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Posted: 19 years ago
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Seek Denial...

In fear , her surreal world that shall shatter, seek denial she does, from her beloved, of a truth , she truthfully deserves to know...

Burdened by a guilt , he surrenders, notwithstanding, her unwavering faith, her unquestioning eyes, as she seeks solace in him....

Deny her wish , he shall not, for then , perish he shall in searing pain of guilt...

Set afoot on the path of truth he has, as she seeks denial, for break free he shall now , of the chains of guilt, as she drowns in an ocean of tears....for with her shall he drown , to emerge together... stronger, purer....free...

-Sareeta

-Based on the scene where Gauri asks Shiv to never tell her the secret behind the marriage if any at all...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh sareeta that so touching...

you really leave me speechless not enough words to tell you how much i appreciated these lines..

love this bit..."Set afoot on the path of truth he has, as she seeks denial, for break free he shall now , of the chains of guilt, as she drowns in an ocean of tears....for with her shall he drown , to emerge together... stronger, purer....free"

very well written... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: 3 angels

oh sareeta that so touching...


love this bit..."Set afoot on the path of truth he has, as she seeks denial, for break free he shall now , of the chains of guilt, as she drowns in an ocean of tears....for with her shall he drown , to emerge together... stronger, purer....free"

awesome sweety😃, sooooo touching and soooo deep😳 , even i love this part very much.........well-done janu👏👏👏!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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its very touching sareeta di
😊
DJKM thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that woz rly deep 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwo sareeta too good
thanks 4 sharing dis wid us
awesome
👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Oh Sareeta, it's too beautiful... 👏 👏 👏 I absolutely love it...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: 3 angels

oh sareeta that so touching...

you really leave me speechless not enough words to tell you how much i appreciated these lines..

love this bit..."Set afoot on the path of truth he has, as she seeks denial, for break free he shall now , of the chains of guilt, as she drowns in an ocean of tears....for with her shall he drown , to emerge together... stronger, purer....free"

very well written... 👏 👏 👏

Thank you sooooooooo much Khyaatee!!! I am so glad you liked it!!! I found the scene very touching too and the scene jus suddenly replayed in my mind, when I was at work and I jus penned these lines down impromptu! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: vcool

awesome sweety😃, sooooo touching and soooo deep😳 , even i love this part very much.........well-done janu👏👏👏!

Thank you so much Reem! Am so glad you liked the post and related to it!! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash9

its very touching sareeta di
😊

Thank you soooooooooo much Ashu!! 😊

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