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Posted: 17 years ago
oh miii god ANNJAAN i luved it u r 2 guud yaar only shiv n nisha in ur part amazinggggggg n yesh i agree v all forgot about nisha n shiv well superbb yaaar aese hi updates kia karo n hume happy happy kia karo😆😉😆huge round of applause 4r u 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
awww saba! thanks a lot :-D hehehe! main koshish karoongi..ill try and do this often..par aaj kal..this section has been a little quite..im hoping everyone else will come and start it up again :-D
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Posted: 17 years ago
no need to say thnxx yaar n yesh diz section is.....................huhhh welll yaar kara kro aese updatesss...
saba
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Posted: 17 years ago
hmm yaar even im nt gettin tym dese dayz :(((
bt m relyin on u gyz!!! :)))
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Posted: 17 years ago
HI GYZ!!!!!!!! h r u all? ok, disis da 1st time im writtin a prt in a ff so if ders ny mistakes den plz 4give me n i hope u all will like readin it as much as i did writtin it.
Well, here goes da nx part..................
-starts 4m where Shiv n Nisha r dancin n Shiv gives hr an explannation on da music...........
Nisha listens carefully to wot Shiv said. she could feel da cool shilly breeze ticklin on hr skin as she stood , movin hr body slowly 4rm side to side to da music in da distance day can both hear.she smild broadly as dey both swayd to da rythem of da music
kissa tera, teri daastaan
chera tera, khud kare bayaan,
kissi se pyaar tujhe ho gaya,
tu maan ja, haan maan jaaa...
dey both look a each other in da eye and Nisha feels da words cum tru n wishs dat it ws hr who shiv is in love wid.
kahi na lage mann,
kaya hayiyeh, sunapann
aa ha aa haa
Shiv feels sumthin while dancin wid nish n didnt now y but he ws enjoyin da feelin.
mujhay tum, bata do
koi to, wajha doo
aa ha aa haa
Shiv gives Nish a twirl n pulls hr 4wards while Nisha's heart is racin like mad
har ghadhi ab khyaloon main
kehraha he hain koi,
har ghadhi meray khwaboon main
aaraha hai koi,,,,,
Shiv rests his 4head on Nisha's 4head n dey both remembr all da gud times spent 2gether 4rm childhood till now and wot dey each did just 2 get a glance of one anothr.
Is this love......
maine na jaana
aa ha ha ha haa
Is this love.......
tu hi bataana
ah ha ha ha haa
Both stopped dancin , lookin in each others eyes 4 da answer (although dey were positive of der own feelins, dey didnt no how 2 confess n were afraid 2 loose 1 another.
Shiv moves his hands slowly to grip Nisha's face in his palms and starts 2 move closer n closer while da music fades away 4 da 2 birds and all Nisha can hear is her haert beatin faster dat she could hear it band in her ears however, Shiv was jus lost in thoughts of Nish.
He ws only 1 inch away 4rm kissin hr lips wen suddenly......
Ok guyz, dats enough 4 now but ill update 2morrow ASAP!!!!!!!!im sorry 4 those who wantd a long upd8 but i thought of testin ur patience??????🤡
Jus jokin, i wantd u all 2 think bout da nx part n share ur views on it n tell me how i cud improve or add ny thin on nxt time. so gyz, plz reply n let me no!!!!!!!!!!
thx.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: loveabletwinz

Hey guyssss!

Kuch pal has been quite for a while!! Well, I think its time for me to live up to my promise..ive been wanting to write in here for SO long! So, here it comes :-D hope u guys like it..i know.. a lot of people have been saying that shiv and nisha have been left out a bit..so I thought id do a part on them:-D hope u guys enjoy :-D

Here goes :-D

It was a starless night and Shiv was up on his roof. Through the hustle and bustle of his daily life, Shiv had forgotten to take a break for himself. He had been so occupied with helping Samar bhaiya and making everything work that for a long time, surprisingly, he hadn't thought about Nisha. As he stood, by himself, on the roof, listening to the unheard conversation of the winds, he let his mind wander to Nisha. He had been wanting to tell her for so long, but he could never work up the nerve to do so. What was it about Nisha that was so mesmerizing? Why would he always stop dead in his track whenever he saw her? Shiv didn't have answers to these questions'and he was longing for the answers. As Shiv's mind drifted away from his surroundings, someone knocked on the door downstairs.

