Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91 - Page 66

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Posted: 18 years ago
😆

shiv is v good today 👏

dadaji... 😆 😆 😆 the way he slapped 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
maria di...thank you so much for the update
shiv my hero...actually gauri's hero jus knocked that trimurti out...i loved him
dadaji also was good...i think now mahen shud quit the idea of getting gauri married.
fantastic update di...i love u for that
do cont soon... 👏 i m waiting like a good girl


Asever 😉

Amneet 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part!!!!Shiv standing up for Gauri and Shiv kissing Gauri's hand hmmmmmmmmmmmm interesting very interesting now dying for love confession!!!pls continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
well thanks for the update
n it was really nice 👏
too good shiv falling for gauri 😳
keep it up maria sweety 😉
n update soon i'll be waiting 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
superb update
loved shiv and dada ji outburst.
hope shiv continues to support gauri and realises his true feelings for gauri soon.palak, nikhila & maya needs daily dose, they r thick skin.
eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
great updates maria....
dadaji's slap was mindblowin.........
the suprise element of the lot.....

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Posted: 18 years ago
really good nikky got it on her face 😆 😆
way to go shiv...i love how he is supporting gauri 😳
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
the way shiv supported gauri n the way dadi supported shiv is superb n i think nikki ,maya n palak will be in their limits .
really a very good update 👏 by the way friend iam eagerly waiting 4r ur update
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Posted: 18 years ago
part 31


Shiv had never spoken to his mother like this before. But today was the limit. He was not her puppet anymore. After having a go at nikhila and the gang shiv left from there in anger. He went towards dadi's room where varni was sleeping. He needed to calm down before he did anything else. He sat there near varni and closed his eyes trying to calm himself. When he felt a hand in his hair he opened his eyes and looked at the figure. It was dadi. She seated herself beside him. Caressing him while he put his haed in her lap. "gusa thook do beta. Aisa kab tak chal sakta hai sab theek ho jaye. Lakin jab gauri training se wapis aye gi to." shiv looked up. What was dadi trying to say. What was going to happen to gauri. "mujeh dar lagta hai shiv. Ke jab gauri apni training se wapis aye gi to nikhila us ke saath kya kare gi. Nikhila ka deemagh kharab hai me ne usse kitni bar samjhane ki koshish ki hai ke jo hoa us me gauri ka kya kasooor tha. Wo bachari to anjan thi is saray mamale se. or waise bhi us ki dushmani us ke maayke ke saath thi un me se to koi zinda nahi raha to wo saza bekasoor ko de rahi hai. Pata nahi kyun nikhila yeh dushmani gauri pe nikalna chahti hai. Meri samujh me nahi ata usse kaise samjhaye. Ke badla lene se kuch faida nahi. Jin ke darmiyan jhagra tha woto abb is duniya me nahi rahe." shiv looked at dadi in shock. What was she saying what was going on. What dushmani. He never known that nikhila had some dushmani with gauri's family.

"yeh app kya keh rahi hai dadi. Mama or gauri ki khandani dushmani. Yeh kab ki baat hai. Kaise hoa yeh sab. Please dadi bataiye na. hoa kya tha." dadi looked at shiv for a moment. Then she began speaking. "gauri ke nana ji nikhila ke dad ke pass kaam karte the. Nikhila ke dad gauri ki mom ki shadi nikhila ke pagal bhai se karana chahte the. Lakin gauri ki maa alok ji ko pasand karti thi. Is liye shadi se phle wo bhag gayi or mahen ne in dono ki shadi kara di. Us waqt mahen or nikhila ki shadi ho chuki thi. Is liye mahen bakhubi janta tha ke nikhila ka bhai gauri ki maa ke kabil nahi hai. Wonahi chahta tha ke uss pagal ke saath reh ke gauri ki maa ko zindagi barbad ho. Or wo yeh bhi nahi chhata tha ke us ke dost ka dil tootay is liye us ne alok ka saath diya. Sahdi ke baad nikhila ne hungama kiya. Us ne alok ji or gauri ki ma ka ghar me ana band kar diya or functions attend karne se mana kar diya. Lakin me mahen tumhare dada or daksh humesha un ka saath dete or un ko ghar bolatay. Alokji mahen ke sab se ache dost the. Phir jab gauri paida hoi to mahen se alokji se bol diya ke yeh mere ghar ki bahu bane gi lakin nikhila is baat ke khilaf thi. Wo nahi chahti thi ke gauri ki shadi tumhare saath ho. Us ko apne bhai ka badla lena tha." shiv was quiet after listening to all this. He never knew about all this. Now he knew what made Nikhila hate gauri so much. Why she made him hate her.


