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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

😊

no i know u have already put so much romance😳 but this ekta isn't doing anything and for the title not sure your wish...i don't mind it being this way or a new title😊

i no.....this ekta hey.......😡...she's so not romantic.....😡...dnt wory guys...ul see plenty of romance here...😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
😃 gr8 update hun plz cntinu sn
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rahena

i no.....this ekta hey.......😡...she's so not romantic.....😡...dnt wory guys...ul see plenty of romance here...😳

i know i feel like yelling in her ear...its been so many months and this couple don't have many romantic scenes....so are u planning to do something about it ...ahhhh she makes me so mad sometimes😡

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

i know i feel like yelling in her ear...its been so many months and this couple don't have many romantic scenes....so are u planning to do something about it ...ahhhh she makes me so mad sometimes😡

so true.. the only romantic scences are the dreams/imagination...lolz anyways.. awesome fanfic di

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

so true.. the only romantic scences are the dreams/imagination...lolz anyways.. awesome fanfic di

thanks 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Zoe89

😃 gr8 update hun plz cntinu sn

i will...n thanks 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

so true.. the only romantic scences are the dreams/imagination...lolz anyways.. awesome fanfic di

yah lolz and don't forget staring...though i don't mind that😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
luv reading ur FF, they are so full of romance..
cann't wait for future updates....
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rahena

Part 6

suddenly she notices vivan sneaking in from d back, side doors. vivan carefully n slowly enters while d lecturer back is turned....he smiles at kaya as he enters! kaya's eyes grow big....she wonders wat he is doing, is he mad!....

Part 7

....she tells him with her hand to 'go away'....vivan dsnt listen...he reaches her laughing under his breath....as he sits down next to her d lecturer turns around...only to notices vivan whispering to kaya! he gets so angry.....he puts vivan under a spotlight, n asks angrily "so young man! do u think u know everything?"...kaya gets worried, as everyone looks back at them both! ...she thinks luckily d lecturer didnt realise dat vivan isnt a student here! ...vivan...gulps....

the lecture asks again...."so since u think u know everything, hence u decided to have conversations in my lecture!...go on, tell us what the answer is to this question!" then he points at the screen where the question is clearly displayed!....vivan looks at the question & wonders what the answer is...kaya whispers under her breath, "i cannot help u, as i dnt know myself...so dnt ask me 4 help!" .... the question relates to 'the human body'.....so much to everyone's suprise..within second's vivan answers the question correctly...

the lecturer lets him go.....they continue to sit in d lecture till d end. the whole time kaya gives vivan angry looks, while thinking he was lucky he knew d answer....vivan smiles away as he looks at kaya...the lecture finishes & so kaya n vivan leave! kaya zooms out angrily....she stops outside...vivan reaches her..."kaya...." she sops him..."how could u do this 2day...if u had gt caught u would have made me loose my place at uni...& then my baba...." kaya hets upset...vivan tries to apolegise..."im sorry kaya...i wnt ever do dat again...i was..." she walks away....vivan gets angry at himself!

as kaya walks away....vivan pulls up beside her with his car.....he runs out n tells kaya he will drop her off...n she had promised to see him after d lecture...kaya without saying a word sits in his car...vivan drives off..taking her somewhere...he reads her face, she looks upset & angry....he says "im sorry kaya.."

kaya shouts at him...."dnt say sorry ever again!... i hate the word!... it has no meaning to me! ... people think if they just say 'sorry'...it sorts everything out...well not for me!"....vivan shuts up...n continues to drive...kaya realises she shouted at him a bit too loud...& maybe she over reacted!...vivan suddenly turns his car around....kaya wonders why he turned around!

kaya also notices he is taking her back to her chawl...(hse)....she feels even worse, she feels she has made vivan upset...vivan stops at a far end of kaya's street, he tell's her "go home, its getting late"...he doesnt look at her...kaya asks calmly "but...but..u said u wanted to ta....." he stops her. "it's not important anymore....just go kaya...pls"...kaya slowly leaves d car n goes home...se watches vivan drive off as she looks back...vivan notices kaya look back in his rear view mirror...he looks upset.

back in the house ipshita is talking to nakila & shaila. she says "whats happening, its been nearly 36hrs no1 knows wer anupam is, im really worried about him". shaila asks "did anyone checke his house?"...daksh interupts..."yes i just came from there, he isnt there, neighbours also said they havnt seen him 4 two days".

ipshita starts worrying..she sits down on d sofa...she starts getting emoitional..as gauri see's her & sits next to her..." what's wrong ipshita? havent u found out where anupam is?"...ipshita nods, no. shaila tells ipshita "why r u so worried?, he must be around." gauri agree's..he will be ok...anyway u come with me....she takes ipshita away in there garden.....

gauri asks ipshita as they walk outside in the warm breeze, "r u ok? u can tell me u know..."...ipshita starts weeping a little...."i dnt know y, i feel him disappearing, is all becos of me" gauri hugs ipshita....." no dnt say that, why do u say that? u didnt do anything ipshita..."....ipshita tells gauri how she feels because his love is one way..she feels he is upset with the whole situation. gauri tells her "im sure anupam understands, dat if u dnt love him the love will be one way"....she explains he is much more mature then that....ipshita says shes scared as she dsnt know what he is up to, wer he is & if anything happens to him she wnt be able to 4giv herself.....

" becos u have started 2 love him...but u dnt no it urself!..." a voice sys from distance. ipshita & gauri look to see who it is. it is no1 other then shiv himself! gauri smiles......"huh...parhaps ipshita...maybe u dnt no urself!"...ipshita looks at shiv n den walks off

gauri n shiv sit by the bench......gauri tells shiv ..."poor girl...she must be going through so much...she blames herself...n now u come n tell her this".....shiv says..."i have noticed her confusion 4 anupam a long time now....ive known her evr since i was little...i no she dsnt realise anything until its too late"...gauri looks at shiv..."pls find anupam....before he does anything stupid...i dnt know why i feel so scared".....shiv holds gauri, n she rest her head by his shoulder..." i love u gauri" he tells her.......

hope u liked it...i'll update another lator 2day.......😉😳

Edited by rahena - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww poor vivan and kaya 😭
rahena i loved the last 2 sentence 😳
haila! where is anupam 😕
can't wait to read the next part 😊

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