Downstairs *at the Kapoors' friends house *

Mahen walks to the door as he hears someone knock.

Mahen : Hi beta, yaha kaise ana hua?

Nisha: Hi pa, voh main, Shiv se milna chahti thi..main use kabse phone karne ki koshish kar rahi hoon. Lekin voh hain ki phone uta hi nahi raha hain.

Mahen: Are, Shiv phone nahi uta raha tho ham main se kisi ko phone kar diya hota na.. itni takleef uta ne ki kya zaroorat thi?

Nisha realizes that her excuse didn't suffice. Her Mahen pa was right. She could have easily rung up anyone of Shiv's brothers or sisters. If she had known the answer to Pa's question, she would have answered him. But she didn't know why. She didn't know why she thought it was necessary to come all the way down here, just to see shiv..for such a small matter.. So she thought up a quick lie.

Nisha : Woh pa, main yaha se gusar hi rahi thi.. tho socha..yaha thak aayi hoon tho Shiv se milkar jaati hoon.

Mahen : oh oye'aap tho sirf Shiv se milne aayi hain? Hamara kya? Are bhai, hamara bhi tho kabhi khyaal rakha karo?

Nisha drops her eyes and as Mahen sees this, he says,

Mahen: Are beta, main tho masaak kar raha tha'tum apni Pa ko jaanthi ho na.. hamari purani aadat hain.. doosro ki taang keechna and he smiles broadly.

Mahen lifts a finger and points upstairs : Shiv upar hain, chat pe..jaake mil lo use

Nisha: Ji, thanks Pa.

Mahen: you're always welcome beta.

Nisha walks towards the direction Pa pointed and climbs the stairs. As she took each step closer to Shiv, her heartbeat got faster. Why was she so nervous? She just had to meet Shiv for a few seconds and tell him about her class timing changes. God, it would only take her a few minutes..but why was she so nervous? Nisha was so entangled in her thoughts that she didn't realize when she reached the top of the stairs. She brushed off the uneasy feeling off her shoulders and slowly opened the door to the roof. Nisha walked in and looked around for Shiv. There he was. Standing under the moonlight and she had to catch her breath for a whole second. Shiv had never looked more at peace and so calm. He was wearing a white shirt and blue jeans. He looked more handsome today than she had ever seen him. The watch on his left hand shone in the darkness. His eyes looked distant- like they were thinking of something, of someone. Nisha wondered where Shiv's thought had drifted to. Or to WHOM they had drifted to. Nisha woke up from her day-dreaming slumber and coaxed herself for caring so much about what Shiv thought. Slowly, she walked over to Shiv and called out to him. When he didn't respond, Nisha lifted a shaking hand and put it on Shiv's shoulder and jerked him a little.

Shiv was startled out of his thoughts when he felt someone tug at his shoulder. He turned around and was amazed at the sight he saw in front of him. She looked gorgeous in the moonlight. Shiv looked straight into her eyes and all the questions that were running through his mind came back to him. God, what was it about this women? Shiv's trance was only broken when he heard someone say his name.

Nisha : Shiv! Shiv! Kaha kho gaye ho?

Shiv: ha?!

Nisha : Shiv, main nisha..apne neend se jagoge bhi?

Shiv: *now completely awake* Nisha, tum! Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Kuch problem hain? Koi problem thi tho mujhe phone kar deti na..yaha tak aane ki kya zaroorat thi?

Nisha : Apna cell-phone sara dekhiye! Kitni baar phone kiya tha..lekin aap tho phone uta hi nahi rahe the.

Shiv takes his cellphone out of his jeans pocket and looks at it. SEVEN missed calls.

Shiv: SEVEN MISSED CALLS?!?! Sab tumhare hain?

Nisha: Nahi nahi..sirf paanch mere hain and smiles.

