VeeraZara-ff 4 Shiv-Gauri-last partPage13 - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
too goood 👏
but its sad!!!!! 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
plz dont separate shivgauri... ektaz already working very hard on it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
hey wht happened to 11th part??? i thought i read that part
but nw its nt here 😕
anyway continue sooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
thats what i'm also thinking.i had sent the new part of this ff as well as another ff yesterday.they r missing now
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
Part-11....Gauri was really sad.her eyes were full of
tears.she walks on the road like a lost woman.her mind
was full of her moments with shiv.she regrets that she
did'nt recognise him.it was raining heavily.since she
was careless her leg slips & she falls down. Shiv who
was walking on the rod thinking sadly about G sees
it & runs 2 her.G was surprised 2 see him.he extends
his arms,so that she can catch his arms & get up.G
catches his arms.but she cud'nt walk properly as her leg
was hurt. when she begins 2 fall,Scatches her.
S:u
r not able 2 walk?
G was speechless. S:if u don't
mind,i'll help u.
G did'nt answer.S takes her in
his arms.she was surprised.both of them look at each
other. Song:Do pal....{VZ}. vivan passes that way by
car.he sees it & stops the car.seeing V,S
feels embarassed. he thinks:what'll vivan think seeing
me like this with his fiancee.
V opens the door.
S:vivan…gauri's leg was hurt.thats why...
V:i'll drop
her.
V helps her 2 get inside the car. then he
starts the car. V:did u tell bhayya the truth?
G:no.
V:why? G:i told u no,i don't want 2 hurt him.he loves
sum1 else.
V thinks:i'm helpless.i've 2 tell shiv
bhayya.
V goes 2 S's room.he stares at
S.S gets tensed. S:vivan….V:enuf.
S
becomes upset.


Edited by jasminerahul - 18 years ago
jiya imdad thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
wow that was awsome 👏
i hope vivan tells shiv that gauri loves him so that they get togather 😃
can't wait for the next part so continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
Part-12....Vivan:u want 2 prove that u don't luv
gauri.right?
Shiv becomes upset:i don't luv gauri.i've
told u no,i luv another girl.
V:yes,that was 1
unbelievable luv.i think ur real luv is gauri.
S:vivan!!
PVbhayya,i'm not angry with u.but i'm happy
that u started having feelings 4 gauri
S:vivan..V:u
may not b able 2 believe.but..beleive me,i like seeing u both
2gether.
S:but how can u think like that about ur luv?
V:i was not in luv with gauri.u all brought a proposal.i
agreed.thats all. S:but do u no how much she luves u?
S:she likes me.but she luves u.thats the diff.u did'nt
understand that?
S:rubbish!gauri luves u.i've seen it
with my eyes.
V:what u saw is not correct.
S:vivan,u've gone mad.
S goes out. V:shiv
bhayya..plz listen 2 me..
S goes without listening 2
V.
V-G's wedding.they get married.G's
eyes were filled with tears.she hears a voice.that was
S's.S cumes near her.they both look at each
other's eyes.
S sings:jaanam deklo....G
cries.suddenly she wakes up from her sleep.she was
relieved realising that it was only a dream. Ipshita gets
up:gauri,u did'nt sleep?
G:yes,i'm..I:whats the matter?
G:nothing. I:no,u r my sister.also my best friend.i can
read sumthing from ur eyes.so don't hide anything from
me.whats ur problem?
G cries & hugs Ip.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
wonderful .. wonderful alst three parts were wonderful u r gr8 ..... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
wattttttttttttttttttttt
V-G get married 😭
anyways plzzz give us a good news soon!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
great part 👏
hope shv-gauri get togather soon 😊 😃

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