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Posted: 18 years ago

I Don't Care Shiv

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Kaya:if you still don't believe us than go and look at Shiv's hand ous per tumhara naam likha hai he loves you Gauri

Shiv crying and remembering Gauri
Chaha hai tujh ko
chahoun ga har pal
murr k bhi dil sy
yeh pyar na ho ga kum

Dua

Edited by Dua4U - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg continue soon!! plzzzz we are dying!
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Posted: 18 years ago
pls write the next part.... and start a new ff also pleaseeeeeee 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanx 4 the preview
write the nxt part soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwww...........pppllllzzzzzzzzz right tha next part.............m dying............... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guys no more wait I am just going to write the next part

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Posted: 18 years ago

I Don't Care Shiv
Recap:S:listen Gauri I don't want you to go for lunch with Ejaz

G:kyun?Shiv app kyun meri zindagi kharab kerna chahtain hain.main ajj Ejaz k sath lunch per zarour jaoon gee

S:let's see k tum lunch per kaisy jatee ho...........

Part 15 and Last Part

After 10 minutes
Gauri was thinking about what ever Shiv had said to her when Kaya came

K:kiya souch rahee ho Shiv k bary main?

G:I don't have that much time to think about Shiv

K:jhoothee

G:actually you are my friend Kaya so I can tell you Shiv ney mujhe phone kiya tha and he asked me not to go out with Ejaz

K:tu ess main etna perashan hony kee kiya baat hai I also think that you shouldn't go out with Ejaz

G:per kyun who the hell is Shiv

K:he loves you Gauri

G:I don't believe all this aur main ajj lunch per zarour jaoon gee

K:fine go ahead

Afternoon
Ejaz came to pick Gauri for lunch they came to a resturant and Ejaz parked his car Gauri was about to get out of the car when Shiv came and he held Gauri's hand really tightly he was soo mad

S:I told you not to come for lunch with Ejaz fer kyun aee?ub chalo chup ker k meri car main betho

E:listen Shiv

S:shut up you.... I am not talking to you

E:tum Gauri ka hath chouru

S:main Gauri ka hath pakroun ya chouroun it's not your problem

G:but yeh meri problem hai kyun aap ney mera hath pakra hai leave me

S:listen Gauri I don't want to creat any scene over here so get in the car

G:nahiii main app k sath nahi jaoon gee

Shiv pushed her into the car and they came to Shiv's house

Shiv's House
S:chalo get out of the car

G:nahi I want to go back

S:go back where Ejaz k pass?

G:haan main Ejaz k pass jaoon ya fer kaheen that shouldn't bother you

Shiv held her in his arms and brought her inside of the house

G:leave me Shiv

Gauri was sitting on a bed now.Shiv didn't said anything he just locked the door and went outside

After 2 hours

Shiv came back and he took a shower than he went to Gauri's room holding a tray which had butter chicken and naan.Gauri was sitting in the same position and she was crying

S:chalo khana kha lou and please how many times do I have to tell you that I can't see tears in your eyes

G:mujhe wapis jana hai

S:2 hours ho gaye abhi tuk tumhara damag theekh nahi howa

Gauri was crying like hell

S:ok fine pehle khana khao fer main tum ko wapis hostel chour aoon ga

G:no I don't want to eat anything

S:yeh kaho na k mere hath sy khana chahtee ho ok here mai khila deta hoon tum ko khana ub khush

After 30 minutes

Hostel

K:dekha Shiv loves you that's why he can't see you with anyone else

G:please Kaya let me sleep

Next Day

Ipshita came to meet Gauri and Kaya

I:hey Gauri and Kaya how are you guys

K:main theekh hoon app sunaoo

G:haan tum yahan kaisy

I:Gauri I am here to clear all the misunderstandings between you and Shiv he doesn't love me he loves you main tu Shashank sy pyar kerty hoon ess hee liye main Amercia gaee thee to meet him and now we are getting married next week and I want you to get married with Shiv

G:whatttt tum aur Shashank tu Shiv....

