FF: karva chaud--- Shivs pyar - Page 20

Originally posted by: rahena

oh....god..........d pages so wide........... 😡

yah they are so wide😕


i wnt update until it sorts! 😡

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

its fixed now 😃

yes i no...im gona update now! thankx yaar 4 watching me stress 😆😆

Originally posted by: rahena

yes i no...im gona update now! thankx yaar 4 watching me stress 😆😆

no prob😆😆

Originally posted by: rahena

PREVIEW:

Part 1

wen he comes out changed he finds gauri entering d room with a plate full of food. he asks 'wats dat?'..'food 4 u...she smiles..i no u havnt eaten yet'..shiv asks 'how do u no'...'i no shiv, i can tel'...den she sits on d bed n places d plate on d table.he den smile...'gauri...im not hungry, but if u insist, i'll eat..but only on one condition, u eat too'... gauri says 'why?'..shiv: 'cos i no u havnt eaten too'....dey both burst out laughing..den shiv sits next to gauri..

Part 2

shaila asks wats wrong?....wats true?....shiv says 'nothing'...gauri gets all ancious. anupam shouts 'shiv fasted today...n only for gauri! '...dada, shaila, mahen, ipshita, palak, daksh n d whole lot are shocked. dey all talk amongst dem selves....'really?..everyone asks..gauri is very shocked, but confused too as shiv keeps on sayin 'no...no'..so while everyone teases shiv she truns around, away..as she believes its not true. shiv notices gauri turning away...he den shouts out 'OK...ITS TRUE!'...gauri turns around 2 see shiv looking at her 'ITS TRUE...I DIDNT EAT 4 GAURI'...he blushes as everyone teases him. gauri blushes too, she smile. 'mere pyar ke umar plays on d background'

Part 3

'but shiv....after me i want 2 see u happy with som1 else....i no u'll be happy...ull find some1'...tears leave her eyes. ' NO GAURI NO!...dnt wish dat!...i dnt want some1 else....der isnt anyone else out der like u...dnt u get it....?...'get wat shiv?...i dnt understand...'......shiv snaps.......'i love u gauri!...i love u.....' '& i cnt see u die one day...n dat 2 becos of me!...u cnt leave me gauri'...n den he hugs her as he cries more. gauri is shocked, its like a dream to her...shiv said he loves her...she cannot believe it. she hugs him back...' do u really love me shiv?' she cries n asks. 'yes gauri, yes...if thinking about u leaving me kills me inside so much, n one defines dat as love...den yes gauri i love u so much'...'i never knew fully wat love is but now i have many ways of explaining wat love is... gauri'.... hearing shiv say it like dat, gauri hugs him tight...der hug last a long time.

Part 4

he places one of gauri's hand over his shoulder, she holds on to him. he then kisses her for the second time, almost as if he didnt get enough last time. this time gauri is more confident in holding d kiss. shiv looks in her eyes. he den strokes her neck with his lips, making gauri blush more...

Part 5


gauri is all teary. she slowly walks back to her room. she recalls wat her father said. shiv has got up n has changed already. he notices gauri walking into the room all upset. he quickly attends to her. 'wats wrong gauri...why r u crying?' gauri quickly wipes her tears..'oh...kaya came to see me, n hidingly too'....'it makes me upset wen i remember how upset baba is to me'. shiv hugs her n says 'dnt worry everything will sort out soo...i promise.....

Part 6

...shiv continues to comfort gauri as she rests on his shoulder....hearing shiv say dat, gauri leaves all her hopes with shiv, she trusts he will sort things out as he promises. so she smiles at him & tells him she is so lucky to have him. shiv says 'no, im very lucky to have u'.....

...suddenly ipshita interupts...'areh...looks like u both r in love deeply'....den she looks at shiv....shiv & gauri get emabarrased & quickly let go.shiv walks towards d window, pretending to look 4 something.ipshita walks in....gauri looks at ipshita all embarrased....'sory i didnt knock, its just that d door wasnt shut...n....'...gauri interupts 'koyi baath nahi.....(mind my hindi again)....tel me did u need somting?

ipshita says...well i was just wondering...do u no wer anupam is...i mean dadi told me u last saw him...& its just dat i cant find him, & he dsnt answer his phone either....shiv looks at ipshita....gauri...says.....'well the last time i saw him was in the roof...last night, sory i dnt no wer he is...do u shiv?' gauri asks. .... 'no...i saw him last when u last saw him too...why ipshita? is everything ok? ip: yeah dnt worry....im just wondering wer he is, as no1 has seen him ever since last night...anyway i'll leave u to it...sory 4 interupting, she smerks....& den leaves.

