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Posted: 18 years ago
Fall…Falling…Fallen…



One hour and forty five minutes. I have been standing here, in the middle of Shiv's room, alone, for one hour and forty five minutes. Shiv is not in the room, and he was not here when I got here. The party is still going full swing downstairs because I can hear the chattering of people and the music in the background. Wondering what Shiv's room looks like? Where should I start, it is beautiful, quiet masculine, but still beautiful. It has deep grey walls, with one wall the one behind the bed, being covered with wallpaper made of his various, black and white pictures from over the years. His bed, is gigantic, I bet my entire family could sleep comfortably on it, heck even Shiv's family could fit. And it looks really comfortable, with many big fluffy pillows, a large duvet, and silk sheets, I just feel like diving into it. Looking at the bed is making me realize how tired and sleepy I actually am. The strings of flowers that are hanging of the bed are spreading an intoxicating scent around the room, which is not helping my drowsiness. Maybe some fresh air would help? Now there is a door at the other end of the room that I am sure leads to a private balcony, I could stand there for a couple minutes and let the cool breeze wash over me, reviving my energy, so maybe I could wait and little longer for Shiv.

Oh my goodness, footsteps. I hear footsteps outside the room. It must be Shiv. I can't just be standing here I should look like I am busy doing something. But what? What can I be busy doing, in his room? There has to be something. I have to hurry, think, think, think! Oh gosh, the door is opening, think! Sitting on the bed, I could be sitting on the bed smelling the flowers! Rush! I have to rush to the bed, before he gets into the room.
Darn this heavy lengha. I need to pick up the skirt and make a run for it.

Oh no! Oh no! No! NO! I didn't know the floor can be this slippery. I tripped, slipped and then fell, landing right into Shiv's arms. I have no option now, but to nervously laugh, and just hope that when I finally get the courage to look up to him, he is not giving me his very serious and angry look. What? He is smiling at me. Immediately I push him back, straitening myself. No he is not smiling he is laughing at me. Anybody can fall! Not my fault his floors are so slippery. Huffing and puffing I turn around, I am not even going to look at him.

"Are you okay?"

"Yes, perfectly fine!" How can he even ask me that? Of course I am okay; I just tripped a little not like I fell of a cliff!

"So we have to sleep together."

"What?"


"I meant, in … this … room, you … and … I … have … to … share … this … room, so we … have … to … sleep … in… the … same … room!"

"Oh." That what I thought too. What else would I think? He doesn't need to speak so slowly, I can understand him.

"Well…"

There is not way I am sleeping on the floor, that too, which is marble and will be so cold. "We can sleep on the bed together." Okay why is he looking at me like that, surprised? There is now way I am letting him tell me to sleep on anything other than the bed. "Your bed is so big; I have no problem in sharing it with you. I mean unless you have a problem. I can totally understand, it can be difficult with such a beautiful girl right beside you. I won't blame you if you want to sleep on the floor or the couch."

"I have no such problem."

Yes! I get to sleep on the comfy bed! Ok where is he going now? where does that door lead, that he just went into? I never noticed that door, in his room earlier. Oh my goodness, what if it is like a secret room, attached to his room. Maybe this secret room hides a big raaz. This door has been locked for years, and only Shiv is allowed into the room, because the raaz is very crucial to the family. What if I just happen to peep in and by mistake discover this secret? I could use this information to my benefit later, just something to safeguard my life here. Yes, I will just casually go and open the door, as if I had no idea it was a secret room.

This is exciting, I feel like a detective. Of course in my mind is playing the detective pink panther music as I am tiptoeing across to the door. The door knob feels nice and cool under my warm hands as I slowly turn it to push open the door. Gathering up all my courage I forcefully push the door open, feeling an urge to jump in pulling out my fake gun and pointing it at Shiv, and saying, "Your secret is no longer safe!" and bursting into a evil laugh.

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"You did it on purpose!"