"dadi kya iss baat ka guari ko pata. Kya wo janti hai ke mom us se itni nafrat kyun karti hain." "nahi shiv gauri ko is baray me kuch nahi pata. Wo ajj tak eyh nahi samujh payi ke nikhila usse itni nafrat kyun karti hai. Bohot bari kimat chukayi hai usne alok ki beti hone ki." tears rolled down shiv's eyes. How come no one told him all this before. How hard will it be for gauri. "dadi app ne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya. Agar app yeh sab pehle batati. To me khabhi gauri se shadi nahi karta. Khabhi us ki zindagi barbad nahi karta. Me khabhi us se ke saath aisa salook nahi karta jaisa me ne us ke saath kiya hai. Ab ko mujhe sab kuch bata dena chahiye tha dadi." "shiv tum ne hue kyun nahi bataya ke tum ipshita se pyar karte ho. Hum khabhi tumhari shadi gauri se na karate. Gauri ko wor dard na milta jo usse tum ne diya hai. Us waqt to nikhila bhi is shadi se khush thi. Hume laga ke sab theek hai. Lakin jab tum usse chor ke gaye to hume pata chala nikhila ki khushi ka raaz. Us ne badla liya tha gauri se. us gunah ki saza di jo us ne kiya hi nahi. Us ne gauri ko bohot zakhhum diya hain. Bohot takleef di hai. Itni si umar me usse zindagi bhar ka rog de diya. Pata hai shiv uss waqt me ne tumhare dada ne or mahen ne apne app ko bohot kosa ke hum ne nikhila ki neeyat ka andaza pehle kyun nahi lagaya. Kyun hum nahi jaan paye ke nikhila badla le gi."

Shiv felt as if he could not breathe his own mother had deceived him. She had used him as a pawn to get back to gauri and her family. She used him to ruin gauri's life. She made him hate her so much. That he got blinded and never saw how much he was hurting her. He had caused her so much pain. And now his own mother had caused him the same amount of pain. The elders were right. " jaisa karo ge waisa bharo ge" he wanted to run to gauri. Hug her. And ask her to forgive him for whatever he had done to her. For all the pain he had caused her. But he knew he cant face gauri now. How could he after all that he had done. All because he thought his mother could never be wrong. He wanted to go to nikhila and ask her why she did that. Why she destroyed an innocent girls life as she was the daughter of the women she wanted her mental brother to marry how could she do this. Shiv broke down in dadi's lap while dadi sat there caressing his head. "kyun shiv. Kyun chor ke gaye tum gauri ko. Eik baar bhi nahi shocha us pe kya guzre gi. Ke wo zinda hai yaann mar gayi. Kyun us ko itna tarpaya.." "please dadi bas ki jiye. Mujeh maaf kar di jiye. Me gauri ka unheard hon." he cried. And dadi comforted him. He was in pain and dadi was in pain seeing him in pain. Shiv dosses off in dadi's lap as he had not slept the previous night.
Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Oh thank god that afterall the secret is out as to y that stupid nikhila hates gauri soo much , poor gauri is paying for "khandani dushmani". Okay so shiv is not able to face gauri he is too ashamed to even say sorry per bechara kab tak muh chhupayega!!

Ok Maria so how's ur married life? 😉 we have not talked like in forever

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