Hidden Feelings- CH.16 Updated/ 13/09/07- - Page 67

wow a fab part. this reminds me of some news i saw yesterday on tv, where in india a woman gave birth on the road as there was traffic jan n no ambulance available
gauri n her abusive language 😆 😆

i would h8 2 b the person who had 2 clean the car!!
thanx for the update (after ages)
i hope everythin gets back 2 normal with them lot

awesome part!!!!loving their relation and baby in the car 😆 !!!!pls continue soon
P.S: When will u be updating ur other fanfic😳 ????

Good now Shiv is finally gettin to know the True side of Gauri..... 😉 😆

They had their baby in the car!!!!!!

The part was worth the wait but that doesn mean u can take so long for the next!!!! ok????

Tanya has to be beautiful shez got grt lookin parents!!! 😆

Originally posted by: *mad*

jst update b4 i kill u..my brain is malfunctioning today
so i cnt use it for any thinking activities
😆

u r still 1 of the laziest updaters in this forum
jst like RD and Grumpy

😆 why... ru fasting that ur brain is malfunctioning! 😆..

Nah, I don't think I am that lazier compared to other writers!

Originally posted by: Kaj!

lemme see...hmm shiv will try taking care of gauri, gauri will be annoyed with him as she thinks he cares only for the baby. err but he will annoy her on purpose...err he actually loves her .....hmm i dunno yaar i sux at this 🤣 just update kar 😡 😳

half of it r true and u can c that in next part 🤣.. How did u like my delivery system? 🤣 ...

Love part will b here soon 😉

Originally posted by: nihita

shiv taking care n gauri being annoyed or falling for him

annoyed for sure! 😆 nice prediction

Originally posted by: desi chic

Sanya ki bachi... what a way to stall updatin!😡 😆 I know.. it's gr8 isn't it? And where were u?I kMeri soch ko talah laga hua hai so meharbaani karke post kardo!... Btw, may I remind you that you have another piece lurking around the corners of this forum?? Golden Moments or so... *ahem* yeah I know.. Don't worry I'll continue that too once I finish one of my FF! can't update all together... it's to much 😳

Waise, I read the previous update. This Voila and her mother, koi kaam nahin inko?😡 And Shivvy... He's still not justified for that "night", but I kind of understand... Good! U'll get ur justice soon on wat shiv does to them 😉

Cheers,

dc

cheers to u too!

sanya

Keep ur comments coming 😃 I'll reply to all soon

Originally posted by: *Izzy*

half of it r true and u can c that in next part 🤣.. How did u like my delivery system? 🤣 ...

Love part will b here soon 😉

loved the delivery system re . u seemed experienced 😉 u ever been in a situation like this of gauri n kaya 🤣 thinking about that part now still cracks me up. Hey Shiv better cherish that car n never sell or get rid of it. After all his daughter was born there.😉