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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
Hey Ppl , all the scenes are really awesome! Please continue writing... its so much fun to read ...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
this is when they are in love and well are at home alone cause everyone has gone somewhere and well shiv sees gauri working and then the song shikdum from dhoom satrts to play 😳 😳 😳

it will be cute to watch them dancing like that 😆 😆
Edited by dahi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
i love this moment ❤️❤️❤️



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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
hey man wat is this......aage to likho....its awesome scene 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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This is not going to be that good and it is my first one so here it goes!

I am continuing from thursday's episode where guari finds out the truth about shiv!

Guari just stands there and when she turns around she see's shiv and she remains silent then shiv just gives a small lecture where guari just walks away while he is talking and she is walking on the road with remembering all the cute scenes that happened and then on the other side Shiv tells the other guy that now what will guari leave and he says well right now you better go home and see what happens so shiv leaves and he is in his car and on the otherside guari is walking through cars and she is walking between cars and she happens to walk between shiv's car and he is like who the hell is it and all of a sudden guari faints and he is like who in the world and goes to see who the person is and it is no other than guari so he is shocked. He picks gauri up and puts her in his car and takes her home where everyone is over there and he brings guari in and they look so cute and everyone asks what happened and shiv just walks up the stairs while looking at gauri adn says what did i do was it right or wrong and he gets in his room and puts guari on the bed when he sees the picture and is like ????? at the same time everyone comes in and the doctor does too and he says they need to be careful as she has just had a big shock and everyone leaves and shiv is upset thinking it is all his fault! Its night and Gauri is on the bed and he is like now what i am going to have to sleep with her and he sleeps on the bed though far away from gauri and then in the morning shiv and gauri are really close together and they wake up at the same time and they just get away from each other and gauri gets up and is walking towards the bathroom and is mad at shiv but when she gets up there is something wrong with her foot and she falls but shiv catches her and then they have a moment of stare!!!


Sorry i got carried away!! Hope you like it!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
i just thought of another one where gauri and shiv still dont like eachother.

Guari and Shiv are still at the office and it is Gauri's birthday and she forgot and is very busy working so shiv is already gone becuz they work at different places and then gauri leaves and shiv and gauri end up coming home at the same time and then they walk in and it is very dark and shiv turns on the light and everyone comes out and the house is beautifully decorated with millions of people and they all start singing happy birthday to gauri and she gets happpy and shiv just looks at gauri and then when they finish gauri and shiv go up to change and they come down gauri has a dark blue saree with a silver border and tiny dots of silver things you know what i mean well anyways then they go down together where guari about slips and shiv catches her and machan sees this and is n and tehn gauri goes down to some other people while shiv goes by machan and machan asks him about catching gauri and shiv said its nothing much just then mahen says lets cut the cake where they do and he asks shiv and gauri to cut the cake so they hold hands and cut the cake and then later in the party shiv and gauri are asked to dance with each other and they do and are left staring. Then at night gauri falls asleep and Shiv sits next to her and says HAPPY BIRTHDAY gauri... and she says thank you when shiv is about to leave and that it !!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
ok its the first time im writin it so wish me luck. ok here goes...
dis is after da epi wen gauri finds aou about shiv. 😡
they both have to go to an important meeting about some contract or somethin. so they go, but while der on da way da car breaks down 😳 and dey have to find a place to stay as it heavily raining and lightnin n dat. 😉 lukckily for dem der farm house is near by.when dey arrive n r inside shiv tells gauri to go upstairs n der r some old clothes from the family members. she is about 2 go wen lightin strikes n she hugs him tight. 👏 she den realises n lets go 😳 . dey have a starin n den da lights go out 😳 . shiv calls da watchman wat happend n da watchman replies he dnt no but he'll go n check.
wen he goes to check he fones the kapoor house n dadi picks up n he say "kaam hoya gaya" n she goes "tum ko patha hai aab thumhe kya karne chahiye?" 😉 he goes yeh n puts da fone down.
he returns back to da scene wer shiv and gauri is n he goes tech difficulties, but luckily der is 1 bedroom dat is wired differently so da lights r still on. wen dey both go 2 da bedroom shiv calls the watchman agen n goes "y did all da lights go out" da watchman goes coz of da mice prob.
wen shiv hears dis he quickly hugs gari 😉 n da watchmen lyves...
im so sorry i got a bit carried away 😕
i gess i did da whole epi 😕 #
plz let me no if u like it n want me 2 writ more.
by all ov da others are wckd n im sure if ekta ryds em she will definatly choose em 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88

these are soo cute...i relli like the honeymoon one

i hope ekta reads these😉😆

Edited by **maya** - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hello ppl, after reading so many nice scenes from all of y'all.. I thought I'd chip in my lil piece of imagination...

Taking off, after the scenes .. written post the latest episode.. and gauri aloof from shiv... here is the scene...

Breakfast time, in 5 mins... Gauri , ready for work, takes one last look at herself in the mirror , before she heads off for breakfast throwing a glance towards the washroom.. Shiv's in..

Shiv comes out of the washroom... heads towards his cupboard to get his outfit .. when he notices her files and her bag on the table by the bedside...a faint flicker of a smile escapes his lips and he returns to his ordeal of choosing his tie...
Struggling to choose a tie for his essemble today... he murmurs diff colors , picturing them, and looking thoroughly lost each time... and is startled and wee bit irritated , when gauri enters the room , and he calms down almost instantly.. she walks across to the table to pick her things totally ignoring his presence , while he looks on at her.. perplexed.. and pretends to go back to tie selection.
Gauri having picked up her stuff, pauses and watches him , pick a tie each time only to discard it for another one...all the while shiv aware of her watching him... and the moment he chooses a dark blue one , he gives a sidelong look for her approval, while she after giving a momentary stare , too shortfor him... leaves without a word... taking her things...
Shiv looks on after her.. perplexed and a lil dejected at her having gone so soon...

At the breakfast table, Shiv wearing the tie she approved.. aah so he thinks sits right opposite her and adjusts his tie , giving her a glance and she ignores it completely , although she notices it ... and when he goes back to eating his breakfast , smiles to herself...

Let me know if this ok at all... Jus a passing thought , that I penned down... 😊

Edited by sareeta - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
sareeta di thats what i like about ur writing
subtle romance
its thousand times better than bare-it-all type
👏 (well thats jai's treadmark but i felt like clapping this time)
kekta maiiiiiiiiiiiii read this

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