Shiv clicks his "received/missed calls" button and views it. Five calls from Nisha and two were business calls. Shiv wonders why he didn't pick up any of his calls. He reasons that he was so lost in his thoughts that because the phone was on silent and vibrate, he didn't notice. Shiv looks up at Nisha worried and asks her

Shiv : Kya hua? Kya baat hain? Itne saare calls? Sab teek tho hain na? *his worry clearly playing out in his tone*

Nisha: Ha sab teek hain.. voh..mere classes ki timings badal gayi thi..tho main bas aapko batana chahti thi. Aap mujhe aur Shreya ko classes ke liye pick aur drop karte hain to maine socha ki aapko bata do.

Shiv: bas, itni si baat..yeh tho mujhe Shreya ne already bata diya hain..Hai Bhagwan..itni si baat ke liye itne saare phone calls? Agar tum khud aa kar mujhe batati nahi, ki itni si hi baat hain.. tho main tho pareshani se paagal ho jaata.

Nisha blushes as she hears the worry in his tone but also decides that she should leave. Standing so close to him was making her heart beat even faster. She was worried that if she stood there any longer, Shiv would hear her fastening heart beat.

Nisha : Acha, Shreya ne aapko already bata diya hain? Tho teek hain, main chalthi hoon phir.. Bye

As she is about to leave, Shiv holds her hand and walks up to her. Nisha's already fast heart rate quickens even more. His touch made her shiver. Nisha wondered why Shiv stopped her and wondered what he had to say to her.

Shiv, not knowing what made him stop her, said : Thodi der rukh jao na.

Nisha : Kyun?

Shiv: Bas, yuhin.. apne dost ke saat itna bhi waqt nahi guzar sakthi?

Nisha: par ham karenge kya?

Shiv: Are, chaandani raat hain.. kuch kare ya na kare, chaand ko to dekh sakthe hain na..

Nisha laughs at the romantic, sly side of Shiv

Nisha :aap, aur chand ko dekhenge?

Shiv: Ha bhai, isme kya buraiyi hain?

Nisha : Nahi, kuch nahi..bas, aap us type ke nahi lagthe

Shiv: Kyun? Kisi ki tareef karna ya kisi ki khoobsurati ko dekhne ke liye, kisi type ka hona zaroori hain?

Nisha: nahi, voh,main..acha chalo teek hain..main rukh jaati hoon.

Shiv didn't know what it was but her agreeing to stay made his heart jump. He was happy that he could spend, even though only a little, time with her.

They both stood, silently, and watched the moonlight. The moon hadn't looked so beautiful in a long time. And something about them two standing there, watching the moon, made the night even more charming.

The silence, although calming, was killing Shiv. He was standing next to the most beautiful women he had seen and he had nothing to say to her. He let the silence sink in for a little while and when it got almost unbearable, he said the first thing that came to his mind.

Shiv : Do you know how to jive?

Nisha: Do I know to what?

Shiv: Jive..you know..dance..

Nisha: OHHHH!!! Jive'voh..aapne itni unexpectedly kaha tho main ek minute ke liye..i was lost and she lets out a little giggle. Ha, main jive karna jaanthi hoon. Kyun?

Shiv: nahi, voh..main soch raha tha.. would you like to jive with me?

Nisha: Ji? Jive? Abhi? Yaha?aap..par..

Shiv: yaar, itna socha mat karo.. he walks towards her, takes her left hand and puts it on his shoulder. He lays his right hand on her waist and takes her right hand and holds it in his left.

Nisha: Aap..yeh aap kya kar rahe hain..ham nach to lenge..lekin music..music kaha se aayega?

Shiv: thum behri ho kya? Suno.. gaur se.. tumhare aas paas..yeh hawayein? Yeh jho nadi ki lehre..door se baatein kar rahi hain.. in pedo ki pathe..unpe barish ki girti hui boondein..yeh panchiyan.. jho subah ki intizaar main ga rahi hain'.u don't hear music? Around you Nisha, har cheez ga rahi hain..kuch baatein kar rahi hain..aur gul milakar..yahi tho hain music.. Mandir ki ghantiya..jho hawa main dhol baja rahe hain..wohi tho hamari dhun hain'Now chin up, and DANCE!!!

