Manan Horror FF: Sister Rivalry {Completed} - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful update
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It was awesome dear. I loved it totally. Good going. Plz pm me for next one. Would love to read more.
Cont soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting first chapter
Nandini had a twin Anjali
Now they r staying in nandinis old house
They have a visitor
Is it Anjali or maybe not
if is Anjali is she wanting to hurt Nandini
Another possibility which I'm hoping it ain't is that it's Nandini n Anjali killed her sis
But if that's the case that means Nandini is dead n Anjali is married to manik fingers crossed it's not
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome !!!
Had the scary moment towards the end... thanks for the PM!
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Chp 2: The Transformation

Nandini screams seeing a girl with long hair approach her in dark and runs from there. "Manik! Manik!," she shouts while running and on seeing him she hugs him with sweat forming on her forehead. "What happen? Why are you so scared?," he asks hugging her back. "Anjali," she says with a quiver in her voice. "I know you miss her a lot," he says tightening his hug. "Yes Manik, and I saw her in my room, she was there," she says with fear. He breaks the hug and wipes the sweat from her forehead. "Relax, dead people don't come back, watch less horror movies," he says and continues working.

"No Manik, she was there, you come with me, I will show you," she says and before he could answer, she started pulling him by his arm towards her room. She points beside the cupboard. "I saw her here," she tells. "But there's no one here," he says and Nandini switches on the light. "I switched on and off the light again and again, I saw her every time I switched off the light, when I switches it on there was no one, I also thought it's an illusion, but it wasn't, she was here," she says trying to convince him.

"Now she won't come OK, because we will exit from here together," he says and she haves a sigh of relief and switches off the light, they go outside hand in hand. A hand comes out from below the bed, it had long fingernails and dug it in the slippery floor coming out slowly revealing herself to be Anjali. She sits holding her knees and cries but in a low voice. "Manik, I want you, I love you, please God don't do this to me," she says cryingly and stands up and walks with slow steps stumblingly.



Nandini and Manik do dinner. When they're finished with it, they go to their room, Manik goes to washroom and Nandini sits on bed. She feels someone sitting beside her on the bed. She turns to see who's it but sees no one. While Nandini was busy with her phone, she didn't notice the pen lifting on its own going towards the paper. It writes something quickly and the one who was writing keeps the pen back on it's place. She keeps her phone on the table and her gaze goes on the chit. "Has Manik written something for me? I will see," she picks the chit and unfolds it. "Hello sister, happy birthday, having fun? I have come back, your doubt was right, Manik is mine, dare you go near him else you know what a ghost can do."

She gets scared and lays down covering herself with quilt holding it around her chest. She keeps tossing left and right and picks the photo frame of her childhood photo with Anjali and sleeps hugging it. Anjali looks on sitting on the window, Nandini couldn't see her because she can be seen only to those to who she wants. Manik comes out of the washroom and switches off the light and sleeps cuddling to her. Next morning, they woke up and Nandini made breakfast. Remembering Anjali's warning, she maintained distance from him. "Nandini, I am going to office, you take care," he says after they were done with breakfast. She hugs him and he hugs her back. "Come soon," she says. He pecks her forehead. "I will, if you want you can stay at Malhotra Mansion till I return," he suggests. "Hmm, OK," she says and they go out together, Nandini follows him.

She falls on her stomach and feels pulled by a force, she tried shouting but her voice didn't come out. The pulling force stopped and she stood on her feet. Before she could go, a hand pulled her and tied her with a rope. It was Anjali. "I will go and not you," she says and gags her mouth, she transforms in her attire as their faces were already same. She goes outside the house and sits in the car beside Manik. "Nandini, what took you so late?," he asks. "I forgot my purse," she says showing it to him and they drive off. Finally I got to spend time with you, she thought. Meanwhile in the moorthy mansion, Nandini struggles hard to free herself, the candle kept behind her on a table touched the rope and it opened. "How did my rope loosen?," she asks moving her hands and she gets untied. She calls Manik. Anjali sees Manik getting a call and keeps the phone on silent disconnecting the call. "I will reach there," she says to herself and runs out of the house taking her scooty and soon she was out of sight.

