manan ff.....undefined love???

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hey guys...first of sorry ..as some tym back i write a story...but left in mid way as no one is respondong...but now once again i m eager to write something and this tym i need support ...plzzz

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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey u all...its actuall my true story...just want to depict through manan may not taking much tym lets start

chapter1:-

NANDINI POV:*-hey guys i...m nandini murty ...i live in a hostel in banaras...and doing coaching for iit...my dad want me to be a engineer thats why mujhe na iss hostel se bhut pyaar h ...yahan k log aur mera coaching...everything ...chalo baaki baad m ...abhi late ho jayega coaching jaane me...its already 5 :15 aur 5:30 se class h

NAVYA- kya nandu kya tu yeh din bhar phone m ghusi rhti h...coaching ka tym ho gya h jaana nhi h kya


here she isss navya di...meri room mate ...actually i live in 4 seater so besides her their is 2 more...navya di scc kr rhe h...bhut sweet h pr thori irritating hain hamesha tookti rhti h

NANDINI-ja rhe h...jaana q nhi h???hum nhi gye toh saru peet dega humko

well saru...baad m batayenge

NAVYA-haan haan jao jldi jao...late ho jayega

NANDINI-wise yeh soha aur mukti kahan gyi h

NAVYA- wo dono aur kahan jayegi soha apne bf se milne gyi h...aur mukti usko company de gyi h ...bechari gf bf k beach kaisa feel hota hoga usko
pr chal ab tu ja...wrna tera bf tujhe nhi chorega

NANDINI- oh plzzz wo mera bf nhi h

NAVYA- haan hume pta h...tujhe uski baato ka farak parta h...sabkuch bf jaisa h...pr wo bf nhi h ...ryt

NANDINI-navya di plzzz...wise v wo alya se pyaar krta h

NAVYA- acha thik h baba...chal ja ab


N:*-oh shit di apki wajah se na...i m late 5:25 ho gya

i almost screamed in her ear and ran to coaching taking my bagi was going down staires and tthud

N:-ouch

i scremed and everyone came rnning...from all the room..as soon as navya di saw me she made me help stand ... but it was really paining a lot...i thought its fractured...no no thought i got to new that it is fractured as i m not able to stand also

NA:- kya h nandu...tu kuch v dhang se nhi kr skti...ab chal try to stand up...hum hospital jaate h

N-nhi di...ouch khara nhi hua ja rha...aaahhh
i was screaing and crying as it was hurting very much...like hell

NA*-ooo hooo ...chal apna phone de


suddenly navya di thought something nd ask for my phone...and i very well know what she is up to


N-nooo


i screamed as dejections ...i know she gonna call him...i clearly dont want that ...if he know na i fractured my leg ...he definetely beat me up till i die

NA-areee...give me your phone...manik ko call krna h

N-q use q call krna h


NA-r u mad nandu...tujhse utha v nhi ja rha...aur main akele tujhe hospital toh carry nhi kr skti na...come on dont be a kid


she almost scolded me...for my this behavior ...but no hell no...chahe main mar q na jaon pr wo nhi plzzz


N- nhi plzzz di ...i will manange


i letrally beg her...pr she didnt listen to me...and take my phone...and hurriedly dialed his no. ...and i was do damn tensed

she called him and i guestured her to keep it on loudspeaker...almost begged her...as i dont want to keep thinking k yeh log kya baate kr rhe h...while they r talking..and envntually she agreed...its ringing and finaally after 4 ring he picked up

M-kha ho bea ...class start hone wala h...nhi aana h kya

he repiled without knowing ki di was on phone...and now finaally to you all i would love to introduce it was my manik...mera frnd ,..best frnd...in one word my world ...he is everything...he is like that short of taporri with me...only...we go very well together...and he is most comfortable with me...thats why he speak in that language to me...the real himback to scene...di replied him and i was just hoping that he will not shout...which hope is itself hopeless

NA-manik.. wo hum navya,..uski room mate bol rhe h

M:*-haan di boliye

see you guys "boliye" great tranformation na ka bea se sidha boliye

NA-wo nandini na...she trumble to stairs...uska leg fractured ho gya h shayad...toh tum aa jao na jldi ,,,.usko hospital le jaana h

M-yeh larki na...phone dijiye toh usko

he ordered her...and she obeidently give me the phone...and now it tym for u all to enjoy ...as we are reaally mad ...in talking also

