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@Mrs.soniayk6

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

end............introducd yash yaar...at last ...i got a rle 2 fit him in.....i thot of sumthin else bt dis wz goin wid da story...so i thot,,,,kyu sahi hai naa??

well......it wz specially fr u SONIA!!!!hehe...luv u

luv

reeno

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thanx reeno yaar.i just loved the whole part.thanx a lottttttttttttttttttttttt 4r introducing sam.n i just loved him.he is sooooooo funny n loving.i loved shiv n sam's love 4r one another.such a cute brothers.very nice part yaar.keep up the gud work👏

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

thnk u aroosa...saba nd sonia

luv u!

Edited by Reeno!!! - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

part 7

PUNDITJI:ab se theek 1 hafte baad shaadi ka shubh mahurat hai

NIKHILA: ek hafta?

KAAYA: 1 HAFTA??😲

GAURI: 1 HAFTA???😕

MAHEN: arey vaah! tho phir 10 dec ki date fix hogayee. lo shashank moo meetha karo

he puts 1 full laddoo in2 shnx;s mouth

KAAYA: arey yeh kiya? sirf ek hafta?...itne kam tym mien mera dress kaise tayyar hoga?

NIKHILA: sahi baat hai, aur bhi bht se doosre kaam hote hain aur bht si tayyariyaan....

samar cmz 2 nikhila: Mom calm down sab kaam ho jaye ga..trust me. Aur kaaya tm apne dress ki fikar mat karo...tmhien dress dilaane ki zimmedaari..meri..nhi balke samrat ki!!!!

SAMRAT: WAT????????!!??😕

SAMAR: haan!!

all laugh!😆😆

SAMRAT: bt..i dont kno anything about all dis

SAMAR: uffo...ok den il hlp u

SAMar: u r cmin nd dat fynal!!!!!

samrat makes a face nd so duz kaaya

dat nyt:

gauri iz on her bed..she is thinkin bout jst 1 thing..dat she is marrying....nd dat too soooo soon

GARi(thinkin): ek hafta??? 1 hafta tho palak jhapakte guzar jata hai...im not ready fr all dis..aur uss mien doosri rasmien bhi hongi...oh god..😕😕

shiv iz cmin down da stairs da nxt mornin

SAMAR: arey bhai...mr..hello!? aap kahan jaarahe hain??!?

SHIV: quite an unusual nd foolish question....!mien office jaaraha hoon...kaam se

SAMAR:arey mere bhai..sar pe shaadi hai...woh bhi teri...aur tu kaam se jaaraha hai?

SHIV: arey tho meri shaadi pe mien shaadi ka kaam thori karoonga..mjhe kiya krna hai? sab aap hi logo ko tho krna hai!😛😉...woh dekho samrat saahab..tv dekh rahe hain...unn ko bolo na kuch kaam krne k liye!

SAMAR: woh mien ussey boldoonga..lkin abhi..tu kaam par nhi jaara...arey ka chale jana

SHIV: arey..par..

samrat pushes him...

NIKHILA: mahen..aap bhi naa..kiya jaldi thi apko...itna jaldi sangeet aur baaqi ki rasmen rakhne ki??

MAHEN: arey humien 4 din mien sab khatam karna hai naa?!

NIKHILA: aaj mjhe shopping le jaaiyye ga

MAHEN: arey yaar itne bete paal k bare kiye hain naa?..kisi ek ko pakro aur chali jao

NIKHILA:mahen...mjhe kuch nhi sunna..aap bus mjhe le kar jayen aaj hi shopping pe!!

