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Hey guys,
This is my first time making an attempt to write a Fanfic..pls excuse the errors and ur comments will be greatly appreciated.. 😛
My FF would be frm the story ended on Thursday..
Nikhila is on the floor with tablets on her hand when Ippy walks in and screams SHIIVVVV>..Gauri and Shiv run together and see Nikhila on the floor...All are extremely worried about her when Ippy runs to go call the doctor..Doctor comes in and tells SHiv that his mom took overdose on her meds and she needs complete rest and no stress at all..Shiv tells the doctor.."aap ko chinta karne ki kohi zaroorat nahi hai" I will take good care of her.
Shiv gives one gloomy look to his mom and heads out, as he was heading out he remembers he forgot his cell phone in the room> Right when he was about to go inside he hears Ippy and Nikhila talking..Nikhila was saying" aur koi rasta nahi tha mera pass Shiv ko rokne ke liye" I had to stop him before he spoiled my plan and told everythign to Gauri..I just had no other way..Ippy pacifies Nik's and says " dont worry auntie, saab theek ho jaye ga" Shiv has this disgusted look on his face and walks in a real pissed off mood back to his room..
In his room..
Gauri: SHiv baadi maa theek hai?
Shiv: (slams his hand on the door)
Gauri: Kya huwa Shiv
Shiv holds Gauri and says "Gauri mujhe tummai pura saach batana hai"..Gauri looking all concerned tells Shiv..mujhe kuch nahi jaana hai..as long as I have you Shiv that is all that matters to me..
Shiv gets really fustrated and says well I cant live with this anymore..I just dont want any secrets between us..This is driving me nuts..Mujhe har paal ye sachai kai saach jeena partha hai..mujse aab aur nahi hoga..I cant..I cant..I cant Gauri...I LOVE U DAMMIT!!!!!
Gauri looking stunned as if she saw a ghost..no expression on her face..just dead shocked and dazed off looking at shiv..
Shiv: Haan Gauri ye sach hai..mujhe maluum ho gaya hai kai main tumse boht pyar karta hoon..
First I thought I cared for you because you are ek achi insaan and my friend but as days went by I know have realized kai main tumse behaat pyar karta hoon
Gauri is so shocked that she shakes her head a couple of times..
Shiv: kya huwa Gauri?
Gauri:..Main sapna tow nahi dekh rahe hoon???? 😆
Shiv gives his naughty boy smiles and grabs Gauri by the waist and pulls her towards him
with background music playing..mere pyar ki umar....
CONT ON..
Shiv touching Gauri's face and tells her "Gauri u have no idea how much u mean to me" tum mere liye boht kimti ho..main tumhe nahi khona chahta hoon..I want to tell you the remaining raaz because you deserve to know. Gauri tells Shiv..
Shiv tum mujse pyar karte hoon..mere liye ye saab sai badaa sachai hain. Aab mujhe moht bhi aey jai..main haste haste swikar karungi..
Shiv puts his hand on Gauri's mouth.."Gauri please aise baat maat karo"
S and G share a cute starting session for a couple of minutes..Shiv than says Lets go..
Gauri: Hum ka jaa rahe hai..
Main tera paati hoon..maine kaha na..Chalo 😆 😆
next scene in Shiv's Car
Gauri puts SHiv's who let the dogs out CD on 😆 😆
Shiv gives her a real baffled lookd and then takes the Cd and throws it out..Puts the mere pyar ki umar ho CD on..and they share another cute staring session.
They arrive at this really nice mountain place..where the scenery is to die for..really nice romantic place..
(both get out of the car)
Gauri: WOW Shiv..ketna khoobsurat jhaga hai
Shiv: Tumse kaam... 😉
Another staring session going on 😆
Shiv goes Gauri maine tumhe aaj yaha lekar aeya hoon kyon ki mujhe tumhai pura sachai batana hai.
