(FF)Agni Parikhsha~(UPDATED) Part6=Page14 - Page 3

Originally posted by: metoubearscrazy

lol its not wot ur finkin! 😆😆😆

hey guys🤗

many of you wanted me to continue so i have written a part 2! hope u will like this one as well😃

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PART TWO

Shiv and Gauri go into the hotel to book 2 rooms. Shiv goes to the reception while Gauri waits in the sitting area nearby. Unfortunately, the manager tells Shiv that there are no rooms left, all rooms have been booked. Shiv is disappointed and goes and tells Gauri this. They go back to the car and decide to drive further to find another hotel but no rooms are available anywhere because of a special festival coming up. They call up home and then decide they will jus spend the night in the car.

They wake up the next morning and Gauri realises she is on Shiv's shoulder. She says sorry to and they kind of have a staring moment. Shiv is drving off now and on the way Gauri spots a mandir. She insists on going their but Shiv says he will come but stand outside because he doesn't really believe in God. Gauri says ok and goes inside. In her mind she says "maa, mudje shiv bahut pasand hain, pahele mudje nahi laga tha ki main haan boloongi par ab Shiv ko ek din jaan ke main unse shaadi karna chahati hoon". She bows her head and turns around and smiles at Shiv.

In the car, Shiv says whats the point of going to the madir. Gauri says its just a matter of belief ~ its ones own decision. Shiv just shrugs and says ok. He asks her what she wished for but she says she'll only tell him once it comes true.

A few hours later they reach home where everyone is waiting for them. Shiv and Gauri go and freshen up and then everyone sits down to ask them about their decision. Gauri shyly replies "haan, main shiv se shaadi karne ke liye tayaar hoon". Alok asks Shiv and he says "Main Gauri se shaadi karne ke liye tayaar nahi hoon"

Everyone is shocked...😲😲😲

Hope you guys liked part 2...plz leave you honest replies...if you think i am going wrong somewhere then plz point it out as i would love to improve...

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Originally posted by: ash9

sure...av posted...hope u like😃

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then y dnt u tell us hw it goes...😊

Originally posted by: sughra2

Oh my god...meutou jaan...its gr8 yaar....its reall ysuperb ...loved it like hell.....its gr8..wenevr u update thenext part do tell me...and shiv yaar tuum meutou ke ff mei bhi nahi sudhrey...meri gauri ko yahaa bhi thukraa rahey ho 😆 😆 😆 ..and gaurii tum bhi nahi sudhriii...thorha sa ego hna chaahiye tha naa..kahna chaahiye tha i need time ya kuch aisa...itnii jaldi nahi manatey yaar...chalo theek tumhaari mzarzii par meutou jaan samjhaao in dono ko 😆 ...okay ab bas kartii hoo...it's simply superb yaar!!
take care

bye!!

cheers!!
sughra 😉

aawww....sughra, thanku sooooooooooooo much, ur post means so much to me, thanku for ur comments...ok here i av to say thx no matta wot u say😆 i will try and make gauri more bold, dw😳...am tryin to fink f a twist tho😆

thx😃

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luv metoubearscrazy😊

Originally posted by: metoubearscrazy

aawww....sughra, thanku sooooooooooooo much, ur post means so much to me, thanku for ur comments...ok here i av to say thx no matta wot u say😆 i will try and make gauri more bold, dw😳...am tryin to fink f a twist tho😆

thx😃

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luv metoubearscrazy😊

chalo kabhi kabhi thnxx aur sorry chalta hai..andyeah i can see u changing ur FF's name from vivah to agni parikhshaa...aakhir problem kii hai jaan!!!

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Originally posted by: sughra2

chalo kabhi kabhi thnxx aur sorry chalta hai..andyeah i can see u changing ur FF's name from vivah to agni parikhshaa...aakhir problem kii hai jaan!!!

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was tryin to fink of a nice name...and realised sum1 also had ff called vivah so i changed it😃 yas ofcoucrse..kabhi kabhi thx aur sorry chlta hai jaise abhi!

thxxxxxxxxxx🤗🤗🤗

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Originally posted by: metoubearscrazy

was tryin to fink of a nice name...and realised sum1 also had ff called vivah so i changed it😃 yas ofcoucrse..kabhi kabhi thx aur sorry chlta hai jaise abhi!

thxxxxxxxxxx🤗🤗🤗

luv metoubearscrazy😊

oh acha..par yeh bhi acha hai...laikin madam kabhi kabhi sorry aur thnxx chaltahai baar baar nahi..samjhi😆😆..acha ab chalti hoo..thori si parhaayikarnihai..aur madam tumhaarey exams khatam ho gaye kya?