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Posted: 18 years ago
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chapter 9

"Gauri…Gauri…" a masculine voice kept calling her name but she couldn't see a face, it was so dark. "Gauri…" the voice called out again, only this time it was louder, more insistent. She felt a hand touch her shoulder and gently shake her. "Arre yaar you could seriously give kumbhkaran a run for his money. Wake up Ms. Sarkar we have reached home." Gauri finally opened her eyes and saw a smiling Tarun stare down at her. "I have been yelling and screaming for hours…Madam we are home…come on let's go everyone is waiting for you."
Gauri got out of the car and looked around. The view that greeted her transported her back to that night so many years ago. It was a similar, dark, moonless night. The winds were fierce as if foreshadowing a feral storm, yet to come. The gardens around her were the same, perfectly manicured and unusually green. And the house, the handsome, white house still stood unwavering against the dark night, serving as a tempting haven from the wild weather outside.
"Hello…Gauri…don't tell me you learnt how to fall asleep with your eyes open in Bombay?" teased an amused Tarun.
Gauri turned to her childhood friend and smilingly said, "I see the past few years haven't changed you much. I thought becoming a professor might have mellowed you down a bit but I guess that was asking for too much huh?"
Tarun laughed, "Me and mellow? Yah right…I figure the only way I will ever get mellow is when I finally marry the girl of my dreams."
Gauri gave him a surprised look and said, "You have a girl of your dreams and you hid it from me? How could you? Who is she? Do I know her?"
Tarun shook his head and grinned, "Not yet…I can't tell you all my secrets yet. You have to stick around to find out."
Gauri smiled and replied, "Don't worry Tarun this time I am here to stay. But listen, why don't you go in? Let me freshen up and then I'll come join the party."
Gauri began walking away when Tarun caught her arm and pulled her close. For a moment he just stared at her, her beauty overwhelming him. Finally he quietly whispered, "Please sing tonight." Gently he pushed her away and teased, "We are all curious whether you really have a talent for music or you just used it as an excuse to get away from us." With those words Tarun headed back into the house, leaving behind a bewildered Gauri.


"Mayaji…where is Gauri? I thought you said she was also coming tonight. I was looking forward to hearing her sing again." Kavi smilingly inquired of his wife's friend. Maya looked up at the handsome man by her side. Kavi was everything any woman would ever want in a man. He was handsome, accomplished, kind and above all he was a loving husband and father, who wholeheartedly doted on his family. Maya smiled at him and replied, "She is coming, she just got back so I think Tarun said that she was just freshening up. Now that I think about it, she should have been here by now. I'll go and check in on her. Excuse me." Maya nodded at him politely and began heading to the door in search of her older daughter when a strong voice called out from behind, "Maya one minute…" making her stop in her tracks.
Maya turned to the owner of the voice, the man who she had loved and lost many decades ago, a man who still had a strange hold over her. "Maya I am really sorry about earlier today. Poonam shouldn't have behaved that way please accept my apology on her behalf."
*FLASHBACK*

"Ma…" Shiv had called out from the door. Hearing those words, both Maya and Poonam had looked up with tears in their eyes. "Mayama…" Shiv called out again running straight into Maya's open arms and engulfing her in a warm, bear hug. Poonam seethed with anger from the stairway. She had never felt so hurt or humiliated. She wiped an errant tear and slowly began descending the stairs, her presence unnoticed and ignored as always.
"Shiv, beta you can't just enter the house like that. You should let me do your aarti first. And you left Bahu at the door, that's just not done Shiv." Maya scolded the handsome young man. She turned to the beautiful young woman at the door and said, "I apologize on his behalf Mehar."
Mehar smiled gently said, "Seriously Mayama look at your son, we have barely been married a month and already he is leaving me for another woman!" Everyone laughed at that and a sheepish looking Shiv quickly ran up to stand beside his lovely wife. He looked at her apologetically and turning to Maya he said, "It's just that I missed you so much Mayama, I couldn't help myself any longer."
Those words brought a fresh round of tears to Maya's eyes. She silently took the thali from Lali and began walking towards her son and Bahu, to do their aarti when a voice loudly rang out, "Stop!"
Everyone turned to see who had yelled out those words and that's when Poonam slowly made her presence felt. "Maya, you are an employee of this house, not the children's mother. Only a mother has the right to do her son and Bahu's aarti." With those words, Poonam rudely snatched the thali out of Maya's hands and did the aarti.