K:haan Shiv loves you

I:ya Gauri Kaya is right

Kaya:if you still don't believe us than go and look at Shiv's hand ous per tumhara naam likha hai he loves you Gauri

Shiv's House

Shiv was crying and remembering Gauri
Chaha hai tujh ko
chahoun ga har pal
murr k bhi dil sy
yeh pyar na ho ga kum

After 1 hour

Shiv was sitting when someone knocked the door

S:who is it??

G:main hoon Shiv

S:ohh come on in

G:thanks

S:aoo bethou kiya lou gee coffee ya fer tea

G:ya fer tum??

S:whattt

G:Shiv tumhare hath per kiya howa hai

S:yeh kuch nahi woh jo accident howa tha woh hee hai

G:can I see

S:kyunnn you can't

Gauri got up from the couch and went towards Shiv.she was holding Shiv's arm

S:kiya hai Gauri I said it's nothing

G:than let me see

Gauri untied the bandage and she saw her name GAURI written on Shiv's arm a tear dropped from her eye on Shiv's arm

S:main ney kaha tha na k

G:k tum meri ankhoun main ansoo nahi dekh sakty aur khas ker woh ansoo jo k tumharee wajah sy hoon

S:haan

G:why do you love me so much aur kub sy?

S:hmmm I don't know but I really love you aur yeh gher bhi main ney tumhare aur apney liye liya tha but when I went to bring you back home you said that you don't want to come in this house.mujhe buhut bura laga aur fer tumhara Ejaz sy batain kerna ous k sath dance kerna that was way too much.I couldn't stand with all that.Ejaz is not a good guy ous kee already shadi ho chukee hai aur waisy bhi main tumhe kissi aur ka hoty hoye nahi dekh sakta

G:and what about me jub app mujhe dukh dety thy jub bhi main app ko Ipshita k sath dekhti mujhe buhut dukh hota but I kept quite.

Shiv was holding her hands

S:sooo that means you also love me

G:nooo I didn't said that

S:ok fer main Ipshita sy shadi ker laita hoon

Shiv was in a mood of bothering Gauri

G:don't you dare even think about it I will kill you

S:but tum tu mujh sy pyar hee nahi kerty

G:I dooooo damn it

S:got you

G:haan Shiv I love you more than anything

S:I love you too

and they hug each other

After 1 Week

Ipshita,Shashank,Gauri and Shiv's Mehandi

Gauri and Ipshita were wearing a yellow and green salwar kameez while Shashank was wearing White kurta salwar.Shiv was wearing a black kurta salwar.

Kaya,Palak and Maya were also there they were putting mehandi on Gauri and Ipshita's hand.they wrote S on Ipshita and Gauri's hand.

K:see Gauri I was right k tumhara hubby tumhe buhut pyar kary ga

S:haan yeh tu hai main Gauri sy buhut pyar kerta hoon ess hee liye juldi batao k yarr aur kitny daer lagy gee

G:shut up Shiv yeh rasmain tu shadi ko aur bhi mazaye ka banatee hai

S:mujhe nahi pata I can't live without you anymore I am just scared

G:k kaheen Ejaz mujh ly na jaye

S:shut up Gauri and Shiv just left

Next Day

Gauri and Ipshita were looking so preety and thier dulhas were also looking good

they were done with all the rituals.Ipshita and Shashank left in a car

while Shiv held Gauri in his arms and they also left.he was singing this song

Janam dekh lou

mitt gaye doriyan

main yahan hoon

yahan hoon

Edited by Dua4U - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok guys that's it for now this was the last part I hope that you guys will like it I had lots of things to write but than it was going to be really long so I edited it.do tell me if you guys want me to start another ff I will be waiting for your replys take care

Dua
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: racho8

awww im waitingggggggg

done 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

go ahead i m waiting 😊 😛 😉

no more waiting I am done go ahead and readi it😉

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