Even though I know you dont want to hear it but I need to tell you in order for me to go on with my life.
Sach ye hai...(we see flashbacks frm the first raaz) and than we see Niks,Ippy and Shiv..Shiv holds Gauri's hand and says "mom chahte hai kai mere shaadi Ipshita sai ho, sirf is liye kyon ki mere maan and Ipshita ki maa atchi dost hain aur unke saari dholat Ipshita ki naam hai"
Gauri looks really sad..
than he continues saying that I never really cared about Shaadi Waadi..but than mom said that after me and Ippy got married all the jaydat will be mine also..I was being really selfish and thinking about money and property. I never loved anyone Gauri except the girl frm the portrait but after meeting you..tumne mujhe pyar karna sikhaya hai..Tumne mujhe ye ehsaas dilaya hai kai pyar saab sai baadi khushi hai..daulat, paysa kuch maynai nahi rakte hai..Now that I know you better yet Love you I cant lose you Gauri..tum sirf Meri ho..sirf meri..aur main tumhe kabhi khona nahi chahta hoon..You have no idea how hard it was for me to see you leave that day..but I had to let you go because tumhari kushi mere liye saab kuch hain..I cant bear to see anythign happening to you.
MAGAR AAJ(with a determined look on his face) ye faisla kiya hain..kain hum dono yeh Jung larenge..apni Karam badlenge..Humari pyaar ki jeet ho gi Gauri..hamari pyaar..
I will fight with time and destiney..we will fight..
He turns around to look at Gauri and he sees tearing flowing down her cheeks..
Gauri: (runs and hugs shiv)
Shiv wipes Gauri's tears and kisses her cheek..
mere pyar ki umar playing in the back
THE END
ok guys..
pls do excuse my mistakes..my first fanfic..please let me know how I did..any improvements I would love to know..I am just a PM away and if u liked it please also do advise so I will write more..Since I got really good positive responce I will be writing more FF's..
thanks for the support 😛
thanks, 😛
Zaynah
This is my first time making an attempt to write a Fanfic..pls excuse the errors and ur comments will be greatly appreciated.. 😛
My FF would be frm the story ended on Thursday..
Nikhila is on the floor with tablets on her hand when Ippy walks in and screams SHIIVVVV>..Gauri and Shiv run together and see Nikhila on the floor...All are extremely worried about her when Ippy runs to go call the doctor..Doctor comes in and tells SHiv that his mom took overdose on her meds and she needs complete rest and no stress at all..Shiv tells the doctor.."aap ko chinta karne ki kohi zaroorat nahi hai" I will take good care of her.
Shiv gives one gloomy look to his mom and heads out, as he was heading out he remembers he forgot his cell phone in the room> Right when he was about to go inside he hears Ippy and Nikhila talking..Nikhila was saying" aur koi rasta nahi tha mera pass Shiv ko rokne ke liye" I had to stop him before he spoiled my plan and told everythign to Gauri..I just had no other way..Ippy pacifies Nik's and says " dont worry auntie, saab theek ho jaye ga" Shiv has this disgusted look on his face and walks in a real pissed off mood back to his room..
In his room..
Gauri: SHiv baadi maa theek hai?
Shiv: (slams his hand on the door)
Gauri: Kya huwa Shiv
Shiv holds Gauri and says "Gauri mujhe tummai pura saach batana hai"..Gauri looking all concerned tells Shiv..mujhe kuch nahi jaana hai..as long as I have you Shiv that is all that matters to me..
Shiv gets really fustrated and says well I cant live with this anymore..I just dont want any secrets between us..This is driving me nuts..Mujhe har paal ye sachai kai saach jeena partha hai..mujse aab aur nahi hoga..I cant..I cant..I cant Gauri...I LOVE U DAMMIT!!!!!
Gauri looking stunned as if she saw a ghost..no expression on her face..just dead shocked and dazed off looking at shiv..