KAAYA 2 GAURI: didi chalo na plz

GAURI: arey kaaya tum le aao na kuch bhi mere liye apni pasand se

KAAYA: kiya hai didi...itni unexcitd??--arey thora tho intrst sho karo...2 remynd u yeh meri nhi TUMHARI SHAADI HAI!

gauri: oho...kaaya tum bhi na....kuch na kuch kar k apni baat manva hi leti ho!

kaaya smylz!😊😛😃

samar cmz wid shiv nd samrat 2 take dem

dey all cm nd sit in da car...nd off dey go 2 da mall!!

shiv nd samar r sittin on da frnt seats

shiv is dryvng nd samar iz dere on da passengrs seat bsyd him

samrat..kaaya..nd gauri r at da baqseat

nikhila cmz

NIKH: arey samrat beta tu yhaan peeche betha hai?...tu humien shopping pe le ja..tumhare dad k per k dard ki wajah se woh gaari nhi chala sakte..aur pata nhi kyun inho ne dryvr ko bhi chutti dedi

shiv winks at mahen nd also mahen nd shiv shows him a thumbs up syn

den shiv notices samrat seeing so adjsts himslf str8 as if nuthin jst happnd

samrat raises his eyebrows in suspicion nd shiv coughs a bit..samrat sluggishly goes nd sits 2 dryv his father's car

shiv nd samar giv a hi-5 2 each other nd den both of dem luk at kaaya

kaaya nd da 2 laugh nd again hav hi-5z wid kaaya

GAURI: yeh kiya? tum sab hans kyun rahe ho?? i kno sumthin fishy is goin on in hre. bechara sam..u kno he h8s gold ki shops nd mom mst hve taken him dere!!

listenin 2 dis neither of da 3 cud again cntrol deir laughter so dey brst in2 laughtr

GAURi (sternly): Yeh sab kiya hai??

SAMAR: umm...umm...yeh sab shiv ki ghalti hai...yeh sab...iss hi ka plan tha!

gauri lux at shiv....(a bit crosd)

SHIV: no..no..arey jhoot bolre hain..yeh sab inn ka hi plan tha..i swaer nt me..oh plz...acha dnt gimme dat luk!!!!!!!!😕 😆😆

SAMAR: oh plz...hum sab tmhare is luk se bht darte hain...acha yeh sab.....kaya ka plan tha

GAURi (in a louder voice): oh plz mjhe koi btaaye ga yeh sab kiya hai!!!>????????

SHIv: ok..ok..mien bta ta hoon...kal raat, mien..bhayya aur kaaya beth kar baatien kar rahe they dinnr k baad..wen samrat came nd calld us nd...nd made us sit on a sofa...undrneath which..........

GAURI:....im waitin....

SHIV: underneath wich...were many......PAAPADS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....😡 😆

gauri wz silnt fr half da minute..nd den she 2 crakd in2 laughter

shiv nd kaaya made faces

KAYA: u wrnt laghin on him_________y r u laughin at uz??????!!?😡

GAUri: WEll...bcuz its funny

SHIV: den he told us tht it wz his dare wid shreya...nd v decyded tht now it wz r dare 2 send him fr shopping wid mom nd dad_________which he h8s!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😉😛

da 3 of dem giggle

GAURI:SHIV!!! wat sammy did wz funny..wat u gyz hve dun iz pure zulm yaar...poor samrat!

KAAYA: no didi...jeeju well..u drive

gauri sits baq..in a relaxd way

shiv iz watchin her in da rear mirror nd smylin

gauri dznt kno tht he iz lukin at her nd smylin

samar is talkin on da fone nd kaaya is listenin 2 her i-pod

shiv opnz da windows

gauri's hair start floatin nd dancin in2 da air nd coverin her face

shiv enjoys dis nd he dznt kno y!!??!!

gauri sees him smilin at her wyl she is tryin 2 cntrol her hair frm da wind

shiv immediately starts lukin at da frnt

gauri moves forwrd nd close 2 shiv's seat 2 tell him sumthin as due 2 da noise of wind nd cars..he wont b able 2 hear her

she moves herslf closer 2 his seat nd his ears

GAURI: shiv...window band kar deeiye na

SHIV(pretendin as if he cdnt hear): kiya??...paas aake bolo......ya zor se bolo..awaaz nhi aarahi

gauri tellz him da same thing again

SHIV: kiya??

