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Here goes another.. Thought I'd add in one more...

THings have kinda calmed down between Gauri and Shiv, although the MM incident has not been mentioned or spoken about..

On the sofa, lost in thought, Gauri is jus turning the pages of a magazine , staring ahead...

The sound of rain drops on the window pane, startle her and she smiles, and heads towards the window... the radio playing FM in the background...

A lil spring in her step.. she goes to balcony and steps in ... enjoying the drizzle against her face... all the sadness , dripping away , she smiles and giggles... playing with the rain drops... , doing the twirls , she loved to do... like old times with sis...

Unpredictable , as the bombay rains are, the drizzle stops and she still smiling steps back and freshens up ... and the weather outside seems perfect, the setting sun, colouring the sky a lovely deep orange red..., the cool gentle afterbreeze... blowing ..

Dressed in a lovely lime green saaree.. Gauri absentmindedly plays with the radio , changing channels and stops at the channel playing the song "Tumhi dekho na..", and almost , without control, springs on her heels doing the twirls....and humming the song... a lovely smile spread on her lips, she dances on... slowly , her eyes closed.. imagining a dream come true...

Unaware of the time, she goes on.. lost in the song and music...

Shiv , back from work , about to barge in, notices her dancing and almost immediately stops in his tracks... and making no noise , stands at door watching her an amused , and a surprised look , while she dances on... immersed in reverie...

The song ends breaking her reverie and Gauri stops jus as gently as she started slowly turninng around stull smiling... while Shiv is standing watching her , when she suddenly stops.. midway, fiddling her hair, noticing him... terribly embarassed ... not daring to look up...

Shiv walks up to her.... and jus as he nears her... starts whistling the song and walks past and behind her towards the balcony....watches the sun set... and then looks back at Gauri, a smile escapes his lips and he goes on whistling...

Gauri, almost suddenly breaking out of the moment, turns round to see him and jus as they stare at each other... turns round and runs out of the room..
While Shiv smiless.... replaying her dance.. in his mind.. surprised.. at himself...

ok trying my bit
i know i have assumed some things here but i hope u forgive me for that......
please ignore my mistakes.....


It was late in the night……shiv was railing over balcony and watching fullmoon shining brightly ……sleep was million miles away from him…….soft breeze ruffling his hair….

For a fraction of second he thought he saw gauri's face in unblemished moon…….smile that light up her face occasionally, floated across his eyes….he smiled unknowingly….

Suniye……her soothing voice filled his ears….he turned back in haste as if he was waiting for an eternity to hear her calling him…….

He gazed around….his bedroom looked exactly the way it was……bathed in moon light.
Curtains flying with soft breeze………
But there was no sign of gauri in room….slowly it dawned on him that gauri wasn't there…….it was just few hours of time before she left for kolkata with her father after the most unfortunate showdown in mukesh mills……
She hadn't uttered a single word since then……it was the silence and her composure that killed him……he wanted her to yell at him……slap him. That would have pacified fire of guilt that was burning in his chest…….a surge of guilt pervaded his being.

He went inside and saw her blanket rolled up to wall….he remembered her curling up in it when he refused to switch off AC……

He went near the bedside table where his wedding picture was kept…..he studied it for minute…….couldn't kept his eyes off gauri's face……..whats happening with me…he thought
I hate her……..i hate her………I hate her……she ruined my life……I am not missing her………he stopped chanting when his conscience told him point blank that he was lying……..not that he loved her but there was this unfathomable attraction developing between them that had him worried………

He opened gauri's cupboard and moved his hand over her saris….it was almost like touching her……..he smiled to himself as he recalled gauri trembling when he clasped her hand in party while dancing……..

He reprimanded himself not to miss gauri which was proving so difficult……..

He closed the cupboard and picked up a book from the shelf and stretched on bed reading it with his glasses on…it was his usual ordeal that he followed every night.

