I Don't Care Shiv(ff)last part pg55 - Page 30

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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks alot guys I am really happy that you all liked it I will be writing the next part tommorow till than you all take care and keep on reading

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey, ur fan fic is amaaaaazing, HOWEVER if you could write in english more because my hindi's not very good, i would REALLY REALLY appreciate it. thanks
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guys I am sorry I couldn't write the next part yesterday I was a bit busy but I am going to write the next part today and it could be the last part(not sure) so keep on reading and take care

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Posted: 18 years ago

I Don't Care Shiv

Recap:nurse was about to go with her stuff when she bumpes into Gauri and Gauri got scared she coudln't control herself she fell on Shiv again staring into each others eyes finally Gauri decided to get up she got up but.....

Part 14

Gauri was pulled back beacuse her dupatta got stuck in Shiv's chain so now she was in the same position.

G:Shiv mera duppata

S:haan tu

G:woh... app kee chain main stuck

S:ohh sorry Gauri but I can't take it out because you know my hand.....

G:ya but main...woh..kaisy...

S:kiya howa Gauri kahan khou gaee hou

G:haan kaheen nahi

Shiv thinking to himself(ajj tu God mera khoob sath dey rahain hain one more chance awww thanks God)

Gauri was taking her duppata out which was stuck in Shiv's chain.Shiv was just looking at her.he wanted to tell her everything but than he thought that may be Gauri would get mad at him so he decided not to tell her anything till he gets well.Shiv was still looking at her.

G:Shiv main jaoon

S:haan... kiya tum etny juldi ja rahee ho?

G:kiya matlab?

S:hmmmm kuch nahi jaoo bye

After 1 week

Shiv was fine now.Gauri and Kaya went back to thier hostel.Life was going really fast and busy.

Hostel

G:yarr Kaya tum ney woh Saree kaun sy store sy lee thee I really liked it so,I was thinking k kissi din wahan chalain gaye shopping k liye

Kaya was working so she didn't realize but she told Gauri the truth about saree

K:woh saree woh tu Shiv ney buy kee tumhare liye he thought k woh saree tum per buhut achee lagy gee and he was right tum kitini achee lug rahee thee hain na...........................

Kaya looked at Gauri who was looking really mad and confused than Kaya realized about the mistake she had done

G:kiya kaha tum ney

K:hmmm main ney kiya kaha?kuch bhi tu nahi

G:listen Kaya I am not in a mood so tell me the truth

K:actually Gauri Shiv bought that saree for you and he asked me to give you because he didn't want you to know.

G:kyun I mean why did he gave me that saree aur woh kyun nahi chahta tha k mujhe pata chalaye ohhhhh I got it ous ney mujhe per taras kha k mere liye saree buy kee laqeen woh nahi chahta tha k ,mujhe pata chalaye because if I will get the saree than offcourse I will say thanks to him aur ager Ipshita ko pata chal gaya tu.Shiv is very smart

K:shut up Gauri buhut ho gaya bund karo yeh bukwas he loves you ess hee liye woh yeh sub kuch kerta hai

G:you shut up Kaya are you mad or what kiya ess pori duniya main ous ko main hee pasand ayee hoon.woh tu mujhe khuwab main bhi pyar na karey he doesn't love me he loves Ipshita aur jub sy woh America gayee hai he is missing her soo much.

K:ok I told you the truth the rest is on you

G:ok listen let's go somewhere mera dil ker raha hai kaheen jany ko

K:ok chal

Subway

Kaya and Gauri came to subway and they were having fun when Gauri saw Ejaz

E:hey girls what's up

G:hi Ejaz nothing much tum yahan kaisy

K:jahan Gauri ho Ejaz tu wahan a hee jaty hain

Kaya didn't liked it.

E:well Kaya is right I think.hey Gauri app kal mere sath Lunch per chalo gee?please

K:nahi I think kal tu hum busy hain I am not sure kyun Gauri

G:haan

E:pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee

G:okkk main chaloun gee app k sath dinner per

Next Day

Gauri got a call from Ipshita

I:hey Gauri

G:hi tum tu America gaee thee na

I:ya I came back yesterday actually Kaya told me k tum Ejaz k sath dinner per ja rahee ho

G:haan tu

I:please don't go he is not a good guy he already..

G:I don't want to talk about it this is my life kiya main ney kabhi tumhe aur Shiv ko kuch kaha hai nahi na

I:but Gauri Shiv

G:bye

After 30 minutes

Gauri got a call from Shiv

G:hello

S:hi Gauri how are you

G:kyun ajj app ko meri yadd kaisy a gaee

S:listen Gauri I don't want you to go for lunch with Ejaz

G:kyun?Shiv app kyun meri zindagi kharab kerna chahtain hain.main ajj Ejaz k sath lunch per zarour jaoon gee

S:let's see k tum lunch per kaisy jatee ho...........

Dua

Edited by Dua4U - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: racho8

last?????...noooooooo

well this is not the last part sooo smile😃 and keep on reading but next part is going to be the last part😭 I think

Dua

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Posted: 18 years ago
ok guys here is the next part do tell me how it was and Merry Christmas to all of you.

Dua
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
excellent
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
soooooooooooooooooo good 👏👏👏but i m sad 2 man😭😭 😭i dont want this 2 b end but anyways cont soon plz n if u can then plz make it longer na coz i really like ur ff n the way u rite it.
Edited by terename - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
ur storii is great gurll plss keep it goin i really wanna noe wat happens nextt ehhh 👏

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