Create Shiv/Gauri romantic bonding scenes - Page 29

Hey ppl, First of all , I'd like to thank one and all who are reading my posts for scenes between S and G... and appreciating and enjoying them so much....

I'd jus wanted to know... having written so many scenes, do you guys think, with the episodes startingback tomorrow, I should end the jungle scenes right today... with jus a another scene or two.. or you want me to continue... ?
I ask this, coz I see people enjoying these posts and all the wonderful comments and jus wanted to know.. what you guys want...

Let me know via PM, so as to not block this thread... 😊 ,
Thank you for understanding....

dear sareeta i've read all ur posts they'r gr8, superb 👏
pleaz continue it soon n don't finish it ok?
we all r waiting for ur posts eagerly 😳 😃

continue soooon Sareeta.

You are aweseome.

You should start your own Fan-Fic!!!!!!

I will be ur biggest Fan 😉

Earlier :
…."Eat .. it.. Ghooro mat…" and he storms off…..leaving Gauri smiling after him…

Continued:
Shiv having gone, Gauri looking at the water fall and the pond, decides to take a quick dip and freshen up before he is back …

After having enjoyed a lovely swim, she dresses up quickly and dries her hair… and waits by the pond , for him.. wondering… how long… before he turns up….

Suddenly.. she hears footsteps… and turns around jus in time to see walk around the tower towards her…and she smiles , happy to see him… when he returns the smile jus the same.. handing over the fruits, this time a little more variety and plentiful…guavas, bananas, pomegranates and mangoes..

"Itne saare.." she giggles happily…
"Jaldi khaalo, jo khaana…hai… phir niklana…hai…" he says in a calm voice, almost sounding very pleased….

"wo… aapka…. Wo , dard kam hua?"
"Yeah .. better…", not looking at her… but rummaging his bag , biting into his guava…

"wo green paste,…."
"Dawai…"
"haan.. whatever, banana kab seekhi…?"
"Baba se… "
"par is jungle..mein .. tumhe dikhi kahaan ye ….what do u call those…?"
"Jadi booti.."
"aah .. yeah.. "
"ji wo, kal guide bata raha tha… "
"Tum usko actually sun rahi thi….??? " Starts laughing… "Gawd… ullo lag raha tha…"….laughing…"Tumhe itni boring cheezon mein interest kaise aata.. hai.. Gawwd…".. "aaccha, Baba ne , I mean your Baba, kabhi koi jadibooti nahin boli , tumhaari band bolti ko sudhaarne ke liye…" "tum itni chup reh kaise sakti ho…??? How boring…"

"Kyunki aap bolte rehte ho…" with a straight face.. and then breaks into giggles…when shiv a lilttle surprised, slowly breaks into laughter…

sareeta that was awesome ..i'm loving it and well written.. 👏 👏

Originally posted by: ash9

yeah v r waiting for the next update from both of u soooon
by the way sareeta thanx for updating a lot today
thanx

hey thanx a lot guys, but i made it into a fanfic, so u guys check it out, its called when shiv loves......from now on iam gonna update there, and sareeta awesome job yaar, jus keep it up and pls dnt write much tomorrow coz i wnt be able to follow as i have an exam tomorw😭, i have exams till 24th so pls update only a little bit till then so dat i can study else iam staying onlyn only to read ur updates and not studying at all so pls update only little parts till nov 24th

All I can say is awesome Sareeta, u r too good! 👏 👏 👏

Giggling together, they forget themselves momentarily…, when Shiv suddenly realizes it is half past 10, and says…
"Chalo.. nikalna..hai…" getting up and giving her a hand….smiling she takes it … jus as he turns around…

"Shiv…"
Turning back " Ab kya hai…?"
"Wo, bottle… "
"Kya…? "
"Ji , wo paani ka bottle… pani bhar lete hum yahaan se.. " pointing to the pond.. "pyaas lage tho…."
"Yeh paaani, its dirty… gaawd… Gauri… yeh koi hindi film nahin hai.. ki panghat se sada hua paani , matki bhar , bhar ke laana hai…ok? So please…"
"Ji, suniye… paani hame… shaayad raaste mein na mile… itna ganda bhi nahin…"
"Gaawddd… kahaaan… phas gaya.. main…"… taking the bottle out of his bag… "ye lo….", thrusting it into her hands…

Gauri walks off towards the pond, with a slight limp, which shiv notices..
"Ruko…"
She stops and turns around… when he walks up to her, takes the bottle… and heads towards the pond and returns , with the bottle of water…

"Aur kuch…", he asks her , looking as though forced to obey orders…
a lil scared.. she looks at him sheepishly ..
"Ji .. nahin…."

"Ab please chalo…." And storms off… only to stop a few steps ahead….for her to catch on.. noticing her limp….

Awesome Sarita, I love the limp, will he lift her now! 😆

Earlier:
"Ab please chalo…." And storms off… only to stop a few steps ahead….for her to catch on.. noticing her limp….

Continued:

Gauri, catching up with him…as he turns to get going..
"Shiv…."
Now clearly irritated…
"Ab kya hai… Gauri.?"
"Ji.. wo .. aapka bag…" moving towards him, taking his bag off his shoulder and he lets her as well.. not resisting , perplexed as to what she was doing…
"Kya kar rahi ho…?"
"Wo aapko ……..dard hoga na… isiliye…."..
His face softening immediately… he looks sorry for having snapped at her.. tries to say something but stops..
"Chalo… "..
She follows in silence…

An hr jus passes in silence .. except for occasional .."sambhalke…" and "ji…"s exchanged between them… and shiv looks more and more worried .. when…

"Shiv…"
"haaan…." Lost in thought…. Answering absentmindedly…
"Wo tower, jo humne dekhi… wo abhi to nahin dikh rahi… agar hum nasdeek aa rahe hai toh…", when he cuts her..realization dawning on him…..
"Ham raaasta bhatak gaye hai…."… irritated and panicking at the same time…
"Damn it…. Tumne bhi notice nahin kiya ki hum kaunsa turn le rahe the…" venting his irritation on her..
"Ji.. wo, aapko itna yakeen tha.. aur.."
"Oh.. please.. stop it..now…"
Shiv really irritated …

"Damn it we are lost… in this stupid jungle… " almost shouting….
"Shiv…please…." Gauri pleading in a whisper…
Looking at her irritated…but quiet now…
"Kya hai…"
Looking totally scared…
"aaphi ne toh kahaa tha… jungle jaanwar hai… agar.. bahaar aa gaye toh.. "
Shiv looking surprised, then breaks into uncontrollable laughter , gauri getting scared by the minute, looking around….
"You actually believed it … Gauri.. Oh my gaawd… " repeating over and over again…
"Shiv… please… aap has kyon rahe hai…"
"You are funny… "
Gauri , not listening…
"SHiv.." pleading literally now… shaking with fear…when .. something moves behind the bush, the movement too close for comfort….