He pretended reading it for some time……that opened page was slipping through his brain without leaving slightest trace of meaning behind…..
The more he attempted to focus on the print on the page before him, the more clearly he could see Gauri's sweet and innocent face………


Nikhila's eyes opened widely……it took her some time to gather what made that ringing noice….as she realized that it was her cell…..her hurried hand got hold of the clock whose luminous dial showed time as 2.10 am.

She picked it up when Gauri's concerned voice had her panicked………she heaved a sigh as Gauri said that everyone was fine in kolkata…….

Gauri was hesitating a bit to say for what she had called at 2 in the morning….

Wo ma……..aap jara hamare I mean shiv ke kamre me jakar dekhengi…..

It was nikhila's time to startled…….what on the earth was wrong with this girl???

Wo ma….wo hai na…shiv…..wo har raat book padhate hai sone se pehle….aur phir padhate padhate so jate hai……..mai wo book nikal ti hun aur wo chashma nikalkar mere hath me dete hai……..

Nikhila was still clueless about what gauri was saying…….but she decided to listen to her…..

Aaj bhi shayad…..neend me shiv vahi kare…….i mean aadat hai na……shayad wo chashma nikalkar soche ke mai wahi hun aur phir wo chashma tut jayega na neeche girke….

Nikhila laughed……..to itni fikr hai tumhe shiv ke chashme ki………..

Gauri replied almost biting her tongue…..nahi wo chashme ki kaanch kahi unke pairo me na lag jaye subah…..bed se utarte waqt………wo aadhe neend me hi hote hai jab subah uthate hai……she said her voice controlled but nikhila could sense gauri's suppressed laughter……

She was dumbfounded…..to see gauri's love and concern for shiv who always treated her like a drag…..
Ok don't worry beta….i will see that……..good night……her eyes welled up with tears….

She tried sleeping again……wishing that it was all true and shiv was missing gauri too but her brains told her that it wasn't possible……..

She couldn't sleep and decided to check herself……….

As she opened shiv's bedroom……..she saw to her biggest astonishment…….shiv was sleeping with a book on his chest….his wedding pictureframe lying beside him where she assumed Gauri must be sleeping usually….

And there was his glasses……on carpet……..completely shattered………

Originally posted by: sareeta

Here goes another.. Thought I'd add in one more...

THings have kinda calmed down between Gauri and Shiv, although the MM incident has not been mentioned or spoken about..

On the sofa, lost in thought, Gauri is jus turning the pages of a magazine , staring ahead...

The sound of rain drops on the window pane, startle her and she smiles, and heads towards the window... the radio playing FM in the background...

A lil spring in her step.. she goes to balcony and steps in ... enjoying the drizzle against her face... all the sadness , dripping away , she smiles and giggles... playing with the rain drops... , doing the twirls , she loved to do... like old times with sis...

Unpredictable , as the bombay rains are, the drizzle stops and she still smiling steps back and freshens up ... and the weather outside seems perfect, the setting sun, colouring the sky a lovely deep orange red..., the cool gentle afterbreeze... blowing ..

Dressed in a lovely lime green saaree.. Gauri absentmindedly plays with the radio , changing channels and stops at the channel playing the song "Tumhi dekho na..", and almost , without control, springs on her heels doing the twirls....and humming the song... a lovely smile spread on her lips, she dances on... slowly , her eyes closed.. imagining a dream come true...

Unaware of the time, she goes on.. lost in the song and music...

Shiv , back from work , about to barge in, notices her dancing and almost immediately stops in his tracks... and making no noise , stands at door watching her an amused , and a surprised look , while she dances on... immersed in reverie...

The song ends breaking her reverie and Gauri stops jus as gently as she started slowly turninng around stull smiling... while Shiv is standing watching her , when she suddenly stops.. midway, fiddling her hair, noticing him... terribly embarassed ... not daring to look up...

Shiv walks up to her.... and jus as he nears her... starts whistling the song and walks past and behind her towards the balcony....watches the sun set... and then looks back at Gauri, a smile escapes his lips and he goes on whistling...

