haiapp sab ki. Mom app ki problem kya hai app kisi ko khush kyun nahi dekh sakti. Har eik ki zindagi azab bana rakhi hai. Zeher gholna koi ap se seekhe.gauri meri biwi hai is ghar ke bahu. Or behter hoga usse ussi tarhan treat kariye jis tarhan yeh ghar app ko treat karta hai. Apna kaam khudi karna sikhiye or agar khud se nahi hota to koi naukar rakh li jiye. Kyun ke me ainda ap logon ke mooo se yeh na sono ke gauri in kamon ke liye bani hai. She is my wife and I want you to respect her as that. Nahi to shayad me app sab ki respect kho don. Ab agar mujeh pata chala ke gauri ke bare me kissi ne aisa kuch kaha hai to mujhe se bura koi nahi hoga"

There was a pin drop silence In the room. Every one was shocked of shiv's outburst. No one expected it from him. Maya nikhila and palak did not know what hit them. They were totally blank. While dada ji and dadi ji are happy. Dada ji kissed dadi ji and she kissed him back. They were jumping with joy. They were so happy. This was the first time shiv spoke against his mother like that. Dadi ji tells nikhila. "kuch samujh aya ke shiv ne kya kaha hai tumhe. Hopefully samujh a gaya hoga, kyun ke tum log itne thick bhi nahi jitna hum sab samujhte hain. Kissi baat ki hadh hoti hai. Kitni koshish ki tum logon ne. har roz gauri ko kuch na kuch kehte. Usko sab ki nazron se girane ki koshih ki. Lakin hoa kya kuch nahi. Abb tum log kuch nahi kar paro ge kyun ke ab us ka pati us ke saath hai. So watch your mouth." she said leaving them still blank. And came to shiv. "shiv I am so proud of you. I am happy for you. And forgive you for leaving gauri at the night of the wedding. Me tumhe har uss baat ke liye maaf karti hon jis ki waja se gauri ko takleef hoi."

hi guys finally i got it updated. sorry for the mistakes in advance. enjoy. and leave comments.

Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago

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maria

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Posted: 18 years ago

#643

Originally posted by: mintfresh
awesum update
dadaji is a real hero, plz do something about this stupid niki.loved the way shiv's concerned about his gauri. keep it up
plz cont soon

thank you. i know he is. hmm well i gues now i have to do something about her now. yeah he is a real sweetheart. i will try my best.
koshish karon gi jald se jald ho. 😉

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maria

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Posted: 18 years ago

#644

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt
Maria, great update sweety and bless dada ji for the great personality and brains that he has to get rid of one of the witch 😆 my God his character just cracks me up and wow, things are getting pretty close between Shiv-Gauri and Vivaan is such a sweet heart helping to take care of Varni.
Excellent update 👏
Cheers,

thanks. yeah bless him. hm i doubt it. she is like kutay ki dum khabhi seeedhi nahi hogi. yeah he is quite funny. yeah sure are. i know but a bit too sweet. 😆 thanks😉😉

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maria

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Posted: 18 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: chemistry101
Great part
Please update too 😊

thanks
i will try my level best😉

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Aakriti Mehta

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Posted: 18 years ago

#646

wow.. awesome part...

i loved the outbursts from dadaji and shiv.. rock on!!

please do continue!!

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kpatel123

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Posted: 18 years ago

#647

its a good fanfic...but its going a bit slow...cud u speed it up please! get gauri out of hospital already!

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Iqbaladdict

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Posted: 18 years ago

#648

hey Maria, sorry babe I have not been keeping up with this as much as I had wated to, but yeah finalyy caught up and read last three parts, okay the best bits were dadaji dressed in shivs clothes 😆 , dadaji giving a rocking slap to maya ji, nd shiv being so caring and hiting hismum where it hurt, she will keep her trap shut now and let them b, hopefully we will fianlly see somelove scenes 😳 between two love birds, 😳 😳 ,

u rock babe, and btw I am planning to read mohobbat sometime soon, I'm sure it is just as good. 😛

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suni

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Posted: 18 years ago

#649

maira nice update. 👏

loved dadaji chata to maya and shiv outbrust over nikki and maya.

will nikki keep quiet or she will become more venemous against gauri 😡

on the whole dadiji was happy and even forgave shiv 👏

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Jenna Dutt

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Posted: 18 years ago

#650

👏 absolutely splendid update Maria, Dada Ji aur Shiv ne Maya, Nikki, Palak ki jo dhulai ki hai, I have no words for it, each one of dialogues that you wrote were perfect, brilliant darling, can't wait for the next part.

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