gauri tells shiv how dat was so embarrasing.....shiv says...dnt worry..its only ipshita! anyway....she's always everywer...na? they both laugh...gauri says ur right! anyway it would have been worse if it was som1 else.....!

kaya is on her way to uni, she is walking on the roads. suddenly a car pulls by next to her, a familiar car. she wonders who it is as she cannot see who's inside as d windows are tinted! slowly the window goes down...kaya is angry to see it is no1 other then vivan who has stoped her...kaya starts walking off...vivan says 'pls kaya...listen to me 1st, dnt walk off....' kaya stops, but she dsnt look at him. he says 'pls kaya....after today if u never want to hear from me again, or see my sight den i promise i wnt approach u, but pls give me one chance to explain myself 2 u....just once pls'.....

kaya wonders wat h has to say!she tells vivan to tell her quick! he tells her not like dis, he wants her to come with him, he asks her to sit in d car.kaya tels him....she hasnt got time as she has a lecture now......she'll be free after 1 hr...maybe he can meet her another day, but only for 10 mins! vivan says, well kaya its hard to get hold of u....i waited a few days by d uni 2 catch u, but i never knew wen u wer in, so 2day i wnt leave without talking to u.....kaya is gob-smacked he waited 4 her a few days....so feeling slightly bad she tells him to return in 1 hr....she walks off. vivan is very happy kaya will let him say wat he wants to say....

he decides not to leave...he decides to wait around...just incase he misses her wen she comes out! while waiting around, 15 minutes have just gone by...but it feels like already an hour for vivan...he gets frustrated n walks about near kaya's university....suddenly he walks pass a window n notices kaya sitting at the back row, amongst a lot of ppl in the lecture room...he watches her concentrate to wat d lecturer is saying.

kaya suddenly notices vivan...she's like shocked! she tryies to tell him to move out of the site, as the lecturer is very strict n would blow up if he notices him! so much to kaya's shock, vivan starts waving at kaya! she tries to hint to him to GO AWAY....he dsnt understand! so he asks her with hand jesture, 'what? shud i come in?'...kaya's goes red....'no'...she tries to tell him......as vivan dsnt understand wat she is saying, he decides to into d lecture room n sit with kaya. kaya thinks he understood what she said...she relaxes n continues to listen....

suddenly she notices vivan sneaking in from d back, side doors. vivan carefully n slowly enters while d lecturer back is turned....he smiles at kaya as he enters! kaya's eyes grow big....she wonders wat he is doing, is he mad!....

hope u liked it.....😃

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

nice part 👏 👏
oh shiv you are so right...ippy is every where 😆 😆
continue soon rahena 😊 and make it more romantic😳

thats all u want Romance init? 😆 😆....n dat too only of shiv n gauri i bet! but hey we have 2 concentrate on others a little too...otherwise itll become boring!

also regarding shiv n gauri's romance....wel now its started it wnt stop....hopefully...😆.....but bare in mind we have to also no wat d others r up to... too......naughty roopy 😆

Originally posted by: rahena

thats all u want Romance init? 😆 😆....n dat too only of shiv n gauri i bet! but hey we have 2 concentrate on others a little too...otherwise itll become boring!

also regarding shiv n gauri's romance....wel now its started it wnt stop....hopefully...😆.....but bare in mind we have to also no wat d others r up to... too......naughty roopy 😆

all others put me to sleep.🥱..but yah you are right it will be funny if all shiv and gauri did was romance😆

Originally posted by: rahena

thats all u want Romance init? 😆 😆....n dat too only of shiv n gauri i bet! but hey we have 2 concentrate on others a little too...otherwise itll become boring!

also regarding shiv n gauri's romance....wel now its started it wnt stop....hopefully...😆.....but bare in mind we have to also no wat d others r up to... too......naughty roopy 😆

Originally posted by: sagari55

nooooo...... it not boring rahena😊 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.......write how u think?😊😆 i enjoy reading plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont.......👏😊

i will....yaar..but im not saying its boring, but we have to talk about other characters or else it wud get boring....right?😃

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

all others put me to sleep.🥱..but yah you are right it will be funny if all shiv and gauri did was romance😆

shabbash roopy.....im hapy u understood........👏