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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
Part-13....Gauri weeps:ipshita,i was mistaken.vivan is
not veer.
I:what? G:yes,recently only i realised that.
I:then..who's the real Veer? G:shiv
I:what? G:yes,he
is the real Veer.
Ip gets confused:i understand ur
feelings...but now its too late since ur wedding is
fixed with vivan & the wedding is so near.its 2morrow.
G:i no that.i can't bear it.
I:if u luv shiv that much
then why did'nt u tell him ur luv immediately?is it bcoz
of ur pity 4 vivan?
G:vivan wants me 2 go with
shiv.but i told him not 2 tell shiv anything about my
luv. I:dammed,why?u luv shiv very much & vivan
does'nt care about it.then whats the problem?why did'nt
u tell like that 2 vivan?
G:bcoz shiv luves another
girl. I:what? G:yes,so i don't want 2 destroy his
peace by telling him about my luv 4 him.
I:these rock
starts hav many female fans.shiv may be having a soft
corner 2wards 1 girl.that dies'nt mean that he loves
her.
G:shiv is not that sort of a character.he loves
that girl so much that his luv poems r inspired by his
luv.
Ip :now u sleep gauri. Ip makes the crying
gauri lie down. she covers her body with a sheet.then
goes out of the room. she thinks a lot about what G
told.then she calls up V.
V:hello. I:vivan,i'm
Ipshoita speaking. V:ya ...in this midnite?tell
ipshita,anything serious?
I:where r u now? V:at the
bachelor's party. I:i want 2 talk 2 u seriously.very
urgent.so i'm cuming there now. Ip dresses & goes 2
the bachelor's party.full of dance,music,drinks...there
her eyes search 4 V in the crowd.but she does'nt
find him.suddenly sum1 touches her from behind.she truns
back. WHO IS THAT PERSON?

jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#62
Part-13....Gauri weeps:ipshita,i was mistaken.vivan is
not veer.
I:what? G:yes,recently only i realised that.
I:then..who's the real Veer? G:shiv
I:what? G:yes,he
is the real Veer.
Ip gets confused:i understand ur
feelings...but now its too late since ur wedding is
fixed with vivan & the wedding is so near.its 2morrow.
G:i no that.i can't bear it.
I:if u luv shiv that much
then why did'nt u tell him ur luv immediately?is it bcoz
of ur pity 4 vivan?
G:vivan wants me 2 go with
shiv.but i told him not 2 tell shiv anything about my
luv. I:dammed,why?u luv shiv very much & vivan
does'nt care about it.then whats the problem?why did'nt
u tell like that 2 vivan?
G:bcoz shiv luves another
girl. I:what? G:yes,so i don't want 2 destroy his
peace by telling him about my luv 4 him.
I:these rock
starts hav many female fans.shiv may be having a soft
corner 2wards 1 girl.that dies'nt mean that he loves
her.
G:shiv is not that sort of a character.he loves
that girl so much that his luv poems r inspired by his
luv.
Ip :now u sleep gauri. Ip makes the crying
gauri lie down. she covers her body with a sheet.then
goes out of the room. she thinks a lot about what G
told.then she calls up V.
V:hello. I:vivan,i'm
Ipshoita speaking. V:ya ...in this midnite?tell
ipshita,anything serious?
I:where r u now? V:at the
bachelor's party. I:i want 2 talk 2 u seriously.very
urgent.so i'm cuming there now. Ip dresses & goes 2
the bachelor's party.full of dance,music,drinks...there
her eyes search 4 V in the crowd.but she does'nt
find him.suddenly sum1 touches her from behind.she truns
back. WHO IS THAT PERSON?