Edited by salley145 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Scary update
So Anjali has her eye on manik
Omg she tied up Nandini n took live form n left the house posing as Nandini how can she do that that's not good
Is another ghost helping Nandini escape or was it just luck
What's gonna happen now
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Anjali ne apni manmani kar hi lia..aab aage kya hoga..I hope nandini uss bhutni ko swipe kar sake..love the update. cont soon...thanks for pm.
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Chp 3: Confrontation, Fight And Plan

Nandini stopped outside Manik's office and stepped down the scooty locking it's handles and goes inside. Meanwhile, in Manik's cabin, Manik had just arrived at office along with Anjali assuming her as Nandini and they both were talking and laughing. Nandini was running to his cabin and was about to knock, just then the door opened and Anjali came out, she had excused herself from Manik as she wanted to check on Nandini. As the twins saw each other, Anjali was angry while Nandini wasn't sure if she was angry or not, she really missed her twin sister who was more like a soulmate. As twin sisters or brothers can't live without each other, they also couldn't live without each other, but after Anjali died, and few days before she was dead, she had strong hatred for her own sister just because she also loved Manik just like her.

"Nandu, so you got free, who were you eager to see? Me or Manik?," Anjali asked Nandini giving her an angry look. "Anjali, please understand me, whatever happened was just an incident, I missed you a lot, I even wrote your name on the cake which Manik made for me, don't you remember how we always used to celebrate this special day together? Do you still think I don't love you?," Nandini asks teary eyed. "I don't care sissy, I love Manik, let me spend time with him, and I will make sure he loves me too, oh and do you know what happened between me and Manik when we reached his cabin? We kissed, we spent our time together, I said I love you to Manik, and he said he loves me too," Anjali tells Nandini who felt really bad for her as she never got her true love while she was alive, but even if she's getting temporary happiness, she didn't mind it, she didn't wanted to betray Manik or her sister, she didn't wanted to give her false hopes.

"And by what name he called you?," Nandini asks. "By your name," Anjali replied. "I hope you got your answer, Manik loves me, he only thought of you as a good friend always," Nandini told her calmly. "Nandu, don't get your hopes high, don't you remember my warning? Stay away from Manik else you know what a ghost can do," Anjali warned. "Manik is my husband, I can spend as much time as I want to, who are you to stop me?," Nandini asks losing her cool. "You are repeating your mistake, he got us both away, because of him we had a fight," Anjali says. "No, it's just that you misunderstood his friendship, Anjali please, please don't misunderstand me, you are my sister and you'll always be, but how can I betray him?," Nandini says with tears flowing down her cheeks.


"Feeling bad? Same here, but what can I do? What goes around comes around, enough chit chat for today, bye, Manik must be waiting, oh and stay at Moorthy Mansion, I will be right back," Anjali says and goes back to his cabin while Nandini palms her mouth and cries. She goes from there with slow steps and as soon as she approached her scooty, she unlocked it's handles and went away. After sometime, she stopped outside Moorthy Mansion and unlocked the door going straight to her room. She took out an album and looked at all the photos of her and Anjali. "I would've never minded if Manik too loved you, but he don't love you, I can't see your tears," she says cryingly talking to her sister's photographs.

At evening, Nandini was asleep and it was time for Manik and Anjali's comeback. "Nandini, Nandini," she heard her name in a form of whisper and woke up. "Anjali," Nandini said rubbing her eyes. "Yes, sorry for disturbing your sleep, but I told you I will be right back, it meant I will come alone and we'll plan that how will I stay by Manik's side," Anjali said. "So tell me a plan, you always have brilliant plans right?"

Nandini looks here and there. "I take that as a no, but no problem, I have a plan, you daily have to act of walking with him towards the exit and intentionally forget something and excuse yourself, then come back inside, if you don't, I will have to tie you with a chair in the same way I did today, when you will come, I will transform in your attire and go with Manik, deal?," Anjali says and Nandini was like what-the-hell. "OK fine, but better find a ghost for yourself and leave humans alone," Nandini replied pouting cutely and Anjali chuckles. "I was also a human, I died because of you, if you don't want that I capture your body, better let me do what I said," Anjali says creasing her eyebrows and disappeared into the thin air. Ayyappa. Nandini says in heart and held her head.

Soon she freshen up and made dinner for herself and Manik. "Hey wifey, had a great time?," asks Manik pulling out a chair and sitting on it while Nandini dished out food. "Yes," she replies. They ate together and as soon as they were done, they held hands and went to their room, they sat beside each other and Anjali was keeping an eye on them. "Have you been crying?," Manik asks cupping her cheek touching her swollen eye. "No, I slept a lot," Nandini lied and after some chit chat they slept. Anjali appeared smilingly. "Good job Nandini, that calls out for a reward," she said and wrote something on a piece of paper and kept it on bedside table and disappeared.



Edited by salley145 - 8 years ago
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Amazing... seems to b stubborn..but that makes it interesting !

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