FF: karva chaud--- Shivs pyar - Page 19

no. its a combined q, i made it easier 4 u

plz continue it's a great ff i love it 👏 by the way its sooooooooo cute 😳 😳

Originally posted by: sadsunzarsum

plz continue it's a great ff i love it 👏 by the way its sooooooooo cute 😳 😳

thanks but.....d real shivs left! & d real shivs admited he loves ipshita! so is der any point....? i know its a fanfic...but i cnt think ahead anymore...😭

Originally posted by: rahena

noooooooo.....wer did u find dis fanfic? lolzzzzzzz

i was hoping it vanished into d tenth page....😭

😊 u write so well................ plzzzzzzzz cont.......... i just want to know wat u going to write for the next part ... i think ur story r best plzzzz carry on👏

pk...ill do 1 more....but in a bit...gota think...gota read d last part my self lolzzzzz

Originally posted by: rahena

pk...ill do 1 more....but in a bit...gota think...gota read d last part my self lolzzzzz

yay i am so happy😃

im updating....wait

why is d page so wide? 😡

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i wnt update until it sorts! 😡

does any1 no....why dis page is so wide? its anoying me!! 😡


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im waiting 4 it to go to d next page...hence long post...ignore me 😆 😆 😆




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yes it gone now!

PREVIEW:

Part 1

wen he comes out changed he finds gauri entering d room with a plate full of food. he asks 'wats dat?'..'food 4 u...she smiles..i no u havnt eaten yet'..shiv asks 'how do u no'...'i no shiv, i can tel'...den she sits on d bed n places d plate on d table.he den smile...'gauri...im not hungry, but if u insist, i'll eat..but only on one condition, u eat too'... gauri says 'why?'..shiv: 'cos i no u havnt eaten too'....dey both burst out laughing..den shiv sits next to gauri..

Part 2

shaila asks wats wrong?....wats true?....shiv says 'nothing'...gauri gets all ancious. anupam shouts 'shiv fasted today...n only for gauri! '...dada, shaila, mahen, ipshita, palak, daksh n d whole lot are shocked. dey all talk amongst dem selves....'really?..everyone asks..gauri is very shocked, but confused too as shiv keeps on sayin 'no...no'..so while everyone teases shiv she truns around, away..as she believes its not true. shiv notices gauri turning away...he den shouts out 'OK...ITS TRUE!'...gauri turns around 2 see shiv looking at her 'ITS TRUE...I DIDNT EAT 4 GAURI'...he blushes as everyone teases him. gauri blushes too, she smile. 'mere pyar ke umar plays on d background'

Part 3

'but shiv....after me i want 2 see u happy with som1 else....i no u'll be happy...ull find some1'...tears leave her eyes. ' NO GAURI NO!...dnt wish dat!...i dnt want some1 else....der isnt anyone else out der like u...dnt u get it....?...'get wat shiv?...i dnt understand...'......shiv snaps.......'i love u gauri!...i love u.....' '& i cnt see u die one day...n dat 2 becos of me!...u cnt leave me gauri'...n den he hugs her as he cries more. gauri is shocked, its like a dream to her...shiv said he loves her...she cannot believe it. she hugs him back...' do u really love me shiv?' she cries n asks. 'yes gauri, yes...if thinking about u leaving me kills me inside so much, n one defines dat as love...den yes gauri i love u so much'...'i never knew fully wat love is but now i have many ways of explaining wat love is... gauri'.... hearing shiv say it like dat, gauri hugs him tight...der hug last a long time.

Part 4

he places one of gauri's hand over his shoulder, she holds on to him. he then kisses her for the second time, almost as if he didnt get enough last time. this time gauri is more confident in holding d kiss. shiv looks in her eyes. he den strokes her neck with his lips, making gauri blush more...

Part 5


gauri is all teary. she slowly walks back to her room. she recalls wat her father said. shiv has got up n has changed already. he notices gauri walking into the room all upset. he quickly attends to her. 'wats wrong gauri...why r u crying?' gauri quickly wipes her tears..'oh...kaya came to see me, n hidingly too'....'it makes me upset wen i remember how upset baba is to me'. shiv hugs her n says 'dnt worry everything will sort out soo...i promise.....

Part 6

wait im now updating........😃