jiya imdad thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
nice part 👏
plz enclose the suspense soon 😉
angel_tia thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
i guess it shiv or vivan
anyways continue soon!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#65
Part-14....It was vivan
Ipshita:thank god..i cud'nt see
u. V:whats the matter misty? I:vivan...don't feel
bad.but i hav 2 say.gauri does'nt luv u.
V:i no
that.she luved me thinking that i;m veer.but veer is
shiv bhayya.her heart was broken.i told her that i'll
tell shiv bhayya about it.but she did'nt want 2.
I:its
bcoz she feels that it hurts shiv.bcoz shiv luves sum1
else. V:yes,b ut i think gauri is the best person 4
him.he has'nt even seen the girl whm he loves.no
guarantee that she'll luv him.
I:who is she?
V:shiv bhayya luves the poetess Zara whom he has never
seen.
Ip was surprised:what?poetess zara?wow!
V:what? I:vivan i,its gauri
V:what? I:really.gauri
writes poems.her pen name is zara. V:that means shiv
bhayya's beloved whom he is waiting 4 is gauri?
I:ya...they r made 4each other by god.bcoz thats why
they loved each other without knowing each other. P
V:what
a sweet news.i want 2 tell this 2 shiv bhayya.
I:i
want 2 inform this 2 gauri
V:2morrow they'll wed.
I:yes. they shake hand. Ip goes home.she sees the
sleeping G.so she won't make her get up. V
reaches home.but does'nt see Shiv in his room.
V:where
did shiv bhayya go? Nikhila:he is a responsible
brother.has gone 2 do sum wedding arrangements. V
gets irritated.he thinks:everything is spoiled.
S
bhayya has selected the correct time 2 go.
Ip opens
her eyes in the morning.she was shocked 2 see the
clock:oh god,i'm so late 2 wake up 2day.where is gauri?
G's mom gayathri cumes:ah ipshita,u got up?get ready
fast.
I:aunty,where is gauri? G:she is getting ready.
Ip thinks:i've 2 tell gauri everything now. WILL
IPSHITA & VIVAN B ABLE 2 STOP THE WEDDING?

jiya imdad thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
wow !!! that was great 👏
continue soon
angel_tia thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
o godddd
its too good
continue soon!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
omg.. they have to... only shivgauri plz...... 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
Part-15.....Ipshita goes 2 see gauri.many ladies were
putting ornaments 4 her.
I:in the morning itself why is
gauri getting ready?
gayathri:its not morning ipsita.u
got up late. every1 laughs. I:then also no need of
getting so early.
G:2day is gauri's wedding day & so
many ppl cum 2 celebrate.so she has 2 be in a shabby
dress?
I:i did'nt mean that.but...now itself she has 2
put on her bridal dress. G:ipshita,ur eyes hav any problem
after getting up late?this is not the bridal dress.
I:oh
i'm mistaken.i did'nt luk carefully.
Gauri looks at
her. I:i want 2 talk 2 gauri
. G:ipshita,u can talk
later.now she has 2 get ready.all r cuming see the
bride. Ip gets irritated & goes out.
G:what happened
2 ipshita2day?her behaviour is so strange .
Gauri
thinks:what happened 2 ipshita?what does she want 2 tell
me?
G was surrounded by a crowd.so misti cud'nt
speak 2 her. The time is getting late.shiv goes 2
vivan's room.V was in the bride groom's dress.
S:u look like a film star.very handsum in the bride
groom's dress.
V:but u'll luk better in this dress.only
u deserve 2 wear this 2day 2 go 2 the mandap 2 wed gauri.
S:vivan,2day u r going 2 wed.so don't be childish.
V:i'm not telling rubbish.u luv gauri
S lies:no i
don't luv gauri.i told u no that i luv Zara. V:shall i
tell u a truth?Zara is gauri
S was shocked:u new
that? V:yesterday only i came 2 no that.i wanted 2 tell
u immediately.but u were very busy.Ashiv bhayya,u r not
surprised?
S did'nt tell anything. V:i thot
hearing this surprise u'll be very happy & change ur
mind.did u no that b4?
S:yes. V:what?u new that
Gauri is zara?then also...why bhayya?why?u sacrificed ur
luv 4 me? i told u no,i don't luv gauri
S:but gauri
luves u.she needs u. V:no,she does'nt luv me.she luves
u. S:this is ur misunderstanding.plz don't suspect that
poor girl.
V:i'm not misunderstanding her.its the truth
that she luves u. S:vivan stop it. V:no,i
can't.i've 2 tell u.kgauri luves u very much.she luved
her fav poet Veer very much.
S was shocked. V:she
mistook me 2 be her Veer & luved me.but i told her that
i'm not veer,but u r her veer.but gauri does'nt tell u
her luv,bcoz she thinks that u luv sum1 else.she does'nt
no that ur luv is Zara ie gauri herself.
S's eyes
rose up:is it true vivan?
V:yes,gauri & u luv luv
each other very much.plz don't get separated from each
other.
S hugs V.tears cum out from their eyes.
G is very beautiful in her decorated pink bridal
dress.Ip loses her control & grabs the hand of G
2 get her away from the crowd.
G:whats this ipshita?
Ip:i
told u no that i want 2 talk 2 u.i'll leave u only after
i finish telling what i want 2 tell.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
oh omg 😉 it's soooooooooooooooooooooooo exiting 😉 😉 😉 plzzzzzzzzz cont. soon 😳

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