N-haan bolo

M*-matlab...kuch...kuch dhang se kr skte ho tum

N:-kya h

M:*-chutiya...saale .. chalne nhi aata...bhagwan dimaag bejha h ki nhi... yaa khali khopri leke paida hue ho haan...samjh nhi aata ...kitni baar bole tose dekh k chala kr pr nhi,...yeh toh maharani victoriya hai...log inko direction dege...chalne ko,...q victoriya ji kitne naukar h aapke pass

he was hell angry...he was scolding me...and i was just mum...as interfering in between can do only harm
Edited by juhiloveparth - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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again disaappointed no response...its better i should not write anything
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So here it goes

Chapter 2--

So welcome once again hello and I am Nandini Murthy so now you all have seen my Monster my khadoos Ab Kya Kare Jaisa bhi hai jo bhi hai bas yahi hai so he was continuously scolding me ab kya kare galti Tu Meri Hai ... Bas Ek Galti Kar Gaye Hum Ek Galti Ke Liye Na 50 Se Jyada galaiya De sakta hai pr kya kare sabse Jyada care v toh whi karta hai ISI liye bas chup chup sun lete ha

M- ab bolo bhi kuch Mera muh hi dekhte reh Jaoge

After 10 minute of scolding he came to end finally thank God ruka toh... Sachi had Hai Meri Life bhi ek toh fracture ka tension aur Upar Se iske lecture ka tension Sachi Mar hi Jana chahiye

M- bol

He screamed very loudly to brought me back form from my world

N-haan haan main sun rhi hun

I speak almost absent minded and he looked at me in disbelief

Na- Nandu Tu Kahan khoyi h

M-choro di nonsense ko kuch samajhta hi nhi hai...ek main hi pagal hoon joh coaching chor k bhaaga aa gya

Saying so hey pick me up in his arms strongly cursing me obviously Phir main Manik and Navya Di we took auto and straightly go to hospital aur Puri Raste mann he Mann mujhe kuch pachattar galiya de chuka hoga I know Uske face par sab dekh raha tha Hum chup chap the Kyuki pata h... Manik Jab gussa Mein Hota hai Toh dur hi Rehna chahiye in 10 minute we reached the hospital Humko hospital se bahut dar lagta hai aur yeah usko pata hai Jaise Jaise Hum Log Aage chal rahe the Meri Heartbeat Tej hoti ja rahi thi we are walking to the hospital Manik was beside me I clutch his hand very tightly and he immediately got alarm to this and hold my hand tightly in respond and whisper in my ear

M- don't worry Main Hoon aur Hamesha rahunga


N- Manik injection nahina lagayenge???

M- Agar jarurat Pade toh zaroor aur Tum zaroor lagao gi Hum Dekhte Kaise nahi Lagati Ho

we walked to doctors cabin and got ourself seated on chairs

doc-haan boliye???

NA-namaste doctor...humara naam navya h...aur yeh nandini...wo actually doc iske leg m swell ho gya HAI. ...a v a v stairs se gir gyi

she explained docter very nicely


M-woh kya hain doc ...kuch logo ko chalne nhi aata

and as expected...he taunted me...bina mere ko taana maare isska khaana pach nhi skta

doc-haan main dekta hoonand as docter proceed towards me...i cluched both of them hands in nervousness

M-haan doc injection lga dijiye

arrggg yeh larka ...k v nhi sudhar skta...i went to him and whispered in his ear annoyingly

N-i will kill you...mr malhotra

and he raised his eyebrow as i was joking

M-really???

we continued our fight till doc was checking me...all the while navya di was observing docters each move silently as she is really very worried for me...unlike him

doc-hmmm...yeh toh fracture ho gya h...humme plaster krna prega

docter speak after her examine...6:30 ...my legs has plastered and we three are heading back to hostel

N-bhut bhookh lgi h

i said to di as i was starving ...and manik he was just annoyed by the fact that i had plaster and will not come to coaching atlest a week ...he was not looking at me...baat toh dur ki baat h

Na-haan nandu a v hostel jake khange thik h

M-nhi hostel q...bheja h na mera ..lo khao pichle ek saal se whi toh kr rhi ho

N-manik...kya hai???

i said as first of all i was angry and second he was irritating me to hell

M-kya ???

he said to me also annoyed ...i lied my head on his shoulder...as i was sitting besides him in auto...slowly i slid my hand to his arms ...and hold him tightly

N-manik ...main thak gyi hoon...plzzz mat laro na ...its already paining a lot .. upar se bhookh v lgi hi whispered in his ears
Edited by juhiloveparth - 8 years ago
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plzzz guys comment ...comment nhi like hi kr do yr...prh k v like nhi krte ap log .. .

chpter 3-


i was really tired of fighting with him so i rested my head on his sholder...and he loose it a bit to make me feel comfortable...