*END FLASHBACK*

Maya nodded as if physically accepting the apology and said, "No apology necessary Ajit, it is her right, I am the one who overstepped my bounds."
Ajit shook his head and gently replied, "Maya you have all the rights. You have been more than a mother to those children. I cannot thank you enough for all that you have done for my family."
Maya teared up at his formal tone and in an icy cold voice she replied, "I don't need your gratitude Mr. Singhania, the children's love is more than enough for me." Ajit immediately regretted the tone he had used with her and was about to apologize but at that very moment a pair soft, feminine hands covered Maya's eyes and a melodic voice whispered in her ears, "I missed you so much."
Maya pulled away the hands and turned around to hug the owner of the beautiful voice. With tears in her eyes Maya kissed the face that she had not seen in so many years, "Gauri my bacha, I missed you more bacha…I missed you more." The women clung to each other lovingly, laughing and crying all at once. Ajit smiled, his eyes swimming with unshed tears at the joyous reunion. He was about to quietly step away and allow them to have their moment, when Gauri lovingly called out, "Ajit uncle…" Ajit turned to the girl who had changed his life in so many wonderful ways and held out his arms to her. Without thinking Gauri launched herself in his arms and as always was transported to a place where she felt nothing but safety and love.
Ajit uncle and she had always shared a unique bond that no one else, not even her mother understood. To everyone else he was Ajit Singhania, business tycoon but she was the only one who had seen the more vulnerable, the gentle Ajit Singhania. They were so similar they couldn't help but be bonded. They were both tortured souls with dark secrets that both were too scared to face.
"Uncle you have finally gotten some gray hair I see. I must say that the salt and pepper look suits you well." Ajit smiled indulgently and replied, "And the mature woman look suits you well my dear." Gauri smiled in reply and suddenly felt herself be lifted right off the ground and spun around in a dizzying circle. When her feet finally touched the ground, Gauri came face to face with Rishi, who looked at her with a wolfish smile and said, "Kyon gungi…you have come to your senses I see. So you finally ready to marry me or what?"
"What do you mean marry you? Gauridi has promised to marry me." Garv replied indignantly from behind her.
"Ha, marry you!!! Have you seen yourself in the mirror lately? You look like a chimpanzee. I seriously pity the girl who marries you." Rishi replied teasingly. The boys continued their little fight, while Gauri watched amused from a distance.
"Well I guess you can see that some things never change," Mehar's voice brought Gauri out of her reverie. Gauri turned to her childhood best friend and giving her hug she said, "Except you that is. Wow, Mrs. Shiv Singhania, you couldn't wait till I got back. Had to get married in a rush?"
Mehar gave her an apologetic look and said, "I am so sorry its just you know pundits and their auspicious dates."
Gauri smiled at her friend and said, "Mehar don't be silly I could forgive you anything, you know that. I am so happy for you."
Mehar looked at Gauri suspiciously and said, "Are you really?" Gauri frowned at her friend's tone and said, "Of course I am, why would you even question that?" Mehar laughingly shook her head and said, "Because if you truly are so happy for me then how come you haven't sung for me yet?" Gauri smiled and was about to protest when a familiar voice from behind her said, "Mehar is right Gauri. You must sing for us, make it your wedding gift to us."

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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
nice updates desi .....shiv married to mehar.....gauri ka kya hoga.....i think tarun is in love with gauri......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wht..... he married sum1 else 😕
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG, you got Shiv married to someone else??? Not fair at all... How could you?? And Tarun looks very interested in Gauri... So how are finally going to get Shiv-Gauri together??
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 10

"Shiv!!!" Gauri exclaimed happily as she flew into his arms. Shiv engulfed the petite young woman in his embrace and held on for dear life, "I missed you so much Sarkar. What took you so long to come back home?" Gauri smiled at him and said, "I had to make sure that I didn't give you an excuse to make fun of my music or claim you are better than me." Shiv laughed and replied, "Sweetheart I don't need an excuse, I was born better than you." Gauri shook her head sternly at him and said, "Cocky as always I see." The two shared a hearty laugh and happily began catching up on lost times.
Mehar watched their reunion from afar. She giggled at their corny attempts at poking fun at each other. She heard her husband let out a hearty laugh and found herself smiling too. She knew that Shiv had missed his childhood best friend, all these years. They shared a strange relationship, Shiv and Gauri. They brought out the best and the worst in each other, always fighting fiercely and making up equally passionately. Mehar wasn't really envious of their relationship; the only thing she was a little jealous of was their shared love for music. Passion for music was a side of Shiv that no one other than Gauri ever got to see and Mehar was a little jealous over the fact that only Gauri knew every facet of the man Mehar had married.
"Shiv do you remember that first night we met? You were so mean to me. I don't know how you are going to live the rest of your life with such a bully Mehar." Gauri's teasing voice brought Mehar out of her retrospection. Mehar smiled indulgently and replied, "What can I say, I know exactly how to tame the beast." Gauri laughed at that and Shiv just gave his wife a secret smile and whispered something in her ear that made her blush furiously. Gauri smiled at the couple and her eyes teared up, she was not exactly sure why. "Gauridi come on you have to sing, everyone is waiting…" Lali tugged her to the piano, where Shreya was waiting for her, a mike in her hand.
Gauri reluctantly took the mike from her sister and said, "I am so flattered by your request to hear me sing. I hope I never disappoint you. The song I am going to sing for you tonight is dedicated to my two best friends, the newly married Shiv and Mehar Singhania. I just want to tell you guys that your love is an inspiration." Gauri smilingly took her seat at the grand piano forte she had been playing and practicing at since she was only a little girl. She closed her eyes and breathed it all in. The familiar scent of family and love surrounded her, engulfing her in its warmth, Memories flashed before her eyes. Memories of her singing lessons with her mother. Memories of Ma, her and Shreya singing Rabindra sangeet at the piano, Ma's flawless playing weaving a strange kind of magic. Memories of her and Shiv practicing and writing new tunes they would randomly think up during class. Memories of her first lesson in passion and love, right here in front of this piano. Suddenly Gauri's eyes flew wide open and immediately they searched out and found the one person who had taught her those lessons. Those dark eyes found hers as well and a strange look passed between the two of them. Gauri quickly looked away and found her mother's beautiful, calm face smiling at her encouragingly. Slowly Gauri's fingers found the right keys and she began playing the chords, her beautiful, haunting voice ringing loudly and clearly through the quiet room:

