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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!!!hunny Love the story 👏 It's brilliant.Can't wait 2 read the next part 👏 👏 👏 WOW 👏!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!wow!! wow!!...hun...i m speechless 😳 😳 😳 ... 👏

tht was mindblowing...i luved both of their entry.... 😃 😛

omg...woooo....our poor gauri is now in trouble 😉 ...lol 😆 ...wat will happen to her 😳 ...hehe... 😛

i wonder wat shiv will do 😉 ....can't wait for the next part hun 😛 ...plzzz continue soon...HURRY!!! 😳 😳

luv,

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for ur wonderful comments really encouragin but ya here is the next part i hope u all like it 😊

Part 2

shiv is shocked to see gauri was the girl that took his room! he runs after but cant find her...n keeps searchin...n suddenly a tap on his shoulder n its none other than gauri..
gauri- hey i dropped my braclet u seen it anywhere?
shiv- ya i stole it!! ( even though he didnt)
gauri- wat?
shiv- y r u shocked i stole it like u stole my room from my friend
gauri remebers...n thinks oh no...he is gonna kill me maybe i should...got it
gauri- woh there some elderly ppl i took it for them n that n suddenly a blast sound is heard everyone panics n starts to run n push runnin for the exit as there is a fire...shiv gets pushed n falls...n gauri runs but comes bak to help shiv...holds his hand to get him up n both run towards the exit...suddenly another blast peopl panic more...n gauri n shiv loose grip n gauri falls...n hurts her knee which is bleedin...shiv is at the door n turns around n sees no gauri...n turns n sees a yellow dress on the floor...runs bak fightin the crowd n sees her on the floor...
shiv gives her his hand- come get up
gauri- i cant my knee
no choice shiv picks up gauri n moves towards the exit...n there half the hotel on fire n ambulance firefigters police everyone was outside...shiv takes gauri to the nurse helping everyone...gauri holds shiv's hand...cuz it hurts
shiv- nurse plz its hurtin her
nurse- looks at shiv n nods...n gives him gauri's anklet which had almost fallen without thinkin shiv puts it in his pocket...
finally gauri knee is fine...n she has stopped cryin its lightly raining...n gauri looks at shiv..
gauri- thank u
shiv- dont mention it...if u hadnt helped me i wouldnt have been able to help u
both suddnely look up n see the full moon
gauri- wow this jus make this night so much more speaical n laughs
shiv- oh ya i will remeber this forever
gauri- sorry for stealin ur room but look i didnt get it either
shiv- i guess i can forgive u...but if u hadnt taken it i might of been dead...n smiles
gauri- u know sometimes it happens for the best...
shiv- too bad u know there is a really nice beach near here but i didnt find thats y i left to see it..cuz its really beautiful
gauri- o u mean the one near the high way when i was comin here i saw it
shiv suprised really- u think u could take me there
gauri- sure but i cant walk...
shiv- ya thats a problem how far is it
gauri- 7mins away i think
shiv- 7 ok...goes up to gauri n picks her up- ok madam lead the way

shiv carrys gauri all the way smiling n finally they reach the beach....
gauri- here u r...isnt it beautiful
shiv- yup...n look at the moon..so beauitful u know the reason i came here was a couple years ago we came here but i was sick n couldnt come everyone said it was beautiful n i felt really left out
gauri- but that was years ago wats the point now
shiv- i dont know n smiles...
both sit there for some time when shiv sees a little bit of blood on her head....takes out his romal...which has an S on it n wipes it off n gives it to her
shiv- i want it bak n picks her up n head bak the place was still crowded no fire but suddenly shiv relaizes his friends must be lookin for him
shiv- i'll be right bak has i need to find my friends
gauri is sittin when her driver comes n tells her the car is fixed n the ways r free...she looks around for shiv n calls the nurse to give him this note...which she quickly
writes

shiv looks around n sees all his friends r alright all were lookin for him too...
karan- come on we found a ride to go bak
shiv tells them to wait n goes bak to sees gauri but she is gone the nurse comes n gives him the note which says
hey meri ajnabee thanks for the wonderful time n i shall forget this night!!


shiv smiles n remebers her never asked her name even though he his frand told him
he goes up to his frand- Neel wat was that girl's name again that took out room keeps???
Neel- o sorry all this fire n stuff i totally forgot...sorry y?
shiv doesnt answer n sighs* puts his hand in his pocket n finds the anklet n this oh on!! looks at it n sees a G..
shiv- well ur gonna be with me for awhile till i find ur madam...
gauri is drivin n talkin to her driver tellin her about shiv n reliazes she never asked his name!! she sees his romal n sees the S n thinks oh no wat an idot i am...n thinks o well next time i guess!

hope u all enjoyed it i'll update soon! 😊

Edited by lil_isha15 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14

hey aisha really nice i liked the part cnt wait for the next update i guess im the first one to reply good job👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
awesome part 👏 👏 ..i luved it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwww......absolutely brilliant hun 👏 ...i luv the way u handled the whole situation in ur FF 😃 ....mindblowing...i trully have no words to describe it....i simply loved it 😳 ....eagerly waiting to read the next part...infact can't wait!! 😳 😳 😳 ...i wonder how they will meet once again 😉 😛 ....awwwwwww....luved the whole romal n anklet situation u added in ur ff...too kuteeee 😳 😛 .....once again fabulous part dear!!!! 👏 👏 👏

lotz of luv 🤗

LiSa
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
wow isha!! AMAZING part 👏 👏

awww...shiv's got her anklet 😳

can't wait for the next part 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hunnnii..

the part was marvellous!!

fantastic..!!

please do continue!!

😳 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks so much guys!!! i'll contiue soon! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
sorry for the delay guys! finally my break has started so it be soon! 😊

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