FF 'I HATE U BUT I LUV U' THE END/PG147 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
plsssssssssss continue it is so guuuuuuuudddd 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
come on gauri all he best 😃 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks All!! 😉

Recap : Gauri had Meet Anjali for coffee and had to make the decision was she going to fight for Shiv or let his past rule…..Something in this relationship has to change.

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Part 7
"Mrs Kapoor we are organising a charity show for the Tsunami victims and would like your help!" the ladies from the Indian women right committee plead with Nikhila.
N: What can I do for you ladies?
"Well we heard Gauri sing at Shiv's birthday party last week and need her help. You see the singer who was going to help us has fallen ill and we need a replacement for the show which is only a month away."
N: Ohh…Gauri!!
Gauri enter the living room with tea for the ladies.
N: beta come here. Please!
The ladys informed Gauri of the predicament they were in.
N: Gauri this will be good for you… beta
Dadi and Shyla all agree that Gauri should help out in the charity show.
G: Since the family is happy for me to perform and with their ashiward I will help you.
Gauri agreed to sing in the charity event.

Gauri stood under the showerhead and decided that this may be what she need. She needed to become more that Mrs Gauri Shiv Kapoor she needed to discover herself.

It had been a very hot day and the cool water running down her body helped her to relax.

Shiv walked into the bedroom and took of his blazer and tie. The bathroom door was wide open. He could hear her singing softly to herself. Her voice had drawn him towards the bathroom door. His feet did not stop as he entered the bathroom. He saw her silhouette figure behind the shower curtain. There was a slight little gap in the curtain. He was captivated by the site of her and could not move.

Gauri's eyes were closed; she ran her hands gentle though her hair, the shampoo bubbles gentle fell upon her face. Shiv watched her move her face towards the water. Gauri's moved her hands onto her face and then proceed down her body washing away the soapy bubbles to the rhythm of her soft voice. The water flowed down her hair touching every part of her face, her lips quivered as the cool water ran down her body. She was an aware that her elbow had moved the shower curtain a little more and she was exposed to him. He observed how she moved her hands gentle all over her body washing away the soap . The bare site of her aroused feeling in Shiv, which he had never, knew existed before. Shiv was unable to move and he had a strong desire to join her. His heart was beating so loud that he felt the whole world could hear it, his mouth was dry and eyes fixed on her. Gauri stopped singing and turned off the water as she opened her eyes. She caught sight of him standing by the door though the gap in the curtain. Their eyes meet and she could feel his eyes explore every part of her body; her heart was beating so fast as she anticipating what he would do next. Gauri lowered her eyes and blushed in embracement as she grabbed the towel.
Shiv immediately turned round "Can't you shut the dame door" he shouted angrily and slammed the door on his way-out.
Gauri wonder how long had he been standing there?

Gauri lay in her bed, as she turned around to see Shiv standing by the window. Neither of them spoken to each other since the bathroom incident. Gauri did not know what to say and had avoided him all evening she blushed every time she thought of him standing in the bathroom. She smiled to herself and closed her eyes. Was this what Anjali didi was talking about?

Shiv turned around and the moonlight from the window shone into the room. As he walked towards his bed his feet stopped were she lay on the floor and his eye fell upon her. The moonlight made her look more beautiful. Why was he wanted to be near her? Why does she stay near me? I have made myself very clear but it's like whatever I say or do does not affect her in anyway. Why is she like this?
Shiv cursed himself as he got into his bed.
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Shall i carry on?


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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
omg!!!! naughty boy shiv!!! but then i guess u can't blame the guy....
try as he might, she will be forever on his mind ... for she is like the air he breathes - can't do without it !!!!! in his case anyways

thnx pls cont...soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
nice work kam 👏 plz continue ASAP 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
nice part 😉 ...do continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
dat was just soooooooooooo romantic n awesome!

do cont. asap!!!

im dieing 2 c the next part!

👏

xxx hinal xxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
That was OMG!!! Shiv transfixed by the sight of Gauri in the shower... Now try as he might, he's never gonna be able to erase that picture... 😃 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
of course u should continue OMG ITS TOOOOO GOOD!! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
the bathroom scene was really very funny and hot 😳

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