Gauri, almost suddenly breaking out of the moment, turns round to see him and jus as they stare at each other... turns round and runs out of the room..
While Shiv smiless.... replaying her dance.. in his mind.. surprised.. at himself...

Wow, how I wish this happens, this is so awesome, rain and romance go together in a total awwww, I tell u. I will put up my scene in a few.

i have one but its going 2 be really bad, so i am saying sorry in advance, i came up with this story in Skool, i just came up with it but its soooooo rubbish compared to all of yours.

here it goes:

well shiv still hates gauri but the bit where amit tandon comes in hasn't happened in my story, but gauri's dad is still in hospital:

Gauri is sitting down sorting out her sari's when she gets a call from the hospital:

G: Gi hello
Doctor: err hello ye mrs shiv kapoor hai
G: Gi main hoon
D: aapke papa koh bahot bari shok hua hai aur apko jaldi se hospital aana hai
G: KYA, UMM HHH..HAII ME PHONCHTI HOON (she's absolutaly shocked)

Next scene shiv gets a call from his dad and his dad tells him what happens. obviously shiv doesn't care
that much since he doesn't like gauri but he's still has sumthing in his heart that makes him a little sad but he doesn't no wat.

so now he's enters the hospital and he see's gauri crouched on the floor crying her eyes out. He just looks at her and he has a pain in his heart. he walkes up to her,put his arm around her and lift her up to her feet to make her sit on the chair, he isn't doing it because he has to pretend he's a ideal husband he doesn't even no why he's doing it , he isn't even thinking about wat he's doing he's just doing it.

He sits beside her and put his arms on her shoulders
and starts rubbing them. He then see's that she's still crying. he put his hands on her face and starts wiping her tears away.

The doctor comes.

Shiv: Doctor umm kya haal hai uncle ka
Doctor: gi errr voh apbe bahush hai aur umm agar koh 24 hours mai nahe jakte to voh coma mai chale jaain ge.,
Gauri: KYA YEH KASE HO SAKTA HAI.
Shiv: ( he put his arms on her shoulders again and tries calming her) Gauri Gauri plz shaant ho jao. kuch nahi hoga.

Just then a nurse comes and tells them that its closing time and they all have 2 go home but only 1 person can stay.

Gauri: MMmmain Ruko gi Baba ke saath.
Shiv: Nahi gauri....tumhari halat theek nahi hai.. tum yaha nahi ruk sakti.
Gauri: magar...
Kaya: ha Didi main yaha ruko gi
Shiv: so its settled.

Shiv turns 2 his parents.

Shiv: Gi aap log jaye me aur gauri meri car se aayangi.


Now the scene goes to gauri and shiv sitting in shiv's car on there way home, shiv just can't stop looking at gauri where as gauri was looking at the floor coz she's so sad.

Shiv: Gauri tu ne kuch kaya hai
Gauri: hmmmmmmmm
Shiv: gauri main tumse kuch puch raha tha.
Gauri: woh ummmm hai maine subha chai(tea) pee thi
Shiv: BAS, tumhe bhook lagi hai

gauri hsn't noticed the changed siv coz she's so sad.

Gauri: errr nahi
Shiv: ya sure.


then shiv quickly takes gauri to a restaurent and oders everything. He now that she was hungry soo he brought all that he could think of.

Wen the food arrived gauri was till looking on the floor with her hair and face dangled 2 a side, all she could think of was her dad.
Shiv noticed that she wasn't eating anything so he moved himself so he was sitting next to her, (first he was sitting opposite her)and then he looked at her and cupped her face in his hands and wiped away her teares again. then he took some roti and dipped it in curry and put it in her mouth. gauri was just soo shocked at him with wide loving eyes, but wen she ate the food she realised that her dad was lying in hospital unconscience,she starting cring again, wen shiv saw this he wiped away her tears once again and said:

Shiv: Gauri yeh tumhari aaso na bahut keepte hai, plz stop cring.
Gauri: Shiv mere Papa....
Shiv: KUCH NAHI HOGA TUMHARI PAPA KO, main kuch hone nahi doonga. Aur agar tum roti rahi na to tumhari baba theek nahi honge.... main bamaar ho gao ga.

