written update oct 11th 2006

hey !! gusy/gals !

i never update any drama first time i am doing i hope u like it ! its not brief its just main what happens!

~gauri was in her room getting ready for the reception ..!

~ gauri brother and his wife came to mahens house and the enter the house and saw baba(gauri dad i dont know the name)he says that he has sale his part of the house and he will find the job her after all her sister is here and he want to take care of her!

~ gauri brother's wife say to him that u were being so mean to her ...now i will tell u how to behave sweetly !(they just came for money)

~ SHIv was shounting in his room that girl is just married him for moneyy!

~ shive couzins(boy who remeber races with shiv in moter bike) say to him that give he a chance she dont wanted to marry u !bas it was her mujburi just like yours !

~ that miya buha husband says to him that .. u have a chance to make her sad now do bahave so bad to her that she leaves u !

~ then gauri dad and shive dad dance on shesa say sheeha takara (of davadas song ! sorry the spelling r not right)

~ the dada tells to alog(gauri's dad)that hiten(i dont know his name in drama) we know his parents from so much year ! his parents died in accidet but he is just like our son ! he and shiv r the best buds ! hiten told him about bissness tips and now shiv in bussniss and he write books has his own publication house !

~he has went to so many places ! he has many houses but he says this is his home !

~then hiten comes and he sees gauri !

~ gauri is in shock !

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p.s sorry guys i know i worte it very bad ! but i hope u guys dont mind 😊

ur effort is appriciated....but this is the work of the regular updaters....it ruins their efforts as well...

newayz thanks! 😊

good try. 👏 👏 Somehow i had a good laugh,,hey its not a bad thing :) cute :)

hy sabzz
first thx andu are a good wirter 😉
tum ne jo mean point te wo yaha post kiye. 😊

You did just great! 👏

Esti aunty

thanks for the great update yaar

Originally posted by: srk_lover

ur effort is appriciated....but this is the work of the regular updaters....it ruins their efforts as well...

newayz thanks! 😊

nice update but i agree with megha if it was before it was ok but now we have got coolbie's so i would appreciate😳 if no other updates are posted as its really disheartening for the updaters who post the update with great effort just to find it is already posted

i am really sorry if u felt bad😳 but please try n understand our point of view😳

thanks a lot

love

anu

ur work is appreciated
👏 👏
THANXK ALOT FOR THE GR88 UPDATE!!!! 😆 😆 😳




Saraa

thanks for the update 😊 it was wonderful 👏