FF:GauriShiv-Saathi re..Updtd Pg:20 10thOct09

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#71

Hey Reeno lovely update.... the car scene was nice... PLzz continue soon.........

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Posted: 16 years ago

#72

thnx sweta ill defo try n updt soon!

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sonia

@Mrs.soniayk6

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Posted: 16 years ago

#73

very cute update reeno.i loved the whole shopping thing.poor shiv n samar😆.i loved the whole part.such a cuteeeeeeeeeeeee n sweet update yaar.keep up the gud work reeno.👏

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Posted: 16 years ago

#74

thnx di!

sure i will defo try 2 do bttr nd keep it up!

luv u

reeno

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Posted: 16 years ago

#75

finally caught up!
love how the fanfic is shaping up... and the awkwardness between shiv and gauri is gone... nice update.. liked Samar in this.
continue soon
P.S: Did u miss part 8? i cudn't find it😕

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Posted: 16 years ago

#76

yh....i think dere iz sum numbering mistake!!😕

il cheq it out

or mayb let it b yaar i think i misd part 8 nd labeld part 8 as 9!!!

sry

luv

reeno

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Posted: 16 years ago

#77

part 10.............. saathi re

nxt day (morning)

SHNX: gauri, tu mahen k office jaarahi hai naa>?

GAURI: ji baba nd im gttin really l8..shiv jar jagah l8 hona bardaasht karsakte hain except fr da office...i hve 2 rush...byee

KAYA:oye hoye!..jeeju ka abhi se itna pata chal gaya!?!?! aur tum unn baaton ka itna khayal bhi rakhti ho!? vaah di!!

GAURI: uff kaya!!! teri yeh fuzool baatien naa... (she has a slight smyl on her face)...woh iss waqt mere office k colleague..mere SIR hain!!

SHNX: gauri mien bhi waheen jaraha hoon...tjhe bhi waheen chor deta hoon

GAURI: kool..theek hai

KAYA: tho mien akeli kiya karoongi ghar pe?😕

GAURI: kyun madam college jaane ka prog. nhi hai aapka?

KAYA: nhi di...i mean ..haan ...aaj class nhi hai

GAURI : acha mien tho jaari hoon...byee...muuah😳..(kisses her)..kuch bhi karlena bye

both father-daughter leave...leavin poor kaya alone

hehe

gauri reaches da office...lux around 2 c if shiv iz dere...dari hui..gauri cmz insyd...as she is l8

she enters...lukin around here nd dere

suddenly sum1 pats on her shoulder

gauri gtz scared nd trnz baq wid a jerk "haawww"...itz shiv!

shiv nods his head wid a wide sarcastic smile as she wz l8...nd shows her...actions her showing her da watch on his hand nd den...

GAURI: umm...woh...😕...sorry😳...woh..mien jaldi aari thi I SWEAR,,..baba ko bhi yaheen aana tha tho...unhon ne...

SHIV: jee tho aap baba ki wajah se l8 hui hain??!!😉

GAURI: umm .... sort of!😕

shnx is in mahen;s room

SHIV: khair no prob..choro..ltz nt waste anymore tym..chalo

GAURI: chalo?? kahaan??

SHIV: wahaan

he points sumwhere

GAURI: shiv??!!....saara staff kahan hai??

SHIV: woh sab aaj 9:00 k baad ayenge

GAURI: umm..sir...par kyun???

SHIV: umm..kyun k miene unn se kaha...iss liye..aur isse pehle k tum kuch aur poocho.......ab se dhruv,

gauri suddenly remembers dhruv nd bcmz uncomfy nd makes a face

SHIV: gauri, (he holds her frm her shoulder), kiya hua?? dhruv nhi hai...aur mien tmhara charge charge ya responsibility kisi aur ko nhi desakta, kyun k i cant trust any1 regarding u..nd i cant take risks regarding u..mien tmahare maamle mien kisi aur par bharosa nhi karsakta..ab mere saath hi tmhara kaam vaam hoga nd il b ur guide/partner...sab kuch hoon...par mien kis par bharosa karta hoon dznt make real difference wat really matters is ...kiya tum mjh par bharosa karsakti ho? 😳

he is still holdin her shoulders

gauri tries lukin up at him...bt she cant...she isnt able 2..

SHIV: haan?? bolo gauri?? kar sakti ho bharosa?

gauri dznt luk up..bt says:

GAURI: ji, poori tarah krskti hoon

shiv smylz

holds gauri's chin nd makes her luk upwrds..so tht she lukd at him

he dz an action askin herr 2 smyl

den he pats lytely on her cheeks saying

SHIV: dont worry gauri...mien tmhein koi takleef nhi hone doonga...il take gud care of urz😉...nd gauri...pareshaan nhi hona...im alwayz dere...yahaan office mien bhi aur ghar mien bhi

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sry yaar nt long nd nt interesting bt ive been really bzy lately!

do leave ur cmnts...it means A LOTTT

thnx

luv

reeno

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Yasmin

@Yazzi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#78

Lovely Fanfic .... i love the awkwardness between SG in the beginning .... and how they are so comfortable with each other now ... with occasional blushing from Gauri .... oooh ... they're getting married can't wait *clapping in excitement* oh btw i loved the part, where Mahen came to Shashanks to ask for Gauri's hand .... and the 'ji's from SG *giggling* ......

oh yeah and i also love your Kaaya here ... to be honest this Kaaya is way better than the Kaaya in the serial .... 😆

anyways loving the fic ... 👏 👏

take care

yasmin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi
Lovely Fanfic .... thnx jaanu!! i love the awkwardness between SG in the beginning ....aaaww😳 and how they are so comfortable with each other now ...yh...thnk god.. with occasional blushing from Gauri .... oooh ... they're getting married can't wait *clapping in excitement*hehe oh btw i loved the part, where Mahen came to Shashanks to ask for Gauri's hand .... and the 'ji's from SG *giggling* ......lollzzz yh thnx most ppl did😆.....jst tried my bst 2 show deir initial awkwardness...

oh yeah and i also love your Kaaya here me 2!! ... to be honest this Kaaya is way better than the Kaaya in the serial .... 😆 SERIOUSLY?? r u kidding?? oh gosh kool thnx yaar means a lottt honeyy

anyways loving the fic ... 👏 👏 my pleasure sweety!!!!

take care u 2!

yasmin