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Posted: 19 years ago
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Lori gayee thi tune kabhi...

Apne munne ke liye..

Kabhi khilaune dikhaakar

Tho chaand ko kabhi..

Par shaayaad ... chaand

Dikhaate dhikaate...

Teri bhi mat gayi thi maari...

Ki teri akal charne gayi ghaas...

Chaand par....

Shukr hai...

Tere munne ki akal..

Aur Buddhi..

Tujh par nahin gayi...

Ki aaj , apne biwi ki ..

haalat ke prati usne

Kuch to samajh dikhaayi...

Aur itna sab kuch hone ..

Ke baad bhi...

Tu bhaashan dene chali gayi...

Apne bete ko...

Besharam kahin ki....

Bhari mehfil mein beizzat hone..

Ke baad... teri ye himmat...

Sharam haya naam ki cheez

Bachi hai ki nahin...

Tujhse kya pooche hum...

Saari duniya gawah hai..

Tu tho besharam nikli...

Arre bekhabar...

Bhagwaan ki likhi..

Se khilvaad karne ki...

Koshish jo tune aaj ki....

Maa Kaali sab hai dekh rahi..

Aur teri tho kamini... Khair nahin....

Aur khabardaaar jo iske baad...

Shiv aur Gauri ki zindagi mein

Taang adaaayi....

Ya Gauri ka naaam apne gande

Zabaaan se bhi li....

Tera munna pyaar ke raaste par..

Chal pada hai...apni manzil ki aur..

Finally...

Aur agar tune ... kuch chaalaki ki...

Tho yakeen maan , is baar tu go gayi....

Kyonki tere pati ne bhi ...

Aaj pehli baar...

Tujhse hai ..

Mooh mod li...

Ab tho waqt aa gaya hai baby...

Jab pay karegi... apne kukarmon ...

Ke liye tu ..Finally...

Kamini ... sadeli...

Tu tho jaanti bhi nahin hai re

Hateli.. ki tune panga kisse hai leli..

Wo Maa Kaali , hai Maa Kaali...

Aur Gauri unki hai... chahithi beti...

Tu tho intezaar kar .. kalmoohi,...

Waqt hai tere barbaadi ka abhi...

Kyonki abhi toh yeh shuruaat hai...

Aaj to bekaar gayi hai.. teri gaayi

Hui , apne bete ke liye... har Lori...

-Sarita..

- Phew ... !!! That felt good... aaah.. dil se bhoj utar gaya.... sorry , guys, mujhe apna gussa Nikhla par ..nikaalni hi tha....😆 No offence meant.... if any words are found offensive, kindly let me know, I shall change immediately...

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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
it was funny.. 😆 well done sareeta... 👏

seriously..im so angry at nikhila...she tunrned out to be evil...i hope shiv doesnt turn out to be like her...

i hate her... 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hehe...I was looking forward to know what u will write today about Nikky since u were pissed off...hehe...

I'm angry at Nikky and Shiv. Mahen was the one who turned out to be nice for the movement... 😆

Well done Sareeta Dii, 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was really funny 😆 aaj iki episode ki bhadaas nikaal di aapne.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: meli

Hehe...I was looking forward to know what u will write today about Nikky since u were pissed off...hehe...

I'm angry at Nikky and Shiv. Mahen was the one who turned out to be nice for the movement... 😆

Well done Sareeta Dii, 👏

even i was very angry at nikky(nice name you kept😆) and shiv....i wasnt expecting this from him...

i actually felt bad seeing him cry...but....😡

and mahen...well...i think this is just for now...later...he'll turn out to be evil too...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow sareeta di. u wrote well in anger too. hindi reading in english was a bit hard but ur poem is serious but still made me laugh. 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆
sari ko itna gussa kamini nikhila par 😆 😆
very funny and well written..sari....why dont u write a kavitha on mahen too.....the man was funny today..he had a very tough job crying today 😆 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: vivaviva

😆
sari ko itna gussa kamini nikhila par 😆 😆
very funny and well written..sari....why dont u write a kavitha on mahen too.....the man was funny today..he had a very tough job crying today 😆 😆

CHaliye Viva ji... aapki icchaa sar aankhon par... abhi pesh kar diye dete hai... 5 minat mein... intezaar kariye ga... theek hai? 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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kya baat hein sareeta.. 👏 👏

aap ke gusse ko dekhkar jhanti thi aap kuch lajawwaab hi likheinge...

kubh maaza aya paarne mein aur kya kubh kahi aap ne..

gauri ma kaali ki laadli hein aur nikhila usse panga nah le to aaccha hoga..

aur shiv pyar ke raste par chal para acha laga sun kar...

well written sareeta and enjoy reading it.. 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😊

Originally posted by: sareeta

CHaliye Viva ji... aapki icchaa sar aankhon par... abhi pesh kar diye dete hai... 5 minat mein... intezaar kariye ga... theek hai? 😆

sareeta di, 'lori' what does it mean😊

Edited by yamulya1 - 19 years ago

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