Shiv+Gauri Completed-Happy Ending-pg 24 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok guys here is part 3

Shiv goes to the bar/pub and is getting a drink when his friend enters(donno his name but he got slapped from shiv'd dad)
Shiv's friend: arey shiv tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?
SHiv says in a nasty way:kyun? mein yaha nahiin aasakta 😡
Shiv's friend: I mean aaj to tumhari suhaagraat hai aur tumhe to apni wife ke saath hona chahiye doinggg the thingy...u know whatt i am talking abt 😆 😆 jokes shiv's friend
Shiv: Ahhh just get lost
Shiv's friend: ok i am sorry well what if mahen uncle finds out that u r not with bhabhi jii right now?
Shiv: How will he find out? Who is gonna tell him? I bet gauri doesnt has that many guts 🤢 and he is abt to get up when he sees his dad and gauri at the entrancee
Shivv is shocked 😵

g2g will continue after a while
plz reply 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys plz comment cuz thats gonna help a lot and jus so u no my friend(kyahoganimmoka) will continue the next part cuz its both of our's fan-fic
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aren't you sort of repeating what the serial is all about!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: prishika

aren't you sort of repeating what the serial is all about!!


yeah cuz thats how i want it to start it will change after a while

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Please write in english and you can use hindi words in between it's a request 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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k i will 😃 i have a question dont u live india and if u do how come u r having a hard time understanding the words??? plz dont mind but i jus wanna no 😛
Edited by anu-pre4eva - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 4

Just then Mahen also sees shiv. he walks upto shiv and is really mad.
Mahen. Shiv? What are u doing here? U should be with Gauri in ur room right now Wats all this abt?
Shiv: Dad ...a.aa..ap yaha?
Mahen:U shouldnt be the one who shall be asking this question SHiv enough is enough. I told u to marry gauri....
Shiv: Dad i lissened to ur condition and i fulfilled it but plz dont expect anything else from me cuz u know i wont do it
Dad: U will have to 😡 or shall I repeat the condition again? U will have to take all the other responsibilities of ur marriage as well..lets go gauri.
Mahen is abt to leave when he turns and says r u coming Shiv?
SHiv is bursting with anger 😡 and he just walks out.

Shiv+Gauri room
Shiv misunderstood Gauri and starts yelling at her. Gauri is all scared she tries to talk but Shiv doesnt even give her a chance.
Shiv: No one has eveerrrr dared to say anything against meee 😡 and u r the first person on Earth who hass. I told u to stay away from my personal matters and mind ur own bussiness lekin tum to kissi ki sunti hii nahiin 😡 😡 😡 jee toh chahta hai kay tumharey tukre(pieces) tukre kar kay vultures ko kila doon.. And he goes to bed.
Gauri: 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 5

Next morning
Nikhila goes to Gauri's room.
Knock Knock.
Gauri opens the door.
Gauri: Mama aap?
Nikhila: Good morning beta and she kisses her forehead. Beta today we have the moondikhai rasam and I want u to wear thiss Get ready fast and come downstairs there is a lot of work to do.

Jee mama. smiles gauri

Gauri gets ready and goes downstairs she is looking gorgeous in a churidaar pyjama.

***This part is gonna be a lot similar to what happened in the drama today.but it will change 😃

Just then Nikhila comes: Gauri you have to cook today. All of muumy jee's friends want to taste ur food. But remember they r all vegetarian so dont even think abt cooking any meat

Gauri: Jee.
Maya and palak overheard that and plans to do sumthing stupid. When Gauri was done cooking she walks out of the kitchen and goes to her room while kaya and palak are changing dishes. Nikhila comes in and says: is the khana ready and wen she looks at the khana aree expression changess. She is like: Yeh kya? i told gauri to cook veggie and shee cooked meat. omg i dont believe it. SHe goess to gauri's room and says: Gauri i dont believe it . how cannn u do this i jusst dont believe it.
Gauri: Mummy jee what r u talking abt?? 😕
Nikhila: I told u to cook veggetarian good then why did u cook meat?
Gauri: but mummy jee i did cook veggie i donno how.. 😕
Nikhila just gives gauri a nasty look and leaves looking veryy frustrated.
Kaya overheard all that and figures out that sumthing is fishy 🤢
Kaya(to herself): I am sure some one did this on purpose so they can insult gauri di in front of ppl but who could it bee?

SCene switches to maya and palak: yessss 😵 we did itt. ab gauri ko kon bachaigaa. even mom/bhabhi thinks that gauri did this on purpose ///evil laughh 🤬

Downstairs:
When the khana arrives and mummy(sry donno her name) jee's relative see it they start spazzing and stuff. Nikihila is soo disaappointed and so is Gauri. Mummy jee can't get any words out 😕 😕 just then Palak speaks up: arey why are u guys blaming dadi? its not her fault its our sweet bhabhi's fault 🤢
THen kaya enters and says: It is not di's fault either its someonesle and she plays a taperecorder . It said everything that maya and palak were saying in the kitchen. Maya n Palak are soo damned shock they r like how did she find out and stuff.
Then all of mummmy jee's relative are like : aay bhagwan aaj kaal ki ghar ki betian hiin aisi hain to phir bahoon ko kya kahen. Toba Toba. and one by one they start leaving.
At home evry one goes to their room and nikhila goes to gauri's room . Nikhila is jus abt to apologize when Gauri says:it is ok mummy jee aisey chooti moti baatein hotiin rehtiin hai aur
Nikhila: choti moti baatein? Beta yeh koi choti baat nahiin hain tum par itna bara ilzaam nahiin palak and maya should be punished for this beta i am really really sry I didnt believe u..
Gauri:It is ok really, but plz dont say anything to palak and maya or papa plz
Nikhila: but...
Gauri:plz mummy jee for my sake.
Nikhila: ok beta but next time i am not gonna stay quiet.
Gauri smiles and they hug
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ok guys that's it for today i am getting tired . plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz comment(its a request)

and guys i was wondering if i should turn gauri a bit arroagant, strong and agressive plz guys tell me i need to know. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
pl write next part . it is very nice

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