I Don't Care Shiv(ff)last part pg55 - Page 26

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Posted: 18 years ago
aww poor shiv is getting jealous!!! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks alot guys I am just going to write the next part

Duaa
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Posted: 18 years ago

I Don't Care Shiv
Recap:Gauri was so tired she washed her hands and she came to the kitchen and she was making coffee for herself when she turned around to get milk out of fridge somebody was standing right behind her she got scared and before she could screamed that person puts the hand on her mouth..

Part 12

Gauri turned around and it was Shiv they keep looking at each other for 5 minutes and than Shiv starts walking towords Gauri

G:Shiv app yahan kiya kur rahy hou

S:kyun tumhe kiya kissi aur ka intezar tha

G:haan tha tu

Shiv keeps walking towords Gauri and Gauri was moving backwords

G:dekho Shiv I think k app housh main nahi hain

S:nahi Gauri ub hee tu main housh main aya hoon

G:I will scream

S:go ahead but main ajj yahan jo kuch kehny aya hoon woh kahe bina nahi jaoon ga

G:kiya?

S:Gauri main yeh pouchna chahta hoon k kiya

G:kiya

S:kiya tum mere...

G:tumhare liya kiya

S:mere liye ek cup coffee ka bana sakty ho

Gauri was so mad on him

G:nahi kabhi bhi nahi

S:ok mutt banao main

Shivwas about to go when Ejaz entered the Kitchen

E:arey Shiv coffee ka kiya howa

S:sorry but no coffee

G:ohhh so you also want coffee

E:ya please if you don't mind

G:sure no problem main abhi bana dety hoon

Gauri looked at Shiv who was so jelous

Gauri made coffee and she came outside

G:here you go Ejaz

E:thanks alot Gauri

Shiv was about to go Gauri didn't liked that because she knew that Shiv was also waiting for coffee and he loves coffee

G:Shiv app k liye alag sy invitation bhejna pary ga kiya k coffee pee lain

S:thanks but I don't want it you guys have fun

G:ek minute you have to drink this coffee

S:excuse me why is that?

now Ejaz was not feeling good that why Gauri is forcing Shiv for coffee

E:oh come on Shiv pee lou na Gauri ney etny mehnut sy banaee hai

S:aright

E:waisy Gauri app coffee buhut achi banaty ho

G:thanks

E:aur app ko pata hai k main jiss ladkee sy shadi karoun ga woh coffee buht achi banaty ho gee because I love coffee

G:ohh ok I think I should go to bed now

E:ok good night

G:good night Ejaz and Shiv

S:good night

Gauri was gone

S(thinking to himself) chalo Gauri tu chalee gaee ub main bhi chaloun waisy bhi main yahan sirf Gauri k liye tha because I was sure k Ejaz coffee k bahanye Gauri sy milney zarour aye ga

S:ok Ejaz ub mujhe bhi jana chahiye

E:ya man I am also going I am really tired c ya

S:good night

After 2 days
today was the Reception party everyone was getting ready

K:hey Gauri ajj tu tum woh saree pahnou gee na jo main ney tumhe dee thee

G:ya main abhi change ker k aty hoon

Gauri came out wearing a pink,red and orange saree with lots of stone work on it she didn't know that Kaya was gone she thought that Kaya was still in the room so she came out trying to tie the dori at the back of her blouse. she came out this way that her back was towords the door of the room and Shiv came to her room to call her

G:hey please help me yarr mujhe sy nahi tie ho rahi yeh dori

Shiv walked towords her he was feeling so confused wether to tie it or not but atlast he tied her dori

G:thanks yarr tum ney tu ek minute main kur diya

Gauri turned around and she was shocked to see Shiv there

G:Shiv app yahan kaisy

S:woh main tumhe bolanye aya tha tum sy dori tie nahi ho rahee thee so I thought k main hee ker doon I hope you didn't mind that

G:hmmm
just than Kaya came

K:ohh ho what's going on guys

G:shut up Kaya acha suno I love this saree man I love the colours and the stone work on it tum batao kaisy lug rahee hoon main

Shiv was gone

K:buhut hee ache but earing aur choriyan tu pahun lou

G:ok wait tu karo


Gauri and Kaya came to the hall Kaya was also wearing a saree she was wearing a purple saree with silver work on it both of them were looking too good

Gauri saw Ejaz who was wearing a balck suit with pink tie. she was looking for Shiv and finally Shiv came wearing a black suit with red tie:

S:hey Kaya you are looking really pretty today

K:achaa but you know what mere sy zada achy tu app lug rahain hain app kee tie tu Gauri kee saree k sath match hoti hai

just then Ejaz comes and asks for a dance

E:hey Gauri if you don't mind kiya app mere sath dance karoo gee kyun k you are looking awsome today aur main bhi kafi acha lug raha hoon

G:sure kyun nahi

K:I am sorry Shiv

S:it's ok Kaya it's not your fault

Maya-Vikram,Ejaz-Gauri were dancing Shiv was getting jelous he started drinking getting mad and jelous.he breaked the glass and he picked up a glass piece and just walked away

he came home and he carved Gauri's name on his arm with the glass piece and he didn't know what to do so he decided to go out he was driving when he met whit an accident....

Dua

Edited by Dua4U - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
sorry and thanks for waiting here is the next part I hope that you guys will like it I can write on the weekends so I will write the next part tommorow(inshAllah)do tell me how it was I will be waiting for your replys

Dua
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg poor shivy loves gauri so much 😭 😭
nice part
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow!! shivv.. loves gauri sooo much!!

amazing..

ouch... shiv is in an accident!!

please do continue!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
awwww poor shiv, he's heartbroken 😭 damn tht ejaz 😡 😆 neways update was gr8 cntinu sn 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Poor shiv!! I loved the scene where shiv tied Gauris dori! I hope Gauri see's his arm! PLease continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was SUPERRR!!!!! 👏
continue soon....
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg my poor shiv 😭 😭 😭 he loves her soo much..i hate that ejaz 😡 i hope she understands his feeling soon..and i love ur fanfic..ur so talented..plz cont soon..ur really good! 👏

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