Nisha, hypnotized by his smooth talk, couldn't help but follow his step. She was falling for him, or so she thought..and she loved the feeling.

Shiv : One, two , three'

And off they were, dancing.. in the darkness of the night.. the wind blowing.. the birds singing.. laughing..and dancing the night off !!

Hope u guys liked it :-D I know,it got a little long..but I thought ill give Shiv and Nisha a lil long part..just the two of them :-D

Alright..take care everyone..

-AnnJan!

yaar AnnJan u just rocked it.dont know that u could do such a hmmmmm😳
part.i just loved it yaar.wonderful part.keep up the gud work yaar👏.
i just love shivnisha pair sooo much.😊
wonderful part friend👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
starfan u rocked it friend.keep up the gud work friend n loved lyrics.they simply suit the whole situation.u just rocked.👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow aroosa!!!!!!!!kamaal kardiya yaar....i wntd more of it plz dear 2day BARIIIIIIIII si updt dena...will b waitin darlin!.......startfan.shrk(yaar ur username is quite big nd diff so...u r aroosa fr me haan....fr ppl who gt confuzd!😕😉
waise u seriously roqd aroosa keep it up!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: starfan.shrk

HI GYZ!!!!!!!! h r u all? ok, disis da 1st time im writtin a prt in a ff so if ders ny mistakes den plz 4give me n i hope u all will like readin it as much as i did writtin it.

Well, here goes da nx part..................
-starts 4m where Shiv n Nisha r dancin n Shiv gives hr an explannation on da music...........
Nisha listens carefully to wot Shiv said. she could feel da cool shilly breeze ticklin on hr skin as she stood , movin hr body slowly 4rm side to side to da music in da distance day can both hear.she smild broadly as dey both swayd to da rythem of da music
kissa tera, teri daastaan
chera tera, khud kare bayaan,
kissi se pyaar tujhe ho gaya,
tu maan ja, haan maan jaaa...
dey both look a each other in da eye and Nisha feels da words cum tru n wishs dat it ws hr who shiv is in love wid.
kahi na lage mann,
kaya hayiyeh, sunapann
aa ha aa haa
Shiv feels sumthin while dancin wid nish n didnt now y but he ws enjoyin da feelin.
mujhay tum, bata do
koi to, wajha doo
aa ha aa haa
Shiv gives Nish a twirl n pulls hr 4wards while Nisha's heart is racin like mad
har ghadhi ab khyaloon main
kehraha he hain koi,
har ghadhi meray khwaboon main
aaraha hai koi,,,,,
Shiv rests his 4head on Nisha's 4head n dey both remembr all da gud times spent 2gether 4rm childhood till now and wot dey each did just 2 get a glance of one anothr.
Is this love......
maine na jaana
aa ha ha ha haa
Is this love.......
tu hi bataana
ah ha ha ha haa
Both stopped dancin , lookin in each others eyes 4 da answer (although dey were positive of der own feelins, dey didnt no how 2 confess n were afraid 2 loose 1 another.
Shiv moves his hands slowly to grip Nisha's face in his palms and starts 2 move closer n closer while da music fades away 4 da 2 birds and all Nisha can hear is her haert beatin faster dat she could hear it band in her ears however, Shiv was jus lost in thoughts of Nish.
He ws only 1 inch away 4rm kissin hr lips wen suddenly......
Ok guyz, dats enough 4 now but ill update 2morrow ASAP!!!!!!!!im sorry 4 those who wantd a long upd8 but i thought of testin ur patience??????🤡
Jus jokin, i wantd u all 2 think bout da nx part n share ur views on it n tell me how i cud improve or add ny thin on nxt time. so gyz, plz reply n let me no!!!!!!!!!!
thx.

amazingg yaar star fan luved it yaar do sumthing lyk both confessess their luv plzzz👏
saba😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
amazingg yaar star fan luved it yaar do sumthing lyk both confessess their luv plzzz👏
saba😳
thx. well, ull hv 2 wait 4 da confession but 4 now i hv sum thin else.

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