Ehsaas...

Kabhi ek nazara,
Tho ek kabhi ek dhun...
Kabhi ek khilti hasi..
Tho kabhi ek nazar...
Kabhi ek muskaaan,
Tho kabhi ek pukaar...
Kabhi dhaltha hua sooraj...
Tho kabhi muskuraata chand....
Kabhi mehekti fizaayen...
Tho kabhi thandi hawaa..
Mehsoos yun hoti hai...
Maujoodgi tumhaari...hamein..
Ke basi ho.. rooh mein..
Haamri ... tum kuch is tarah....

...... Banke ek khoobsoorat ehsaas....

-Sareeta

- Jus penned these lines down , wondering how people live on, holding on to moments spent with their dear ones.. they've lost...

For Shiv Kapoor , life after Gauri's possible demise...

Dedication: to a dear friend , Khyaatee... and yeah I hope you like it Khyaatee!😊

hey sareeta di
by any chance do u think u can post english translation for this??? 😃
i knw i knw.... im being very silly..but hard for me to understand sum parts.... 😆 😆 😆
but still i think wht ever this is, it must b gr8

girl ur breaking my heart.... 😭

sareeta first of all thank you sooooo much to dedicate this beautiful thought to me... 😊

so emotional and so much depth in these lines and it really touched my heart...

infact i have tears in my eyes...

sareeta you are a true genius with words...

i will treasure it in my fav list of your writings..

the one you wrote on "life"and this one'ehsaas"will always be my best..

sareeta these are for you and you deserve them sincerely.. 👏 👏 👏

i'll pm you soon...

dii..that was sooooooooooo beautifulll n soooo touching.......aaap se aab aur kya kahu...aap toh baas hamesha mere dil ko chu jaati hai aap ki likkhi huyi khubsurat lavzon se.....mashaAlaah di...ur brilliant.... 👏 👏 👏

Hi Sareeta,
what sensitive words to describe shivs present situation. I love all of it but last few lines

Ke basi ho.. rooh mein..
Haamri ... tum kuch is tarah....

...... Banke ek khoobsoorat ehsaas....

show how close he may have got to Gauri these last few days. u read emotions well and then describe very beautifully. cheers for that

wow what a nice ehsaas that poem gives.....
it definitely is apt for shiv's condition...
brilliant!!!!!

Originally posted by: shivgauri

awesome!!! 👏

Awww, thank you soooooooo much!!! I bow down humbly!! 😊

Originally posted by: ash9

hey sareeta di
by any chance do u think u can post english translation for this??? 😃
i knw i knw.... im being very silly..but hard for me to understand sum parts.... 😆 😆 😆
but still i think wht ever this is, it must b gr8

Awww, Ashu, sure hun, will try to do the translation as soon as I can, given my slightly hectic schedule... and sadly this weekend I am tied up, but will sure post it up soon!!!

Now of course not , you are not silly.... I 'll do the best I can to do it justice in english as well....

Thanks , thats so sweet of you to say so!

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

girl ur breaking my heart.... 😭

Bless my soul! Now with those words, you've got me misty eyed!! Merci!😊