"No I swear, I didn't know it was the washroom! You have to believe me. I really thought ….err…." Okay now I have a choice, a choice between telling the truth and looking like a complete fool or keeping quiet and letting Shiv think that I purposely opened… No way! Option one, tell the truth! "I thought… err...you were … going …into a …secret room."

"What?"

"But it is not my fault. See, there are these K-shows, I am sure you must have seen them. And in those, if someone goes into a room, it is never a normal room, like the washroom, it is always a secret room or something like it, so I thought you were going into a secret room and I was just curious as to what the secret was. I know it was very dumb of me and I promise I have stopped watching those shows, but what can I do, all those years of watching them has trained my mind to think a certain way and I just don't know what happens when…" I draw in a deep breath. Why is he looking at me like that? That smile! He is laughing at me again. I should have just said sorry and ended it at that, why do I talk so much? This is useless. Sigh. I should juat turn around and go to bed.

"Gauri"

"Yah!"

"Are you going to sleep in that?"

I look down. He is right, I can't sleep in this heavy thing, with all this jewellery. "But I have no other clothes."

"Isn't that your suitcase you brought with you?"

Oh my goodness! My suitcase, I totally forgot about it. Who put it in his room? Anyways that doesn't matter. I am so happy. "Thank you. Thank you! Thank you!" Once again, the second time this night, I find myself in Shiv's arms. At least this time, I didn't trip or fall, I just, without realizing, jumped over to him in excitement. But now looking at him, I realize that he does not quiet share the same happiness, of finding my suitcase here. Time to once again, embarrassingly stand up on my own and smile at Shiv. Maybe he isn't so bad. He did help me find my suitcase.

"You can change in the washroom. Don't worry I don't won't be thinking it is secret room." Okay maybe he is as bad. I mean he does not leave a chance to mock me. He is so mean!

Edited by Saregama_fan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg lol i cant stop laughing 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwww chandni......that was sooooooooo romantic 😳 n funny 😆......gosh...shiv is soooooo sweeet...how cum he turned out to b soooo cooool.....anyways.....that was jhaaaakkaas....awesome..mindblowing....simply superb....fantastic......u just made me soo soo soo happy......thank u sooooo much for the update...i was dying to read it 😳 u know wht...i was abt to leave but then i thought ok lets c for once if i hav any surprise 😳 then i saw tht u hav ur ff updated...i was like yyyyaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyy..........i felt like jumping.... 😳 😳 thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaank uuuuuu........plz cont. soon 😳
Edited by nazrinkhan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
ur ff is really funny i just cant stop laughing 😆
thx for so good and funny part.

Simran
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg...tht was just so amazing...i love your gauri...shes so cute...you've very vividly etched out her character...have u ever seen the movie confessions of a teenage drama queen..? the lead in tht too goes overboard with her imagination....
i love this ff....it keeps me smiling for hours together. keep up the good(understated but i'll be back with a better word) work...and do continue soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
Absolutely hillarious, gosh, Gauri cud be so entertaining......can't believe it, but I luv this side of hers
Applauds to you for a job done wonderfully, for bringing out her character so brilliantly. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wooowhoohoo. that was so cool. I just love it. And when it finishes I actually feel why oh why. I love Gauri indecisive thoughts and then rather than the likely choice her picking an egoistic one and then be embarressed about it. R u just as lively as Gauri if so i bet ur friends have a rite laugh. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg i can't stop laughing...gauri is so funny 😆 😆 😆
awesome part 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
hahahaha i luv this gauri.....unlike the show she makes shiv laugh so much. i cant wait 2 read mor! i luvd this update cuz i thought tat shiv was gonna be really mean 2 gauri....its good tat he's being nice....in a naughty sort of way.
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Posted: 18 years ago
what can i say....
your just the best!!!!!!
it keeps gettin more better every time.....
thank you soooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
your doing an excellent job..............
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