Kisise Tum Pyaar Karo To Phir Izhaar Karo
Kahin Na Phir Der Ho Jaye
Kahin Na Phir Der Ho Jaye
Kisipe Aitbaar Karo To Phir Ikraar Karo
Kahin Na Phir Der Ho Jaye
Kahin Na Phir Der Ho Jaye
Yehi To Dil Churane Ka Andaaz Hota Hai
Ho Ho Ho Ho Ho
Kisise Tum Pyaar Karo To Phir Izhaar Karo
Kahin Na Phir Der Ho Jaye
Kahin Na Phir Der Ho Jaye

Gauri got up and with the microphone she walked over to her mother and smilingly she took her mother by the shoulders and slowly spun her around the dance floor singing:

Mohabbat Ka Ghum Hai Mile Jitna Kam Hai
Yeh To Zamana Nahin Jaan Paayega
Mera Jo Sanam Hai Zara Berahem Hain
Dekhe Mujhe Woh Dard Muskurayega
Dil Ko Aise Dilbar Pe Bhi Naaz Hota Hai
Ho Ho Ho Ho Ho
Kisise Tum Pyaar Karo To Phir Izhaar Karo
Kahin Na Phir Der Ho Jaye
Kahin Na Phir Der Ho Jaye

Maya frowned at the words her daughter was singing and at the tears that were slowly gathering in her eyes. Maya gently shook her daughter and questioned her with her eyes. Gauri wiped away the tears and with a reassuring smile to her mother she continued:

Mubarak Sama Hai Khushi Ka Jahan Hai
Yeh Din Koi To Naya Gul Khilayega

Suddenly a masculine voice joined hers in perfect harmony and continued:

Nazar Se Bayan Hai Yeh Woh Dastan Hai
Chaahat Ko Kaise Koi Bhi Chupayega
Aashiqo Ki Aankhon Mein Yeh Raaz Hota Hai

Everyone turned to the find out who the owner of the melodic voice was and applauded loudly when they discovered that it was Shiv. Gauri smiled at Shiv and leading him by his arm she brought him to Mehar and placing his hand in hers, Gauri continued singing:

Kisise Tum Pyaar Karo To Phir Izhaar Karo
Kahin Na Phir Der Ho Jaye
Kahin Na Phir Der Ho Jaye

Shiv's voice again blended with hers in perfect harmony as he continued for her:
Kisipe Aitbaar Karo To Phir Ikraar Karo
Kahin Na Phir Der Ho Jaye
Kahin Na Phir Der Ho Jaye
Yehi To Dil Churane Ka Andaaz Hota Hai
Ho Ho Ho Ho Ho

(Film: Andaaz)

As the last few strands of the music continued Tarun came around and pulled Gauri and everyone else onto the dance floor. While Shiv and Gauri concluded their beautiful song together, Maya and Ajit watched the couple closely, the underlying meaning of the song and the couple's reaction to it bothering them both.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice updates!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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shiv n gauri r b est friend who is gonna come in gauri's life will shiv n gauri ever be together 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Brilliant, totally awesome... But reveal the mystery!!! Who initiated Gauri in the ways of passion?? And if it was Shiv, why aren't they together? Mysteries, mysteries... But I'm glad you're on an updatin spree... Keep it going!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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IT is so good to see you updating this story, I absolutely luv it....poor Gauri in tears due to heartache already, who was the mystery man, I am assuming it is Shiv.....waiting impatiently to find it out.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
i'm really happy to see you update this story. plz update regularly.

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