FF: tu pyar hai Part 31!!! pg. 156 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Navs.......when are u planning on continuing.....we are all waiting to see how Shiv and Guari get together in this ff!!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I love this ff man too good please continueeeeeeeeeeeee can anyone tell me anyother ff of Shiv and Gauri
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Navs.......when are u planning on continuing.....we are all waiting to see how Shiv and Guari get together in this ff!!! 😉

arey abhi to mujhe bhi nahin pata 😆 i'll try to continue tonight but tomorrow fo sure
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dua4U

I love this ff man too good please continueeeeeeeeeeeee can anyone tell me anyother ff of Shiv and Gauri

actually there's like 4-5 ff's here.. i don't know their names.. but they're all mad good.. u just gonna have to find 'em..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

arey abhi to mujhe bhi nahin pata 😆 i'll try to continue tonight but tomorrow fo sure



Can't wait!!!😃😃😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank you so much guyz.. really appreciate ur comments.. glad ur enjoying it.. 😳

*~*~*~PART 3*~*~*

**in my ff.. kaya's same as the show.. but a tad bit lazy 😆 😆 gauri's very chirpy loud.. but in front of SOME ppl she's quiet,shy.. and all that **

Gauri wakes up early the next morning.. to get the breakfast and all ready and then get to work on time... She goes in the bathroom.. gets ready.. comes out wearing a beautiful suit... as she does the morning prayers.. she makes herself busy in the kitchen preparing breakfast for everyone
Gauri: kaya..
Kaya: kya hai
Gauri: kaya abhi utho na.. mujhe kaam par jaana hai.. come on get up..
Kaya: 5 more minutes
Gauri: kaya dekho tumhe mere sath jaana hai.. tumhe college mein admission leni hai aaj
Kaya: maloom hai
Gauri: chalo baba utho
kaya gets out of the bed lazingly makes her way towards the bathroom.. Gauri finishes up the breakfast.. starts setting the table as Mr. Alok along wit Kaya come and join her.. they all eat breakfast.. Mr. Alok leaves for work.. while kaya and gauri also leave the house..for their work and kaya for her college..

Gauri goes to work.. while Kaya goes to finish her college - get her admission so she can start her classes.. Gauri's at work.. even though her boss cant stand at her most times.. she's very popular in the crowd.. everyone loves her.. as she's always smiling and making sure everything's perfect - she does her job wit honors.. the whole day goes by pretty quickly.. Gauri's getting ready to leave... her cell rings.. its shashank
Shashank: Gauri
Gauri: ji
Shashank: tumne kaam khatam kar liya
Gauri: ji mein abhi bahar aa rahi hoon
Shashank: ok mein bahar wait kar raha hoon
Gauri: mein bas abhi aayi
gauri hangs up.. she's almost running outside.. when she bumps into someone.. real hard.. she's about to fall flat.. when she's grabbed by someone..she automatically puts her arms around him.. to prevent from falling.. she feels someone's hands on her waist.. she has her eyes closed… she opens her eyes.. to find herself looking into another pair of black eyes (wat's iqbal's eye color 😆😆😆).. he's literally staring at her.. they're both staring at each other.. a lot of ppl r looking at them.. as they're standin right by the entrance.. Gauri looks at shiv.. then she slowly comes out of the intense eye locking session.. as she moves herself up… shiv's still on cloud 9.. staring at gauri.. he's holding her real tight
Gauri: excuse me kya aap he's still staring at her.. she looks at him.. then looks down (gettin a lil nervous)
Gauri: hello.. excuse me.. kya aap mujhe chodenge shiv slowly lets go off her.. he's amazed (oh yea he is 😉) he moves back a little..
Gauri: im so sorry.. meri wajah se aap.. I mean..
Shiv: its
just then he gets interrupted
Shiv's Friend: wat is ur problem.. wat do u think of urself.. dhayan se nahin chal sakti
Shiv: yaar its
Shiv's friend: no shiv..
(guyz I told u he looks fo opportunities to yell at her)
Gauri: im really sorry I didn't mean to as gauri starts to cry cuz shiv's friend aka gauri's boss is yelling at her non stop

Shiv: look its ok relax.. stop crying.. and you also relax.. im fine.. gauri makes her towards the exit.. wiping her tears.. while shiv goes towards the window.. lookin outside.. as his gaze is following gauri
Shiv: who's she?? I've neva seen her here before
Shiv's Friend: who? Gauri?? she's a new worker.. I hate her.. im trying to fire her but I don't have a reason to
Shiv: fire her?? Not anymore..
as he's thinking in his mind.. GAURI.. naam to acha hai as he continues to look at gauri.. who goes and stands by shashank.. shiv's staring at them.. he can't see shashank's face.. just then gauri smiles as shashank presents her wit flowers.. gauri smiles.. blushing 😳 😳 😳 takin the flowers.. as they both leave fo dinner...leaving behind a very VERY angry shiv.. who's busy staring at them thru the window..


(k that got boring.. sorry about the delay and a boring part.. but I do hope u guyz enjoyed 😳 😳 )
Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
awesoommee part !!so shiv has fallen for gauri love at first sight 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome I loved it now please make Shiv more angry that would be more fun and please continue I want to read moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee ur ff is too good keep up the good work
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Haila!!!! Wow nice part!"Shivvy srarin at Gauri????"Wow i'm imaginin da scene!!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post other part qkly!coz can't wait jaan!!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
shiv ie gettin jealous 😆 😆 😆
very good plz cont soon
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