Gauri gave a little chuckle.

Shiv: Gauri don't worry, main hoon na tumhari saath.

And then shiv hugged gauri and started feeding her gain and the same minute the dad gained conscience.


The stories's a bit stupid, so if u guys don't like it and don't want me 2 write any more storoes just pm me and tell me iwon't mind ohh and tell me any improvement like my hindi don't make sence or watever, if ur embarressed then Pm me and tell me

how about this one.....shiv and gauri are not exactly best pals but bear each other so they are walking on the bach or something like that and well gauri's fav is pani patasha (a.k.a pani puri) and whle she is eating shiv has this disgusted look on his face and he is like how could u eat such unhygenic food and she is like wat u have never tried this before and refuses and she insists he trys one and afer a lot of pleading he has one and cause he does not know how to have one he bites the thing and it all dribbles ....gauri burst out laughing and for a few moments he stares at her then tyies to show her that he can doit he tells the dude to sever him an other ione just like she has it and gauri stops him and he tells her i will show u i can do it and well he eats its and has this funny look on his face....well he had an extremly chilly one and cause he does not like spice he is like gauri pani plz mujhay pani de do and she can stop laughing but gives him the water and while he is drinking water she stares at him....
i hope it ok let me know 😳

ok gys i have one too..... 😳

hehe it goes like dis:

gauri comes out of da shower and is getting ready to go for breakfast...

shivs mom: gauri, shiv....neeche aake tumhara breakfast karlo thanda ho jayenga

shiv n gauri come down.....shiv as usual ignores gauri, n has an anger look... subhe subhe hi 😆

shivs mom : shiv aaj meine tumhare liye khaas parathe banaye hain.....mein abhi lekar aati hun

nikhila goes into the kitchen gets a glass of juice n parathas for shiv

just as she keeps the parathas on da table, the glass in her hand slips and straight falls on da ground shattered into piecees....n nikihila cries with pain as a piece of glass has peirced into her ankle.

gauri rushes towards nikihla n applies some cold water immediately......n nihila gets an immediate relief

gauri: maa, mein abhi aapke liya antiseptic cream lekar aati hoon. gauri rushes into her room

gauri is searching everywhere for da antiseptic but doesnt finds it. she searches everywhere........finally she sees it on da top of the cupboard 😆(ektas trick)!!


gauri finds a chair and climbs on it carefully. she is stil short of it. so she takes another longer stool, and climbs up carefully and reaches her hand for the first aid box.....she struggles to find it.....n there she gets it......but suddenly her ankle twists and slips n da next moment she is safely caught in no other than her hubby shivs arms...n gauri eyes are closed tightly n she opens it next moment, n sees shiv with her cute innocence n simplicity look n gauri gets engrossed in shivs eyes....

shiv doesnt says a word n is staring at her with an arrogant look. shiv slowly looks away from gauri and then sees his collar tightly gripped by gauris hands.

gauri doesnt knows it n still clutches to shivs colalr.....n shiv stares back at her again.

gauri still in shivs arms, shiv walks and turns aorund and puts gauri on da bed slowly. n comes close to her and says with a deep look : agli baar koi kaam karna to sambhal ke karna with a smirk look

n takes his bag and barges out of the room.

hehe hope u like it

😳

awosme all of u are too good

Dua

Originally posted by: himali_kokate

ok trying my bit
i know i have assumed some things here but i hope u forgive me for that......
please ignore my mistakes.....


It was late in the night……shiv was railing over balcony and watching fullmoon shining brightly ……sleep was million miles away from him…….soft breeze ruffling his hair….