the car den stops at the signal

shiv moves baq nd faces gauri (samar nd kaya r sleepin)

SHIV: ab waapis aate hue tum aagey bethna..😉..taake mushkil na ho..😉

nd he winks at her😉😉

gauri undrstands nd beats him lytly on his shoulder back...den moves backwrds nd laghs😳😳

dey reach da mall

samar nd kaya also get up

all of dem enter!!!!!!

end,,,,,ppl plz yaar keep cmntin nd replyin yaar...tht only keeps me motivatd...u dont lyk it..b open nd tell me..i m welcm 2 all kindsa cmnts

so do rep gyz!!

luv ya

reeno!!

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saba

@luv_pavi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

awesum awesum awesum i luved it yaar waise long tha hmm per aur bhi long yaarrr chalo plzzz update asap plzzz

saba

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starfan.shrk

@starfan.shrk

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#65

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!! Tht ws so sweet . shiv lookin at gauri n den openin da window.da 2 dares were funny man.well, a fab upd8 so con soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! n eid mubarak!!!

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

Cool update.. Poor Samrat... Plzz continue soon...

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serendipity.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: swetha10
Cool update.. thnx hunPoor Samrat... Plzz continue soon...sure sweety!!

thnx sweta will defo try 2 updt 2day itslf.....thnx fr readin

luv

reeno

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

part 9
shiv gtz a call frm shreya

SHREYA: bhayya, mien yahaan se faarig ho gayee hoon. the class is over sammy fone nhi utha raha

SHIV: acha im cmin

nd he hangs da fone whisperin 2 himslf "lagta hai samrat is pisd off!!"hehe😆

kaaya, samar nd gauri ask him:

kiya hua?

SHIV: shreya ki call thi....im goin..2 pick her up..uss ki class khatam ho gayee hai

KAYA: aah ok!!

she starts lukin at things nd so duz samar

shiv duz an action (ishaara) tellin gauri 2 cum wid him

GAURI: me??

SHIv: no! dat lady out dere!!!

GAURI (smylz): ohh..ok1 bye! have a GR888 tym!!!!!!

shiv makes a "DUHH" sort of face nd holds her hand nd makes gauri cm wid him

gauroi cmz nd openz da backdoor of da car

shiv is stunnd nd lux at her....in other wrds stares at her wid wyd eyez nd open mouth

lukin at dis gauri laughs, opens the front passenger door nd sits , den shiv sits

she tries 2 stop giggling

SHIV: yh..very funny...i wz seriously shokd!!....tum peeche beth rahi theen??....aagey koi tha kiya?? aur waise bhi ab tum meri patni ban jao gi....

da momnt he says dis....gauri starts 2 luk at him nd so duz shiv

dey stare 4 a momnt at each other nd den gauri starts lukin outsyd.

shiv switches da radio on nd da song "hey shona" frm da movie tara rum pum is being played

gauri lykz da song so she raises up da vol a bit

shiv lux at her

GAURI: ohh sorry

nd she slows down da vol..........a bit nervous nd embarassd

shiv smylz nd raises up da volume more dan wat she did widout even glancing at her or da radio

gauri smylz nd lux at shiv

shiv lux at gauri nd she immediately starts lukin at sumthig else

dey reach 2 where shreya is nd pick her up

SHREYA: hi bhayya!...hi bhabi!

SHIV: hi!

SHREYA: hi bhabii!!?????

GAURI: haan!?? umm mjhe?? oh bhabi...ah hi!

nd gauri shies a bit

SHREYA: yup bhabi...ab aap bhaabi ho...aadat krlo apne aap ko as bhabi sunne ki

the 3 share a lyt laugh

SHREYA: hum kahan jaa rahe hain bhayya?

