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Posted: 18 years ago
Ur story is really getting interesting.All da best 4 ur exams 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey everyone here is the update...n sorries i wont be able to update till after my exams...like i said a billion times sorry for repeatin myself...n ya here i go

Part 10
Gauri wakes up...n suddenly...sees a new bed besides her n thinks this was a private room..but o well this might of been an emerency..n suddenly the person turns around n gauri is shocked....its shiv...shiv wakes up n sees her shocked..n winks at her ...his hand has a bandage on it
gauri-omg how did this happen how did u end up here? omg r u ok?
shiv- calm down i am jus fakin it...i refused to go home last night..n he docs were gettin mad..as i was makin too much noise n i got kicked out n like so i pretended to get injuried n came here n had it my way
gauri- ur crazy shiv! simply mad...u pretended to be injury jus so u could spend time with me? but i am leavin today...
shiv- so will i...this hospital makes mircales happen!! n leaves to change n the nurse comes
nurse asks gauri- where the crazy patient?
gauri doesnt understand- shiv? shiv kapoor?
nurse- yes yes omg..that man is crazy...first he refuses to leave..n then he fights with the docs for not lookin after u...n so the docs kick him out n suddenly an hour later he is at the hosiptal injuried..n comes says he wont stay in another room but this one...even though we told this was private he refuse to get treated i tell u ur husband is crazy
gauri laughs - he's not my...n Kaya comes
kaya- DI!! r u ok? omg how did this happen?
gauri clams her down...n tells her everything that happened n shiv comes...
gauri-shiv this is my lil sister kaya...kaya this is shiv a gud frand
kaya- but i thought u said u were the only with the accident how did he end up here?
gauri- smiles..he is jus did...but ya can u do me a favour n get some clothes from home so i can change n then leave
kaya - ok...u take care ok
kaya is in gauri's room n gettin gauri's things..n when suddenly she sees gauri;s laptop...n reads something..n is shocked n is very angry n thinks - omg she is at it again...i wont let her do this...how can she? n prints the email... Kaya storms into gauri's hospital's room...n gauri is a wake n shocked...n kaya yells..
kaya- how dare u do this again? like didnt u learn anything from the first time?
gauri confused- wat did i do?
kaya- shut up u know wat i am talkin about...n u know wat might happen if u keep this up? n stop playin all inoccent! n throws the papers on her face
gauri gets up n sighs- o kaya...i am not doin anything...well not anymore..trust me n puts her hand on her shoulder...n this is all old...like they must be playin a prank
kaya takes her hand off...- i did trust u...but belivie me n they better be playin a prank...n i wont let u do this if ur planning anything rememeber that..but no more...i swear ...n suddenly shiv comes n kaya stops
shiv looks at there faces- y r both of u so serious for?
gauri smiles- nothing kaya was jus worried about my health thats all...
shiv smiles dont worry ur di will be fine...u go home n relax i am here to take care of her dont worry...
kaya forces an smile n says- ok...thanks...di i go talk to the doc to see when u can go home...n shiv u leave soon too ok
shiv smiles- is ur sister always this serious
gauri - no she is jus worried about my health thats all...n i think i might be discharged today so u wont have to leave ur work n visit me here all the time....n smiles
n kaya comes in- shiv u can go now...i'll take di home n u can go home too n takes gauri's bag...n grabs gauri by the arm...n starts to take her away.. shiv jus stares at gauri leavin n slips on paper. on the floor..n thinks its gauri's n picks it up n looks at it..................

heheheheh for all that read this have to take a guess at wat y kaya might be mad... 😆 all i can say is something unexpected...ok hope u all liked it... 😊 n again thanks for all ur comments

cheers

isha
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Posted: 18 years ago
whts going on?? y is kaya mad at gauri???
shiv is soo cute 😆 😆 😆 he got into the room at the end 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ash9

whts going on?? y is kaya mad at gauri???
shiv is soo cute 😆 😆 😆 he got into the room at the end 😆 😆

wats goin on u ask...well thats wat u gotta guess or wait for 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
oh my gawd its full of suspence 😕
neways it wasgud cont. soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
its vv good
but y this suspense
plzz continue soon!!!!!
plzzzzzzzz 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part 👏 👏
shiv is so cute 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Whatz the raaaazzzzzz ??plzz tell soooon ,gr part .
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh my goddddddd dont stop pleaseeeeeeeeeeee faster continue 😭 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks everyone for wonderful comments but none of u took a guess at the raaz but o well ya i have tons of studyin but thought i should take 5mins out to thank u all for understandin n readin my fanfic 😊


tons of love take care
isha 😊

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