For a fraction of second he thought he saw gauri's face in unblemished moon…….smile that light up her face occasionally, floated across his eyes….he smiled unknowingly….

Suniye……her soothing voice filled his ears….he turned back in haste as if he was waiting for an eternity to hear her calling him…….

He gazed around….his bedroom looked exactly the way it was……bathed in moon light.
Curtains flying with soft breeze………
But there was no sign of gauri in room….slowly it dawned on him that gauri wasn't there…….it was just few hours of time before she left for kolkata with her father after the most unfortunate showdown in mukesh mills……
She hadn't uttered a single word since then……it was the silence and her composure that killed him……he wanted her to yell at him……slap him. That would have pacified fire of guilt that was burning in his chest…….a surge of guilt pervaded his being.

He went inside and saw her blanket rolled up to wall….he remembered her curling up in it when he refused to switch off AC……

He went near the bedside table where his wedding picture was kept…..he studied it for minute…….couldn't kept his eyes off gauri's face……..whats happening with me…he thought
I hate her……..i hate her………I hate her……she ruined my life……I am not missing her………he stopped chanting when his conscience told him point blank that he was lying……..not that he loved her but there was this unfathomable attraction developing between them that had him worried………

He opened gauri's cupboard and moved his hand over her saris….it was almost like touching her……..he smiled to himself as he recalled gauri trembling when he clasped her hand in party while dancing……..

He reprimanded himself not to miss gauri which was proving so difficult……..

He closed the cupboard and picked up a book from the shelf and stretched on bed reading it with his glasses on…it was his usual ordeal that he followed every night.

He pretended reading it for some time……that opened page was slipping through his brain without leaving slightest trace of meaning behind…..
The more he attempted to focus on the print on the page before him, the more clearly he could see Gauri's sweet and innocent face………


Nikhila's eyes opened widely……it took her some time to gather what made that ringing noice….as she realized that it was her cell…..her hurried hand got hold of the clock whose luminous dial showed time as 2.10 am.

She picked it up when Gauri's concerned voice had her panicked………she heaved a sigh as Gauri said that everyone was fine in kolkata…….

Gauri was hesitating a bit to say for what she had called at 2 in the morning….

Wo ma……..aap jara hamare I mean shiv ke kamre me jakar dekhengi…..

It was nikhila's time to startled…….what on the earth was wrong with this girl???

Wo ma….wo hai na…shiv…..wo har raat book padhate hai sone se pehle….aur phir padhate padhate so jate hai……..mai wo book nikal ti hun aur wo chashma nikalkar mere hath me dete hai……..

Nikhila was still clueless about what gauri was saying…….but she decided to listen to her…..

Aaj bhi shayad…..neend me shiv vahi kare…….i mean aadat hai na……shayad wo chashma nikalkar soche ke mai wahi hun aur phir wo chashma tut jayega na neeche girke….

Nikhila laughed……..to itni fikr hai tumhe shiv ke chashme ki………..

Gauri replied almost biting her tongue…..nahi wo chashme ki kaanch kahi unke pairo me na lag jaye subah…..bed se utarte waqt………wo aadhe neend me hi hote hai jab subah uthate hai……she said her voice controlled but nikhila could sense gauri's suppressed laughter……

She was dumbfounded…..to see gauri's love and concern for shiv who always treated her like a drag…..
Ok don't worry beta….i will see that……..good night……her eyes welled up with tears….

She tried sleeping again……wishing that it was all true and shiv was missing gauri too but her brains told her that it wasn't possible……..

She couldn't sleep and decided to check herself……….

As she opened shiv's bedroom……..she saw to her biggest astonishment…….shiv was sleeping with a book on his chest….his wedding pictureframe lying beside him where she assumed Gauri must be sleeping usually….

And there was his glasses……on carpet……..completely shattered………

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I love them all and want everyone to continue! I'll try to write something later!

~Jyoti 😊

Originally posted by: pm4eva

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thanks yaa.......i am glad that u liked it