SHIV: shopping yaar

SHREYA: kool......bhabi..?

GAURI: hmm

SHREYA: wohh....mjhe apni dress aap se banwaani hai....uni mien miene aapka kaam dekha...sab bht appericiate krte hain nd i luvd it...tho kisi ek function ka...sangeet ya mehndi ya shaadi ya reception...u choose

SHIV: sheeru, usey kyun kaam pe laga rahi ho? him mall jarahe hain naa? wahaan se lelena

shreya makes a face nd sits back

GAURI: arey nhi...kaunsa mjhe koi aisa kaam krna hai?? il make ur sangeet dress ok?

SHIV:😊

SHREYA:😃

GAURI:😳

every1 is shopping, shreya..kaya..nd gauri enter a bridal wear shop...dey lyk many things bt buying is a prob....actually deciding as 2 which 1 2 buy is a prob....both samar nd shiv r standin at the baq....extremely bored..cz dis was all boring grl stuff

At a tym shiv is breaking his head...banging it 2 da wall. samar is playing a game on his cell.....den more tym passes........still da grlz cant decyd. Both da brothers r holding each other so dat dey dont fell as dey were almost gone 2 sleep

SAMAR: yaar...lagta hai aaj raat mall mien hi guzaarni paregi...tu bhi naa....inhe 24 hrs waale mien kyun le aya?

SHIV: arey mjhe kiya pata tha?....k yahaan rehne k liye aayenge yeh log

dey sit on a bench typ thing near by

gauri cmz 2 a decision

GAURI: dekho...mera mehndi ka dress fynal ho gaya...kaaya ka sangeet ka aur mehendi..dono ka hogaya aur kaya ka shaadi..mehendi nd sangeet..teenon ka hogaya...as il b makin her sangeet dress...tho ab hum mom (nikhila) ko laakar mere aur kaya ka wedding dress lelengge.....she'll hlp us out...unlyk....

she points at da 2..samar nd shiv who r havin a gr8 brotherly tym

KAYA: bus di aap sangeet ka decyd krlo

GAURI:theek hai

dey go 2 another shop wid samar nd shiv...here, sam nd shiv r helpin dem. gauri takes a dress nd tries...lukin in da mirror...its silver nd shows it 2 shiv....shiv duz a 50/50 sign...as in it wz OKAY...😕

den she takes out another dress which is prple in clr. it really suited her

dis tym shiv wz completely satisfied wid da selection. he did a thumbs up sign

gauri smyld nd askd da shopkeeper to pack it

at last deir shopping wz over nd it wz nyt wen dey came out of da lytd mall

shiv lux at his watch in dismay

SHIV: I MISD DA MATCH..!!!...DAMN IT!!!!!😡😡

wen dey cm home...al were v tyrd...samar nd shiv ran 2 da tv set

only da ceremony of india vs australia's cricket match wz goin on

samrat wz dere...he laughd

SAMRAT: hehehe😆..bhayyaz....i watchd da whole match!! omg!! wat a match it wz!! haha...uff kiya chakke maare yuvraaj ne!!!!!!!!!😃

SAMAR: acha acha...bus kar😭

shiv nd samar sit restlessly on da sofa

SHIV: PAANI!!!!

gauri brings shiv sum water

SHIV: arey tum kyun laaee paani...kaka le ate na..

GAURI: arey ghiss thori jaaoongi aapko paani pilaadoongi tho..

KAYA: aur kiya jeeju...aap ko pilaane se thori ghisengi.......doosron ko pilaane se..shayad..😆

GAURI: tu chup kar!😕😳

shiv smylz

da grlz in da meantym r showing deir shopping 2 nihila, who iz happily satisfied wid it

GAURI: acha mom...ab hum chalte hain...kal office bhi jaana hai...itz important..bye

she den lux at shiv......

nd leaves

end!!....gyz do cmnt pleeeezzzz.....