Shiv: Haan Gauri ye sach hai..mujhe maluum ho gaya hai kai main tumse boht pyar karta hoon..
First I thought I cared for you because you are ek achi insaan and my friend but as days went by I know have realized kai main tumse behaat pyar karta hoon
Gauri is so shocked that she shakes her head a couple of times..
Shiv: kya huwa Gauri?
Gauri:..Main sapna tow nahi dekh rahe hoon???? 😆
Shiv gives his naughty boy smiles and grabs Gauri by the waist and pulls her towards him
with background music playing..mere pyar ki umar....
CONT ON..
Shiv touching Gauri's face and tells her "Gauri u have no idea how much u mean to me" tum mere liye boht kimti ho..main tumhe nahi khona chahta hoon..I want to tell you the remaining raaz because you deserve to know. Gauri tells Shiv..
Shiv tum mujse pyar karte hoon..mere liye ye saab sai badaa sachai hain. Aab mujhe moht bhi aey jai..main haste haste swikar karungi..
Shiv puts his hand on Gauri's mouth.."Gauri please aise baat maat karo"
S and G share a cute starting session for a couple of minutes..Shiv than says Lets go..
Gauri: Hum ka jaa rahe hai..
Main tera paati hoon..maine kaha na..Chalo 😆 😆
next scene in Shiv's Car
Gauri puts SHiv's who let the dogs out CD on 😆 😆
Shiv gives her a real baffled lookd and then takes the Cd and throws it out..Puts the mere pyar ki umar ho CD on..and they share another cute staring session.
They arrive at this really nice mountain place..where the scenery is to die for..really nice romantic place..
(both get out of the car)
Gauri: WOW Shiv..ketna khoobsurat jhaga hai
Shiv: Tumse kaam... 😉
Another staring session going on 😆
Shiv goes Gauri maine tumhe aaj yaha lekar aeya hoon kyon ki mujhe tumhai pura sachai batana hai.
Even though I know you dont want to hear it but I need to tell you in order for me to go on with my life.
Sach ye hai...(we see flashbacks frm the first raaz) and than we see Niks,Ippy and Shiv..Shiv holds Gauri's hand and says "mom chahte hai kai mere shaadi Ipshita sai ho, sirf is liye kyon ki mere maan and Ipshita ki maa atchi dost hain aur unke saari dholat Ipshita ki naam hai"
Gauri looks really sad..
than he continues saying that I never really cared about Shaadi Waadi..but than mom said that after me and Ippy got married all the jaydat will be mine also..I was being really selfish and thinking about money and property. I never loved anyone Gauri except the girl frm the portrait but after meeting you..tumne mujhe pyar karna sikhaya hai..Tumne mujhe ye ehsaas dilaya hai kai pyar saab sai baadi khushi hai..daulat, paysa kuch maynai nahi rakte hai..Now that I know you better yet Love you I cant lose you Gauri..tum sirf Meri ho..sirf meri..aur main tumhe kabhi khona nahi chahta hoon..You have no idea how hard it was for me to see you leave that day..but I had to let you go because tumhari kushi mere liye saab kuch hain..I cant bear to see anythign happening to you.
MAGAR AAJ(with a determined look on his face) ye faisla kiya hain..kain hum dono yeh Jung larenge..apni Karam badlenge..Humari pyaar ki jeet ho gi Gauri..hamari pyaar..
I will fight with time and destiney..we will fight..
He turns around to look at Gauri and he sees tearing flowing down her cheeks..
Gauri: (runs and hugs shiv)
Shiv wipes Gauri's tears and kisses her cheek..
mere pyar ki umar playing in the back
THE END
ok guys..
pls do excuse my mistakes..my first fanfic..please let me know how I did..any improvements I would love to know..I am just a PM away and if u liked it please also do advise so I will write more..Since I got really good positive responce I will be writing more FF's..
thanks for the support 😛
thanks, 😛
Zaynah
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