M-ok fine.. hum yhi khi hostel k paas m khaana KHA lete h...khus

he said so ..realising that i was really hungry...uper se i was not fighting with due to hunger...aur ab tk toh aap logo ko pta chal hi gya hoga...k manik ka fab kaam h mujhse larna...wo khaana khaaye begair reh skta h...kr mujhse lare bagair...na never possible hi nhi hi became happy and kissed his cheek...in happiness and he rolled his eyes other side just to make me feel he was still jealous...(he is sooo cute h na)

M-wo...maine tumhare liye nhi kiya ...wo navya di ko v bhookh lgi hogi...aur hume v bhut bhookh lgi h...isliye

Na-haan haan manik bhookh toh mujhe v lgi h bhut tez

M-see

he forcefully made me accept that...he did it for himself and di...but i know the truth...after eating delicious chicken we headed to our hostel manik droped us to hostel and went away saying he will come back in a while. ..me and navya di somehow reached to our room me with di's help ofcourse... and as i opened the door my other two romemate blasted on me like a volcano

Mu-what the hell.. nandini yeh kaise hua


S-haan aur tumne bataya q nhi

Mu-exactly what is wrong with u ...aur di aap itni bari baat ho gyi aur apne ek call nhi kiya..

.S-nandini toh pagal h...pr di apke paas toh dimaag h na.. hume bula lete

they both are just balbaering their emotion when i made them stop...as mere saar already dard kr rha h. aur nhi bhardash kr skta yeh

N-relax guys...wo i just sliped from staires

Mu-what relax nandu...you got plasterd .. hum relax kaise reh skte h

S-ya right

Na-haan hum tumlogo ko batane wale the...pr sab itna tensed tha...ki dimaag se nikl gya...wise v manik tha wahan p

navya di explained everything nicely.. .and finely they both get relaxed

Mu-acha chal ...aram kr

S-tu v na...kya kya krti rhti h..

.N- tu apne bf se milne gyi thi na...isiliye socha kya disturb karo

Mu-tujhse jyada imp nhi h wo

h wise the atmosphere was getting normal...i taunted mukti...but she took it seriously...by god mere lyf k log v na . jo cheez seriously na leni ho wo le lete h kya karu main inn sab ka...by the way batana reh gya...soha and mukti both are doing PMT classes in banaras

N-relax meri jaan i was joking

and we all started chit chatting about ur day...i was telling her my frnd cum bf aattitde behavior and she was they are telling me about his new bf...jisko a v do hafte hi hue h...as his last bf broke her heart very badly...kamina kahi ka...she was in depression. ..and also had migrain due to it...but now she was haapy...i m super happy ...q ki khusi bhut mayne rakhti hai we were talking...suddenly my phone started ringing...and it was of manik ofcourse...he called me downstair ...and me and navya di was just going...when soha forced that she want to go...you know guys inn dono ki bhut banti hso me and soha went down...and saw that he was standing at door with some poly bags we reached to him .. and i asked him thought eyes as whats all this...he didnt reply me ofcourse...and started talking to soha

M-hey soha.. kaisi ho

S-bas MST tum batao

M-hum v

S-tum aur kon??

she made a fun of his assent as ...woh hamesha aisa krti h

I enjoyed it...I suppress my laugh somehow...as he glard at me

M-110...WO kya h na hum...apna pura khaandaan sath m leke chalte h...acha soha yeh lo is me iski dawaiya...aur gsram patiya h...aur isme dry fruits ... fruits and tonic

seriously dryfruits and tonics..

.mujhe fracture a hua chakar nhi aaya
he handed the bags to soha and said looking in my eyes ...for the first tym in whole day

M-and you we need to talk ...side m aayengi Zara

I went with him ...soha was grining behind...as if he has called to romance in the corner

N-haan bolo

M-kya bolo haan..tumhari wajah .. se...nandu ...I missed my class ...uspe v its was physics today. .aur u know how much I love physics...and second allia ...aj dekh nhi paaya usse m ..
N-soory...and I know...Maine toh di ko bola v ki hum manage kr lenge...PR

I said sorry as I know what he went though...as he love both physics and allia at extreme

M-sorry ka hum kya kre

N-main kya karo

M-kiss karo Hume ...strong Juciy French lip lock

he said coming close to me...and I hit him in his stomach...and he caught my hand

M-ghanta Humse jyada takat nhi h ...inn hatho m baby

N-manik

M-acha acha thik h hum
bas aage se aisa mat karna OK...u mean a lot

N-ok good night

M-good night ..and kiss toh main ek din leke hi rahunga



he byed me and went to his hostel which was just 50steps away...and me and soha went to our room. ...ap log soch rhen honge why he talk to me like this ...actually even I don't know AAA we are like this ony
Edited by juhiloveparth - 8 years ago
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plzzz reply warna ham aage nhi likhenge

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